Sum up your feedback I mostly got positive feedback about my proposal and development of ideas.

The feedback said that my proposal had high amount of information and was full of detail. The ideas I have are very creative and have been through a lot. The weaknesses were that I havent concluded myself and there were some spelling errors. That the mood board could have more pictures on and could show a range of pictures more than just illustration pictures. I go mostly positive feedback but there was some negative due to a few mistakes.

What do you agree with in your feedback and why? I agree that I did put lots of detail in my work. This is because I wanted to express my ideas as much as possible through my words. There were some spelling errors, this is because I rushed some of my work and didnt really think about the spelling etc. I agreed that the mood board could have more a verity of pictures on. I used the same type of pictures and I should have had more of a verity.

What do you not agree with in your feedback and why? I do not agree that I did not conclude my work. I did conclude it as I put at the end of the last question In conclusion I made sure that I but overall what I was going to do. Also I disagree with the feedback that I needed more of a range of pictures than illustration pictures, I disagree with this because I have a specific idea which I wanted to show through my mood board that the idea I want to do is to do with traditional looking graphics which is illustration.