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Article 1 : My Personal Experience

Tittle : Opening My Eyes by Neha Metha









MAIN POINT
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Main point : Have a maid
name Geeta.
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Main point : Geeta was the victim
of teribble abuse.
Pharagraph 3
Main point : Whatever happens
between a husband and wife is a
private matter.
Pharagraph 4
Main point : Sees the evidence of
Geeta suffering teribble abuse was
right.
Pharagraph 5
Main point : Noticed about Deepika our
elder doughter had not been to college
for more than for months.
Pharagraph 6
Main point : Deepika planned to give up her
studies and marry a boy she had meet at
college.
Pharagraph 7
Main point : Deepika boyfriend had
dropped out of school, had no job and
drank a lot.
Pharagraph 8
Main point : Parents Deepika
tried to discpline her.
Deepika married.



















MAIN POINT
Pharagraph 9
Main point : After married Deepika
also a victim of teribble abuse.
Pharagraph 10
Main point : Believed that domestic violence
only happened to poor folks, and people
who rich and modern lived hapily after
marriage.
Pharagraph 11
Main point : Deepika being a silent
victim.
Pharagraph 12
Main point : Contact with a lawyer
about both Deepikas husband and
Geetas husband cases.
Pharagraph 13
Main point : Share our personal
experience about this violence.
Pharagraph 14
Main point : NGO create awareness
of the legal rights of women.
Pharagraph 15
Main point : Neha realised if she
intervened with Geeta abuse at an
early stage will set the right example for
her daughters.








VOCABULARY

Timid

Brutally

Plight

Devastated

Adamant

Voilence

Embroidery



















SENTENCES TYPES
Simple sentences
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1) Pharagraph 5
Instead, i carried on with
my life.

2) Pharagraph 3
He said that whatever
happens between a
husband and wife is
private matter.

3) Pharagraph 6
I was devastated.
Deepika had not been to
college for more than four
months.

4) Pharagraph 8
Deepika was adamant.


1) Pharagraph 1
My husband Kishan and i are originally
but but when he worked as senoir
bankers, he was posted to a new city
every three years.

2) Pharagraph 2
Her husband beat her brutally almost
every night, and spend all her earnings
on alcohol and gambling, money she
needed to raise her three young
children.

3) Pharagraph 4
Hearthbroken, i had no option but to
marry her off to drunkard.

1) Pharagraph 5
As i led her into the house, i saw
bruises on her face, neck and arms.

2) Pharagraph 6
I met with her professor, who had
some shocking news.

3) Pharagraph 4
I sensed her situation was going
from bad to worse, but except for a
small thought of kindness for her, i
did nothing.

4) Pharagraph 8
My husband and i always belived
that domestic violence only
happened to poor folks, and people
who were rich and modern lived
happily after marriage.

5) Pharagraph 10
Deepika started going out
for late night parties.

6) Pharagraph 12
I felt heartbroken.

7) Pharagraph 9
I also discovered that he
drank a lot.


5) Pharagraph 5
Kishan doing well, we had a loving
relationship, and were praud parents of two
beatiful daughters.

6) Pharagraph 13
Geeta and her children moved in with us,
and i did everything i could to ensure both
my maid and my daughter lived in an
abuse-free and loving enviroment.

7) Pharagraph 16
We shared our personal experiences with
these women and offered legal guidance.

8) Pharagraph 18
Deepika eventually remarried and now lives
happily in Chennai with her husband and
their newborn baby boy.
5) Pharagraph 15
I also contected a lawyer, who
filled court cases against both
Deepikas husband and Geetas
husband for divorced on the
grounds of domestic violence and
torture.

6) Pharagraph 9
It became too much for kishan,
who gave up his opposition to the
marriage.

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