Escolar Documentos
Profissional Documentos
Cultura Documentos
C H A P P L E
Task:
Teachers comments:
The artist sections that you have completed are good but there
should be three artists with three pictures analyses at present
you only have two Artists please can you complete this
section.
T-
T+
T-
T-
Force of nature
T+
Applied force
Again a good section that is helped by the fact you have gone
beyond the number of responses asked for. The mirror section
is good and could be developed further in the studio maybe
experimenting with colour and light on the glass.
Imposing architecture
The early shots taken around school lack any real impact.
Your choice of buildings is not good you need to be shooting
up using a worm eye view. The later images have much more
impact and the ally pally images work with the dark skies has
real impact.
3 strands
Ao3:
Application of technique
T+
Quality of the
photographs.
How has the
subject been
recorded?
Composition
T+
3 final images
The two images that you have put forward as your final pieces
are good but they stand alone at present. If you move the
sections around as I mentioned earlier the project would make
more sense also you should have three images.
Ao1:
Analysis.
How well have
you understood
the work of
other
photographers?
Ao2:
Progression
from 1st to 2nd
response. How
have the photos
been refined?
Ao4:
Final Piece,
How have you
presented and
realised your
unique
photographs?
T+
Grade: B+
Target: B
Final Comment:
Well done a very good project if you go back and make the changes that I have mentioned this project would move up to
an A.
Ao1
Ao2
Ao3
Ao4