Free IELTS WRITING assessment and Suggestions --->>In most countries disabled people are not catered for

adequately, e.g. buil dings are often inappropriately designed. Governments rely too heavily on charit ies and voluntary organisations to provide assistance and funding. What further measures could be taken to assist disabled people? Discuss. --->> It is unbeliveable but true that in many countries disabled people are not catered for adequately. In other words, disabled people are not been provided w ith the proper facilities and they have to depend on other's to get their routin e work done. Though a disabled person can discuss the matter more efficiently, I too have strong opinion about the issue which will be abundently clear in the l ater paragraphs of this essay. As per my point of view, I feel that though there are lot of facilities granted to physically disabled people by government: for example, reservation in governm ent sector jobs and reduction in travelling fares etc. But just providing such k ind of facilities will not serve the whole purpose to cater disable people. Stil l, there is lot more which is required to be done. Such as, special arrangaments should be made with no extra charges at airports, railway stations etc; to make the journey of handicapped persons hassle free. Also, official and residentials bulidings should be designed by keeping the disabled people in mind. Furthemore, it is also necessary to know the real difficulties faced by physical ly challanged people by directly interacting with them. My intention to say this is that only a disabled person is able to express problems suffered by him or h er in a better way. And then this information collected, should be implemented t o our system. After doing great deal of thought and delibrations come to a conclusion that disabled persons do not uty of each indiviual to give them morale support. make the attitude of "Never Say Die" , which will ealthier. ----------***********-------------TOTAL 300 WORDS Riten essay It is [u]unbelievable[/u] [b]{use word implausible instead because you have to sho w your lexical range}[/b] but true that in many countries disabled people are no t [u]catered for adequately [/u][b]{are not cared for/looked after becomingly: t ry to not you use words from the query statement in opening Para}. [/b]In other words, disabled people are not been [b]{no need of been here}[/b] provided with the proper facilities and they have to depend on other's to get their routine wo rk done. Though a disabled person can discuss the matter more efficiently, I too have strong opinion about the issue which will be [b]{made}[/b] [u]abundantly[/ u] [b](considerably: always keep a margin) [/b]clear in the later paragraphs of this essay. As per my point of view, I feel that though there are lot[b]{lots} [/b]of facili ties granted to physically disabled people by government: for example, reservati on in government sector jobs and reduction in travelling fares etc.[b]{,}[/b] Bu t [b]{yet: after though we use a comma and yet}[/b]just providing such kind of fac ilities will not serve the whole purpose to cater disable people. Still, there i s lot more which is required to be done.[b]{:}[/b]Such as, special arrangaments with myself about the topic I need our sympathy and it is d Also disabled persons have to inturn make our planet more h

should be made with no extra charges at airports, railway stations etc; to make the journey of handicapped persons hassle free. Also, official and residential[b ]{s} [/b]bulidings should be designed by keeping the disabled people in mind. Furthermore, [u]it is also necessary to[/u][b]{better say: it is imperative too to say}[/b] know the real difficulties faced by physically challenged[b]{spell e rror}[/b] people by directly interacting with them. My intention to say this is that only a disabled person is able to express problems suffered by him or her i n a better way. And then this information collected[b],{no need of comma here}[/ b] should be implemented to our system. After doing great deal of thought and deliberations[b]{be careful about spell er rors}[/b] with myself about the topic[b]{,}{after mulling over/pondering over a great deal}[/b] I come to a conclusion that disabled persons do not need our sym pathy[b]{,}[/b] and it is duty of each individual to give them morale support. A lso[b]{,}[/b] disabled persons have to make the attitude of "Never Say Die" , wh ich will inturn[b]{in turn}[/b] make our planet more healthier. [b]BAND: 7.0[/b] well done, Riten keep me in your prayers, [b]Checked by, [email]teacher_ielts@yahoo.com[/email][/b] Smoking tobacco like other dangerous drugs should be made illegal. Agree or disa gree? -->>Smoking is emerging as a great threat to our society.It is implausible but t rue that in many countries smoking is not banned. I have no doubt in my mind tha t smoking should be banned with immediate effect. A few reasons to support my st ance are, First of all, almost every body knows the fact that "smoking is injurious to hea lth" it can cause several deadly diseases: for example, various types of cancers , cardiac arrest etc. It is a general perception that every cigarette smoked can cut short life by five minutes. Passive smoking is another good reason to make smoking illegal. Findings from re cent studies reveals that passive smokers are at more risk as compared to active smokers, because their body is not willing to accept the smoke particles. Moreo ver, childern are the one who get affect most. To make my idea more clear let me illustrate, suppose in a family where mother and father both are active smokers and they smoke ten cigarettee each per day at home. In this case, the childern is automatically smoking five cigarette per day as a passive smoker. Which in tu rn posses a great risk to our forth coming generations. After pondering over a great deal of thought and delibrations with myself I come to a conclusion that smoking should be banned and made illegal. i know that man y people especially smokers might argue my opinion expressed, but in truth this is what we need to make our planet more healthier. --------*******---------TOTAL 300 WORDS

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***Report describing the likelihood of getting into a road accident when falling asleep at the wheel*** (from a training book "Passport to IELTS) _____________________________________________________________ Many road accidents are caused by drivers falling asleep at the wheel. These acc idents are influenced by many factors by many factors related mostly to place an d time of accident and age of a driver. Just over 60 per cent of sleep related accidents happen on a country road, 33 pe r cent of this kind of accidents happen on a Motorway and approximately 6% on a town roads. There is a less possibility that an accident of this type takes place between 10 :00 and 12:00, and 20:00 and 22:00 : only 25 and 19 out of thousand accidents re spectively. There is a serious likelhood that an accident happens at night betwe en 22:00 and 00:00 (385 cases), 4:00 and 6:00 (in 280 cases),and 00:00 and 00:02 (in 138 cases) Sleep-related accidents are also likely to happen during the aft ernoon hours between 14:00 and 16:00 ( 15.3 per cents of total number). If the age of the driver is below 45 than these accidents are less likely to hap pen ( 390 out of 1000). As the age increases, the number of sleep-related accide nts increases as well ( 61 per cent of all accidents).

Fragile's Essay Many road accidents are caused by drivers falling asleep at the wheel. These acc idents are [u]influenced[/u[b]]{use: triggered/occasioned by}[/b] by many factor s related mostly to[b]{the}[/b] place and time of accident and [b]{the}[/b] age of a driver. Just over 60 per cent of sleep[b]{-}[/b]related accidents happen on a country ro ad, [b]{;}[/b]33 per cent of this kind of accidents happen[b](s)[/b] [b]{try to avoid repetition of words in same Para: use falls out }[/b]on a Motorway[b]{,}[/b] and approximately 6% on a town roads. There is a less possibility that an accident of this type takes place between 10 :00 and 12:00, and 20:00 and 22:00 : only 25 and 19 out of [b]{a}[/b]thousand ac cidents respectively. There is a serious likelhood that an accident happens at n ight between 22:00 and 00:00 (385 cases), 4:00 and 6:00 (in 280 cases), and 00:0 0 and 00:02 (in 138 cases) Sleep-related accidents are also likely to happen dur ing the afternoon hours between 14:00 and 16:00 (15.3 per cents of total number) . If the age of the driver is below 45 than[b]{do not use than here, instead use a comma here}[/b] these accidents are less likely to happen ( 390 out of 1000). A s the age increases, the number of sleep-related accidents increases as well ( 6 1 per cent of all accidents). Band: 7.0 Checked & Marked by, [email]Teacher_ielts@yahoo.com[/email] How about this??? ***

Nowadays more and more people don't wear national,and tey are forgetting their c ulture and history. Some think that people should wear traditional cloth everyda y. agree or not? **** Although it is not often argued that being a member of certain ethnic group or n ation implies wearing traditional clothes, there is still an opinion that sugges ts it. Thus, it would be interesting to puzzle out some pros and cons of this no tion. On one hand, wearing a traditional clothes could be seen as a total commitment t o your nation. I think, it should be regarded as commendable as well. For exampl e, some distant and isolated tribes in Tibet have a national casual clothes that they wear every day. Moreover, this unique style grants them an additional adva ntage: they can easily recognise a member of their tribe or a representative of a rival tribe. On the other hand, the style of cloathing can be an alternative source of income . Especially for those, who can barely afford their living in the present econom ical conditions. This is also anything but plausible reason for tolerating the p ast. However, there are always some negative aspects to evrything and this is not an exclusion. It is obvious that modern casual wearing is way more comfortable that the one our ancestors had worn. Therfore people forced to wear traditional clot hes daily suffer from constant discomfort. Another certain drawbacks is that the necessity to wear traditional clothes cont radicts with global tendence to expand common boundaries. In conclusion i hold the view that the decision to wear clothes of any kind shou ld be made by each individual himself. And interfernce would only result in furt her disagreement

Although it is not often argued that being a member of certain ethnic group or n ation implies wearing traditional clothes, there is still an opinion that sugges ts it. Thus, it would be interesting to puzzle out some pros and cons of this no tion. On one hand, wearing [b]{no a } [/b]traditional clothes could be seen as a total co mmitment to your nation. I think, [b]{use that instead of comma}[/b]it should be r egarded as{no use of as } commendable as well.[b]{;}[/b] For example, [b]{:}[/b]som e distant and isolated tribes in Tibet have a national casual clothes[b]{particu lar national dress/apparels} [/b]that they wear every day. Moreover, this unique style grants them an additional advantage: they can easily recognise a member o f their tribe or a representative of a rival tribe.[b] {;}[/b] On the other hand, the style of clothing can be an alternative source of income. Especially for those, who can barely afford their living in the present economi cal conditions. This is also anything but plausible reason for tolerating the pa st. However, there are always some negative aspects to everything[b]{,}[/b] and this is not an exclusion. It is obvious that modern casual wearing is way more comfo rtable that the one our ancestors had worn. Therefore[b]{,} [/b]people forced to wear traditional clothes daily suffer from constant discomfort. [b]Another certain drawback{s} is[/b] that the necessity to wear traditional clo

thes contradicts with global tendence[b]{tendency}[/b] to expand common boundari es. In conclusion[b]{,}[/b] I hold the view that the decision to wear clothes of any kind {should rest with the individual}should be made by each individual himself [b].{,} [/b]And interference would only result in further disagreement. [email]teacher_ielts@yahoo.com[/email]