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AFL
Evaluating Peer
Work
AS Print
Level Descriptors
Level awarded
YR 12 Media
AFL Activity
AS Print
Level Descriptors
Level awarded
YR 12 Media
AFL Activity
Activity 1
Use the mark scheme below and work in pairs to grade the 4 exemplar pieces of
work. You must try and place the work into the correct level. Wherever possible you
should use a best fit model, this means that you take an overall view rather than
harshly penalising for one fault. Use the space provided to give specific examples
and write a summary comment at the bottom of the page. You are examining the
ENTIRE MAGAZINE
NON STOP POP
Minimal Level
1
10 23 marks
framing a shot,
including and
excluding
elements as
appropriate
using a variety of
shot distances as
appropriate
shooting material
appropriate to the
task set
selecting mise-enscne including
colour, figure,
lighting, objects
and setting
manipulating
photographs as
appropriate to the
context for
presentation,
including cropping
and resizing
accurately using
language and
register
appropriately
integrating
illustration and
text
showing
understanding of
conventions of
layout and page
design
showing
AS Print
Basic Level 2
2435 marks
Proficiency
Level 3
3647 marks
Excellence
Level 4
4860 marks
25- Bad
positioning and
framing eg.
Cutting off arm
on double page
22- mostly mid
shots
24- clear but
could be better
quality photos
26- basic miseen-scene and
no props used
27- Most
photos are
sized OK but
some have
been cropped
too much eg.
Arm is cut off
on double page
23- register
appropriate but
some grammar
use is incorrect
eg. was
instead of
were
35- well laid
out, text is
organised but is
slightly
messy/too busy
35- organised
lay out, slightly
messy
Level Descriptors
Level awarded
YR 12 Media
awareness of the
need for variety in
fonts and text size
AFL Activity
fonts used,
however this is
also good
because it
shows variation
using ICT
appropriately for
the task set
36- Photoshop
is used well
Summary Comment
I marked this magazine too harshly as it is actually level 3. However I realise now that it did
tick the correct boxes and did the things that the exam board like. For example, multiple
images and busy covers.
AS Print
Level Descriptors
Level awarded
YR 12 Media
AFL Activity
FLAWD
Minimal Level
1
10 23 marks
Basic Level 2
2435 marks
framing a shot,
including and
excluding
elements as
appropriate
using a variety of
shot distances as
appropriate
shooting material
appropriate to the
task set
appropriately
integrating
illustration and
text
AS Print
Proficiency
Level 3
3647 marks
37- well framed
shots and have
excluded
elements eg
backgrounds,
well
Excellence
Level 4
4860 marks
36- register
used is
appropriate,
however some
grammatical
errors eg carnt
30- contents
page text and
images are laid
out well, quote
on double page
hasnt been
embedded
correctly and
cover page has
been laid out
well
Level Descriptors
Level awarded
YR 12 Media
showing
understanding of
conventions of
layout and page
design
showing
awareness of the
need for variety in
fonts and text size
using ICT
appropriately for
the task set
AFL Activity
Summary Comment
I marked this magazine slightly too harsh as it reached level 3. I realise now that it does
deserve level 3 especially because of the amount of images used and the bust style to it.
AS Print
Level Descriptors
Level awarded
YR 12 Media
AFL Activity
STACK
Minimal Level
1
10 23 marks
Basic Level 2
2435 marks
framing a shot,
including and
excluding
elements as
appropriate
using a variety of
shot distances as
appropriate
Excellence
Level 4
4860 marks
shooting material
appropriate to the
task set
manipulating
photographs as
appropriate to the
context for
presentation,
including cropping
and resizing
accurately using
language and
register
appropriately
integrating
illustration and
AS Print
Proficiency
Level 3
3647 marks
38- well framed
photos, cover
photo edited
well
48- Well
positioned text
and images,
Level Descriptors
Level awarded
YR 12 Media
AFL Activity
text
looks very
professional
and organised.
48- Layout is
well positioned
which shows
awareness of
page design.
showing
understanding of
conventions of
layout and page
design
showing
awareness of the
need for variety in
fonts and text size
using ICT
appropriately for
the task set
36- variety of
fonts but could
be more to gain
more marks
45- ICT used
well, Photoshop
is used well, eg
cutting out
image on front
cover
Summary Comment
This magazine received level 3, therefore I was correct mostly with my marking. I can see
now why it might not reach level 4, its professional but not quite excellent, especially the
layout of the images.
AS Print
Level Descriptors
Level awarded
YR 12 Media
AFL Activity
DUBZONE
Minimal Level
1
10 23 marks
Basic Level 2
2435 marks
framing a shot,
including and
excluding
elements as
appropriate
using a variety of
shot distances as
appropriate
shooting material
appropriate to the
task set
manipulating
photographs as
appropriate to the
context for
presentation,
including cropping
and resizing
accurately using
language and
register
appropriately
integrating
illustration and
text
showing
understanding of
AS Print
Proficiency
Level 3
3647 marks
36- well framed
shots but
slightly similar
Excellence
Level 4
4860 marks
40- slight
variation but
could be other
shots
35- good
camera used
but quality
could be
improved
35- basic miseen-scene but
prop used.
Colours all link
well together
which makes
the magazine
flow nicely.
35- cutting out
of images well,
resizing
appropriate.
34- relatively
appropriate
language with
the correct
register for the
piece of writing
and audience
35- Images and
text integrating
well but slight
alterations
could be
appropriate eg
text on double
page could be
laid out so it
doesnt cover
the images as
much
34- Layout is
appropriate,
Level Descriptors
Level awarded
YR 12 Media
conventions of
layout and page
design
showing
awareness of the
need for variety in
fonts and text size
using ICT
appropriately for
the task set
AFL Activity
Summary Comment
I marked this magazine too highly as it actually only reached level 1. I realise now that the
overall magazine is very basic and doesnt have a structure to it. There arent enough
images and the fonts dont link together well. The text layout on the double page hasnt
been done well as some of the text go over the box that they are meant to be in.
AS Print
Level Descriptors
Level awarded
YR 12 Media
AFL Activity
Task 2
Now using the skills youve acquired in task 1, evaluate your own work and then
two pieces of work from classmates. Use the space provided to give specific
examples and write a summary comment at the bottom of the page.
Magazine title: CHORD
Minimal Level
1
10 23 marks
Basic Level 2
2435 marks
framing a shot,
including and
excluding
elements as
appropriate
using a variety of
shot distances as
appropriate
shooting material
appropriate to the
task set
manipulating
photographs as
appropriate to the
context for
presentation,
including cropping
and resizing
accurately using
language and
register
AS Print
Level Descriptors
Proficiency
Level 3
3647 marks
Pictures framed
well, however
some things eg
feet, have been
cut off
Good variety of
shot distances,
including mid
and long shots
Lights and
camera used is
appropriate and
makes the
images look
very
professional
Lighting is good
in all images,
the colours fit
together well
and the use of
the guitar fits
genre well. The
mise-en-scene
used allows
your magazine
to flow well
Images are
manipulated to
the correct size
and shape. To
gain more
marks, they
could have not
have cut feet
etc off the
image
Register is
appropriate and
fits target
audience well.
No grammar
mistakes can be
found
Excellence
Level 4
4860 marks
Level awarded
YR 12 Media
AFL Activity
appropriately
integrating
illustration and
text
showing
understanding of
conventions of
layout and page
design
showing
awareness of the
need for variety in
fonts and text size
Two different
fonts which
could be
increased.
Good size
differences
though
using ICT
appropriately for
the task set
Summary Comment
Overall I think the magazine is very good. The layout of images and text works very well
and looks organised but also fits the indie genre. Only slight alterations could be made,
including a bigger variation of fonts and sizes.
AS Print
Level Descriptors
Level awarded
YR 12 Media
AFL Activity
Basic Level 2
2435 marks
framing a shot,
including and
excluding
elements as
appropriate
using a variety of
shot distances as
appropriate
Appropriate
camera and
lighting
equipment used
for the tasks,
makes the
images look
clear
Lighting is
appropriate and
the colours in
the clothing
link well
together.
However
background
scenery would
make the miseen-scene better
manipulating
photographs as
appropriate to the
context for
presentation,
including cropping
and resizing
accurately using
language and
register
Cropping and
resizing fits the
pages well. The
cutting out of
the images
looks very
professional
appropriately
integrating
illustration and
text
Register links
well with
audience and
language is
appropriate. No
mistakes found
showing
AS Print
Excellence
Level 4
4860 marks
Slight variety of
shot distances,
however more
need to be
added
shooting material
appropriate to the
task set
Proficiency
Level 3
3647 marks
Shots are
framed well, the
images have
been cut out
well, excluding
the background
Level Descriptors
Level awarded
YR 12 Media
understanding of
conventions of
layout and page
design
showing
awareness of the
need for variety in
fonts and text size
using ICT
appropriately for
the task set
AFL Activity
Print
page design is
organised and
well designed
Slight variation
of fonts but
could be more.
Good size
variations
however
ICT used
appropriately.
Photoshop used
well
Summary Comment
Overall the magazine looks very professional and well laid out, especially the cover page.
The contents page could be made slightly busier as there is empty space at the minute,
but the double page and cover page layout looks good and works really well.
AS Print
Level Descriptors
Level awarded
YR 12 Media
AFL Activity
Magazine title:
Minimal Level
1
10 23 marks
framing a shot,
including and
excluding
elements as
appropriate
using a variety of
shot distances as
appropriate
Basic Level 2
2435 marks
Proficiency
Level 3
3647 marks
Well framed
photos,
elements are
appropriately
excluded
Excellence
Level 4
4860 marks
Not much of a
variety of shot
distances, more
could be put in
shooting material
appropriate to the
task set
Lighting
equipment is
appropriate as
well as the
camera used.
Both contribute
to making a
good quality
image
Colours used
link well
together. The
lighting is very
appropriate in
creating a good
quality image.
Props could be
used
Very
appropriate,
cropping and
resizing has
been
manipulated in
a stylish way
manipulating
photographs as
appropriate to the
context for
presentation,
including cropping
and resizing
accurately using
language and
register
Register
appropriate and
no mistakes
found
Images and text
are integrated
well. They
complement
each other well
Layout has
been designed
in a stylish way,
works very well
appropriately
integrating
illustration and
text
showing
understanding of
conventions of
layout and page
design
showing
awareness of the
need for variety in
AS Print
Good variety of
fonts and sizing,
more could still
Level Descriptors
Level awarded
YR 12 Media
AFL Activity
Print
be added
however
Photoshop has
been used well
to create the
magazine
using ICT
appropriately for
the task set
Summary Comment
Overall the magazine is very impressive. Only slight alternations could be made, including
changing shot distances in the images used.
AS Print
Level Descriptors
Level awarded
YR 12 Media
AFL Activity
Basic Level 2
2435 marks
manipulating
photographs as
appropriate to the
context for
presentation,
including cropping
and resizing
Camera used
creates good
quality pictures
but more
lighting
equipment
could be used
to improve
quality even
more
Bigger variety
of mise-enscene could be
used. Scenery
backgrounds
used is good
though
Photos are
manipulated
well but some
images (top
one on
contents) is
cropped too
small
accurately using
language and
register
AS Print
Excellence
Level 4
4860 marks
A small variety
of shot
distances but
more could be
added eg long
shots
shooting material
appropriate to the
task set
Proficiency
Level 3
3647 marks
Framed well but
could include
more depth into
images
Appropriate
register and
manner used.
Some spelling
Level Descriptors
Level awarded
YR 12 Media
AFL Activity
Print
mistakes to
change
appropriately
integrating
illustration and
text
showing
understanding of
conventions of
layout and page
design
showing
awareness of the
need for variety in
fonts and text size
using ICT
appropriately for
the task set
AS Print
Basic
integrating of
text and
images,
especially on
contents page
Basic layout
and design
which could be
improved eg
more text on
contents and
images
arranged in an
original way
Not a big
variety of fontsit stays
consistent
throughout the
whole
magazine. Big
variety of sizes
Photoshop is
used
appropriately,
but more
complicated
things could be
done
Level Descriptors
Level awarded