Name: Louis

Unit: 1.4 Landscape

Task:

Teachers comments:

Ao1:

3 selected photographers (9 photos)

Analysis

John Divola (3 photos)

Your analysis is progressing well and uses key photographic

terms. Continue working at this level and try and use the
formal elements knowledge that you have gained when
analysing future photographs. You should consider adding
other relevant photographers that you have researched, and
adding them under a new subheading. This will demonstrate
exceptional critical awareness to the examiner.

David Hockney (3 photos)

Ao2:

School environment

Need to be completed, contact sheet and 3 selected images.

Progression
from fist to
second
response

Framing the environment

See My London box for feedback

Panographies / Photo joiners

Need to be completed 1st and 2nd response.

Techniques

The Formal Elements

You have demonstrated good progression from first to second

response. Consider doing a third response to develop your
own interests in the task. You are making great progress with
the quality of your photos and presentation on Weebly. Your
My London photos are your best, showing your creativity and
interests. I am impressed by your locations and that you are
being adventurous.

Definitions
WWW, EBI

My London

Ao3:

Application of technique

Quality of the
photographs

Composition
Other success criteria

Ao4:
Final Piece

Grade: B-

Present 6 photographs

As mentioned above, both technique and compositions are

progressing well. Please use the sub heading refining my
techniques, continue to do this for all tasks in the next unit. Try
experimenting with lighting, for example use a torch or desk
lights in interior or exterior spaces.

T+

Please add 6 photos. Complete this and any gaps before half
term and write down what has been added under a list
(entitled Things I have improved since Landscape maeking),
in teacher comments so you will hit your target level. Then
your grade will be updated.

Target: C

Final Comment: You have taken great photos in this section and your compositions are progressing well. Make sure to fill
in any gaps ASAP and your mark will be updated.

Ao1

Develop their ideas through investigations informed by

contextual and other sources, demonstrating
analytical and cultural understanding

Ao2

Refine their ideas through experimenting and

selecting appropriate resources, media, materials, techniques and
processes

Ao3

Record ideas, observations and insights relevant to

their intentions in visual and/or other forms

Ao4

Present a personal, informed and meaningful response

Demonstrating analytical and critical understanding,
realising intentions and, where appropriate,
making connections between visual, written, oral or
other elements.