Focus Comments Targets

Cinematography A lot of close-ups. Nice

use of tracking shots.
N/A
Appropriate pace and
content
Bit slow at points but
generally good pace.
Maybe a bit more
bullying? Maybe seeing
how it affects her.
N/A
Character representations Can clearly see who the
main character is.
N/A
Targeting the audience In my mind it appeals to a
younger audience, really
young like the age Ruby
is.
N/A
Dialogue Very basic but I guess the
characters are young.
N/A
Music/ sound effects Sound effects clearly tell
what is happening. There
is also a good range of
music
N/A
Editing Only used cuts? Maybe more of a range of
transitions.
Additional focus: Plot Interesting storyline. Maybe more bullying?
Cant completely
understand the superhero
bit.