My Magazine

Framing a shot, including and excluding elements as appropriate Using a variety of shot distances as appropriate

Minimal Level 1 10-23 Marks

Basic Level 2 24-35 Marks

Proficiency Level 3 36-47 Marks

Excellence Level 4 48-60 Marks I believe all my photos are framed well, adding to the aesthetic.

I feel I havent used a large enough range of photo angles to show off my ability. I feel that the models I have chosen fit well with my singer songwriter genre as they have the indie/pop look. The clothing I chose for my models to wear reflect the simplicity and floral designs which are associated with my genre. I havent edited any photos which I maybe should have adjusted slightly to add to the aesthetic, however the sizing fit the page well. The language register I have used fits with my genre, and my target audience perfectly. The only text integration with text is the photographer reference on the DPS, this is because the clean

Shooting material appropriate to the task set

Selecting Miseen-scne including colour, figure, lighting, objects and setting

Manipulating photographs as appropriate to the context for presentation, including cropping and resizing Accurately using language and register

Appropriately integrating illustration and text

Showing understanding of conventions of layout and page design

Showing awareness of the need for variety in fonts and text size Using ICT appropriately for the task set

design without overlapping appeals more to my audience. I feel the layout for my pages has worked efficiently, however it could be improved to ensure it is perfect. I feel I have used the correct amount of fonts to ensure I keep the tidy aesthetic. I used a large range of software to ensure each task was completed to the best of my ability, with regards to the extent I can use the software.

Summary Comment: I feel that my magazine is of a level 3 standard at the moment, this is because I feel even though my audience are more attracted to a clean and tidy aesthetic, I feel I could neaten my design up even more to ensure I have done this to the best of my ability. I feel that I may need to slightly rearrange my double paged spread as the centre margin cuts through part of one of my columns which will result in the text being stapled together. I believe the sizing and placing of my images on my contents page could be altered to ensure that it looks more like the style model I looked at. I also feel that I could use the blue in my colour palette slightly more on either the contents or the cover, as it isnt featured at all other than the floral banner.