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Argumentative writing - Having a lot of rule is better than having a lot of freedom Name Aekansh (10th IGCSE) For

or the topic The first thought which strikes our mind reconciling the term rules is with lot of prohibition and boundaries we have negotiated to compromise with. But the fact we all have to admire that these limitation or boundaries are the only vision we accepted that differentiate humans from other creatures. On other hand the word freedom suddenly limits our perceptiveness to individuals perfunctory oddity. We start to develop intuitions which reprobate our thoughts and magnetize our reflexes towards the negativitism side of our brain. As humans are bestowed with minds that are capable of insidious imagination and vision, freedom provide them an unstructured and ruse platform on which human tendency starts to develop their eccentric opinions and views. And here comes a role of Rule and regulation which indirectly results in the progress of world, of nation, of society and ultimately of individual. From the birth of a children, we start to nurture them according to well define rules know as morals how to eat, how to talk, how to react according to situation. And these qualities in a person in later life define their attitude in society. The best merit of implication of rules is that they are well defined for each person, for respective ages, and for all circumstances. But this is not a same case with freedom; ones freedom might be a problematic situation for someone elses solace. Taking the case of increasing terrorization, no physiologist in this world is able to define a clear picture behind these evil minds. They go to one nation. They destroy their citizens and at last they die themselves. In my opinion no dictionary in this world defines this idiocity under the domain of freedom. Moreover, under the working atmosphere of rules and regulation, we are bound to define our horizon in a defined path which results in a healthy competitive atmosphere. And surely we define a healthy competition to be chief ingredient of progress and development. This not only beneficial to the person but it also help nation

and society if all citizens are carrying a same vision. On other hand, a sense of freedom radiates lethargicness in our attitude and each individual create their own time frame which results into a jammed mechanism of nation. Imagine a situation where one person might be completing his/her graduation in just 2years and another person which took 5-6years for same course. Then we cant weight their intellectuality on the same beam balance. Consider a situation no traffic rules, no rules in schools and offices, no courts. These thought may be a good implementation in jungle life but not in case with human races.

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