G321 Media - Print Levels Name: Heather Allso Name: Sam Coley Name: Luke

odenham
Name: !amie Cla"on
Level 1 #$23 marks
The work for the main task is possibly
incomplete. There is minimal evidence in the
work of the creative use of any relevant technical
skills such as:
Producing material appropriate for the target
audience and task;
showing understanding of conventions of layout
and page design;
showing awareness of the need for variety in
fonts and text size;
accurately using language and register;
using IT appropriately for the task set;
appropriately integrating illustration and text;
shooting a variety of material appropriate to the
task set;
manipulating photographs as appropriate to the
context for presentation! including cropping and
resizing.
"The work done is complete
and there is a lot of evidence
done regarding the di#erent
elements of what a magazine
should include. $ll language
used is accurate and precise
to what the magazine states.
"There%s also a good variety
use of text style and font size
which makes certain
elements of the magazine
stand out more than others.
"&n this magazine the
work is all clearly
structured to its needs
however I think that if
the mast head was
slightly smaller! more
information could be
added to the front
cover.
"I also think that there
should be more than
one other photo on the
cover as it can look
boring with having 'ust
one. (aybe take a
photo of one of the
cover stories in action!
so for example;
someone playing sport
on the )eld or
something including
instruments! or a
school band etc.
This is good as it
shows all the main
features a magazine
would need.
There%s a good
understanding of
layout and where
things need to be
positioned on a
magazine.
&n this magazine the
work is all clearly
structured to its needs
however I think that
there are some
grammatical issues for
example the small *'%
on +une should be a
capital.
,ut overall the
magazine meets all
the criteria in this box.
Level 2 2%$3& marks
There is evidence of a "asi' level of ability in the
creative use of some of the following technical
skills:
Producing material appropriate for the target
audience and task;
showing understanding of conventions of layout
and page design;
showing awareness of the need for variety in
fonts and text size;
accurately using language and register;
using IT appropriately for the task set;
appropriately integrating illustration and text
shooting a variety of material appropriate to the
task set;
manipulating photographs as appropriate to the
context for presentation! including cropping and
resizing.
"The magazine cover has
been presented in boxes to
make a certain layout around
the page.
"-ach section has been
annotated and put there to )t
its need. .or example the
logo section is small
compared to the mast head
section which makes it easier
to read and see how much
space is re/uired for certain
things on the cover of the
magazine.
"The cover page
highlights the key
facts and states
exactly what the
magazine is about! it
all looks well"
structured and the
audience of people at
0ings 1orton ,oys
2chool is clear to see
due to the background
image and the way in
which there are
several logos of the
boys% school on them.
" I think from my own
perspective! the left
hand side of the
The material provided
is made for its
appropriate target
audience and is easily
recognised from the
pictures of the )rst
page.
There%s a variety of
font sizes however not
that much di#erence
in the style of font
which could be
ad'usted.
$ll language used is
correct except for
" The cover page
highlights the key facts
and states exactly
what the magazine is
about! it all looks well"
structured and the
audience of people at
0ings 1orton ,oys
2chool is clear to see
due to the background
image and the way in
which there are
several logos of the
boys% school on them.

I do think that again it
meets all the criteria in
the box! 'ust needs a
magazine looks a little
empty you can )ll this
by adding a few stories
and other images! 'ust
to make it look a little
more compact! like a
real magazine cover.
3ou could reduce the
mast head size slightly
to add a little more
text.
some slight errors
which can be recti)ed.
few little edits.
Level 3 3($%) marks
There is evidence of *ro+'ien'y in the creative
use of many of the following technical skills:
Producing material appropriate for the target
audience and task;
showing understanding of conventions of layout
and page design;
showing awareness of the need for variety in
fonts and text size;
accurately using language and register;
using IT appropriately for the task set;
appropriately integrating illustration and text;
shooting a variety of material appropriate to the
task set;
manipulating photographs as appropriate to the
context for presentation! including cropping and
resizing.

",oth pieces show good
detail and precise information
which will enable the reader
to be able to see things and
understand things without
being bored when looking at
the contents and front cover.
" $lso there is a good
consistency of the house style
which makes the magazine
cover look even more
professional. There%s a variety
of shot angles been taken
which adds di#erences to the
eye making the magazine
stand out amongst others
against certain things.
"&ne thing for improvement
would be that maybe try and
make the logo slightly
brighter so it stands out more
on the page cover.
"There is a good
element of creativity
on this magazine so
far as several thing
such as the mast head
text type stands out
amongst those which
haven%t been edited.
"$lso the house style
used is appropriate for
all of those who attend
an all"boys school. ,y
using colours like blue
and red can already be
identifying a speci)c
target audience
without having to read
it.
I think for one
improvement! maybe
add a pug or have a
cover line going right
across the magazine
'ust to make it look a
little more compact.
There%s a good
element of creativity in
both the contents and
front cover however I
think it can be
improved if you
changed the colour of
the background in
either the front cover
or the contents page.
,oth pieces show
good detail and
precise information
which will enable
the reader to be
able to see things
and understand
things without
being bored when
looking at the
contents and front
cover.
There%s a good link
between the
magazine and
contents page in
the fact that they
both show what
you%d expect to see
in a school
magazine for boys.
I think that the
contents could do
with some more
pages and page
numbers 'ust to
make it look a little
fuller.
Level % %,$(# marks
There is evidence of e-'ellen'e in the creative
use of most of the following technical skills:
Producing material appropriate for the target
" The target audience of
young teenagers who got to
the school and possibly more
to those who en'oy musical
"I think there are some
nice features of this
magazine like the way
text is aligned and text
"There%s a good use of
positioning within the
page and where
certain things go to
audience and task;
showing understanding of conventions of layout
and page design;
showing awareness of the need for variety in
fonts and text size;
accurately using language and register;
using IT appropriately for the task set;
appropriately integrating illustration and text;
shooting a variety of material appropriate to the
task set;
(anipulating photographs as appropriate to the
context for presentation! including cropping and
resizing.
elements.
" $s well as this! there%s a
good use of positioning within
the page and where certain
things go to stand out and
make the magazine look
professional.
" $ll photographs )t the text
surrounding it which is good
as it means there%s no
independent or odd things
that don%t give a clear
understanding of what it
actually is.

" .or improvement maybe
changing the actual font type
will help certain things on the
magazine stand out even
more.
$nd there%s a slight spelling
mistake error on the left hand
side of the page.
style however I don%t
think there%s enough
information in the on
what%s actually in the
magazine which can
make it look less
interesting than a
magazine with a lot
more information on it.
"I think that by
shrinking the mast
head text and the
other text on the page
ever so slightly you%ll
be able to add more
information in order to
make the magazine
look a little more
compact.
stand out and make
the magazine look
professional.