Scenario 10:

Key Points: 1) Guillermo olvide de quitarse los zapatos antes de dormirse. (William forgets to take off his shoes before falling asleep). 2) Todas las cosas, incluyendo sus piernas estn sucias en la maana. (Everything, including his legs are dirty in the morning). 3) l se ducha y se lava las piernas pero despus hay suciedad todava en su hombro. (He showers and washes his legs but afterwards there is still dirt on his shoulder). Possible Connecting Words: Primero, segundo, al final, pues (first, second, in the end, then). Omitted: cuerpo Student 1 Name: Student #18 RS Key info: 1) Una noche, Guillermo no se quita los zapatos. (One night, William doesnt take off his shoes). 2) Sus piernas estn muy sucias en la maana (His legs are very dirty in the morning). 3) Despus de lavarse, l est todava sucio. (After washing, he is still dirty). Connecting words: Primero, Bueno (First, well). Notes: RS: Found and described 3 main points with details. Many vocab words are missing. Story is in the correct sequence. Connecting words and confusing and do not make sense in this stories context in the way theyre written.

RS: Great job at finding three main points and describing the story with details (una noche, en la manana, esta sucio). Some vocab words are missing like ducharse and dormirse and any other body part words. Im glad to see you try to use the connecting words. Primero would make sense if the first sentence didnt already include una noche. Bueno makes sense but doesnt offer a very good connection with the timing in the story. At this point, you know enough to move on and improve these skills with further practice. If you would like to earn a B or A on other sections, here are some suggestions: 1) Add more Daily Routine and Body part words from the original story. 2) Reword your first sentence so that primero is the introduction instead of una noche 3) Use a more definitive connection word than Bueno in your last sentence.

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1. Included 3 major points and specific details from the story. B 2. Although the story is accurate, some vocab is missing that can be added to bring more meaning. C 3. The story is in correct sequence, nothing is out of place or in the wrong order. A 4. Connecting words have potential but are hard to understand in this context. C

Retelling Sheet:
1) Find key info from the story. Think beginning, middle, end. 1. Guillermo no se quita los zapatos una noche. (William doesnt take off his shoes one night) 2. En la maana sus piernas estn muy sucias. (In the morning his legs are very dirty). 3. Despus de lavarse, l est todava sucio. (After washing, he is still dirty). 2) Find the most important Daily Routine verbs and body part words: Quitarse (To take off) Las Piernas (legs) Lavarse (to wash) 3) What connection words can you use to transition between ideas/actions? Primero, Segundo, tercero En el principio, entonces, al final Un da, una vez, esta vez Por eso, as, pues Other? Primero (first) Bueno (Well) 4) Say it all in your own words: Primero, una noche Guillermo no se quita los zapatos. En la maana, sus piernas estn muy sucias. Bueno, despus de lavarse l est todava sucio. (First, one night William doesnt take off his shoes. In the morning his legs are very dirty. Well, after washing himself he is still dirty.