APPENDIX B TOPIC: Western entertainment industry has negative influence on Malaysian culture

PARAGRAPH 1 GENERAL STATEMENT : Western entertainment reaches the public by way of television, movies, video games, music, and novels. THESIS STATEMENT: Western entertainment is a major factor in the escalation of violence in society and bring a negative influence to Malaysia culture that inspired people to set spouses on fire in their beds, lie down in the middle of highways, extort money by placing bombs in airplanes, rape, steal, murder, and commit numerous other shootings and assaults

PARAGRAPH 2 1. Cultural and social influences 2. Television channels give more broadcasting time to Western entertainment. a) Modern and contemporary social and cultural values on TV show drive out our traditional values and practices. b) Viewers tend to visualise another life style that encompasses the important aspects of luxury, comfort and superiority. c) people make sense of the world to orient themselves, construct identities, and communicate with others

PARAGRAPH 3 1. Crimes and Violence 2. Western entertainment give a potential harms to young audiences a) May lead to aggression and encouragement of people to take steps to protect themselves b) Children not able to distinguish fantasy from reality c) Crimes and violence among the youth of malaysia are seen in the spread of gangsters, snatch thefts, stealing, burglary, rape and murder

PARAGRAPH 4 1. Liberal and Extreme Ideologies in the Muslim World 2. Both ideologies are threats to the state of belief of Muslims a) Terms often associated with Islam include radicalism, fundamentalism and terrorism b) Portrayal of Islam that places emphasis on the human rational mind and allows for the freedom of thought to the interpretations of the principles of Islam. c) The ideologies stem from misrepresentations, ignorance, lies, and half-truths disseminated by western entertainment

PARAGRAPH 5 CONCLUSION 1. The western entertainment giving bad influences to Malaysia culture. 2. Individuals have their role to play, whether they be a person, a parent, an individual in society or a leader of the state.

APPENDIX A TOPIC: Western entertainment industry has negative influence on Malaysian culture 1. Introduction I. Western entertainment reaches the public by way of television, movies, video games, music, and novels. II. Western entertainment is a major factor in the escalation of violence in society and bring a negative influence to Malaysia culture that inspired people to set spouses on fire in their beds, lie down in the middle of highways, extort money by placing bombs in airplanes, rape, steal, murder, and commit numerous other shootings and assaults 2. Topic Sentence 1: Television channels give more broadcasting time to Western entertainment. 3. Topic Sentence 2: Western entertainment give a potential harms to young audiences

4. Topic Sentence 3: The Westerns ideologies are threats to the state of belief of Muslims 5. Concluding Paragraph : The western entertainment giving bad influences to Malaysia culture.