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Insane Humans
Every year humans in Indonesia that are going insane is increasing. They are often found in Main Street, both from men and Introductory Paragraph women. Usually they are in various pitiful conditions. They live alone with no one care to them. They can eat only from others compassion. He sleeps just be based on earth and covered with sky. Moreover, occasionally he becomes laughingstock by children. There are two Thesis Statement caused insane humans in Indonesia. First, depression about love, Human can get depression while he cant get what he wants. Example, he cant get married with his girlfriends. Second, depression of economy difficult, humans cant fill requirement his live because he not has money and job. Be apprehensive about condition of crazy humans in Indonesia. Body Paragraph 1 The First cause of insanity was the accumulated stresses which turn into depression. One of depressions causes is Love, especially when someones love is rejected. About love often occurs with young people in Indonesia. Girls and boys experienced about falling in love. Young people fill so happy while they fall in love with someone whom they love. They love their girlfriends so excessive. They will do anything to get their love. Start from spending time and money to make their girlfriends happy and forget their obligation as students. After they have already made many sacrifices for their girlfriends by hopping marry them, in fact that they get married with other people. Young

people get broken heart and they despondent so they get depression and become insane humans. Prophet Muhammad said that, Dont love something with excessive cause. Body Paragraph 2 Second, insane humans in Indonesia are caused depression about economy difficult. Today economy in Indonesia is very bad. Many people in Indonesia live in poverty and make them cannot get good food, good health and good education. Beside that they must fulfill their need of food, healthy and education. Poor people will be difficult to find good job because they have low education so they just became beggars to fulfill their necessary. As beggars sometimes not enough to fulfill their necessary, so many poor people became crazy humans. In the end, economy problem can influence to increase insane humans in Indonesia. Body Paragraph 4 Finally, it will be a pity if we think that we live alone, there is no future anymore if we fail from our goal, and it is the end of the day if someone rejected us. Those thinking make peoples problem get worst and lead them to the valley of the death. Concluding Paragraph In the result, the increasing of insane human in Indonesia because they have low mental so unable to hold out in live problems. They cant be positive thinking while they have broken heart and while they have economic problem. Their problems became boomerangs for their lives because they always be negative thinking when they get problem. So their problems make them depression and they became insane human in Indonesia.

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