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L V Hong Trang IELTS A1002 Some parents think that having children watch television programs is good for

r their mental development; others believe that this is not true. Discuss both views and state your opinion. With the development of the media, in the present day (today/ nowadays/recently), there is a general controversy on the impact of televisions on children. Most parents believe that watching plentiful programmes on TV is beneficial to their kids mental growth. On the other hand, some adults do not concur with that idea ( should be more specific). In this essay, I will have a look at the issue in both views and state my own opinion. From my point of view, the main reason for the former idea is that the telly (informal word) is one of the fastest ways for children to get in touch with the modern world, especially abundant constantlyupdated information. Watching various shows, in particular for kids may help them have an early look at our (the) world without real experiences. To be more specific, children will have a broader range of knowledge aside from studying at school or reading books. In addition, some educative (educational) channels are useful means that enlighten and stimulate the kids imagination, which plays an important role in their development. Another reason for this view is that there are more and more programs televised broadcast which are attention-grabbing and witty, specifically especially/particularly cartoon channels . Certainly, children will have a lot of fun ( It is no doubt that such programs bring children a great deal of pleasure.). Cute characters and funny stories can be helpful lessons for their soul growth. give an example to make this paragraph a bit longer In contrast (s dng ngn ng phn bin trong file gi km Refute), spending too much time in front of the TV screen is really harmful, particularly childrens health. They Children are likely to contract weak eyes that leads to short-sightedness if.. Obviously, this consequence will affect their studies negatively. Secondly, addiction to TVs makes /turns children more and more passive. They tend to glue to the box and ignore outdoor activities. Therefore, is likelihood that they would probably suffer from obesity. Another dangerous effect of having their eyes glued to the television is that children may stay up late to channel surf. Clearly/As a result, they will be short of sleep, or even contract insomnia which will have prejudicial influences on their performances at school. (V y l dng bi phn bin, nu 2 on u em nu postive effects ri th on ny em nn nu 1 vi negative effects thi, sau cn phi c thm 2-3 cu gii thch l nhng negative effects c th c gim tr nu c nhng bin php no ging nh cch em nu trong kt lun. on ny, em nn trnh nu qu nhiu phn bc v nh th mnh s kh phn bin 1 cch thuyt phc. Lai bi phn bin t nhiu im hay khng l phn ny, v th em nn nu t tri chiu mnh ci li d dng hn) In conclusion, televisions have several advantages but they are also disadvantageous in some ways. From my observation, the most important thing is that parents should try to control their kids schedule, advise them to concentrate on studying, not to waste too much time watching unuseful programs so that kids can use TVs more effectively. phn ny nn dung them vo phn phn bin

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