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Borrowed from Orwell

A scrupulous writer, in every sentence that he writes, will ask himself at least four
questions, thus: 1. What am I trying to say? 2. What words will express it? 3. What image
or idiom will make it clearer? 4. Is this image fresh enough to have an effect? And he will
probably ask himself two more: 1. Could I put it more shortly? 2. Have I said anything
that is avoidably ugly?

(i) Never use a metaphor, simile, or other figure of speech which you are used to seeing
in print.

(ii) Never us a long word where a short one will do.

(iii) If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out.

(iv) Never use the passive where you can use the active.

(v) Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word, or a jargon word if you can think of an
everyday English equivalent.

(vi) Break any of these rules sooner than say anything outright barbarous.

When you think of a concrete object, you think wordlessly, and then, if you want to
describe the thing you have been visualizing you probably hunt about until you find the
exact words that seem to fit it. When you think of something abstract you are more
inclined to use words from the start, and unless you make a conscious effort to prevent it,
the existing dialect will come rushing in and do the job for you, at the expense of blurring
or even changing your meaning.

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