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Main Idea : Anorexia and Bullimia : :

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Respons : Eventhough anorexia victims dont influence badness to another people, we must be aware of anorexia. We shouldnt see the victims from their eating habbits. We must see the cause of that anorexia too. Well never know who suffered this illness, it can be our friends, brothers, family, or even ourself, because anorexia victims often hide their eating habbits. Anorexia victims have low self-confident, so they try to get self-confident by having a good body in order to look attractive and cute. This thing become duty to us, because we often think body shape is something that girl must have to become beautiful.

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: Maybe all of us should concern about problem too,because I think that we are

the point that make people get anorexia. Not directly, we mocking at another people and we dont realize that we cut their heart. Another example is the model girl. Usually a model is a woman that is very slim, and that is very dangerous for their health. We should know what good or bad for us. Dont be very slim just to get more attention by another people, we should concern and care about our health too.

Details : The factis anorexia and bulimia is not just eating disorder but Body Image Disorder. Usually anorexia victims realize that only a little part of their body becomes big. In his mind, their body is as thin as palm leaf rib. For example, many girls only consume yogurt, apple, or fruits everyday. They dont know that their body doesnt have anymore fat.

They never satisfied, and in the end they just bullying theirselves. For bulimia, they just look okay. They eat everything, but they dont know how much they eat. After that, they go to bathroom and vomit. If they not vomit all the food, they try to make them vomit, such as punching their stomach. People who suffered bulimia usually lose their menstruation period. Maybe become uncontrolled. If this is happened, surely they will become barent. The worse is they died. Conclusion : I really care about this illness. I dont agree with the people who have perception that ideal body is very slim and tall. That thing become the supporting ideas to people who dont like their body shape. They want to do anything to make their body become idea. But not all their effort is good. Anorexia victims need people to brainstorming about ideal body can be gained without bullying theirselves.

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