Preliminaries

Reviewer : Fara Chusna Arifah Student Number : 1005030921 Class / Maj. : 01/PBI Faculty : Faculty of Education and Teachers Training College : University of Pekalongan Course : Textbook Review and Writing Lecturer : Hadi Sumarto, M.Pd Title of work : Review a book / paper Date : 5 April 2013

Introduction
Title : Makalah Bahaya Merokok Bagi Kesehatan Tubuh Manusia
Author : Moh. Muqorrobin, SMK Negeri 1 Surakarta Date of Publication : 2009 Publisher : Price : Source : -

The overall text

Subject : Why is cigarettes isn't good for human health Purpose : - to give more information about the danger of cigarettes to the readers - to ask the readers especially his friends to avoid cigarettes because of the disadvantages - to remember people that cigarettes have ungood effect for their health - to inform the readers there are so many danger essences consist in


Background

I never read the title in the previous paper but I have hear about the title.

Content
The whole content of this paper is about the danger of cigarettes for human being like the title.

In this first chapter, the author talks about the background of the problem, the

purposes of the paper, limit of the problem and sistematic of written the paper.
As for the background of the problem, the author wrote that smoke is not a good habit, so if we avoid that is better. Smoke is also a harm habit because in a stick of cigarette there are so many danger essences for our health.

In the second chapter, the author wrote: researches of smokes, the essences of the cigarettes, and how to solve the problems of smoke.

In the last chapter, the author give summary of the content and some suggestions for the reader. These are we have to avoid cigarettes and we have to leave smoke if we are smokers.

Evaluation
1. I think there are some incorrect words, such as "tersadarkan, punya kemampuan, teringinkanl". We can replace them with "sadar, mampu, ingin" are enough. 2. I can't compare the paper with other paper because I never read other paper before.

Looks
- Design of the cover is very simple but there is no picture or something can beautifying the cover because the first we see of the paper is the cover. If the cover is unclearly seen, I think we will uncertain to choose it. - The fonts are very unclearly seen because they are disordered.

Conclusion
- In my opinion, this paper is appropriate if the readers are students in junior or senior, and adults. - This paper only has a book for reference, so I think this paper can't be references. It will be better if the references are 3 or 4.

End matter
Thats all about reviewing this paper, in other time we can compare it with other publications in the same title.