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Directions: Please respond to the following questions in as much detail as possible. Pick a
bright color for your responses so they stand out from the questions. Make sure you offer
both positive and critical feedback.
Authors: list two or three questions or concerns you have about your draft that youd like to
discuss with your group. (Reviewers: Be sure to address these questions here)
9. Does each body paragraph focus on a single point? Summarize, in a word or two, the
topic of each body paragraph.
The second is good but a little unorganized. But after all it can be understandable.
10. If the answer to #9 is no, which body paragraphs include multiple ideas that should
be broken up into multiple paragraphs?
Style
11. Is the language in the essay appropriately formal? Offer examples from the text to
illustrate.
Its easy to read.
Next Steps
12. Work with the writer to devise a plan for revision. Summarize the writers next steps
here.
Correct some grammar
Other
13. Note any other questions or feedback you have for the writer here. This is
important: since every paper is unique, they will each have their own successes
and concerns that may not be addressed above.
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