Appropriate pace and content Paced fairly well 59-69 seconds could be paced faster Character representations Representation is clear N/A Targeting the audience Not sure if this targets the right audience Target the audience better Dialogue Dialogue easily tells us the type of characters they are Dialogue is a bit too spaced out though Music/ sound effects Sound effects clearly tell what is happening. There is also a good range of music N/A Editing Lots of suitable editing Could have some additional range of transitions Additional focus: Plot Childish plot. Not sure if it appeals to target audience.