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Table of Contents
Help Me Write a Better... .................................................................................. Speech............................................................................................................. 5 Help Me Write a Better... .................................................................................. Manual ........................................................................................................... 7 How to Write a Better ... ................................................................................... Business Memo ............................................................................................ 10 Help Me Write a Better... .................................................................................. College Essay ............................................................................................... 13 Help Me Write a Better... .................................................................................. Business Plan ............................................................................................... 16 Help Me Write a Better... .................................................................................. Employee Handbook................................................................................... 19 Help Me Write a Better... .................................................................................. Grant Proposal ............................................................................................ 22 Help Me Write a Better... .................................................................................. Legal Document .......................................................................................... 26 Help Me Write a Better... .................................................................................. ewsletter .................................................................................................... 29 Help Me Write a Better... .................................................................................. Press Release................................................................................................ 32 Help Me Write a Better... .................................................................................. Technical Document ................................................................................... 35
How Write a Better... ........................................................................................ Cover Letter ................................................................................................ 38 Help Me Write a Better... .................................................................................. Editorial Article .......................................................................................... 41 Help Me Write a Better... .................................................................................. Book .............................................................................................................. 45 How to Write a Better ....................................................................................... Business Letter ............................................................................................ 47 Help Me Write a Better... .................................................................................. Sales Letter .................................................................................................. 50 Help Me Write a Better... .................................................................................. Thesis / Dissertation .................................................................................... 53 Help Me Write a Better... .................................................................................. Blog Post ...................................................................................................... 56 Help Me Write a Better... .................................................................................. Brochure ...................................................................................................... 59 Help Me Write a Better... .................................................................................. Business Email............................................................................................. 62 Help Me Write a Better... .................................................................................. Resume ......................................................................................................... 65 Plain English ..................................................................................................... Business Writing ......................................................................................... 69 How to Write Better... ....................................................................................... Website Copy............................................................................................... 72
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Speech
Because they are spoken, speeches offer a lot of flexibility in terms of how they are written. However, this large degree of latitude can also make it difficult to really narrow your ideas down into a compelling speech. Read on for a few tips to help make your speech more captivating.
You must plan the content of your speech in order to make the ideas flow logically for your readers. You are bound to have more than one topic (or argument) in your speech, so do your best to order them in a way that makes sense.
If your speech is about fire safety, for example, you might have the following topics: 1. Fire hazards around the home 2. How to plan for an emergency 3. The categories of fire Make sure you talk about your topics one at a time; don't jump back and forth, or you may lose your audience. Also, put all information for each topic together so that it's all in its logical place. This means that if you want to list all the fire hazards in a home, group them all together under the fire hazards around the home topic so that your audience can fully understand the point you're trying to make.
your public speaking. Also, double check that your document is free from typos or grammatical errors before you turn it over for someone to read. You may have allowed yourself to get away with spelling and grammar mistakes in your speech, simply because people wouldn't know the difference when they're only hearing what you have to say instead of reading it. The unique thing about speeches over written forms of communication is that the tone of your voice can add a lot in terms of impact for your audience. A speech means that you don't have to rely on your words alone to get your message across. Make the most of your speech by varying the pace and tone of your voice. Remember to pause in strategic places so that your audience has a moment to absorb what you're saying. Practice not just what you want to say, but exactly how you'd like to say it; carefully chosen voicing can take the clarity and impact of your speech to the next level.
Manual
Writing a policies and procedures manual can be a time-consuming, difficult task. Worse, even after you've put all that effort in, it will still likely be tedious to read. To make your policies and procedures more readable, take a look at the following helpful suggestions:
Every policy and procedure will not always apply to each of your employees. Therefore, when you're writing, keep in mind the audience for whom the policies and procedures are intended. Using the same high school example, let's assume another policy is: "Teachers must volunteer to lead one extra-curricular student activity." This will be a very important section for your teachers to read, but what about your school's caretakers and administrative staff? Clearly, such a policy does not apply to them. This is not to say that you have to write a separate policies and procedures manual for every category of employee in your company. However, do organize the contents of your manual under subheadings that direct employees to read the areas that apply to them. A high school manual might have the headings "For All Employees," "For Teachers Only," "For Caretakers," etc. Be sure to include a table of contents so that your employees can find the policies and procedures they need to read.
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A well-run organization uses its policies and procedures as a backbone to support and guide the activities its members. Your document simply must be easy to read and structured for your audience. It's intuitive: if your policies and procedures document is well organized and grammatically flawless, your employees will be more likely to take its contents seriously.
Business Memo
Memos are a quick way to pass information along. It can be frustrating, however, to receive a memo with an unclear message. To make sure that your memos get the point across, follow these helpful pointers:
1) Use Lists
Memos are, by their very definition, brief. Therefore, you can get away with using point form. Lists are a great way to convey your expectations without being too wordy. Take a look at how this memo effectively uses a list: "RE: Thursday's Conference Kathy,
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We are 90% ready for Thursday's conference, but I need you to check on the following: - RSVP status for the McClintocks - Finalize arrival time of caterers - Projector setup by IT department Thanks, Bill" As you can see, lists help pass along a lot of details without taking up too much time or space. Use lists when you can so that your memos can be as efficient as possible.
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5. Legible handwriting (when applicable) Your memo won't accomplish very much if your recipient can't read it or doesn't understand your words. Even though your memo is short, take a moment to make sure that your audience will be able to interpret what you're trying to say. Again, if it's too long or too complicated to be covered in a memo, write a longer message or speak to them in person. For best results, reserve memo writing for when it can effectively communicate your short (but important) messages.
College Essay
Students usually have to write a lot of essays to succeed in college. Instead of seeing each essay as an insurmountable burden, learn some tricks to make your essay easier to write. This article contains advice to help you create an essay that your professors will be pleased to read.
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2) Stay on Topic
Even with a great thesis statement, it can be tough to make your essay readable. There is usually so much information to deal with that you risk
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getting led astray. To stay on topic, you need to constantly re-focus yourself on your thesis statement. Never write anything that takes you off track. Try this easy trick: once you've chosen your thesis statement, write it on a sticky note and post it somewhere obvious. Then, every time you write something, you can ask yourself: "Does this help to defend my thesis statement?" If the answer is yes, you're in good shape. If not, go back and reconsider where your argument is headed.
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argument that supports your essay by refuting the potential thesis statement of someone else. This tactic shows your professor that you're a strong critical thinker because you'll have successfully contradicted a potential argument against your own essay. Finally, make sure that you order your arguments deliberately. Starting with your weakest argument could bore your reader, but ending with it could undermine the impact of your essay as a whole. Therefore, sandwich your weakest arguments between your stronger ones. This way, you'll still be able to make all of your points while really highlighting your best arguments. Your reader will appreciate the effort you've made to keep your essay captivating and convincing.
Business Plan
Your business plan serves many purposes: it keeps you and your partners on the same page, it tells potential investors whether your business is worth investing in, and it helps you make sure all of your ideas are well thought out. Devote the time necessary to make such an important document all that it can be. Below, you'll find several helpful ways to improve your business plan.
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A business plan needs to portray your organization accurately, but you still must consider the intended audience. This is perhaps most necessary when you plan to use yours to solicit funds from potential investors or venture capitalists. People who may contribute financially to your business need to see its value and growth potential. In this case, it's in your best interest to use each section of your business plan to really showcase the positive features of your company. For example, in the marketing section of your business plan, you'll want to talk about how many potential buyers you have and how you plan to reach them effectively. Make your plan as detailed as possible. Use the opportunity to show potential investors how well prepared you are and how probable it is that your business will make a lot of money. Venture capitalists also need to see a thorough financial section in your business plan, including how much money you're looking to raise and how much of the profits you intend to share with them. Remember, all of your plans to need to be backed up with financial figures in order for potential investors to take them seriously.
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and if they're impressed with the content, they will be more likely to read other sections of your business plan, as well. It's also a great idea to include an executive summary at the very beginning of your business plan. An executive summary is a brief overview of your business plan's best features. For an attention-grabbing executive summary, write about how great your products or services are, the market potential, and your financial projections. It will help get your readers involved right away and entice them to look more deeply into your business plan to learn more about your company.
Employee Handbook
Your workers are the lifeblood of your organization, so it's important that your employee handbook provides them with the direction they need to do a good job. To make your employee handbook more readable, try these helpful hints:
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Of course, there are situations in which you must be negative. For example, you'll want to discuss the repercussions for unacceptable employee behavior in your handbook. In such a case, simply be direct about the negative consequences of bad actions. Your employees will better understand your disciplinary policies if you explain them in a straightforward manner. Remember that it's always good to include your incentive policies for good behavior as well as your disciplinary action for bad behavior. Talking about your company's employee rewards in your handbook will make the negative parts a lot more palatable.
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Not only is correct grammar important for reading comprehension, but it also says something about your credibility as an employer. If you require your employees to read a handbook that contains obvious grammar mistakes, spelling errors, and typos, they may question your competence. Of course, many people are not masters of the English language, but as an employer who wants respect, it's best to make your handbook a reflection of your demand for careful, thorough work. If you hold your employee handbook to the same standard you hold your employees, you will find your workers take their rules and their boss a lot more seriously.
Grant Proposal
Grant proposals are big projects with lofty goals. Often, the ability of your project to start (or continue) will hinge upon the receipt of a grant. Before you get overwhelmed by the daunting task ahead of you, check out the four top tips for making your grant proposal stand out from the crowd:
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Remember that your project is likely in competition with a lot of other projects. You must differentiate yourself from their big pile of grant proposals in order to be noticed. A compelling executive summary is a great way to quickly show why your project is deserving of an organization's grant money.
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Make no mistake: your readers will swiftly discard a poorly researched grant proposal. To have your proposal taken seriously, you must provide evidence for every detail. If you need money for a homeless shelter, include statistics about the number of homeless in your area, as well as how few beds there are by contrast. Facts make your grant proposal legitimate, so back up absolutely everything with well-researched details.
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Legal Document
Even if you're not a lawyer, you'll still encounter many types of legal documents in your everyday life. Wills, bills of sale, and tenant agreements are just a few examples of legal documents you may need to write at some point. To help your recipients understand your documents, try incorporating some of the following pointers:
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of time so you can be sure that you'll cover everyone's needs when it comes to the writing phase.
2) Keep it Simple
Because the nature of a legal document is often complicated, it's best to keep your language simple. To promote readability, use words that everyone understands, not convoluted legal jargon or unnecessarily big vocabulary. Keep your sentences short enough that your readers can easily manage the information contained in each one. In the event that your legal document does require a lot of legal-ese," consider hiring an actual lawyer. There will be consequences if you get it wrong, so don't hesitate to spend the money if you aren't sure how to cover all the bases of your legal document yourself.
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Going over your work for a second look will invariably make your document more readable, but it will also help you make sure you've covered everything you need to. Legal documents serve important purposes, so it is in your best interest to proofread your writing and review your content to make sure it's complete.
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Newsletter
Newsletters are a great way to inform the public about what's new in your organization. An effective newsletter is one that conveys information in a way that is both easy to read and entertaining. Below, you'll find a few ideas on turning your newsletter into one that your audience can't wait to read.
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7) If your newsletter is delivered in hard copy, choose the right type of paper. Standard photocopy
paper is slightly translucent, feels cheap, and tears easily. To add some panache to your newsletter, opt for heavier, higher quality paper. If you can afford it, try using glossy paper; it may give your newsletter that certain level of prestige you've been looking for.
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Press Release
Writing a press release is no easy task, especially if you aren't a journalist. However, it's worthwhile to educate yourself about writing a readable press release. A solid one will entice the public to learn more about your organization. Below are a few hints to help your press release achieve its potential.
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personally and encourage them to keep reading. Using the above example, try writing, "Our executive is proud to announce a 27% increase in profits from the previous quarter." The word "proud" conveys a stronger message than the facts alone; it tells your readers that you have really accomplished something substantial.
2) Use Quotations
Your audience will identify more with your press release if they can mentally attach a personality to it. If you can, include some interesting quotations that apply to your facts. For example, if your organization held a press conference, consider pulling some key phrases from the speaker's address. Using the same example we used previously, let's assume that your company's president released a statement saying, "I am excited about our company's future and confident our profits will continue to rise." Such a dynamic, captivating statement should be added to your press release so that your readers can benefit from the impact of the message, as well.
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language to explain the details of your press release that's not a problem. Just make sure you use everyday words whenever you can.
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Technical Document
Technical documents often contain complex topics that can be difficult to explain. To make sure your readers learn the most from your technical document, check out some of the following tips:
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Once you've clearly separated your ideas, decide on the most logical sequence for your chapters. To figure out what the best order is, try working backwards. For example, if one concept can't be explained without first explaining three other concepts, make sure those three concepts' chapters come first in your document. Keep working until your ideas are listed in such a way that your readers have all of the knowledge they need from one chapter to be ready for the next. Imagine trying to teach a child to read without first teaching them the alphabet. Without providing the fundamentals first, you wouldn't be able to add on anything more complicated. It's the same with your technical document. For increased understanding, give your audience the basics they need first, so that they can better grasp the tougher concepts later.
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If you're having trouble deciding if your document is easy enough for your target audience to read, try asking a friend who could be a part of that target audience. Once he or she reads it, you'll have a good idea whether or not the language is simple enough.
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Cover Letter
Cover letters are a dynamic way to introduce yourself to potential employers. Even before they look at your resume, you can give them a positive impression with a vibrant cover letter. Below you will find several tips to make your cover letter shine.
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cover letter to talk about what you will bring to the company if you are the successful candidate.
2) Do Your Homework
Not every employer is looking for the same set of skills. Therefore, one cover letter will not work for every application. To really "wow" your readers, treat every job opening as unique. Learn about the position you want and tailor your cover letter accordingly. To really grab the attention of your reader, include evidence that you know a bit about the company for which you're applying. If you're applying for a job at a college, for example, check out their website to see if they've won any awards or if they have any notable programs. The hirers will be encouraged to give you a chance if your cover letter says something like, "I am impressed that your school has won the Huntley Academic Award, and I would be honored to join such an illustrious team."
3) Advice on Formatting
To improve the readability of your cover letter, limit it to one page only, including your contact information at the top of the page. Make your cover letter very short, with concise paragraphs and plenty of white space left over. You don't need to list every detail about yourself; just pick a few things that really stand out and showcase them only.
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The font you use should be in a readable size (between 10 and 12 points), and should exactly match the font you choose for your resume. Use the same type of paper for both documents, as well. Your cover letter and resume will look most professional if you present them as a matching set. Do not use multiple or complicated fonts, and avoid using colored paper or ink. A clean black typeface on stark white paper looks crisp, professional, and desirable to read. Remember, the physical look of your cover letter is just as important as its content; each element reinforces the other, so take the time to make your cover letter look and sound just right. It might mean landing your dream job!
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Editorial Article
Articles come in all shapes and sizes. They are in newspapers, magazines, and posted on the Internet. They cover any and every topic imaginable. Despite the wide variety, there are guidelines common to all articles that can help you improve your articles' readability.
1) Plan Ahead
Without planning, your article is bound to come across as disorganized and difficult to read. Even short articles require planning to be as readable as possible. Brainstorming is a great technique to help you figure out what topics you want to cover in your article. From the ideas you get, decide which topics are most important based on your intended article length. For example, if youre writing an article about dancing, you could write about the many types of dancing, dance classes, dance history the list goes on.
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If you want your article to delve deeply into one subject, make sure you restrict yourself to only one of your brainstormed topics. If your article is more of an overview, you have a bit more freedom with the number of topics you choose. You may find that youll have to brainstorm more than once to narrow down your topics sufficiently. If you chose dance history from the above example, you might brainstorm subtopics" such as the dance history of a certain country, decade, or dance company. Again, depending on the aim of your article, you might choose only one topic to explore or several.
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Short sentences are easier to digest than long ones. It's okay to vary sentences to make your writing more interesting, but still be careful about their length. A sentence that is too long will lose your audience's attention. Short paragraphs are a necessity in article writing. In most cases, you should be able to restrict a paragraph to no more than five sentences for strong readability. If you have a particularly strong sentence youd like to showcase, feel free to put it in a paragraph all on its own, but only do this once or twice per article. Simple English is best in most types of writing, including article writing. You may want to use fancy words to impress your readers, but the majority of people are not likely to appreciate your efforts unless your articles are particularly academic. Write your sentences with simple, easy-to-understand words to appeal to the broadest audience. Integrate the "short, short, and simple" rule into your articles and you are guaranteed to have a much more readable result. Remember that the best articles are informative and entertaining without being too wordy or complicated.
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Book
It's not easy to write a book; it takes creativity, planning, and drive. Make sure that your readers get the most out of your writing by following these tips to improve your book's readability.
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paragraphs are separated into manageable sizes that are easier for your readers to digest.
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Business Letter
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Your business uses letters to correspond with your clients and suppliers, advertise your products, and let your stakeholders know what's going on with your company. Effective business letters will enhance the reputation of your business, so take the time to learn how to write them well.
2) Keep it Concise
A business letter that drones on and on will not keep the attention of your readers. Resist the temptation to over-explain yourself or overly praise the virtues of your business, products, or services. Your audience simply will not take the time to read a business letter that is too wordy. To really get your message heard, find a shorter way to convey your meaning. Explain yourself using short sentences with a couple of effective
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adjectives. Emphasize your key points with catchy phrases. Avoid repeating the same message over and over again.
To really improve readability, monitor the length of your paragraphs. For example, if your first message contains a paragraph with seven long sentences, set a goal to reduce it to five short ones. It may take some time, but the result will be a more readable, more effective business letter. Try using a readability formula to get an idea of how easy it is to understand your document. Most word processors contain readability results right in their grammar checkers. Aim for a Flesch Reading Ease score between 40% and 60%. To learn how to calculate readability yourself, visit ReadabilityFormulas.com
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distorted. Having enough of the right inks will make your letters look sharp and professional. If you're printing a large volume of letters (for a mass mail-out, for example), consider going to a printer to make sure your letters all turn out well. In the eyes of your customers and suppliers, your business letters are a reflection of your business practices. Therefore, take the time to make them look professional. The result will be a more readable document that produces better results for your business.
Sales Letter
The right sales letter can generate many leads for your business. In this article, you will find several useful ideas to help you get the most out of your sales letters.
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If you are selling something in particular, focus on that and don't give in to the urge to promote other parts of your business. For example, if your company is having a sale on living room furniture, use your sales letter to talk about the quality of the furniture, the low prices, and to urge readers to visit the store now. Don't waste valuable space by talking at length about the appliances and lighting fixtures you also sell. Stick to the intent of your sales letter to give it the most impact. (Potential call-out: Stick to the intent of your sales letter to give it the most impact.) On the other hand, if you are using your sales letter to introduce your business to a community, you'll have a bit of leeway to present your business more generally. For example, if you are a realtor trying to get customers in a new subdivision, it's best to talk very briefly about each of your services (such as buying homes, selling homes, and legal services). You won't be able to talk extensively about each part of your business, but this method will motivate people to call you to learn more.
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In fact, when writing your sales letter, count on the fact that your recipients will not read the whole thing. To really grab their attention, you'll have to make the most important words and phrases jump out at them. Try these hints to keep your readers interested: Make your most important words stand out by putting them in bold. Don't overuse this, or your readers will stop noticing what's bolded. Just choose a few key words or phrases that you really want to be seen. Keep your paragraphs short. Limit them to three or four short sentences, and separate each one with a full line space so your audience has some breathing room. If you have a key sentence that really deserves some attention, put it in bold all on its own. Only use this technique once or twice for maximum impact. Use exclamation points (!) occasionally. They'll make your reader sit up and take notice, as long as they aren't overused.
3) Sell Yourself
Believing in what you're selling is the first step to having a great sales letter. Your letter will be much more readable if you take the time to describe your business with pizzazz.
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Tell your readers about your industry experience. Tell them why you are a better choice than the competition. Tell them what they can expect by choosing your business over others. Don't be modest! If you believe that your company is great, you'll have a better chance of convincing your readers, too. A strong representation of your company will motivate your audience to trust you with their business.
Thesis / Dissertation
Your thesis is a pinnacle of academic achievement, so you want to give it the attention it deserves. Read on for some helpful hints on how to improve the readability of your thesis or dissertation.
1) Organization is Essential
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It's virtually impossible to complete a project of this magnitude without careful planning. Before you start writing, collect all of your research and thoughts and sit down for this simple, step-by-step planning session: a) Write down the overarching idea you want to write about. b) Brainstorm the arguments you'd like to make in favor of and/or against your idea. c) Peruse your research for evidence that supports your arguments. d) Decide on the sequence of your arguments. Once you've completed these steps, you'll be on your way to writing a coherent, easy-to-follow thesis or dissertation. Without this planning, you may have a hard time organizing your thoughts in a way that makes sense to your readers. Spend this time now and you'll likely save time in the long run.
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labeling your arguments (i.e. argument A, argument B, etc.) and then put the appropriate label next to the corresponding part of your research. You'll have an easier time finding helpful data when you need it.
3) Always Proofread!
Proofreading is a critical step in the writing of your thesis or dissertation. It may seem exhausting to you after the months you spent putting it all together, but it is nevertheless necessary. Proofreading helps you eliminate every last error from your document. It also gives you the opportunity to reword any sentences you don't like the second time around. Virtually all word processors now come with spelling and grammar checkers, which you will find very helpful. However, these alone are not enough. You must physically proofread your thesis or dissertation yourself usually more than once to catch all of the typos and other errors that happened along the way. Sometimes, the sheer volume of your work can make it hard for you to catch all of the errors. A fresh pair of eyes will certainly help you find more mistakes. If you can, enlist the help of a trusted friend or colleague to proofread your thesis or dissertation for you. They can help find errors and suggest alternate wording for places where your writing is a bit awkward. If you've got a little extra money, you can also hire a professional to do this job for you.
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Remember that your thesis or dissertation is the culmination of years of academic effort. Take the time to show your readership that you are an educated professional who writes flawlessly and persuasively. You'll be rewarded with a more polished and convincing finished product of which you can be very proud.
Blog Post
Millions of people write blogs every day on thousands of topics: news, reviews, personal journals the list goes on. If you're a blogger, here are a few simple tips that can help make your blog a lot more appealing to your readers.
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your blog for a headline. Something like "The Secret the Diamond Industry Doesn't Want You to Know" will tempt your audience to read further.
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many words. For example, if your blog is about a supermarket sale, it's better to make a list of what items are on sale instead of writing, "Lettuce, cereal, frozen pizzas, toilet paper" A list clearly states relevant information in a concise, easy-to-read fashion.
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Make sure you keep your paragraphs short and put one line space between them. It only takes a split second for a potential reader to decide if they'll read your blog or not. One mass of text with a complicated font will not appeal to your audience. Even an informative and entertaining blog will be overlooked if it's too hard on the eyes. Remember, blogs that are more readable enjoy larger and more loyal audiences.
Brochure
Brochures are fantastic sales tools for many businesses. However, a hardto-read brochure can turn potential customers off, so you need to make it as appealing as possible to your customers. The following simple guidelines will help you get the best out of your brochures.
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than it is to say "Our business provides friendly customer service with no waiting and a 100% satisfaction guarantee." Both methods deliver the same information, but the second method is very wordy and harder to process than the above bulleted list.
4) Focus on Formatting
We've said it before, we'll say it again: do not put too much text into your brochure. Too much text overwhelms your audience. It's better to have some empty space to make your brochure easier on the eyes and give your readers some room to digest what your business has to offer. Don't try to cram more words in by using a tiny font size, either; your audience won't be fooled! In terms of font styles, be careful about how creative you get. In a brochure it can be interesting to have a couple of unique-looking fonts, but too many will take away from the overall effect. Try using a very simple font for your body text and a slightly more "fun" font for your headlines. Similarly, use caution with colors. It's great to have a nice background color to accent your pictures and text, but one that's too loud will distract readers from your brochure's message. Before sending your brochure to the printers, experiment with color combinations and get the opinions of colleagues you trust.
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Finally, consult your printers before choosing a paper type. The quality and finish of the paper will affect the readability of your brochure. Ask for advice about which finishes will look best with your brochure's colors, pictures, and text. Finally, don't be afraid to ask for a sample before you commit to a certain finish; your brochure is an important sales piece that needs just the right look to showcase your business.
Business Email
Sending e-mails is a routine task that many businesspeople take for granted. Keep in mind, however, that every e-mail you send reflects upon your business, so it's critical that you make them as readable as possible. Below you will find several useful ways to get the most out of your business e-mails.
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grammar errors negatively affect (and can even alter) the content of your message. These days, virtually every e-mail program contains at least a built-in spelling checker. Often, these programs come with grammar checkers too. These tools make it so simple to send a flawless e-mail that there is no excuse for anything less than grammatical perfection. At the very least, proofread before you send! Remember, if there are flaws in your e-mails, your recipients are bound to expect flaws in your work, too.
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If you are writing to a client or a supplier, you must use polite and professional language. A paying customer usually expects respect and courtesy. Similarly, a supplier needs to know that you are a trustworthy customer, so it's best to keep those messages professional, as well. Slang and casual language can be very off-putting to a client receiving an e-mail from your business. Also, don't forget to say "please" and "thank you!" If you are writing a colleague, bear in mind that it is still a work e-mail, and therefore should maintain a certain level of decorum. Personal material combined with business communication can weaken the impact of your message. It's best to restrict the content of your business e-mails to business-related information only.
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By stating your expectations in clear language, point by point, your e-mails will be more successful in helping you accomplish your business goals. Remember that each e-mail represents your company, so spend the time to get them right.
Resume
Your resume is a potential employer's first impression of you, so don't underestimate its influence. Businesspeople can tell a lot about you from your resume, and we aren't just talking about employment history. Your resume's presentation - not just its content - has a great deal to do with whether or not you get called for an interview.
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have someone with an eagle eye go over your resume again to spot any straggling errors. Perfect spelling and grammar in your resume may seem obvious, but it really can't be stressed enough. Your resume tells your future employers if you're a quality worker. Anything less than top grammatical quality on your resume will leave them with doubts. It's worth saying again: get your spelling and grammar right!
Cashier -- Fast n' Fresh Supermarket -- Boston, MA I processed grocery transactions and trained new employees. The next item should be in the same format: position, company name, and location on one line, with each detail separated by a dash. On the next line should be a brief description of your duties at that job. Keep the format identical throughout your resume so that your reader doesn't have trouble figuring out what you're trying to say.
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Business Writing
At the office, it's critical that you know how to write well. Businesses need to hold their writing to the same high standard they demand of their products and services. Your clients and suppliers judge you on your documents, so read on to learn about making your business writing competent and professional.
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so spend the money to make your documents look amazing. Also, make sure your ink cartridges are full before printing. Your documents will be harder to read if the ink is faded. If you're printing irregularly sized documents or you have a large volume, consider using a printing company. They can provide samples of their work and references, so you can be sure you're getting the quality you need. Often, this option is less expensive for you than buying all of the ink and/or special equipment you would need to do it yourself.
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Website Copy
A website is very important to a business. The 21st century way to buy virtually anything is through the Internet, so your website must reflect your business in the best way possible. This article will help you turn your website into a powerful sales tool that attracts your target market and turns them into loyal customers.
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2) Keep it Short
Passionate entrepreneurs often make the mistake of over-describing on their websites. Yes, you do want to give your customers enough information about your business. However, too many words or too many web pages will be so daunting to them that they won't bother to read what you've written. If you want to "wow" your website visitors, remember: a) Short sentences b) Short product/service descriptions c) As few web pages as possible
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4) Pack a Punch
Now that you know you've got to keep your website short and simple, you must make the space you do have as attention-grabbing as possible. Pick the best parts of your business and highlight them right on your homepage. To decide which areas to write about, ask yourself the following questions: a) What is the best thing about my company? b) What do I offer that people need the most? c) What's the most important thing my customers need to know? Although there are no hard and fast rules about what to put on your homepage, the above questions will get you thinking about what should be there. It's much better to describe a couple of the strongest aspects of your business than to overload your homepage with secondary information. Get them interested right off the bat, and they'll stay to look at the details found in other areas of your website. Remember, successful websites motivate people to buy using the quality -- not the quantity -- of their words.
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1) ACCEPTA CE, ACCEPTATIO .Acceptance is the act of accepting; also favorable reception: as, The acceptance of a gift, She sang with marked acceptance. Acceptation now means the sense in which an expression is generally understood or accepted. ACCESS, ACCESSIO .Access has several meanings authorized by good use: () outburst; () admission; () way of entrance. Accession means the coming into possession of a right; or an addition. ACTS, ACTIO S.Acts, in the sense of things done, is preferable to actions, since actions also means processes of doing. ADVA CE, ADVA CEME T.Advance is used in speaking of something as moving forward; advancement, as being moved forward. ALLUSIO , ILLUSIO , DELUSIO .An allusion is an indirect reference to something not definitely mentioned. Roughly speaking, an illusion is an error of vision; delusion, of judgment. In literary and popular use an illusion is an unreal appearance presented in any way to the bodily or the mental vision; it is often pleasing, harmless, or even useful.... A delusion is a mental error or deception, and may have regard to things actually existing, as well as to illusions. Delusions are ordinarily repulsive and discreditable, and may even be mischievous.
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13) ABILITY, CAPACITY.Ability is the power of doing; capacity, the power of containing, of understanding, of acquiring. 14) ADHERE CE, ADHESIO .Adherence is used of moral relations, adhesion, of physical connection. We speak of the adhesion of glue to wood, of a mans adherence to the principles of his party. 15) AMOU T, QUA TITY, UMBER.Amount means sum total, and is used of numbers or quantities; quantity is used of things which are measured; number, of things which are counted. 16) ARGUME T, PLEA.Plea (in the legal sense) is properly used of the pleadings or the arraignment before a trial, not of the argument at a trial. A plea is always addressed to the court; an argument may be addressed either to the court or to the jury. A similar remark applies to the verbs plead and argue. 17) BALA CE, REST, REMAI DER.Balance, meaning the difference between two sides of an account, is a commercial term, and cannot properly be used for rest or remainder. Rest is used of persons or things, and of large as well as of small parts. Remainder is used only of things, and denotes a comparatively small part. 18) CE TRE, MIDDLE.The centre is a point, or a definite place; the middle is a line, or a space, and is less definite than centre. 19) CHARACTER, REPUTATIO .Character is what a man is; reputation is the prevailing opinion of his character.
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20) COMPLEME T, COMPLIME T.A complement is a full quantity or number or that which is needed to complete; a compliment is an expression of praise. 21) CO SCIE CE, CO SCIOUS ESS.Conscience is that within us which distinguishes right from wrong. Consciousness is the state of being aware of ones existence, thoughts, and surroundings. 22) COU CIL, COU SEL.A council is a body of persons convened for consultation. Counsel denotes advice, or a person, as a lawyer, engaged to give advice. 23) CUSTOM, HABIT.Custom denotes the frequent repetition of the same act, and may be used of a number of persons taken together. Habit is the effect of custom in a person. Custom is voluntary; habit is involuntary, often uncontrollable, sometimes unconscious. 24) DECEPTIO , DECEIT.Deception is the act of deceiving; deceit is deceitfulness, a trait of character; or a trick, an artifice. 25) EGOISTS, EGOISM, EGOTISM.The disciples of Descartes were egoists, the ego being the basis of their philosophy. Egoism is the name of their system. Egoism is sometimes used also in the sense of undue admiration of self, the outward expression of which is egotism. But egotism, in the sense of self-worship, is preferable to egoism, since egoism also designates a system of philosophy. 26) EMIGRATIO , IMMIGRATIO .Emigration is the moving out from a country; immigration, the moving into it.
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Foreigners who come to live in America are emigrants from their fatherland, immigrants to America. 27) E ORMITY, E ORMOUS ESS.Enormity is used of deeds of unusual horror; enormousness, of things of unusual size. We speak of the enormity of Csar Borgias crimes, of the enormousness of the Rothschilds wealth. 28) ESTEEM, ESTIMATE, ESTIMATIO .Esteem as a noun seems to be going out of use; the word now commonly used in the sense of opinion or regard is estimation. An estimate is an approximate judgment, based on considerations of probability, of the number, amount, magnitude, or position of anything. 29) FALSITY, FALSE ESS.Falsity, in the sense of nonconformity to truth, without any suggestion of blame, is preferable to falseness, since falseness usually implies blame. 30) IDE TITY, IDE TIFICATIO .Identity is the state of being the same. Identification denotes the act of determining what a given thing, or who a given person, is. 31) IMPORT, IMPORTA CE.Import, in the sense of meaning, must be distinguished from importance, the quality of being important. 32) I VE TIO , DISCOVERY.We invent something new, contrived or produced for the first time. We discover what existed before, but remained unknown.
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33) LIMIT, LIMITATIO .Limit, in the sense of bound, is preferable to limitation, since limitation also means the act of limiting, or a restriction. 34) LOT, UMBER.Lot denotes a distinct part or parcel: as, The auctioneer sold the goods in ten lots. The word does not mean a great number; therefore it is improperly used in the sentences: He has lots of money, and I know a lot of people in New York. 35) MAJORITY, PLURALITY.A majority is more than half the whole number; a plurality is the excess of votes given for one candidate over those given for another, and is not necessarily a majority when there are more than two candidates. 36) EGLIGE CE, EGLECT.Negligence is used of a habit or trait; neglect, of an act or succession of acts. 37) OVICE, OVITIATE.Novice properly means one who is new in any business or calling; novitiate, the state or time of being a novice. 38) ORGA ISM, ORGA IZATIO .An organism is a living body composed of a number of essential parts. Organization denotes the act of organizing, or an organized body of persons, as a literary society. 39) PART, PORTIO .Part is the general word for that which is less than the whole: as, the whole is equal to the sum of all its parts.... Portion is often used in a stilted way where part would be simpler and better; portion has always some suggestion of allotment or assignment: as, this is my portion; a portion of Scripture. Father, give me the portion of goods that falleth to me.
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40) PLE TY, ABU DA CE.Plenty is enough; abundance, more than enough. 41) PRODUCE, PRODUCT, PRODUCTIO .Produce is always collective, and is used only of raw products: as, the produce of the soil, of the flock. Product denotes the result of some operation, usually physical labor. Production, meaning the act of producing, is also applied to a work of literature or art, as a book, a statue, or a painting. Product, in the sense of thing produced, is preferable to production, since production is also used in an abstract sense. 42) PROMI E CE, PREDOMI A CE.Prominence means a standing out from something, so as to be conspicuous. Predominance denotes ascendency, a superiority in strength or influence, an over-ruling. There may be many prominent traits in a persons character; there can be only one predominant trait. 43) RECEIPT, RECIPE.Receipt, in the sense of formula for a pudding, etc., is preferable to recipe, since recipe is commonly restricted to medical prescriptions. 44) RELATIVE, RELATIO .Relative, in the sense of member of a family, is preferable to relation, since relation is also used in an abstract sense. 45) REQUIREME T, REQUISITE, REQUISITIO .A requirement is something required by a person or persons. A requisite is something required by the nature of the case. A requisition is an authoritative demand or official request for a supply of something. 46) RESORT, RECOURSE, RESOURCE.Resort denotes the act of going to some person or thing; or that which is resorted to or
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53) ACCREDIT, CREDIT.To accredit means to invest with credit or authority, or to send with letters credential; to credit means to believe, or to put to the credit of.
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54) ARISE, RISE.The choice between these words was primarily, and still often is, a matter of rhythm euphony. The literal meanings, however, or those which seem literal, have become more associated with rise, and the consciously figurative with arise: as, he rose from the chair; the sun rose; the provinces rose in revolt: trouble arose; music arose with its voluptuous swell. 55) CAPTIVATE, CAPTURE.To captivate means to fascinate; to capture, to take prisoner. 56) DEPRECIATE, DEPRECATE.To depreciate means to bring down in value, to disparage; to deprecate means to argue earnestly against or to express regret for. 57) IMPUG , IMPUTE.To impugn means to call in question; to impute means to ascribe to. 58) Loan, lend.The use of loan as a verb is not sanctioned by good use. Properly the word is a noun. A loan is money which a person lends.
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60) CALCULATE, I TE D.To calculate means properly to compute mathematically, or to adjust or adapt for something. In the sense of intend it is not in good use. 61) CARRY, BRI G, FETCH.To carry means to take along in going; to bring means to take along in coming; to fetch means to go, get, and bring. 62) CHAMPIO , SUPPORT.The word champion is very much overworked, being often used in the general sense of support. It should be restricted to cases in which there is the idea of entering the lists as champion of a cause. 63) CLAIM, ASSERT, ALLEGE, MAI TAI , DECLARE, AFFIRM, STATE.To claim means properly to demand as ones own or ones due. It is often loosely used, especially in the United States, for assert, allege, maintain, declare, or affirm. To assert is to say or declare in the face of implied denial or doubt. To allege is to assert without proof. To maintain is to uphold by argument. To declare is to say publicly, clearly, or emphatically. To affirm is to assert on ones reputation for knowledge or truthfulness. To state, which is also often misused in the sense of say, assert, allege, declare, or affirm, means properly to express formally and in detail; it always implies detail. (See Foundations, pp. , , and Practical Exercises, p. .) 64) CO FESS, ADMIT.Admit, in cases into which the idea of confession does not enter, is preferable to confess. On grounds of idiom, however, I must confess and the parenthetical I confess are exempt from the operation of this rule.
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65) DEMA D, ASK.To demand means to ask for with authority or with insistence. The use of demand in the sense of ask is borrowed, possibly, from the French use of demander. 66) HIRE, LET, LEASE.To hire means to obtain the use of; to let, to give the use of. To lease means to give the use of by lease. The owner of a house leases it; the person who occupies it takes a lease of it. 67) LEAR , TEACH.Learn means to acquire knowledge, not to impart it. In the latter sense the proper word is teach. 68) I have more information to-day than I had before, said Mr. Sheehan. 69) 70) This has learned you something, said Mr. Goff. Oh no, replied Mr. Sheehan, it has taught me something.
71) LIKE, LOVE.Like and love differ greatly in strength or warmth, and may differ in kind. Like may be feeble and cool, and it never has the intensity of love. We may like or even love a person; we only like the most palatable kind of food. With an infinitive, like is the common word, love being appropriate only in the hyperbole of poetical or rhetorical feeling. 72) MATERIALIZE, APPEAR.To materialize properly means to make or to become physically perceptible; as, by means of letters we materialize our ideas and make them as lasting as ink and paper; the ideas of the sculptor materialize in marble.
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76) ACCEPT, EXCEPT.To accept means to take something offered; to except means to make an exception of. 77) ADVERTISE, ADVISE.To advertise is to announce to the public to advise is to give counsel or information to a person. 78) AFFECT, EFFECT.To affect is to act upon, to influence; to effect is to bring about. 79) ALLEVIATE, RELIEVE.To alleviate pain is to lighten it; to relieve it is to go further, and to remove it in a large measure or altogether. 80) ALLOW, ADMIT, THI K.Allow properly means to grant or permit, not to admit, think or intend. 81) ALLUDE TO, REFER TO, ME TIO .We mention a thing when we name it directly. We refer to it when we speak of it less directly. We allude to it when we refer to it in a delicate or slight way.
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82) ARGUE, AUGUR.To argue is to bring forward reasons; to augur is to foretell, to forebode. 83) COMPARE WITH, COMPARE TO, CO TRAST.Two things are compared in order to note the points of resemblance and difference between them; they are contrasted in order to note the points of difference only. When one thing is compared to another, it is to show that the first is like the second; when one thing is compared with another, it is to show either difference or similarity, especially difference. 84) CO STRUE, CO STRUCT.To construe means to interpret, to show the meaning; to construct means to build; we may construe a sentence as in translation, or construct it as in composition. 85) CO VI CE, CO VICT.To convince is to satisfy the understanding; to convict, to pronounce guilty. The jury having been convinced of the prisoners guilt, he was convicted. 86) DETECT, DISCRIMI ATE.To detect is to find out; to discriminate is to distinguish between. 87) DISCLOSE, DISCOVER.To disclose is to uncover, to reveal; to discover is, in modern usage, to find. 88) DOMI ATE, DOMI EER.To dominate is to rule; to domineer is to rule in an overbearing manner. 89) DRIVE, RIDE.We go driving in carriages, riding in saddles. We drive behind horses, we ride on them.
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106) LIKELY, PROBABLY, LIKE.Likely is now used as an adjective only, except in the phrase As likely as not; ad the corresponding adverb is probably. We say, He is likely to come; He will probably come. Like as an adjective means similar, as, Men of like excellence; He looks like his grandfather; He was a man of like passions as we are. In the sense of in the same manner as like is followed by a noun or a pronoun in the objective case, and is called by some an adverb, by others a preposition: as, He talks like her. 107) LESS, FEWER, SMALLER.Less refers to quantity, fewer to number, smaller to size. 108) MOST, ALMOST.Most denotes the greatest number, quantity, or degree. It is always superlative and never means nearly, which is the proper meaning of almost. We say, Most of the boys are here; the time has almost come. 109) EAR, EARLY.Near is an adjective; the corresponding adverb is nearly. 110) PLE TY is now in good use as a noun only, as Plenty of corn and wine. Shakespeare used the word as an adjective in Reasons as plenty as blackberries, but this use is obsolete. The use of plenty as an adverb, as The food is plenty good enough, is a vulgarism. 111) SOME, SOMEWHAT, SOMETHI G.Some is an adjective, as, Some water; Some brighter clime. Somewhat is an adverb, as, He is somewhat better. Somewhat is occasionally used as a noun, as, Somewhat of doubt remains, but in this sense something is more common.
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112) THIS, THESE; THAT, THOSE.This (plural these) and that (plural those) are the only adjectives in English that have distinct forms for the plural. A common mistake is to use the plural forms with singular collective nouns, as kind, class, sort. 113) FIRST, SECO D, SECO DLY, etc.First is both adjective and adverb. Second, third etc., are adjectives only; the corresponding adverbs are secondly, thirdly, etc. Firstly is a vulgarism. 114) AGGRAVATI G, IRRITATI G.In good use aggravating means making heavier, more grave, worse in some way. It is often misused for irritating, exasperating, or provoking. 115) ALL, THE WHOLE.See page .
116) APT, LIKELY, LIABLE.Apt implies a natural predisposition, an habitual tendency. Likely implies a probability of whatever character; liable, an unpleasant probability. One is apt to speak quickly, likely to hear good news, liable to be hurt. 117) BOTH, EACH, EVERY.Both, meaning the two, and not merely one of them, groups objects, as, Both were men of hot temper. Each means all of any number, considered one by one, as, Each boy recited in his turn. Every means all of any number, considered as composing a group or class, as, Every pupil should have a dictionary and use it freely. Every directs attention chiefly to the totality, each chiefly to the individuals composing it. It may also be observed that each usually refers to a numerically definite group.... Thus, Each theory is open to objection relates to an understood enumeration of theories, but Every theory is open to objection refers to all theories that may exist.
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125) BOU D, DETERMI ED.Bound properly means obliged, fated, or under necessity: as, A man is bound by his word; We hold ourselves in gratitude bound to receive ... all such persons. In the sense of determined hound is not in good use. In the sense of sure it is in colloquial, but not in literary, use. 126) CO TI UAL, CO TI UOUS.Continual is used of frequently repeated acts, as, Continual dropping wears away a stone; continuous, of uninterrupted action, as, the continuous flowing of a river. 127) DEADLY, DEATHLY.Deathly, in the sense of resembling death, as, She was deathly pale, is preferable to deadly, since deadly also means inflicting death. 128) DECIDED, DECISIVE.A decided opinion is a strong opinion, which perhaps decides nothing; a decisive opinion settles the question at issue. A lawyer may have decided views on a case; the judgment of a court is decisive. 129) DUMB, STUPID.Dumb properly means mute, silent. Its misuse for stupid is partly due, especially in Pennsylvania, to its resemblance to the German dumm. 130) EXISTI G, EXTA T.That is extant which has escaped the ravages of time (used chiefly of books, manuscripts, etc.); that is existing which has existence. 131) FU Y, ODD.Funny means comical; in the sense of strange or odd it is not in good use.
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132) HEALTHY, HEALTHFUL, WHOLESOME.That is healthy which is in good health; that is healthful or wholesome which produces health. Wholesome commonly applies to food. 133) HUMA , HUMA E.Human denotes what pertains to man as man; as, human nature, human sacrifices. Humane means compassionate. 134) LATEST, LAST.Latest, like the word late, contains a distinct reference to time; that is latest which comes after all others in time: as, The latest news; The latest fashion. Last, which was originally a contraction of latest, is now used without any distinct reference to time, and denotes that which comes after all others in space or in a series: as, The last house on the street; The Last of the Mohicans. 135) LE GTHY, LO G.Lengthy is said to have originated in the United States, but the earliest quotations found are from British authors. In the introduction to the second series of The Biglow Papers, Mr. Lowell wrote: We have given back to England the excellent adjective lengthy ... thus enabling their journalists to characterize our Presidents messages by a word civilly compromising between long and tedious, so as not to endanger the peace of the two countries by wounding our national sensitiveness to British criticism. Lengthy is used chiefly of discourses or writings, and implies tediousness. Long is used of anything that has length. 136) MAD, A GRY.Mad means insane; in the sense of angry it is not in good use. 137) EW, OVEL.That is new which is not old; that is novel which is both new and strange.
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138) ORAL, VERBAL.Oral, in the sense of in spoken words, is preferable to verbal, since verbal means in words whether spoken or written. 139) PITIABLE, PITIFUL.Pitiable, in the sense of deserving pity, is preferable to pitiful, since pitiful also means compassionate, as, The Lord is very pitiful, and of tender mercy. 140) PRACTICABLE, PRACTICAL.That is practicable which can be done; that is practical which is not theoretical only: as, a practicable plan, a practical electrician. 141) PROMI E T, EMI E T.Prominent means conspicuous, standing out so as to be easily seen; eminent means distinguished in character or rank. 142) REAL, REALLY, VERY.Real is properly an adjective, meaning not imaginary or counterfeit, as, real diamonds. Its misuse for the adverbs really and very, as, This is real pretty, is a vulgarism. 143) SCARED, AFRAID.The participle scared means frightened; afraid is an adjective meaning in fear. Before of, the proper word is afraid: as, She is afraid of horses. Scared of is not in good use. 144) MAG IFICE T.Grand properly implies grandeur; gorgeous, splendid colors; awful, awe; elegant, elegance; splendid, splendor; lovely, surpassing loveliness; magnificent, magnificence. We talk, sometimes, with people whose conversation would lead you to suppose that they had lived in a museum, where all the objects were monsters and extremes.... They
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use the superlative of grammar: most perfect, most exquisite, most horrible. Like the French, they are enchanted, they are desolate, because you have got or have not got a shoestring or a wafer you happen to wantnot perceiving that superlatives are diminutives and weaken.... All this comes of poverty. We are unskilful definers. From want of skill to convey quality, we hope to move admiration by quantity. Language should aim to describe the fact.... Tis very wearisome, this straining talk, these experiences all exquisite, intense, and tremendous. 145) MISUSED PREPOSITIO S.--A writer, in choosing the proper preposition to express his meaning, must rely chiefly on his sense of idiom, that is, his knowledge of English usage. 146) AMO G, BETWEE .Among is the proper word when the reference is to more than two persons or things, or groups of persons or things; between, when the reference is to two only. 147) AT, I .Before names of places to denote where, at is used when the place is so small as to be treated as a mere point, or when, although large, it is viewed as a mere point; in is used when it is desired to make prominent the idea within the bounds of: as, He arrived at Liverpool in the morning and remained in that city two days. Before the name of the place in which the speaker dwells, if the place is of any size, in is generally preferred to at, unless the place is so remote that it dwindles in the mental vision to a point. 148) BACK OF.Back of, though frequently heard in conversation and sometimes seen in print, is not in good use.
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149) BESIDE, BESIDES.Beside means by the side of; besides is now used only in the sense of in addition to, other than: as, Who sits beside you? Who besides us knows this? 150) BY, WITH.To introduce the agent of an action by is now commonly used; the material instrument or tool is usually introduced by with: as, Duncan was murdered by Macbeth with a dagger. 151) DIFFERE T FROM, DIFFERE T TO.Different from is preferable to different to and different than. 152) I , I TO.In implies presence inside of, or within; into implies movement to the inside of. Before a man can move in a room, he must already have moved into it. 153) I , O .Before names of streets, in implies some reference to surroundings; on is less definite, indicating location only. 154) O TO, O TO.Good use does not support either on to or onto. 155) WAIT FOR, WAIT O .To wait for means to await, as, We will wait for you at the corner. To wait on means to attend on, as, At dinner the women waited on the men. 156) VULGARISMS.--Every educated person is expected to know the correct use of the following words:-157) LIKE, AS.In good use like is never a conjunction, and therefore it cannot be used instead of as to introduce a clause. It is
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incorrect to say, Walk like I walk, but one may say, He walks like me, or He looks like his grandfather. 158) EXCEPT, WITHOUT, U LESS.Except, which was originally a past-participle, was once in good use as a conjunction; but in modern use it has been displaced as a conjunction by unless, and is now a preposition only. We may say, All went except me, but we may not say, Except you go with me, I will stay at home. Another word not in good use as a conjunction, but often heard instead of unless, is without. 159) MISUSED CO JU CTIO S.--Conjunctions are few in number and are more definite in their meanings than prepositions. Most errors in using them spring from confused thinking or hasty writing. A close reasoner and a good writer in general may be known by his pertinent use of connectives. 160) A D.And has, generally speaking, the meaning of in addition to. 161) BUT.But implies some exception, opposition, or contrast. Equivalent, or nearly equivalent, expressions are however, on the other hand, yet, nevertheless. 162) AS.As has so many meanings that it is better, when possible, to use a conjunction that covers less ground. 163) BECAUSE, FOR, SI CE.The difference between these words is chiefly a difference in emphasis. We will not go, because it is raining is the strongest way of expressing the relation of cause and effect. In Since it is raining, we will not go, the emphasis is shifted from the cause to the effect, which becomes the prominent idea. In
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We will not go, for it is raining, the reason, it is raining, is announced as itself a bit of news. Often the choice between these words is decided by the ear. 164) HOW.How properly means in what manner or to what extent. It is often misused for that to introduce an object clause. 165) OR, OR.Nor is the correlative of neither, sometimes of other negatives. Or is the correlative of either. 166) THEREFORE, SO.In the sense of for this reason, therefore is preferable to so, since so has other meanings. 167) THOUGH.Though means notwithstanding, in spite of the fact that. 168) AS IF, AS THOUGH.As if is, on the whole, preferable to as though. 169) WHE , WHILE.When means at the time that; while, during the time that, as long as. When fixes attention on a date or period; while fixes attention on the lapse of time.
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