GMS (S) ENGLISH ESSAY GUIDE INTRODUCTION / CONCLUSION (Report, Formal Letter, Email) Introduction: 1.

(As requested) I have evaluated the three potential/shortlisted students/proposals. I strongly recommend 2. After careful consideration/evaluation of the proposals/suggestions/recommendations/ candidates, I strongly recommend/I would like to recommend/I am pleased to recommend After much consideration, he is the most deserving candidate. It is without doubt that he is the best candidate. It is without doubt that it is the most effective proposal. I have been tasked by you, the Principal, to recommend The suggested courses are namely _________________, __________________ and ________________. I propose we opt for I consulted members of the committee. Based on the feedback given by them, I would like to suggest/propose/recommend that Conclusion: 1. (Reiteration) .. It is with great sincerity that I hope you will approve our plan/recommendation/proposal/ suggestion. 2. (Reiteration) With all these considerations, I strongly recommend .. 3. (Reiteration) In summary, I strongly recommend.. 4. (Reiteration) ... It is with great sincerity that I hope you will give us your utmost support. 5. (Reiteration) .. Taking everything into account, I am confident that this is the best proposal. 6. (Reiteration) In closing, it is with sincere conviction that I propose/recommend/suggest.. 7. (Reiteration) .. All in all / In summary / In short, I recommend without reservation the proposal of Open House. 1

GMS (S) ENGLISH ESSAY GUIDE LETTER WRITING (Informal) Refer to Functional English Introduction: 1. I received your letter a couple of days ago. Im happy to note that everything is fine with you. Everyone here is fine and in good health. I received your letter about a week ago. Im very sorry for not having written to you earlier as Ive been busy with my school work. I hope you understand.

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Conclusion: 1. 2. 3. Well, I have to go now. Write to me soon. Ive stop writing here. Its pretty late. Ill write to you soon. Bye. I think Ill stop writing here. Keep in touch and hope to hear from you soon. Please convey my regards to everyone at home.

NEWSPAPER LETTER WRITING Refer to Functional English Introduction: 1. With reference to Abuse of Stray Cats which appeared in The Straits Times dated 26 May 2013, I think there should be strict enforcement of our laws.

Conclusion: 1. I would be grateful if you could publish my letter in your newspaper.

GMS (S) ENGLISH ESSAY GUIDE PERSUASIVE LANGUAGE 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. 11. I strongly feel we should opt for I strongly believe we should opt for I strongly recommend we should opt for I (would) recommend an Open House. I definitely prefer an Open House. In my opinion, we should opt for The Open House is more effective/ beneficial. I urge you to opt for I am sure you wish/want to opt for I am sure you will agree with me to opt for I hope all of you will agree with me to opt for

RHETORICAL QUESTION 1. 2. 3. 4. We dont want that, do we? (informal) It would be a great success, wouldnt it? Isnt this an effective way to help others? Dont you agree that this community project is worthy of our effort?

GMS (S) ENGLISH ESSAY GUIDE REGISTER / TERMINOLOGY feedback interact highlight showcase effective Question and Answer sessions non-interactive instill/ inculcate school values in our students to foster the bond between students and teachers tireless preparation for The school has moulded its students into useful citizens. to foster the spirit of teamwork and camaraderie a community of people bonded by common aim and ideals demonstrated their discipline, skills and teamwork hands on activities activities to cater to the young and adults The school spirit has soared. Team spiritedness is an important criterion. immense support curriculum a meaningful and fulfilling activity a worthy cause conducive fruitful activity primary goal / objective/aim meticulously planned It is a plus point. challenging and exciting activity requires coordination among members responsibility/obligation/duty/commitment His near perfect attendance record testifies to his commitment to the team. excellent playing skills a wide variety of activities a gamut of skills a range of core-curricular activities language proficiency comprehensive practical and useful skills relevant skills inculcate a sense of obligation/duty/responsibility to motivate/encourage consistent effort / strategies The schools academic and sporting achievements to foster a strong bond among them They possess team spiritedness. beneficial and meaningful course informative healthy and meaningful interaction commendable progress in academic success It will inspire confidence in our students. public spiritedness enriching experience a rewarding activity time-consuming persistent and relentless effort effective and workable ways to with/in highsight compassionate camaraderie requires teamwork and team spirit strength and discipline are essential attributes/traits/qualities my most impressionable and rewarding years with Geylang Methodist Secondary School confident and proactive

GMS (S) ENGLISH ESSAY GUIDE He is well-liked. ambitious ; enthusiastic about ; diligent He is very supportive of our ideas and He is undeniably committed to the club. efforts. Our hard work paid off. He contributed significantly to the school. He inspired others with his dedication/ tenacity/ determination/ perseverance / and hard work. With his inspiring leadership, he motivated others.He inspired us to excel. He emphasized/ stressed/ accentuated that the spirit of caring and sharing His gregarious nature and outgoing He is very skillful in mediating and restoring personality have made him well-liked by his goodwill in his team. teammates. He is modest and approachable. His patient approach/character is also an asset. His dedication/loyalty to the team is He is dedicated to the team. unquestionable. He strives to maintain high standards and His unwavering commitment/ dedication to the works towards his goals. sport is commendable. His extroverted, cheerful and outgoing Time and again, he has demonstrated personal nature endears him to this team mates. qualities such as maturity, persistence, initiative and the ability to cope with stress. He was president of the Photography Club The Open House is unquestioningly the most for two consecutive years. practical proposal. Undoubtedly / It cannot be denied that / Indeed/ Obviously / Evidently/ Needless to say/ Indisputably/ Undeniably/ Without a doubt/, the Open House is the best proposal. He has wit and a sense of humour. He is a worthy student of the school. He is untiring in his efforts to help others. He can be trusted to complete a given task. She is respected by her teammates. She is a team player; she cooperates well with others. She possesses the qualities/ attributes/ She is confident and focused. traits/ characteristics of a team player. You can trust her with a task. His ability to get along with his peers is an added trust. Her reasoning ability and problem-solving He is an excellent communicator. skills are praiseworthy/ commendable/ admirable. He knows how to motivate his teammates His excellent communication skills and good to strive for excellence. listening skills have been praised. His capacity for critical thinking is He is an eloquent speaker/communicator and noteworthy/ commendable/praiseworthy. has organizing skills. He is a confident speaker and possesses He has an outgoing personality. organizing skills. He is competent in both languages. He has organizational and leadership qualities/ traits/characteristics/ attributes. He is a worthy student of the school She is an important member of the school community. community. He has done the school proud. He shows concern for the welfare of the students. He has our interests in mind. She supplements her lessons with comprehensive notes. 5

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