Hi Mitch,

You have made a good start to the

assignment.
Your opening sentence had me
interested from the start.

I would like to see

some more
descriptive
sentences
explaining in more
detail what
happens. For
example, you could
discuss your
friendship with
Fletch and why he
likes honey and
surfing.

At night he
watches the
stars and
dreams.

Fletch is
not a .
Mitc

hs Assignment

Fletch no giant Panda bear, bat he like honey and sarfing. At night he watch and dream of starts, in d day he comes to
class. He is good at fisics, and maf, bat he talks a lot. he talks so much, the teacher always gets mad at him. bat Fletch
always listens and soon forgets, so he gets in trouble again. Fletch is my frend, becose we both like lemonade.

Good job Mitch.

Remember to proof read and edit any spelling or grammatical errors.
I am looking forward to reading the final work.
Ms McJarrow