Name: Isla

Unit: 1.4 Landscape

Task:

Teachers comments:

Ao1:

3 selected photographers (9 photos)

Needs to be completed. Analyse all 9 images in full, not as groups of 3.

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Analysis

John Divola (3 photos)

Your analysis here is progressing well and you are beginning to notice
the Key features of the image. However you must use key photographic
words, these are listed on the analysis hand out. Avoid making. Use
factual information.
You must revisit you landscape analysis before half term and write
down what has been added under a list (entitled Things I have
improved since Landscape maeking), in teacher comments so you will
hit your target level.

David Hockney (3 photos)

Incomplete (need to be copied over from other unit or re-done)

Ao2:

School environment

Progression
from fist to
second
response

Framing the environment

You have demonstrated good progression from first to second

response. You are making good progress with the quality of your photos
and presentation on Weebly. However there4 are major gaps. Refer to
Zoess to see what you need to do:
http://zoehartgcsephotography.weebly.com/
Your My London photos need to be uploaded, as said above you need
to write this down when you have this, leaving sections incomplete lets
you down.

Techniques

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Definitions
Panographies / Photo joiners

Incomplete second response, first response is good

The Formal Elements

Incomplete, need definition etc.

My London

Incomplete, need into paragraph and images

Ao3:

Application of technique

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Quality of the
photographs

Composition

Your completed images demonstrate developing techniques and

consideration of composition. You need to think about other viewpoints,
for example in a h/w shoot, take photos of your subject from 5 different
angles. You could have done this for perspective by taking low angel
views looking up the side of buildings.
Incomplete

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WWW, EBI

Other success criteria

Ao4:

Present 6 photographs

Final Piece

Grade: C-

Target: C

Final Comment: You have taken some good photos in this section and your compositions are progressing well. Make sure to fill in any gaps
ASAP. You have missed your target level as so much is incomplete in this unit.You show good potential.

Ao1

Develop their ideas through investigations informed by

contextual and other sources, demonstrating
analytical and cultural understanding

Ao2

Refine their ideas through experimenting and

selecting appropriate resources, media, materials, techniques and processes

Ao3

Record ideas, observations and insights relevant to

their intentions in visual and/or other forms

Ao4

Present a personal, informed and meaningful response

Demonstrating analytical and critical understanding,
realising intentions and, where appropriate,
making connections between visual, written, oral or
other elements.