Name: Anna

Unit: 1.4 Landscape

Task:

Teachers comments:

Ao1:

3 selected photographers (9 photos)

Analysis

John Divola (3 photos)

Your analysis is excellent and uses key photographic terms.

Continue working at this level and try and use the formal
elements knowledge that you have gained when analysing
future photographs. You should consider adding other relevant
photographers that you have researched, and adding them
under a new subheading. This will demonstrate exceptional
critical awareness to the examiner.
You have demonstrated good progression from first to second
response. However a few are missing, (photo joiner 1st).
Consider doing a third response to tasks to develop your own
interests in the task. Always remember to upload 3 selected
images for each task; you have left some out for the formal
elements. Your My Skye photos are good but need to have
more of a focus, decide what it is that you want to photograph
and produce a series of photos that relate to each other
through strong connections to the formal elements and their
subject matter.

T-

Most of the tasks have been complete using the techniques

successfully. You need to make sure that you are controlling
the exposure levels. For the next unit you should experiment
by reducing your exposure levels. Continue to visit interesting
locations in London that you have a connection to that will
inspire your photos.

T-

I am happy with your final images as they have been

composed well. In order to progress with your work, try to find
something that connects your photos from each task so that
when they are presented as a final set of 6 the examiner can
see a connection in your style and technique.

T-

David Hockney (3 photos)

Ao2:

School environment

Progression
from fist to
second
response

Framing the environment

Techniques

The Formal Elements

Definitions
WWW, EBI

Panographies / Photo joiners

My London

Ao3:

Application of technique

Quality of the
photographs

Composition
Other success criteria

Ao4:
Final Piece

Grade: B

Present 6 photographs

Target: A

Final Comment: Good work on this project Anna, I realise that you missed a lesson, so you may have some gaps in the
formal elements section. If you need to catch up always see me and ask to write a list of what you need to do. I look
forward to seeing how your photos and ideas develop.

Ao1

Develop their ideas through investigations informed by

contextual and other sources, demonstrating
analytical and cultural understanding

Ao2

Refine their ideas through experimenting and

selecting appropriate resources, media, materials, techniques and
processes

Ao3

Record ideas, observations and insights relevant to

their intentions in visual and/or other forms

Ao4

Present a personal, informed and meaningful response

Demonstrating analytical and critical understanding,
realising intentions and, where appropriate,
making connections between visual, written, oral or
other elements.