Milpitas, CA 95035 Firoozeh Dumas 777 Heaven Dr Heaven, CA 95035 7 September 2014 Dear Firoozeh Dumas,
I read your short narrative, The F Word, and really enjoyed the reading! I was intrigued on how you touched on issues that are in our society today. I never realized how critical your name, race, and background are when living your life in America and being viewed as an alien (foreign person). This truly opened my eyes to the reality of discrimination of foreign people in America. It is easy to have this predicament slide by without discussion and easily viewed as casual speed bump of everyday life.
Shockingly I was able to connect to the story in some way, even though I do not personally struggle with being made fun of my name. I am more on the other side of the conflict because I am a typical American citizen. Although, name-calling and limitations are sometimes placed on foreign names, I do not believe this issue is as bad as you portray it to be in your narrative. From my perspective, those who are not foreigners are perceived as judgmental and discriminating people of other races. I was slightly offended by the stereotype and know for fact that I am not a person of that nature. Yes I understand that this issue is within our society throughout all ages, but everyone wrestles with problems and things they dont like about themselves that are out of the ordinary. But life is meant that way, in order for us to grow as individuals.
Within your narrative, you include a story line of your life such as getting married and having a job. I wish that I could have known what kind of person you were married to, or their race for that matter. This may have made the story more interesting knowing if your significant other was American or of another race. Also knowing your marriage life and if there were any racial struggles would have been thought provoking. I am curious on what kind of job you partook in. Its odd and shocking that you struggled to find jobs with such a quality educational background.
I was able to connect through your difficult experience through being teased for my glasses. Four-eyes, spectacles, nerd, the girl with glasses, those were some popular names for me during elementary school. At the time, that really bothered me, and often resulted into five minutes of sobbing and three minutes later forgetting about it. This was until I made the early decision to move onto contacts in the seventh grade. Many people underestimated my abilities to be able to participate in sports I loved. I player soccer, basketball, softball, and volleyball, all with my glasses on. I achieved Athlete of the Year in the sixth grade, while wearing my glasses. Correct me if I am wrong, but I am sure you pursued supreme greatness despite your foreign name and serve as a great example for those who struggle dealing with discrimination due to their name being non-American.
I appreciated your wide variety of vocabulary throughout your writing. The usage of your diction inspires me to not be lazy and really apply myself by making my writings be more fruitful and interesting. I loved your tidbit of humor near the end of your narrative. Yet there is truth within it as well. I am referring to the part about the mother who called you F Word; the lesson being taught was that people get what they deserve, in other words karma. I truly enjoy moral stories because 1. they make me laugh and people plainly being stupid and 2. they are always a good reminder to take responsibility for your own actions.
Thank you for your precious time and consideration of this letter.