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Annotation: This article explains how children are quitting the sports
they have been playing all their life because of the amounts of
pressure being put on them from their parents. Their parents want
them to receive the best scholarships at the best schools and too many
kids are becoming burnt out from it. The author explains how the
parents are becoming the second head coach, when it reality they
should be the ones being supportive and having positive thoughts
towards their kids, because in reality, they are playing the sport
because they love it, not to be stressed out from it. I can use a lot of
information from this article. The author gives a lot of statistics as to
how many kids quit sports and what ages and I think those could be
helpful to inform readers that parenting pressure is a real thing.
5. College Students and Their Helicopter Parents: a Recipe for Stress
Gude, Karl. "College Students and Their Helicopter Parents: A Recipe
for Stress."Huffpost Parents. The Huffington Post, 8 Apr. 2016. Web. 6
Mar. 2016.
1. Relevancy: This source relates to my topic it just uses a different
viewpoint about how parents influence stress for kids when they
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are in college. It talks about how parents are living through their
kids and college and wanting them to get a good high paying job
that they might not have had the chance to do. This article
supports my topic because the author states how this is a
problem for college students because the stress of college is
enough.
Accuracy: I dont detect any bias of faulty reasoning. This is a
published article from a credible post. Some of the data is
coming from Journal of Child and Family Studies. I think it is fact
and opinion based. I think the facts support that college students
are 100% stressed from the Child and Family Studies. There are
opinions that form when the author suggests Dont for
helicopter parents.
Currency: The source is up to date and is written within the 5year span. I think the information that is presented is very
relevant because I am a college student and I can relate to every
stressor that is listed. It does show that the article was published
in April and updated in June so new information could have been
added.
Authority: The author has the experience and the credentials.
There is a background that is given about the author before the
article. The author is an instructor at the Michigan State School
of Journalism.
Purpose: The purpose of this article is to inform parents. Inform
parents that their childrens life does not get easier when they go
to college. It just gets that much more hectic. The author gives
helpful tips for Helicopter parents to do instead of hovering.
The information is clearly presented with an introduction, body
paragraphs and a conclusion.
Rating: I would rate this article a 4. I think I could get helpful
information from this article. I like that the author provides tips
for the parents. They not only tell them what they are doing
wrong, but what to fix as well and I think that is beneficial and
sets this article apart from the others. This article helps put
things in perspective that parental pressure does not only
happen at a young age but even continues as their children grow
up.
Annotation: Throughout this article the author explains how parents are
trying to live through their children. The author provides many
examples as to how these helicopter parents want their children to go
to the best colleges and obtain the best degrees because they were
not able to. They want to see their children succeed because they
might not have been given the same opportunities. The author later in
the article describes some things parents shouldnt do. They compare
them to the things the parents should be doing, like being supportive
and positive. I think I can use a lot of information from this article. This
article is the first article that tells parents what they are doing wrong
and how to fix it.
6. When the Pressure to Excel Gets out of Hand
"When the Pressure to Excel Gets out of Hand." Healthy Children.
American Academy of Pediatrics, 21 Nov. 2015. Web. 6 Mar. 2016.
1. Relevancy: I think this information is relevant. I think some of it is
redundant from the previous information that I have been
researching. But they do, once again, provide tips for parents
and signs to watch out for if they suspect their children are
suffering from stress and anxiety.
2. Accuracy: I do not detect any bias or unsupportive claims. I think
this information is more opinion based. I do not see anywhere in
the article where there are quotes being made from credible
sources. I think this author just put their opinion about the
situation and ways to address the situation and for parents to be
able to have stress. Because the website I think is credible, just
not the article.
3. Currency: The article was published within the 5-year span. I
dont think much information has been added to the article
because the article is not very long itself. But it does say that the
article has been updated at the end of the article.
4. Authority: The article was published from the American Academy
of Pediatrics. So the information is credible and the website that
this information is presented on is reliable. Since there is no
specific article it is hard to assess the authority.
5. Purpose: The purpose of this article is to inform parents that their
children will be under many accounts of stress. I like that the
author gives signs to watch out for. Showing signs of depression,
irritability or aggressiveness.
6. Rating: I would rate this a 2 out of 5. I think this article has
information that is worth using but it does not have an author. It
was just posted to a website full of information about childrens
health. So anyone could have written this article. It is a
trustworthy website because it is .org.
Annotation: This article explains how parents and the kids themselves
are the ones at fault for the added pressure on kids. The author
explains that this is a hand in hand relationship. The kids are the ones
feeling the pressure and they want to perform well for their parents.
Their parents on the other hand arent telling their kids to relax. So the
author informs the reader of things both the children and parents can
do to reduce the stress that is being put on by the elder. I think I could
use that information for my research. This article has similar ideas as
previous articles so some of the information seems redundant but I
could get some helpful information from this article as well.
7. The Very Real Dangers of Pushing Kids Too Hard
Fornicola, Fred. "The Very Real Dangers of Pushing Kids Too
Hard." Breaking Muscle. Breaking Muscle. Web. 18 Apr. 2016.
1. Relevancy: This article does relate to my topic. This takes a
different look at things because this is a real life example that a
young athlete has passed away because of using to many over
the counter drugs to relieve sore muscle and joint pain. This is in
result by having competition having put on them from outside
sources, like parents and coaches.
2. Accuracy: I dont detect any sign of bias throughout the article.
The author uses coaches from Division 1 schools that are
credited throughout the article for support on his claim. There
are a lot of good claims that could be used from this article to
support my feelings towards pushing kids too hard in sports and
school.
3. Currency: There is no date on the article to know when it was
published or written. Not knowing the date does question the
currency but from the looks of the website and the author there
is up to date data.
4. Authority: The author does have credentials to be writing about
this topic. This author is different from my other authors I have
used because this author is a strength and conditioning coach, a
personal trainer and as well as a published author. I think this
gives a different point of view because someone who is a
strength and conditioning coach is at the center of seeing kids
push themselves for sports and overuse their body.
5. Purpose: The purpose of this article is to persuade and inform
coaches that this is a serious issue. That safety and health is the
most important thing to worry about when dealing with young
competitors.
6. Rating: I would rate this article a 4. I really like what the author
has to talk about and he used information that caught my
attention the second I started reading the article. The only kicker
is that there is no date present for the article, which is not
credible.
Annotation: This article is a very serious article. In the beginning the
author states that a young athlete had passed away from using too
many supplements and medicines for a sore and injured body. This
gives the reader a sad feeling as they proceed to read the article and it
gives credible insight that when kids push themselves too hard, only
bad things will happen. The author takes a stand to say the parents are
the ones to blame, but also the author targets coaches and the
irresponsibility that they are not standing up for their players and if
they are injured. I think I can definitely use quotes from this article
because the author targets the parents and coaches for being at fault
for creating injuries for their children and players. I think this article
definitely brings different ideas instead of the other articles that just
target parents alone.
8. Are We Pushing Our Kids Too Hard?
"Are We Pushing Our Kids Too Hard?" Psychology Today. Sussex
Publishers, LLC, 3 May 2005. Web. 18 Apr. 2016.
1. Relevancy: This article does relate to my topic. This article also
supports my topic as to why kids need to not be pushed so hard by
their parents. This article talks about how there needs to be a perfect
balance of play time and school time, but the author suggests that kids
are starting to be involved in way too many activities. I think this
article brings different ideas as to why good relationships with parents
and extended family are important to release stress.
2. Accuracy: I do not detect any bias throughout this article. There are
a lot of quotations from real children being interviewed about how they
feel that gives the reader accountable information. It talks about one
specific childs lifestyle and how it wore him out from the constant
pressure and stress from constantly doing things.
3. Currency: The source is not up to date. It was last reviewed in 2005.
That is quite a difference in years from now, but I feel like this is still a
reliable source. The real life examples give the reader a different
perspective than from facts just being given about the topic.
4. Authority: There is not a specific author listed but it is an article
posted on a credited psychology website. I know not having an author
is a big warning that it might not be credible, but if it was published to
a well known website I think it would be okay to use some information
from if it was cited correctly.
5. Purpose: The purpose from this article was definitely to inform and
persuade. I think the persuasion can really be seen when the author
interviews the child and asks him questions about his personal life and
why he feels so stressed out. The article takes the time to describe why
good relationships with family is important to reduce stress and why
taking the time to explore things in depth instead of jumping from one
activity to another is important for development.
6. Rating: I would rate this article as a 4. The only reason I didnt rate it
as perfect was because there was no author that I could find. I feel like
there is a lot of useful information and I liked the interview from the
child about his own personal experiences. I think the article was well
written and organized.
Annotation: This article takes the time to discuss if our child is too
stressed or not. This source offers solutions to the problem, unlike the
other sources Ive researched. The article discusses that if kids are too
involved in sports and other activities that their parents put them in,
they start to miss the little things kids are supposed to enjoy; like
playing in the neighborhood and being a silly kid. I think this article has
a lot to offer especially since there is a child interviewed about how
they felt, because no other articles have offered that.
9. The Burnt-Out Generation: Desperate to Hold It Together, They
Push themselves to the limit at work and at home until they
explode under the strain.
Carey, Tanith. "The Burnt-Out Generation." Daily Mail. Associated
Newspapers Ltd, 13 July 2011. Web. 20 Apr. 2016.
1. Relevancy: This article is related to my topic because it explains
the hard struggles that young kids experience everyday. That
when they wake up in the morning they already dread the
deadlines that they have, and all the amount of work they have
to complete for the day. I like how the title of the article is called
the Burnt-Out Generation because most days, I even feel burnt
out being a student athlete. It talks about how being burnt out is
a loss of sign of hope and you get swallowed in all the activities
that it makes it hard to see the end.
2. Accuracy: I do not detect any bias in this article. I think this
article has many points that relate to my topic. The author uses
many sources throughout the article and sites them. I think the
author is stating opinions throughout the article and using facts
to back them up. The information is written free of errors and the
article is very organized.
3. Currency: The source is updated within 5 years. I think this helps
with the relevancy and the fact that there has been more
research done with this topic. There is no evidence that new
information has been updated. Sometimes there are dates that
say when the article has been reviewed and this one has not.
4. Authority: I think the author has the credentials to write for the
paper but I dont think they have the credentials to write about
the specific topic. I think the author did a good job, but
sometimes you can tell when journalists have been assigned a
topic. Especially if it is an article in a daily journal. The author
could have got their degree from any college and you as a reader
do not know how educated they are on the topic.