Escolar Documentos
Profissional Documentos
Cultura Documentos
Name
Hero/
Villain
Name
Inclusion of
external
features
and
comments
Yes but
minimal
more of the
story line
Inclusion
of internal
features
and
comments
No
Overall
comments
Ashley
Khoi
The
Reverse
Flash and
Arkham
Knight
The Flash
Yes what
he wears,
including
symbols,
how he
moves
Yes what
he hears,
strong,
muscular,
fast, blue
eyes
No
Inclusion of a
simile, good
adjectives and
overall
description
Theres
a
Captain
America
No
Extend
response to
include
internal
qualities
Erica
Brenda
n
Out of class
The Flash
Yes what
he wears,
recognises
he is strong
and athletic
Yes
mentally
strong,
never gives
up on a
fight
Katerin
a
Superman
Yes strong,
what he
wears,
disguised
reporter
Sarina
Katniss
Everdeen
Yes what
she wears,
carries, hair
eyes
Sandra
Scooby Doo
Yes what
he looks
likes/wears
Did 2, focus on
doing one
solid response
next time
Includes a
summary of
who the Flash
is and where
he belongs.
Work on
extending his
responses.
Excellent
spelling and
grammar
Yes smart, Work on
cleaver,
extending
fearless,
response to
brave, loyal include how
we know he
has these
qualities
supporting
evidence
No
Extend
response to
include
internal
qualities
Yes warm
Extend
hearted and responses for
scared of
both external
nearly
and internal
Viola
Han
Gru
Rakim
Zoom
Sarah
Nyanki
r
Out of class
Spiderman
Andre
wN
Mr
Incredible
Vaness
a
Voldemort
Johnny
Andre
wP
Out of class
Batman
Tyrrell
Caroly
n
Absent
Solaris
Shaun
Diana
Out of class
Absent
everything
qualities
Yes bald,
pointy nose,
what he
wears
No
Yes speed
No
Extend
response to
include
internal
qualities
Extend
response to
include
internal
qualities and
extend
external
qualities
Yes what
he wears,
good at
climbing,
hard to
spot/see,
saves people
Yes great
description
of what he is
wearing
No
Extend
response to
include
internal
qualities
No
Yes pale
zombie, no
hair, scary
nose, dull,
intimidating
Beginning
wise,
superior
Extend
response to
include
internal
qualities
Extend
response to
include
internal
qualities
Yes what
he wears,
strong, tall,
muscly
Yes
mentally
strong, well
trained,
brave,
fearless,
Work on
extending
response to
include how
we know he
has these
qualities
supporting
evidence
Yes dark,
shadowy,
sinister,
metallic
voice
Beginning
to explore
Extend
response to
include
internal
qualities