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An observation or
question I received
from De Piero or a
classmate:
The change(s) I
made to what I
initially wrote: (ie,
the change[s] I
made to column 1)
WP#1: issues a
candidate and voter care
about. Genres are
undoubtedly
anywhere
issues a
candidate and voter
care about. A
presidential
candidates website
is a genre
WP#1: Campaign
websites to agree with
their political opinion
and gain their vote with
persuasive issues on
their website.
In similar and
varying methods
with persuasive
texts, individual
rhetoric, and
emotion on their
website.
I'm wondering if
you're losing focus of
this paragraph a bit
Sanders effectively
persuades his
audience by using
languageour
democracy,
billionaire families,
our government.
WP#1: Clinton
This is an important
The Democratic
allows voters to be
swayed by their
emotions and be much
more like to vote for
her
candidates also
cater their website
to their audience
and include a more
emotional aspect to
gain voters.
When discussing
the minimum legal
drinking age,
authors use
various studies as
evidence, different
jargon, and
moves
In my thesis, I connected
academic articles and their
disciplines and non-academic
articles to evidence, jargon,
moves when making an
argument in a much clearer
way that effectively flowed.
factual data in
the form of
demographic and
quantitative
tables
WP#2: research to
justify the argument they
make. Mike Bunn from
How to Read
concentrate on
explicitly leading
your reader through
sentence #1
academic paper
they use different
types of evidence
due to their varying
fields.
WP#2: (Did not include
a second move)
introduce my quote by
connecting it the sentence
before it, and using this
change to connect it to the
sentence after the quote.
By adding another move, I
follow more closely what the
prompt of this WP actually
asked of me. In addition to
adding this second move, I
also added it to my thesis so
readers will know I talk
about it after evidence and
jargon.