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SHOE by Jeff
MacNell
SHOE by Jeff
MacNell
SHOE by Jeff
MacNell
SHOE by Jeff
MacNell
In
five
easy
steps
Mapess Handout
We will be referring to the
question 1 prompt from
2014 for this exercise in
essay writing.
Speakers complex
attitude
developed
You must know what the
speakers attitude is.
for example:
Speaker is speaking to another person, probably a woman
Speaker is gloomy, takes no delight to range but did once
before
Mouse example tricked to trap
Fly example scorched by flame
Speakers misery connected to the you
Alliteration ds and bs
Sonnet form
How does the speaker feel toward the woman?
Start writing
Opening sentence has to get the job
started.
Weak: George Gascoignes use of
imagery, diction, and form helps
develop the speakers attitude as
untrusting.
Better, but: Whenever trust is given
to another person there is always a
possibility they might break it. In the
poem from George Gascoigne For That
He Looked Not upon Her the speaker
shows us that he once loved a woman
SCORES ??
The opening of an essay is important.
BUT
The score is not determined until the
whole essay has been read.
Did the writer support the premise?
Were quotes integrated smoothly?
Did the essay build its points or
Did it become padded and
repetitious?
Based on your
experience of student
responses at the AP
Reading, what message
would you like to send to
teachers that might help
them to improve the
performance of their
INDIVIDUAL WORK
For That He Looked
Not upon Her
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