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Evaluating Peer
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Name: Olivia Hill

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Activity 1
Use the mark scheme below and work in pairs to grade the 4 exemplar pieces of
work. You must try and place the work into the correct level. Wherever possible you
should use a best fit model, this means that you take an overall view rather than
harshly penalising for one fault. Use the space provided to give specific examples
and write a summary comment at the bottom of the page. You are examining the
ENTIRE MAGAZINE
NON STOP POP
Minimal Level
1
10 23 marks
framing a shot,
including and
excluding
elements as
appropriate

using a variety of
shot distances as
appropriate

shooting material
appropriate to the
task set

selecting mise-enscne including


colour, figure,
lighting, objects
and setting

manipulating
photographs as
appropriate to the
context for

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Basic Level 2
2435 marks

Proficiency
Level 3
3647 marks

Excellence
Level 4
4860 marks

25- Issues with


framing.
Cutting off
arms and bad
positioning on
majority of
images.
22- Mid shots
used mainly
with the use of
one close up.
Used in a way
in which it is
not effective.
24- Photos are
clear however
not of good
quality and look
very rushed.
However
appropriate
shooting
material was
used.
26- Poor
lighting,
especially on
the front cover.
Colours do not
complement
each other well
and look very
messy. Very
basic mise-enscene with no
objects and
only one
setting.
27- Cropping
used poorly
due to arms
being cut off.

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presentation,
including cropping
and resizing
accurately using
language and
register

appropriately
integrating
illustration and
text
showing
understanding of
conventions of
layout and page
design

showing
awareness of the
need for variety in
fonts and text size

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Other areas are


mostly size ok
and images are
not stretched.
23- Register is
appropriate but
there are
grammatical
errors
throughout and
some language
is wrong.
35- The text
layout is mainly
positioned well.
Some parts are
a bit messy.
35- The layout
is organised
and most of the
text and
images are
positioned
effectively.
Some areas are
slightly messy.
29- Clear fonts
are used
however the
variety is too
great and
makes the
magazine look
messy.

using ICT
appropriately for
the task set

36- Photoshop
is used
effectively
showing a good
use of ICT and a
good
understanding
of the software.

Summary Comment
The magazine looks very overcrowded with a confusing amount of fonts making the
magazine look messy and unorganised. The layout is reasonably good showing that they can
position text and images effectively. The colours used do not complement each other and look
messy. Overall, the magazine is reasonably good showing understanding of Photoshop but
needs to make pages look tidy and complementary.

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FLAWD
Minimal Level
1
10 23 marks
framing a shot,
including and
excluding
elements as
appropriate

using a variety of
shot distances as
appropriate

shooting material
appropriate to the
task set

selecting mise-enscne including


colour, figure,
lighting, objects
and setting

manipulating
photographs as
appropriate to the
context for

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Basic Level 2
2435 marks

Proficiency
Level 3
3647 marks

Excellence
Level 4
4860 marks

35- Framing of
shots is
reasonably
good however
some elements
need to be
excluded.
28- Little
variety of shot
distances.
Mainly mid
shots the some
close ups used
however they
are appropriate
for the
magazine.
27- Shooting
material is
appropriate
however
slightly blurry
making images
look unclear
and rushed.
25- The lighting
is very dark
and could be
improved.
Colours are all
complementary
towards each
other and stand
out well.
Objects are
appropriate for
the style of
music. Setting
is specified in
the magazine
which makes it
acceptable
however looks
very messy and
rushed.
32- Most
pictures
manipulated
well with the

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presentation,
including cropping
and resizing

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exception of a
couple of the
front cover. All
images cropped
effectively and
resized
reasonably
well.

accurately using
language and
register

47- Language is
appropriate for
magazine and
the register is
also acceptable
and used well to
draw the
audiences
attention.
40- Most text
and images are
laid out well
with the
exception of an
image on the
double page
spread
overlapping
some text.
45- A clear
understanding
of layout and
organising text
and images on
pages. All laid
out in an
effective way.
47- Good
variety of fonts
used. Doesnt
look
overcrowded or
too minimal
making the
used of font and
text size
effective for the
reader.

appropriately
integrating
illustration and
text

showing
understanding of
conventions of
layout and page
design

showing
awareness of the
need for variety in
fonts and text size

using ICT
appropriately for
the task set

48- ICT used


very well and
shows a clear
understanding
of Photoshop
throughout the
magazine.

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All colours complement each other and there is a variety of font and text sizes used
effectively to make the magazine look intriguing. Some issues with images such as lighting
and manipulation as well as the issue of them looking rushed. The layout is good and the
positioning all works well showing a good understanding of Photoshop and ICT software.

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STACK
Minimal Level
1
10 23 marks

Basic Level 2
2435 marks

framing a shot,
including and
excluding
elements as
appropriate
using a variety of
shot distances as
appropriate

shooting material
appropriate to the
task set

selecting mise-enscne including


colour, figure,
lighting, objects
and setting

manipulating
photographs as
appropriate to the
context for
presentation,
including cropping
and resizing

accurately using

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Proficiency
Level 3
3647 marks
40- Framing is
good. Cover
photo leaves
background out
which is
effective.
39- A variety of
shots used.
Close up, midshot and longer
shots used.
36- Shooting
material
appropriate
however could
be of slightly
better quality.
46- Colours are
all very
complementary
towards each
other. The
lighting is quite
dark but
appropriate for
the magazine.
The figures are
all placed
effectively in
the magazine
and work well
together. The
objects and
setting all apply
to the magazine
style.
40- Cover
image cut out
and cropped
effectively to
work well for
the style of the
magazine.
Other images
have been
manipulated
well on the
pages.
36- Relatively

Excellence
Level 4
4860 marks

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language and
register

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good language
with suitable
register.
However a
grammatical
error occurred
but more or less
well.

appropriately
integrating
illustration and
text

48- Text and


images
positioned well
on pages and
are appropriate
for the
magazines
style.
48- Layout was
well designed
and applies to
the magazine
genre.

showing
understanding of
conventions of
layout and page
design
showing
awareness of the
need for variety in
fonts and text size

38- Little
variety of fonts
but awareness
of continuity
makes it work
well on the
magazine.
47- ICT was
used well.
Photoshop used
appropriately to
crop and
manipulate
images as well
as position text
and photos on
all pages.

using ICT
appropriately for
the task set

Summary Comment
The majority of elements of this magazine are good and complementary. For example, the
colours all work well as they are all of the same tone. The red stands out and draws the
attention of the audience. Cropping and image manipulation is done effectively showing a
clear understanding of the use of Photoshop and ICT.

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DUBZONE
Minimal Level
1
10 23 marks
framing a shot,
including and
excluding
elements as
appropriate

selecting mise-enscne including


colour, figure,
lighting, objects
and setting

AS Print

Proficiency
Level 3
3647 marks

Excellence
Level 4
4860 marks

35- Shots
framed well
and exclude all
background
elements to
make it look
clear and
efficient.
However shots
could be of
better quality
and cropping
used on the
cover is
negatively
done. (Her
head is not
included).
30- A slight
variety of shots
used. Close up
and mid shot
on double page
spread as well
as cover. A
longer shot is
used on the
contents page.

using a variety of
shot distances as
appropriate

shooting material
appropriate to the
task set

Basic Level 2
2435 marks

23- Shooting
material is
appropriate
although
images are
lacking in
quality and look
rushed.
28- Colours are
bright and
attractive for
the audience.
Lighting is
relatively dark
and could be
improved.
Objects such as
the guitar are
appropriate for
the genre of
magazine. The

Level Descriptors

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manipulating
photographs as
appropriate to the
context for
presentation,
including cropping
and resizing

accurately using
language and
register

appropriately
integrating
illustration and
text

showing
understanding of
conventions of
layout and page
design

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setting is
unknown as the
white
background is
all that is
displayed.
30- Most
images are
manipulated
well and
resized to fit
into the layout.
The front cover
image does not
work as well as
the top is cut
off. Therefore
there are some
issues with
cropping.
34- Relatively
appropriate
language
structure with
the correct
register for the
style of
magazine.
24- Some
issues with text
and images on
double page
spread as the
text over laps
onto images
and crosses
over borders.
This creates a
messy and
organised
effect. The
image on the
contents page
obstructs some
of the text
being read
which has a
negative
impact for the
reader.
27Understanding
of layout can
be noticed
although some

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showing
awareness of the
need for variety in
fonts and text size

using ICT
appropriately for
the task set

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issues with text


and images
looking messy.
There is an
effort to make
pages look
organised and
orderly
however it
could be
cleaner.
25- Little
variety of fonts
used. Very
basic fonts
although they
do look neat
and the
understanding
of continuity of
fonts are
displayed.
ICT clearly used
and a basic
understanding
of Photoshop is
shown
throughout.

Summary Comment
Attempt to make the magazine look structured and organised however the positioning of text
and images looks quite rushed. Many areas of the magazine look messy with little variation in
fonts and text sizing. There is only a very basic understanding of Photoshop and ICT.

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Task 2
Now using the skills youve acquired in task 1, evaluate your own work and then
two pieces of work from classmates. Use the space provided to give specific
examples and write a summary comment at the bottom of the page.
Magazine title: SOLO (Emily Turton)
Minimal Level
1
10 23 marks

Basic Level 2
2435 marks

framing a shot,
including and
excluding
elements as
appropriate

using a variety of
shot distances as
appropriate
shooting material
appropriate to the
task set

selecting mise-enscne including


colour, figure,
lighting, objects
and setting

manipulating
photographs as
appropriate to the
context for
presentation,
including cropping
and resizing

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Proficiency
Level 3
3647 marks
Shots are
framed well and
centred
including only
appropriate
elements in the
background.
Close up, Mid
Shot and a long
shot are used
well.
Shooting
material very
appropriate all
photos are clear
and well shot.
Colours are all
complementary
and lighting is
very good. It
excludes and
includes the
write amount of
shadowing for
the genre.
Objects such as
the guitar are
very
appropriate for
the magazine
style. The
setting is fitting
for the genre as
the outdoors
and studio type
settings reflect
the indie genre.
All photos
manipulated,
cropped and
resized
according to the
magazine
layout.

Excellence
Level 4
4860 marks

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accurately using
language and
register

Language
appropriate
with the odd
spelling error.
Register to the
correct level for
the genre.
Text and images
all arranged to
complement
each other and
are arranged
appropriately.
Layout is much
organised and
clean looking.
All very
appropriate or
genre of
magazine.

appropriately
integrating
illustration and
text

showing
understanding of
conventions of
layout and page
design

showing
awareness of the
need for variety in
fonts and text size

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Small variety of
fonts and sizes
used but ones
used work well
to show
continuity.

using ICT
appropriately for
the task set

ICT is used
appropriately
and a clear
understanding
of Photoshop is
shown.

Summary Comment

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Magazine title: INTERVAL (Edie)


Minimal Level
1
10 23 marks

Basic Level 2
2435 marks

framing a shot,
including and
excluding
elements as
appropriate

using a variety of
shot distances as
appropriate

Excellence
Level 4
4860 marks

Similar shots
used but used
very well. More
variety needed.

shooting material
appropriate to the
task set

Shooting
material is very
appropriate
with clear
images and no
blurring.
Lighting is all
excellent for the
genre and is
very
appropriate.
The colouring is
all very
complementary.
Only one
setting used
and no object
but the
continuity
works well.
Photos are all
manipulated,
resized and
cropped well.
All are very
appropriate for
the context but
could be varied.
Language and
registers
appropriate but
some
grammatical
errors.
Text and
illustrations all
positioned well
and look

selecting mise-enscne including


colour, figure,
lighting, objects
and setting

manipulating
photographs as
appropriate to the
context for
presentation,
including cropping
and resizing
accurately using
language and
register

appropriately
integrating
illustration and
text

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Proficiency
Level 3
3647 marks
Shots all framed
central and
well. Very
appropriate for
the genre
presented in
the magazine.

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appropriate for
the genre.

showing
understanding of
conventions of
layout and page
design

Good layout
and page
design however
some columns
are different
sizes. Mostly
organised
layout.

showing
awareness of the
need for variety in
fonts and text size

Different sizes f
text used
showing a clear
variety. Some
variety of fonts
used however
used
appropriately
and fit the
genre well.
ICT used very
well and a clear
understanding
of Photoshop is
shown.

using ICT
appropriately for
the task set

Summary Comment

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Magazine title: ASY (Elliot)


Minimal Level
1
10 23 marks

Basic Level 2
2435 marks

framing a shot,
including and
excluding
elements as
appropriate

using a variety of
shot distances as
appropriate

Shooting
material is very
appropriate as
photos are very
clear looking.
Lighting is all
very good and
fits the genre.
Colouring is all
appropriate and
complementary.
All unneeded
objects are
excluded.
However could
be a variation of
setting used.
All photographs
are
manipulated,
resized and
cropped out. All
images are cut
out well and fit
the genre
appropriately.
Language is all
appropriate and
register fits the
genre. More
words that fit
the genre could
be an
improvement.

selecting mise-enscne including


colour, figure,
lighting, objects
and setting

manipulating
photographs as
appropriate to the
context for
presentation,
including cropping
and resizing

accurately using
language and
register

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Excellence
Level 4
4860 marks

Little variety of
shots used but
photos is all
taken well.

shooting material
appropriate to the
task set

appropriately
integrating
illustration and
text

Proficiency
Level 3
3647 marks
Shots framed
well and all
central.
Elements all
excluded to look
appropriate or
the genre.

Text and
images are
integrated well.
Could be
positioned

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showing
understanding of
conventions of
layout and page
design

showing
awareness of the
need for variety in
fonts and text size

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closer together.
Magazine looks
organised but
lots of blank
space that
would be an
improvement I
filled.
Large variety of
text sizes used
however little
variety of fonts
used.

using ICT
appropriately for
the task set

ICT used very


appropriately
for the genre
and a clear
understanding
of Photoshop
shown.

Summary Comment

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Task 3 Target setting


Use the feedback from your classmates to set targets to improve your work.
Use the grid below to focus your areas for improvement. Try to be as specific
as possible and where possible create one target for each area of the mark
scheme. Remember to be realistic, that means making sure your targets are
achievable and realistic for your ability.
Magazine title: CHORD
Minimal Level
1
10 23 marks
framing a shot,
including and
excluding
elements as
appropriate

using a variety of
shot distances as
appropriate

Basic Level 2
2435 marks

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Excellence
Level 4
4860 marks

Some elements
excluded that
need to be
included (the
feet on the
front cover).
Most shots
framed central
and have a
clear
background
that fits the
genre.
A range of
shots and
distances used
but could be
more varied.

shooting material
appropriate to the
task set

selecting mise-enscne including


colour, figure,
lighting, objects
and setting

Proficiency
Level 3
3647 marks

Shooting
material
appropriate and
images are
clear.
Lighting is of
good quality
with a correct
setting of a
white
background.
Colours are not
striking
(excluding
printed
version).
Improve by
adding brighter
colours to
attract the
audiences
attention

Level Descriptors

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manipulating
photographs as
appropriate to the
context for
presentation,
including cropping
and resizing

accurately using
language and
register

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however
colours do
complement
each other.
Photos are
cropped and
resized mainly
appropriately
however feet
are excluded on
the main image
and need to be
included for a
better looking
image.
Language
register
appropriate
with the odd
grammatical
error.

appropriately
integrating
illustration and
text

showing
understanding of
conventions of
layout and page
design
showing
awareness of the
need for variety in
fonts and text size

using ICT
appropriately for
the task set

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Text and images


all arranged
appropriately
and look
organised. Lots
of images and
text included.
Layout is
organized with
the exception of
some text in the
wrong place.
Little variety of
text sizes and
fonts used to
look affective.
However the
continuity of
text works well.
ICT used
appropriately
with an
understanding
of Photoshop.

Level Descriptors

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