Daniela Melipilln Figueroa.

Morphological/Grammatical Tense

Since the beginning of 2011, student mobilizations in Chile have occupied the centre of public debate. Students and teachers will march together; they are demanding free and better higher education. In fact, education problems are a very common theme today, because of the next presidential elections.
Style/ Word Choice

Since the beginning of 2011, student mobilizations in Chile have occupied the centre of public debate. Students and teachers marched together, demanding for a free and better higher education. In fact, educational problems are a very common theme today, because of the next presidential elections.

Demonstrators want to send a message to the next government showing the movements determination to continue demonstrating until their demands, which include free university and an end to profit-making in education.
Syntactical/ Omission of constituent (predicate)

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Demonstrators want to send a message to the next government showing the movements determination to continue protesting, until their demands (which include free superior education and the end of profit-making in education), are solved

The next government will have the responsibility of dealing with the ideas or the propositions of millions students who are knowledgeable about this theme...
Morphological/ Misuse Syntactical/ Omission of constituent

The next government will have the responsibility of dealing with the ideas, and the propositions of millions of students who are knowledgeable about this theme

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They are the middle-class people and they are the most affected as they do not have any type of benefit: monetary ability nor the rich, nor the support from the state. Consequently, inequality not only affect poor people, also affects students who want to study but do not have the chance of a help. Morphological/ Omission
Syntactical/ Omission of constituent

Morphological/ Misuse

They are the middle-class people, and they are the most affected, because they do not have any type of benefit : money, and the rich does not have the support from the state. Consequently, inequality not only affect poor people, it also affects students who want to study, but do not have the chance of receiving help.

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To sum up, the student movement, without incident as hooded and violence, is a good option to be heard.
Morphological/Plurality/ singulatity

To summarize, the student movement, without incidents as hooded and violence , is a good option to be heard.

Syntactical/ Omission of constituent

Syntactical/ Omission of constituent

Thus, the next government has to consider this problem as a priority, it has to solve those problems, inequality and quality, education is a right, is not fair that many children and many young people cannot study and they must look for other options just because their family cannot afford give them a good education.
Morphological/ Misuse Form/ Punctuation

Morphological/ Plurality/singularity

Thus, the next government has to consider this problem as a priority, It has to solve those problems, (inequality and quality), because education is a right, and is not fair that many children and young people cannot study, or they must look for other options, just because their families cannot afford give them a good education.