October 9, 2011

Dear Professor Shawn Fullmer After carefully reviewing my essay I wrote, I realized that it needs a lot of work. I received my comments from smarthinking tutor and there were very helpful in helping me understand what I needed to do to improve my writing skills. And after looking at some of my classmates comments, I can honestly say I could have put a better effort into writing my paper, by following the steps that are laid out to help you write an essay; Research, Analysis, Brainstorming, Thesis, Outline, Introduction, Paragraph and conclusion. Just that simple but yet I didnt follow those steps as I should have. But on my final essay I will give it my 100% effort to write a paper I know I can.

Sincerely Dane A. Smith