Escolar Documentos
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Cultura Documentos
Week 10
Writing Activity
Please take out a separate sheet of paper and
answer the following questions:
Thinking about the two peer critiques (1.1a and
1.1b) you did this past week, what did you learn
from providing feedback to your peers?
In addition to improving your grade, why is
revision important? Why is revision a part of the
writing process?
Brief Assignment 7
Objective: To demonstrate your ability to apply principles of revision to your own writing
Purpose: In BA6, you identified the elements that needed revision in someone elses paper.
In this assignment, you will do the same thing for yourpaper.
Description: First, write a short summary of the strengths and weaknesses of your current
draft. Using instructor feedback, peer critiques, and your own analysis, identify
the specific elements that work well for your intended reader and those that do not.
Next, write a plan of action. For your plan of action, begin by identifying three specific areas or
elements from your draft that you intend to revise and explain why you chose each one. Then,
using the recommendations from chapters 6 (see pp. 117-127) and 10 from First-Year
Writing and chapter 4 of the St.MartinsHandbook, explain the steps you will take to revise
each one. For example, if a particular paragraph is too vague for your reader, what are you
going to have to do to make it more specific? If your topic sentences do not represent the main
idea of each body paragraph, what will you do in order to better understand the main idea of
each paragraph prior to revising each topic sentence?
This should be submitted in an essay of 500-650 words.
Workshop Activity
Using your strengths/weaknesses paragraphs you brought,
select the three main areas you will focus on during
revision and write a plan of action for one of those areas.
Trade your rough draft of your BA7 with someone else
(you have not worked with) and give that student feedback
on his/her work.
Is the students plan of action specific? Does the student
have a clear idea of how he/she will revise that one area?
Does the student identify major strengths and
weaknesses?
Any questions?
Informal Homework
Using the grading commentary, peer critiques,
and your revision ideas, revise your
introduction.
Please bring your original introduction and your
revised introduction to class next Monday
(November 9).