Genre-based writing instruction (GBWI) was implemented in an ESP course in Taiwan. The effectiveness of genre-based approaches to teaching ESP writing has been evidenced in Taiwan. This investigation looked into how the learners perceived GBWI.
Genre-based writing instruction (GBWI) was implemented in an ESP course in Taiwan. The effectiveness of genre-based approaches to teaching ESP writing has been evidenced in Taiwan. This investigation looked into how the learners perceived GBWI.
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Genre-based writing instruction (GBWI) was implemented in an ESP course in Taiwan. The effectiveness of genre-based approaches to teaching ESP writing has been evidenced in Taiwan. This investigation looked into how the learners perceived GBWI.
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though the effectiveness of this attention has not been made finally clear yet. However, it is apparent that ESP courses are becoming a trend in polytechnic universities, owing to the educational authorities promotions and incentives. Furthermore, a genre approach is highly compatible with the writing needs of different professions, as they are specific, relevant and targeted (Hyland, 2007); it is a suitable approach for connecting language with appropriate contexts. In addition, the effectiveness of genre-based approaches to teaching ESP writing has been evidenced in Taiwan (Lee & Chen, 2009) as well in other Asian settings. Based on these findings, there is a strong reason for positing that a genre-based approach could also be an appropriate direction for teaching ESP writing courses in Taiwan. It is in light of considerations such as these that genre-based writing instruction (GBWI) was implemented in an ESP course, and looked into how the learners perceived GBWI. It is hoped that this investigation can shed light on researching and teaching ESP courses in Asian EFL settings.
Literature Review The effectiveness and challenges of genre-based writing instruction (GBWI) Genre, according to Hyland (2004), nowadays has a broad inclusion beyond its traditional literary texts. Instead, it can refer to professional, academic and even everyday forms of speech acts and writing texts, and a study of it stresses the connection between form and context, and the importance of description and analysis. Thus, analysing genre explores specific uses of language and focuses on describing how people use language to engage in specific recurring situations within discourse communities (Swales, 1990). It offers language educators useful ways of treating conventionalised aspects of texts as well as opportunities to design activities to raise learners genre awareness, which can potentially make them better writers (Hyland, 2004; Paltridge, 2001). Indeed, genre analysis or corpus-based research on teaching English, especially the form-focused approach, has been studied a great deal in both English for academic purposes (e.g. Carstens, 2008; Cheng, 2006; Hyland, 2010; Hyon, 2008; Johns, 2008; Samraj & Monk, 2008) and English for occupational purposes (e.g. Hafner, 2010; Karlsson, 2009; Matt, 2007; Osman, 2008). Furthermore, much of the research upholds the effectiveness of this approach (Lee & Chen, 2009). Genre-based approaches (GBA) can provide learners with real world models for writing, which can better stimulate their interest and thus enhance their confidence in coping with specific writing tasks (Osman, 2008). Furthermore, as Hyland argues (2004, p.18), GBA offers ESP learners explicit and systematic explanations of the ways language functions in social context. With GBA, students learn not only the relevant language forms of a genre but also the context in which language is used, which helps learners acquire the specialist culture as well (Bhatia, 1997). Besides, it can provide ESP practitioners with insights into how a particular language is used by its members in a discourse community. As Paltridge (2001) argues, teaching genres can provide learners with the knowledge Asian EFL Journal. Volume 13, Issue 4
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and skills they need to communicate successfully. Besides, it also provides them with access to socially powerful forms of language. Therefore, GBA can potentially accommodate both ESP practitioners and learners needs. Nevertheless, the use of GBA poses a number of challenges that must be faced. The major critique is that it is often seen as offering teachers and learners a formulaic, mechanical, rigid, conformable, restrictive, and prescriptive how-to-do list (e.g. Kay & Dudley-Evans, 1998; Raimes, 1991). This poses the danger that both parties may fail to recognise variations, choices and constraints within a specific genre; thus, teachers should be aware of what the claims of the effectiveness of GBA actually entail (Belcher, 2004). Dudley-Evans (2002, p. 235) cautions teachers to not overly rely on a set of moves of a given genre because this approach will not confront many of the day-to-day problems students encounter when writing the actual genres. Furthermore, this could hinder both teachers and learners critical thinking skills, and thus prevent them from generating innovative solutions to responding to changing contexts. Hence, instead of teaching fixed structural patterns or forms, it would be more useful to try to impart tendencies and trends. In addition, for EFL teachers who are taking on the roles of ESP practitioners, adopting GBA may make them face a number of additional dilemmas. For instance, instructors are expected to be organisers, coaches, cultural resources, and providers of feedback and discipline knowledge, which would make them confused and anxious, as these additional roles are different from what they were traditionally expected to be (Wennerstrom, 2003; Yang, 2009). Language teachers have to be content- and culture-knowers regarding other academic disciplines or occupations. How teachers can be become qualified as ESP practitioners becomes a crucial issue. It is hoped that the motivation for making this transition will increase as more and more studies reporting on the effectiveness of GBA toward writing come to light (Osman, 2008).
The evaluation of GBWI To gauge the effectiveness of GBWI, many investigations placed the students into two groups i.e. the experimental group instructed with GBWI and the control group taught with traditional approaches. Most of these studies confirmed that the experimental group achieved the following: first of all, participants writing significantly improved. In addition, they also showed an increase in the use of the communicative moves in their writing. Besides, they actively participated in the class activities, and also obtained explicit knowledge about English and the genres taught. These achievements helped them form positive attitudes towards GBWI accordingly (see examples as Cheng, 2008; Emilia, 2005; Krisnachinda, 2006). Besides, some researchers have proposed the integration of GBA with other approaches in order to maximise its effectiveness. For example, Lin (2006) initiated a Vygotskian GBA model (see Asian EFL Journal. Volume 13, Issue 4
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Vygotsky, 1978), which emphasised the co-construction of knowledge and skills of genre context by teachers and students. His approach led students to show an increasing confidence in, and command of, their writing ability. Also, Kim and Kim (2005), Gao (2007), and Tang, Zhang and Dong (2009) have suggested conducting an eclectic GBA integrated with other approaches such as cooperative, process, product or process-genre approaches, aiming to mitigate the concern that GBA may overemphasise product and accuracy. They have argued for the importance of scaffolding language and learning, allowing language use to serve as creative self-expression, and providing meaningful responses, diverse types of feedback and formative assessment. Such integration has the potential to highlight the significance of writing as a process leading to a product, and also contextualises the writing to help the audience better understand the purpose of the writing (Hung, 2008).
Gaps in the literature Most of the above investigations have tended to emphasize what learners learn at the expense of how they learn to write, but ignored the importance of more learner-focused research. Thus, this project attempts to address this gap by attending to both the writing output and the students perceptions of their writing development. The second gap is the current lack of research on the effectiveness of GBA and ESP writing in the context of Taiwanese universities. These university students have been shown to have lower proficiency and motivation for writing English. In order to address this concern, this study argues that adopting genre-based approaches to teaching ESP writing courses may be more valuable for university students. It is hoped that the results of this study can offer new directions for future research and lead to the adoption of GBA in similar settings.
Methodology Participants and procedures The study was carried out at a national university in Taiwan. Twenty-four fourth-year English majors were enrolled in the compulsory course English Writing for Hospitality and Tourism, and all agreed to participate in this research. This university is a well-known institute island-wide owing to its sandwich curriculum design, wherein the students are required to have an internship placement during their third year, off campus in relevant domestic or international hospitality and tourism industries. Then, the students return to the university in their fourth year to resume their studies. Nineteen of the participants completed their internship placements in foreign countries, including England, Singapore, Canada, and Macau, while the rest stayed in Taiwan for their placements. The 2-hour per week course lasted for 18 weeks from September 2010 to January 2011. The course was divided into three phases, each of which had one required assignment i.e. hotel, tourist attraction, and holiday brochures. Each of the three cycles followed identical procedural instructions. Asian EFL Journal. Volume 13, Issue 4
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First, students read authentic brochures, identified the sub-genres along with their features, analysed the obligatory and optional moves, and then submitted their first drafts. Next, the instructor analysed the lexis used in the authentic texts and the students writing, and the students were subsequently required to modify the inappropriate or wrong lexis, moves, and grammar, and then resubmitted a revised version. Then, this second version underwent the same set of procedures to be revised for a second time. The subsequent third version was used as the final product. In other words, each students self-designed brochure should be revised and resubmitted two times (termed as V1, V2, and V3 in this study). Therefore, there were 72 texts in total for each type of brochure (see a sample in Appendix A). After the end of a cycle, the instructor graded the writings based on the criteria of content, word use, moves arrangement, and grammatical usages. Furthermore, non-Chinese readers were asked to evaluate the texts as well. They were provided with three versions of one brochure type and were asked to decide on the best version in terms of the authenticity of the text as well as the degree to which the brochure succeeded in stimulating their interest in visiting/purchasing the product. At the end of the course, the 24 students were placed into four groups, with an average of six members per group, according to their academic performance in the university, in order to be interviewed by the researcher in Chinese. The rationale for this grouping was to investigate whether the students academic achievement was correlated with their performance and attitudes towards genre-based writing instructions. Each group interview was conducted for half an hour during the 18 th week of the course.
Research instruments and data analysis On the basis of the above procedures, two different kinds of data were collected for analysis. The first type is quantitative data, coming from the lexis used in the authentic texts and the students texts. After the texts were gathered, all the words in the authentic and students texts were analysed using the computer tool Wordsmith v.5.0 (WS) (Scott, 2008). Then, the second step was to wordlist. The two major categories of the texts were imported to generate two separate wordlists. Next, keywording was undertaken, following similar procedures as wordlisting. The major difference lies in the fact that there must be two word-lists in order to generate a keyword list: one is the study/main corpus from which keywords are identified, and the other is a wordlist serving as the reference/comparison corpus. The reason it requires two different corpora is that keywording operates via examining the items of unusual frequency (Scott & Tribble, 2006), and this helps researchers locate the specific words in one genre in comparison with a reference corpus. To generate the keywords in each type of brochure, the British National Corpus (BNC) was used as the reference corpus and the wordlist of the authentic texts was used as the study corpus. Similarly, Asian EFL Journal. Volume 13, Issue 4
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to generate the students overused and underused keywords, the main corpus is the wordlist of their texts and the comparison corpus is the wordlist of the authentic texts. In other words, the authentic texts serve as the study corpus in this first keywording and the comparison corpus in the second operation. These two different keyword lists have different implications. On one hand, the keywords generated from the authentic texts are essential for characterizing the distinctive lexis of a particular register/genre. On the other hand, the overused keywords generated from the students texts, i.e. those words appearing at a markedly higher frequency, should be reduced in students usage; the underused keywords, conversely, need to have more attention in order to encourage a greater use of them. The second type of data is qualitative data, taken from the readers evaluations and the interviews with the students. The evaluators choices were calculated and tabulated by EXCEL, and their written comments were encoded under various headings. The voice-recorded interviews were translated into English and the transcription was looked over by a Taiwanese EFL instructor to check the veracity of the Chinese-English translation, and, in addition, was proofread by another native EFL instructor to check the accuracy of the English translated text. Next, the translated texts were processed by using the software Weft QDA (Fenton, 2006). Similarly, the coding was also checked by the two aforementioned colleagues. The study applied ground theory, which is extensively used to treat the qualitative data in coding data with similar concepts into various categories (Glaser & Strauss, 1967).
Results and Discussion Results from the quantitative keywords analysis First, the statistics of the three phases of key word use, which have also been reported in other studies (Yang, 2011 a.b.c.), are provided in Tables 1 and 2 for cross-reference.
Table1: The different/distinct words (DW) and keywords (KW) in authentic texts (AT) and student texts (ST) Hotels Tourist attractions Holidays Authentic texts Average tokens 544 651 719,926 Distinct words 4,316 6,414 20,832 Keywords 1 602 728 8,049 DW per 100 tokens 14.97 12.62 0.60 KW per 100 tokens 2.08 1.43 0.23 Asian EFL Journal. Volume 13, Issue 4
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Student texts Average tokens 590 550 877 Average DW 2,140 2,756 3,578 1 With reference to BNC
Table 2: The keywords (KW) in the three versions of each phase in student texts (ST) Version 1 Version 2 Version 3 Hotels Keywords 1 202/ 20 266/16 270/ 16 DW per 100 tokens 18.41 17.85 17.32 KW per 100 tokens 2.08/ 0.19 1.43/ 0.12 0.23/ 0.11 Tourist attractions Keywords 1 260/ 58 284/ 70 293/ 69 DW per 100 tokens 21.82 20.68 20.35 KW per 100 tokens 2.08/ 0.46 2.12/ 0.52 2.13/ 0.50 Holidays Keywords 1 259/ 262 463/ 437 477/ 449 DW per 100 tokens 23.29 15.74 15.42 KW per 100 tokens 2.25/ 2.27 1.80/ 1.70 1.82/ 1.72 1 With reference to BNC and authentic texts (AT) respectively
From the above statistics, we can ascertain that the students tended to use less tokens in their texts compared to the authentic ones except for the hotel brochure, where the students wrote more words than those in the authentic texts by 46 tokens. During the interviews it was found out that they had initially assumed that the more words they used, the higher their grades for the texts would be; therefore, they lengthened the writing purposefully. Secondly, the students texts on average used more distinct words than the authentic writings, which indicates that the students tried to demonstrate their ability to use a wide variety of words. However, the vocabulary they used tended not to be the key words used in authentic texts. Comparing the students usages to those of the reference corpus keyword list, the students were requested to reduce their use of the overused words in their texts and to increase those of the underused words during the process of composing their three versions. Nevertheless, except for the hotel brochure worked on students, overused key words did not drop significantly across the three Asian EFL Journal. Volume 13, Issue 4
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versions, not even with the teachers explicit instruction in the use of authentic words. In fact, the numbers of the overused key words in every 100 tokens of the students writings are almost identical. The above results imply that the students ability to use lexis optimally is still limited. They do not have a clear idea of what the appropriate words should be in order to better meet readers expectations. Possible reasons for this are that they have not learnt these key words yet, or that they favour those words they are used to and confident in using. This research is not designed for the purpose of claiming that the students overused words should all be eliminated merely; indeed, such a goal would be met with a great deal of resistance, since English is commonly regarded as a lingua franca (or an international language), and EFL learners will inevitably compose their writing under the influences of their respective cultures and backgrounds. However, this study argues that it would behove ESP learners to acquire and use the key words of the genres they are working with if they hope to engage in effective communication in a professional community, for these word choices and constraints are among the salient features of a genre text that makes the communication authentic and effective. Based on the above findings, GBWI seemingly did not adequately help students in reaching the instructional aims of this course. However, it is essential to bear in mind that the students were only given six weeks to complete the three versions of one brochure, which may have been an insufficient amount of time for students to make adequate revisions. Furthermore, this was the first time that these students were taught using a GBA mode; the unfamiliarity with the teaching method might have influenced their performance as well. Hence, focusing exclusively on the quantitative results cannot adequately portray the complexities involved in conducting this course. The following qualitative data offer a totally different perspective on how the effectiveness of this course should be evaluated.
Results from the evaluators feedback Table 3 shows that nearly all of the 3 rd version of each brochure were regarded as better than the other two by the evaluators. The written comments can be divided into two evaluative categories: encouraging recognitions and pending problems. Generally speaking, the evaluators gave more positive comments than negative ones, and their comments mainly address two features of the texts: namely, content and layout. Table 4 exemplifies these comments.
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Table 3: The percentages of the non-Chinese speakers choices of the better brochure Version 1 Version 2 Version 3 Readers (%) AUN 1 MOT AUN MOT AUN MOT EL1 EL2 Hotel 4.16 4.16 4.16 4.16 91.66 91.66 66.66 33.33 Attraction 0 0 8.32 8.32 91.66 91.66 66.66 33.33 Holiday 0 0 4 4 96 96 87.5 12.5 1 AUN: authenticity of text, MOT: motivation to visit, EL1: English as the 1 st language, EL2: English as the second/foreign language.
Table 4: An excerpt of the readers written comments on the students texts Encouraging Recognitions Pending Problems - It is easier to read, colourful and more attractive. - Its interesting and easy to read. - It looks good and very Chinese style. - It looked appealing. - Interesting design, informative and appealing. - Content is easy to read and interesting activities. - The pictures are presented well. It is very eye-catching leaflet. - Informative and educational, nice touch of promotional content. - It sounds interesting, looks good and lovely pictures make it appealing.
- The more pictures will attract more. - A bit distracting to read with many colours. - I think you wrote too much about history. - You need some more annual events or accommodation information. - You can add more selling points. - You should focus on itinerary. - You should provide more activities and other information. - You should explain more about the configuration. - You can add more routes and ways about how to arrive, not just information.
The choices made by the evaluators confirmed that the 3 rd version of each brochure was thought of as the most authentic version of each text, as well as the one held to be most likely to motivate readers. Nevertheless, the study is unable to claim that the above achievements are the result of using GBWI. After all, it is highly likely that revised products will tend to be of better quality than earlier drafts, due to the instructors feedback on word choices and grammar usages and the students subsequent alterations. Indeed, the results given here cannot apparently prove that the relationship Asian EFL Journal. Volume 13, Issue 4
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between conducting GBWI and the learners writing performance is positively correlative or causal. Thus, having access to learners perceptions of their learning, and whether they felt that they have made improvements, can provide a much-needed additional point of triangulation and allow for the conveyance of a more nuanced learning narrative.
Results from the interviews The participants perceptions of the features of GBWI When asked how they perceived GBWI, the students responded that GBWI is a theme-focused, practical, analytical, profession-oriented, deeper, varied, procedural, creative, topic-based, applied, lively, and useful teaching method rather than a traditional, formulaic, fixed and academy-oriented instruction. For instance, one of the respondents (A1) said, GBWI requires us to do a lot of analysis on moves and lexis, which makes us think deeper. Besides, it is relevant to your future needs. Indeed, this statement matches quite closely claims made in the literature: for example, it includes a great number of the positive features of other teaching syllabi such as process-based, topic-based or function-based syllabus (Ur, 1996). Conversely, criticisms of GBA do not appear in the comments given by the respondents; instead, these sorts of critiques were largely confined to their perception of their previous experiences of other approaches to writing instruction. For instance, a female student (A5) said, The previous instruction is more academic. The teacher would give us a topic and a model, and then we simply followed the examples provided in the textbook to imitate it.
Based on their replies, it would appear that the students prefer GBWI to their previous writing instruction.
The gains from GBWI When asked what they obtained from GBWI, the respondents replied that it brought them a number of extra benefits in addition to improving their writing. Their responses can be grouped into three categories: cognitive reinforcements, affective reflections, and psychomotor transformation. In the first category, the interviewees explained that GBWI helped them to evaluate writing with a more creative approach, comprehend what a genre is, apply what they have written to what they may need to write in the future, develop the body of a text in an organised way, differentiate word usages, and clarify the job duties in industries. The category affective reflections refers to the ways in which students felt that GBWI enhanced their positive emotional reception of the approach. Summaries of this category are of the Asian EFL Journal. Volume 13, Issue 4
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sort: GBWI has made them feel more confident and helps them to gain a sense of achievement accordingly, feel self-pride in terms of what they have written and can write in class, contemplate readers positions and expectations, and finally own a sense of participation and involvement in class during analysing, sharing, discussing or conferencing. The last category refers to the changes in the learners behaviours or habits due to their experience with the use of GBWI. For instance, an interviewee (B2) stated, GBWI makes me actively respond to English H&T brochures in my daily life. Hereafter, I am more willingly to pick up one and read it through.
Another student (C4) also commented that, GBWI makes me to think deeply whenever I am writing, especially from the angles of the target cultures, and hence would do more research about them.
In a word, the students believed that GBWI can increase confidence and positively affect their thoughts, feelings and behaviours insofar as it is a guided, analytical, sequenced, relevant, and motivating method for teaching writing.
An extra gain in understanding professionals Most of the interviewees responded that they had a clearer idea of what hospitality and tourism (H&T) industries are like after taking the course, though some of them admitted to still being uncertain about it. The obvious changes lie in role awareness and cognition changes. In terms of the cognition changes, they explained that after the course, they realised the main purpose of an H&T text is to inform & promote, mind the gaps in contextual differences in terms of interest selection, event arrangement, activity design, cultural highlights, bonus adding, educational values, or family concerns, and attend to the importance of publishing prices and the necessity of designing an itinerary. With regard to the role change, several interviewees talked about the role awareness of the relationship between buyer and seller, and between writer and audience (e.g. A2, A5, B4 or D3), which indicates they realise that they should not write based on what they perceive is right in a situation devoid of a clearly-specified context, but rather that they should better attend to the sellers, the buyers and the audiences needs respectively. It is likely that the students internship placement in H&T industries during their 3 rd -year, coupled with the genre-analysing tasks in the course as recommended by Paltridge (2001), have facilitated this role awareness. This transformation makes it more likely that the students will accommodate different stakeholders interests throughout their Asian EFL Journal. Volume 13, Issue 4
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writing and develop the capability to reflect on their writing procedures, while also being helped to attain competency in writing a specific text genre.
The aspects improved in their writing Nearly all of the interviewees agreed that their writing ability had progressed to some extent. When further asked in which aspects of their writing these improvements could be more explicitly shown, their responses can be categorised into three groups, namely form, content and writing techniques. For instance, several students explained that they would try to make use of a greater number of synonymous word choices to fit the context rather than using the same word throughout the entire text. However, some students also expressed the opinion that they became overly cautious about what they would write. This gave them an aversion to taking risks. As two of the respondents (A1 and A5) both remarked: One deficit of GBWI is that I become excessively careful about the words I will choose and this somewhat hinders me from writing what is my mind.
Each genre has its features which help to distinguish it from other genres, and usually these textual features are form- and content-related. Thus, ESP teachers should instruct students about these components explicitly in a GBWI course; nevertheless, they should also address the issue of allowing oneself to make choices and even encourage creativity rather than overemphasising constraints and conventions.
Writers learning attitudes in a GBWI course The answers to this question varied across the groups. Generally, the higher level achievers the students were, the more autonomous learning attitudes they had. For example, a female student (A6) said, After several cycles of teachers instructions, I have already internalised the procedure of GBWI and known how to design an H&T brochure to complete the assignment spontaneously.
However, student D3 said that she participated in the class passively. Though a number of respondents in groups C and D expressed the opinion that their learning attitudes were passive at the beginning, they went on to note that their attitudes became more and more autonomous after they saw their peers productions, which spurred them on to want to do better. These divided responses Asian EFL Journal. Volume 13, Issue 4
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indicate the possibility that GBWI is apparently more suitable for or preferred by higher-achieving students.
Writers satisfaction with their performance in the course Only 3 out of 24 expressed dissatisfaction. Those who showed satisfaction mainly argued that they obtained a sense of achievement after completing their texts, while those who were not satisfied with their performance attributed the causes to their unfamiliarity with the genre text and poor English proficiency. The following is representative of the positive comments: I feel more and more confident about my writing and cannot wait to share my ideas with others. (C1)
Yet, some more cautionary remarks run more along these lines: I am not very satisfied with my performance because my English words and grammar are not professional enough to meet what H&T industries require. I believe I still need more practices when I enter the job market. (D4)
The pressure of insufficient time made some participants, especially the lower-achievers, anxious about their work progress and final production, and this might have led these students to form an unfavourable impression of GBWI. Secondly, for the lower-achievers, they tend to be less confident about themselves and would inevitably question their own production, even it is satisfactory enough. It is argued that arranging an orientation to GBA prior to its implementation, and allowing ample time for composing texts, would be beneficial for helping to ease writers anxiety, and to build up confidence, especially if GBWI is unfamiliar to students.
The difficulties students confronted in the course The opinions were coded into four areas: limited linguistic knowledge, affective uncertainty and anxiety, insufficient content knowledge, and inadequate technology skills. Indeed, an ESP course always involves two components: language skills and subject content. A common difficulty for ESP learners is their level of English proficiency, which is often not high enough to produce a well-written compositionat least not without a great deal of support and scaffolding. The second major difficulty is the insufficiency of content knowledge. For the participants in this study, lack of content knowledge is a potential source of difficulty insofar as they may not have had a sufficiently thorough grounding in professional knowledge. As one of the interviewees (B3) explained: Asian EFL Journal. Volume 13, Issue 4
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We did not have the experiences of this profession previously, and it is hard for us to write something very professional about this industry such as the T&C (Terms & Conditions) section.
Therefore, conducting a GBWI course may also require the instructor to address the disciplinary content rather than overly focusing on the linguistic level. Building up ESP learners content knowledge can help them to lessen their worries, and thus increase their confidence in their writing as well. In any case, it is important to see these challenges in the context of the fact that a majority of the participants confirmed the effectiveness of GBWI and held positive attitudes towards it.
Implications and conclusion Based on the above results and discussions, the study proposes the following three implications. First of all, the evaluation of effectiveness should be conducted in a more multi-dimensional way. That is, relying solely on either quantitative or qualitative methods may not provide a complete picture, and so triangulation is desirable. In this study, the quantitative data cast doubt on the effectiveness of GBA, as the tendency of students to use personally preferred lexis at the expense of those deemed more appropriate, according to corpus data, which did not significantly lessen even after the instructors explicit intervention. On the other hand, the effectiveness of GBA is supported on the basis of the qualitative data, which demonstrate totally opposite results. The students positive attitudes, together with the evaluators affirmative comments, point to the usefulness and effectiveness of GBWI. Hence, it is argued that to properly evaluate a genre-based course, the assessment tools should come from various sources in order to draw more reliable conclusions. Secondly, the concern regarding whether writers can be autonomous learners under GBWI apparently is still unanswered. In the study, the participants perceptions are fairly evenly-divided. Furthermore, a number of controversies may arise if GBWI is only suitable for high-achieving students, or if GBWI is especially well-suited to settings where learning from or replying on model exemplars is highly emphasised, such as in the Confucian-heritage societies of Taiwan, Hong Kong or China. Indeed, these issues need to be further researched; in any case, it seems highly likely that the implementation of GBA will require allowances and alterations to be made in order to fit different cultural contexts and pedagogical needs. In addition, the students responses also reflect the fact that learners are very complex, and so more research on how they develop as writers and learners under GBA is imperative. Like Cheng (2006) asserts, future studies on the effectiveness of GBA should be more learner-centred, context-sensitive and genre-oriented, instead of merely reporting on instructional tasks. Asian EFL Journal. Volume 13, Issue 4
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Finally, this study argues that in fact GBA can be applied not only to advanced English learners, but also to intermediate students or beginners. The participants in the study showed very satisfactory performance by the end of the course, even though their English proficiency is traditionally considered to be lower than that of traditional university students. In fact, GBA is posited to be suitable for both polytechnic and traditional university students, precisely because their majors are largely professional- or occupation-oriented. If ESP courses are supposed to help students meet their educational goals and to show them the relevance of their instruction to their future needs, GBA can serve as a motivational tool for English learning in the ESP classroom. Of course, the shifts in English education from EGP to ESP require the participation and approval of all stakeholders, and it is particularly imperative that EFL teachers be aware of the changes they will need to make to their instruction. Indeed, how to convert the traditional role of an EFL teacher to that of an ESP practitioner requires a great deal of understanding and determination, and this is surely one of the toughest hurdles to be faced during the planning and executing of genre-based ESP courses (Wennerstrom, 2003; Yang, 2009). In conclusion, this study examines the effectiveness of a genre-based ESP writing course by adopting word analysis to generate quantitative data, and follow-up interviews to probe the participants perceptions and attitudes towards GBWI. The results of the quantitative data show that the participants did not considerably decrease their overuse of personally-preferred key words, but they did increase their use of the key words as used in authentic texts. As for the findings based on the interviews, a majority of students confirmed that they became better writers after the course, though some of them were still uncertain of its effectiveness regarding the effects on their learning progress. Overall, the students in the project not only learned linguistic and contextual knowledge of the genre taught, but also were able to reflect on their learning in a critical way. Hence, this study proposes that the implementation of GBA in college English writing courses be not only feasible but also desirable in Taiwanese universities or in other Chinese and Asian contexts. For EFL learners who are at risk of being demoralized and unmotivated by more traditional EGP approaches, GBA has the potential to provide these learners with an approach which attempts to combine course content with future professional needs.
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Appendix A: The third version of a students tourist attraction brochure
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Foreword by Robert Baird 5-8
1. . 9-38 - Revisiting English in Thailand 2. Shin-Mei Kao and Wang-Chi Weng........ 39-68 - Do You Understand?: An Analysis of Native and Non-native EFL Teachers Questioning Patterns at a Taiwanese Cram School 3. Luca Rognoni and Carla Cristina Munhoz Xavier............... 69-80 - Thematic Clustering in Second Language Vocabulary Learning: Scenarios versus Mental Scenes Development 4. Vahid Aryadoust. .. 81-106 - Using Cognitive Diagnostic Assessment to Model the Underlying Structure of a Listening Test: A Sub-Skill-Based Approach 5. Angelia Lu................................................................ 107-133 - Transitivity Shifts in Academic Writing 6. Paul Underwood and Matthew Wallace .. 134-152 - The Effects of Instruction in Reduced Forms on the Performance of Low-Proficiency EFL University Students 7. Hui-ju Liu .. 153-173 - Exploring Academic Self-Concept among Learners with Foreign Language Anxiety 8. Wen-hsien Yang. .. 174-193 - Evaluating the Effectiveness of Genre-Based Instruction: A Writing Course of English for Hospitality and Tourism
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Book Reviews
1. Feedback in Second Language Writing: Contexts and Issues. Ken Hyland & Fiona Hyland (Eds). Reviewed by Aysha Viswamohan.......... 194-195 2. Diagnosing Foreign language Proficiency: The Interface Between Learning and Assessment Charles J. Alderson. Reviewed by Deepti Gupta......... 196-197 3. Language Teacher Research in Africa Thomas S. C. Farrell and Leketi Makalela (Eds). Reviewed by Iris F. Levitis 198-199 4. An Introduction to Conversation Analysis A. J. Liddicoat. Reviewed by Hayriye Kayi..... 200-201
Asian EFL Journal editorial information and guidelines... 202-210
Enhancing Authenticity in Composing Informative and Promotional Texts by Analysing Key Words in A Genre-Based Writing Course - Journal of English Studies Vol 6
Comparison of Gratitude Across Context Variations-A Generic Analysis of Dissertation Acknowledgements Written by Taiwanese Authors in EFL and ESL Contexts