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In my opinion, it is obvious that school is a better place for preparing children to be an effective
and positive part of their society. Because children can see and be in touch with many other
classmates and friends of their own that are better reflective of their future society. For an
instance, I remember that we had different committees at school which prepared us for
accepting responsibilities in future. Today I am sure that it has really been effective in how
successful I am in my job.
To sum up, we should consider people have different ideas about how children can be taught to
be good for their society some people believe parents are better option to do this and others
believe schools have more capacity to fulfill this need. we one should try to bring up their
children how they can be helpful for their communities by making the best decisions.
Good paragraphing. Still you can boost your cohesion. Try to use more complex structures, say,
coordination and subordination in your sentences. Also be more careful when using new words.
You have many slight problems in applying vocabulary.
The pie chart shows the most important elements which caused less productivity of the
agricultural lands .it is clearly seen that over-grazing,deforestation and over cultivation have
had the highest portion .The table is comparing how these factors have influenced three
regions of the world.it is obvious that Europe has been badly affected and lost the highest
portion of its lands followed by Ocenia and North America.
As the pie chart shows over-grazing had the highest portion in causing land degradation and it
was 35% of all.it is closely followed by deforestation which has less portion of 30%. Just more
than a quarter of worldwide land degradation was caused by over cultivation(28%). Other
reasons for land degredation were less effective and were around 7%.
From the table it could be seen that deforestation has mostly affected Europe and they lost
around 10% of their lands whilst Oceania and north America were less affected by
deforestation.over cultivation was the main reason for losing lands in Europe whilst Oceania
was not affected by this at all.on the other hand over grazing was the main reason of losing
land in Oceania(11.3%) which was followed by Europe and North America. Europe lost just less
than a quarter of its land and Oceania lost about 13%. North America lost the least amount
which was about 5%.
In conclusion , it is seen that overgrazing was the main reason of land degradation in the world
and Europe lost the highest portion of its land due to these reasons.
Great report on Task I.