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Both the grant proposal and this letter to you show control of language and design. My
proposal did not have significant problems with sentence structure, spelling, or grammar, which
is reflected in your original assessment of that assignment. Furthermore, the cover page and
headings in my proposal document exhibit my understanding of design. This course has helped
me reduce the wordiness of my paragraphs, a fact that is illustrated in the abstract of my grant
proposal, where your feedback aided me in condensing two sentences into one. Although it is
unrealistic to expect that I will never have grammatical errors, this course has given me the tools
I need to recognize errors and correct them. I am confident that the proposal document and this
letter demonstrate mastery of SLO five.
The peer review that is included in my portfolio illustrates my ability to collaborate.
Biancas feedback helped me to correct citing errors in the initial draft of my proposal, and I
gave her thoughtful, constructive criticism on her proposal in return. By giving her feedback, I
was able to ask myself whether my own proposal had the same strengths and weakness, which
helped me recognize opportunities to improve my writing. I hope you enjoy my portfolio, and
that my growth as a writer is apparent in the documents I have chosen to include. I feel confident
in my ability to write both professionally and persuasively as a scientist, and I look forward to
continuing to develop the skills that are outlined in the SLOs.
Sincerely,
Miranda Petty