The essay has a good structure, with lots of deep knowledge .

The
periods, commas and quotation marks were used in the right order.
Also, the essay including introduction, body paragraph and the
conclusion are completed successfully, however, you used strong
examples from the poem. For example, “play Hester Prynn/ wear
scarlet letters on our chests/become adulteresses/
cheating ourselves out of what we truly deserve” (Lines 17-20).
This example that I chosen has deep meanings in the knowledge of
understanding the poem, that’s why I mentioned this example.
On the other hand, you indented each paragraph correctly. For these
reasons, I would consider that your writing skills in this essay are
interesting.