Escolar Documentos
Profissional Documentos
Cultura Documentos
by
Joy Leia Roach
B.A.B., Murray State University, 1999
M.B.A., Murray State University, 2001
A Dissertation
Submitted in Partial Fulfillment of the Requirements for the
Doctor of Philosophy Degree
Copyright 2006 by
Roach, Joy Leia
All rights reserved.
DISSERTATION APPROVAL
by
Joy Leia Roach
Approved by:
Dr. Marcia A. Anderson, Chair
Dr. Barbara Hagler
Dr. C. Keith Waugh
Dr. Joyce Killian
Dr. Nancy Gonzenbach
Graduate School
Southern Illinois University Carbondale
March 8, 2006
MAJOR PROFESSOR:
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DEDICATION
DADDY, thanks for always teaching me to strive, to seek, to find, and not to yield.
I miss your dry humor and quiet wisdom so much.
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ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS
As I near the end of this very long road, I find myself a changed person. There
have been several incredible people who have made this change possible and greatly
improved my life. Their sacrifices and never-ending encouragement have proven by
example that the effort of personal and professional development is always worthwhile.
The following paragraphs most certainly dont do these people justice for their perpetual
support. It is hoped that they already have some idea of the difference they have made.
I would like to thank Dr. Marcia Anderson, my advisor and friend, whom I will
admire and look up to all my life. Thanks for somehow seeing something promising in a
green as grass 24-year-old with a no-so-subtle accent. Dr. Anderson, I cant imagine
where I would be had our paths never crossed. Always inspiring, never disdainful,
through everything, you have been there. I will be forever grateful for all of the time and
effort you have put into me. I can only hope your standard of excellence is reflected in
this work.
My gratitude goes to my committee membersDrs. Keith Waugh, Barbara
Hagler, Joyce Killian and Nancy Gonzenbachthanks for believing in me. I greatly
appreciate all of the assistance you have provided and all of the kind words. Thanks also
to my other professors at SIUC who supplied me with invaluable knowledge and skills. I
will be forever grateful. Thanks goes in particular to Dr. Larry Bailey, for an exceptional
course in research methods to which I can refer throughout my career.
I would also like to express my gratitude to the panel of experts named in
Appendix B5, who helped me out at such a busy time in the year. They took their own
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personal time to give someone help, person unknown, to further the literature in the field
of business communication.
To all my friends in the department: Brenda, Shauna, Tony, Gerry, Sandy, Julia,
John, Mark, and especially you, James. I will miss you all.
Thanks goes to my kind colleagues in the College of Business at the University of
Tennessee at Martin, particularly Dr. Kay Durden, in the Department of Computer
Science and Information Systems. Dr. D., you put forth the extra mile to help me learn
the ropes of my new profession. You have offered continuing support, personal and
professional, and even sponsored this research with some of your own moneya grant
donation to the department specifically for me that you still think is anonymous. I respect
you as a professional and also as a friend.
Id also like to thank the crew back at Murray State who collectively helped me
get to this point and guided me into a Ph.D. program with the belief I am well suited for
an academic career. That is an intimidating projection, but Ill try my best to not let you
down. Thanks especially in this regard to Drs. Lila Waldman and Patsy Nichols, who
gave me the chance to be their research assistant, and through whom I learned much.
Last but foremost, Id like to thank the best parents ever. I dont know where to
start, Mom. You taught me I could achieve anything and in the face of any trying
circumstance. You always encourage me to keep going through all challengesnot least
is this work, despite our recent personal losses. I love you.
Thank you, Daddy. If I ever become blessed enough to have half of the
intellectual firepower you possessed underneath that quiet, modest veneer, Ill be
exceedingly proud.
TABLE OF CONTENTS
Abstract .................................................................................................................... i
Dedication .............................................................................................................. iii
Acknowledgements................................................................................................ iv
List of Tables .......................................................................................................... x
List of Figures ....................................................................................................... xii
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INTRODUCTION .......................................................................................1
Background of the Study .............................................................................1
Justification for the Study ............................................................................3
Purpose of the Study ....................................................................................7
Statement of the Problem.............................................................................7
Assumptions, Delimitations, and Limitations..............................................8
Definition of Terms......................................................................................9
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RESEARCH PROCEDURES....................................................................53
Introduction................................................................................................53
Research Design.........................................................................................53
Subjects ......................................................................................................54
Instrumentation ..........................................................................................55
Validity ................................................................................................59
Comparison for Nonresponse Bias ................................................61
Reliability.............................................................................................63
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REFERENCES ....................................................................................................140
APPENDICES
A. Author Permission..............................................................................157
B. Materials for Panel of Experts and Draft Instrument Formulation ....159
C. Materials for Pilot Study Instrument Administration and Review.....174
D. Business Professionals Written Message Creation Practices and
Productivity PerceptionsInstrumentation and Population
Correspondence..................................................................................189
E. Subject Comments and CROSSTABS Tables ...................................199
F. Human Subjects Committees Approvals...........................................240
Vita.......................................................................................................................243
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CHAPTER 1
INTRODUCTION
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educator what has changed in the field over their careers and the first answer will always
be technology (p. 18).
Moreover, perhaps no other specialty area in the study of business has been
touched by technology as deeply as communication; particularly, written communication.
Indeed, e-mail is currently one of the most widely used written forms of communication,
with roots only about 10 years old. In a study by the Meta Group in 2003, 80% of all
businesspersons on the job preferred to use e-mail for communication as opposed to the
phone (Nowak, 2003). However, while executives prefer e-mail to handle many business
activities, there is a point of concern.
According to a 2002 survey of business executives, three out of four respondents
to the survey felt the volume of information received had a negative impact on the
effectiveness of staff, reduced productivity and the quality of company communication.
In particular, it was also viewed as having a detrimental effect on individual stress levels
(British Computer Society [BCS], 2002a, 2). Perhaps of even greater concern was the
expressed opinion by 70% of respondents who indicated less than half of e-mails seen on
a daily basis were of good quality (BCS, 2002a, 6).
This hints at just how much written communication is used by executiveseven
with the exclusion in this example of other written forms, such as memos, letters, and
reports. It also reveals the possible disturbing condition in which much business
communication is encoded. In light of information such as this, in the workplace of
today, business professionals must have excellent communication skills in order to
process, analyze, and encode quality messages in such a fastidious setting. The
development of excellent communication skills helps to encourage effective message
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creation and facilitation, and thus serves to promote enhanced efficiency and
productivity.
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With the current deluge of written communication on the job, coupled with
progressing technology aimed at the fast production of written documents, the potential
remains for quality not up to standard to promote sound business decisions. This may
mean wasted time in unnecessary follow-up communication to clarify misunderstandings,
or worsea bad decision that was made due to a missed or misinterpreted meaning. In
fact, despite the efforts of business educators, studies are confirming the overwhelming
misuse of communication skills and products (Dawley & Anthony, 2003; Fraihat, 2003;
Frayer, 2002).
Future business professionals must not only be aware of ways to utilize current
and upcoming document creation technology, but also to sustain productivity at the
greatest level possible using this technology. Thus, productivity is synonymous with
accurate, not just timely, message creation. Moreover, business educators need to know
in detail what business professionals are doing on the job in order to better prepare
students for the technology and the skills set needed not only to survive, but also to be
efficient in the creation of business documents.
The importance of communication skills development cannot be overstated.
According to a recent study conducted by communication conglomerate Pitney Bowes
(as cited in Guffey, 2003), on an average day, an employee is involved with 141 written
messages and 49 non-written messagesa percentage of roughly 75% in favor of written
communication. This information encourages written communication as a scope of first
priority. In addition, Ober (2003) listed the advantages of written communication as the
ability to be verifiable and recorded. These factors lend themselves to greater analysis
for study and reliability than other forms of communication.
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Lastly, several sources have documented the inferiority of written communication
skills above other forms of communication, particularly in executive business settings.
The inferiority of managerial written communication skills, and thus the need for further
skills development, has been recently documented in such varied functions as accounting
(Porter, 1997), finance (Tanner & Cudd, 1999), operations management (Keller & Kros,
2000), information technology (Jacobs, 1998), and even research and development
(Blake, 1996).
Indeed, the study could have consequential implications for business
communication curricula, which spans all business functions. Business education
professionals will have a proactive role in the formulation of curricula in light of
technological development. Therefore, the importance of solid communication skills, the
increasing demands of written communication on the job, and the potential for falling
efficiency inculcate that the need is apparent to conduct a new investigation involving
written communication skills. The skills necessary for managers to create written
business communications and the way these skills may serve to enhance productivity
needs to be addressed.
Within that scope, this study attempted to reveal information about what methods
business professionals use on the job to create written communications, what types of
communications are created, the frequency of communication creation, professionals
perceptions of quality, and what specific methods of training best prepared them for the
creation of written communications. With the potential for much greater explicitly
business-related writing skills development in mind, productivity in particular is
examined.
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What is meant by productivity, usually a focus in operations management, has
changed relatively little over the years. One source from the area of human resources,
which is more apt for the purpose of the current study, stated that productivity is output
gained from a fixed amount of inputs (Sherman, Bohlander, & Snell, 1998, p. 20). A
more encompassing definition is thus stated:
The ideal productivity is reached when you have produced just the right amount
of your product (no shortage or waste) with just the right quality (not too cheap
and not too expensive) at just the right time (neither too early, nor too late) and
have done so at the least possible cost. (Tellier, 1978, p. 6)
Tellier further clarified that productivity has four basic dimensions: quantity,
quality, timeliness, and cost (p. 6). In the scope of written communication productivity,
these four factors are very telling. Moreover, the first of these factors, quantity, has
previously been shown to pose quite a problem. The formerly introduced concern of 141
written messages per day for the average business professional, regardless of assumed
message length, illustrates the unproductive gravity of this factor (Guffey, 2003).
Concerning quality, a national survey revealed that 80% of managers said employees
needed to work on their writing skills (Paal, 1996). Business writing trainers and
consultants are extremely busy with calls from executives to train staff on proper writing
procedures. Executives also note that bad writing skills become much worse with
increased responsibilities (Tyler, 2003).
Associated with the third productivity dimension, timeliness, many related
communications come in too late on which to base sound decisions; also, when they do
arrive, it is difficult for managers to sift through all of the irrelevant information
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incorporated with the message (Dawley & Anthony, 2003). Lastly, according to Nucleus
Research, American firms had a sunk cost related to only one aspect of lost
productivitynamely, going through useless e-mail communicationof an annual
average of $874 per employee, and that is considered to be a conservative estimate (cited
in Roper, 2003. While difficult to assign a comprehensive price, this fact, when meshed
with far greater sunk opportunity costs due to lost productivity (i.e., lost time clearing up
miscommunication, lost business due to slow communication, lost goodwill, etc.), gives
some idea of the true costs extent.
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Assumptions, Delimitations, and Limitations
The study includes the assumption that subjects are currently employed in some
professional business capacitymost likely in a managerial or executive function. It is
further assumed that these business professionals initiate informal and formal written
documents on a frequent basis and hold responsibility for these documents.
As the focus herein strictly involved written communication, the subject of the
study was delimited solely to that specific portion of the communication process. Also,
despite the fact that several phases are involved in the written document formulation
process, this study had the further delimitation of being isolated to the document creation
(or input) process. The method of creation and ways in which documents were
completed was the primary focus of the study. The many other phases involved with
written business communication, such as decoding messages and methods of final
message transmission, are potentially sound for additional investigation.
More procedural delimitations of the study included sample restrictions. The
sampling frame was restricted to include only domestic M.B.A. graduates. No M.B.A.
graduate with an international place of residence had the potential to be randomly
selected as a survey participant. Further, in an effort to isolate professionals most likely
involved with managerial and executive duties, business professionals without a graduate
degree were excluded. Lastly, as the population contained subjects that are 1994-2004
graduates in an effort to gain a greater understanding of current practices, the potential is
present for some type of bias due to time frame of formal business study and subsequent
graduation.
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Although the attempt was made to secure a simple random sample, limitations of
the study center on two possible threats to validity involved with sample biasesselfreported information and non-response bias. As data from subjects was self-reported via
survey questionnaire and not recorded by an independent source, the possibility remains
that the information may not be completely impartial or objective. Another participant
bias may occur in the event that there is any deviation between respondents and nonrespondents in respect to relevant data. The tendency of those who volunteered to
return the survey and let their perceptions be known, as opposed to non-respondents, may
indicate some unique implicit quality that may influence the greater results of the study.
However, the attempt to compare both groups to isolate if indeed such a threat could be
identified within the sample served to show no significant differences in responses (this
procedure is described more fully in Chapter 4).
Greater limitations focus on the fact that the population for the study was taken
from 1994-2004 graduates of three AACSB-accredited business programs housed in
universities in the United States regions of the Midwest and South. Thus, any
generalizations made as a result of sample data can only be generalized to that
population, and to no other MBA graduates and/or business professionals.
Definition of Terms
Business Professional Specifically, in the scope of this study, a businessperson who has
earned an M.B.A. from an AACSB-accredited program in the last decade (1994-2004).
This professional presumably is currently employed in a business capacity as a manager
or organizational representative.
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Creation Method For purposes of this study, creation method was defined as the series
of activity-based input options available to businesspersons at the present time that may
be utilized to fulfill written business communication creation needs. These options may
include (but are not limited to) the utilization of computer keyboarding, handwriting,
voice recognition, dictation to a personal assistant, and other methods for encoding
written messages.
Productivity The amount of output accomplished per labor and other resources invested
(Van Fleet & Peterson, 1994).
Written Business Communication Most forms of business communicationincluding
e-mail, announcements, memos, faxes, letters, newsletters, reports, proposals, and
manualsfall into this category (Guffey, 2003, p. 18).
Internal/External Written Business Communication Written messages intended for
stakeholder reception either inside the writers organization, such as superiors,
coworkers, and subordinates (internal); or outside the organization, with customers,
suppliers, the public, etc. (external) (Lehman & DuFrene, 2005).
Quality Devoid of major content errors such as misrepresented information, missing
information, or irrelevant information; also, relatively free of grammatical, punctuation,
and style errors.
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CHAPTER 2
REVIEW OF LITERATURE
Introduction
The following subsections outline research literature relevant to the purpose and
problem of the study. The purpose of the study was to contribute to a greater
understanding of factors affecting written business communication creation and the
possible impact upon written communication productivity. Specifically, the study sought
to identify factors affecting written business communication creation and professionals
perceptions of productivity. Moreover, the literature linked with this stated purpose, and
therefore associated with the following Review of Theoretical Literature, sought to
establish the theoretical basis and context of the study.
Whereas relevant literature associated with the purpose of the study provided a
basis for support of the purpose, the Review of Research Literature more directly
corresponded to the specific problem and research questions of the study. The problem
of this study was: what methods for written business communication creation are most
frequently being used by business professionals, and what are professionals perceptions
regarding productivity in creating these communications? Consequently, the Review of
Research Literature focused on specific measures of written communication productivity
and professionals perceptions regarding preparation and productivity. Lastly, the
Summary of Theoretical and Research Literature served to summarize the main points of
theoretical and research literature and to greater solidify the proposed contribution of the
current study in the scope of prior research.
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Review of Theoretical Literature
Workforce 2000, a Hudson Institute publication composed 13 years prior to its
titles focus, has served to assist workforce educators in gaining an understanding of the
millennial new wave of necessary skills. Ranking jobs according to skills, rather than
education, illustrates the rising requirements even more dramatically (Johnston &
Packer, 1987, p. xxi). In hindsight, now that the period of time in question has come,
Workforce 2000 seemed to be accurate about the volume of high skills needed by
employees. Also, regardless of the fact that the true extent of todays computer surge
was conceivably not fully realized by the work, it appeared to correctly outline some of
the major trends to be expected at the beginning of the 21st-century. Likewise, the
publication also stressed the role of educators to prepare citizens for the new business
world, particularly in the private sector.
While the work was not the only such publication to highlight future workforce
trends, it illustrated future needs in a concise but comprehensive manner. The possible
skills gap alluded to in a retrospective analysis of Workforce 2000 illustrates the
potential for undermined productivity, especially when it comes to information sharing.
Indeed, this concept illustrates the much more categorical situation with current written
communications, for it is the linkage between technology advent and ensuing skills
development in which gaps may occur. The fact that technology has exceeded prior
expectations by a huge margin, especially to the extent that it has bred increased written
communications, while user skills are continually shown to be short of standard, may be
evidence of such a gap.
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In fact, the subsequent counterpart to the aforementioned work, Workforce 2020
(Judy & DAmico, 1997), more profoundly places an emphasis on privatization as well as
increasing research and development. As the work implies, this increase should not only
serve to improve products and services offered, but also to increase the speed of business
and the frequency of transactions amid an aging workforce. Thus, how users of
technology have learned to adapt and continually hone skills, particularly in the business
office of the 21st-century, is a matter that merits further investigation. In fact, in a survey
of todays information professionals, it has been realized that 98% of staff require
computer skills as part of their everyday job, with three quarters (75 per cent) [sic] of
those surveyed acknowledging that time is wasted due to lack of computer knowledge
(British Computer Society, 2002b, 2).
Despite any possible reservations concerning user capitalization on new
technologies, research and development presses on amid budgets geared to greatly
increase data dispersion. True to ultimate function purpose, it is estimated that research
and development will continue to improve communication forms and technology as
competitive firms drive for greater competitive advantage. In a corporate-specific
example, Microsofts founder revealed that the company has set a new precedent of $6.8
billion to spur on new IT advances for the office (Gates, 2003). This R&D cost figure is
for the impending fiscal year, and spending seems likely to increase in the future. Indeed,
as evidenced by even a casual glance at todays typical business office, technology and
privatization have come together to create one central theme for communications
emanating from the business office: automationor perhaps even more apt:
computerization.
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Written Communication Technology Overview
From strong predictive workforce reports such as Workforce 2000, more specific
implications were ascertained. Moreover, it was discerned at least 20 years ago that
computerization would be a key to productive and efficient business communications, but
to an unknown extent (Inman, 1975). Since then, computerization has gathered speed so
quickly due to one major factornamely, a small price tag. Even the smallest businesses
have been able to afford the most recent communication-related hardware and software.
Since 1995 the price decline for computers has accelerated In response,
investment in computers has exploded, and the growth contribution of computer
hardware has increased more than fivefold, to 0.46 percentage point per year in
the late 1990s. Software and communications equipment, two other types of IT
assets, contributed an additional 0.30 percentage point (Jorgenson & Stiroh,
2000, p. 125)
As these measures of increase in total U.S. economic growth imply, the business
office, the atmosphere in which most daily transactions are conceived and executed by
professionals, has undergone a transformation in recent times. Today, offices are
equipped with varied technology for business communication, which include such items
as faxes, LANs, personal data assistants (PDAs), and phones that show correspondents on
screen. Moreover, one major aspect of the office in particular, the methods for written
document creation, reveals the major phases through which the office of the last two
decades has passed.
A 1984 word processing textbook revealed how most documents were created in
that decade by the statement that handwriting, dictation to a secretary, and machine
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dictation occur in the origination part of the document cycle (Bergerud & Gonzalez,
1984, p. 42). Also discussed as additional tools for word origination are the basic word
processor and a very early form of voice recognition software. The focus on the types of
documents created centered almost exclusively on letters and memos. The examination
of a mid-1980s Professional Secretaries International (PSI)-sponsored office professional
textbook also supported this content in regard to scope and topic (Schroeder, 1984).
Roughly a decade later, a 1995 PSI-sponsored exam review for office staff
concentrated on portable dictation units, desktop computers with word processing
software, and computer-aided transcription systems as methods for written
communication instigation. Documents described were also letters and memos, with the
limited addition of a new form of growing written communicatione-mails (Schroeder).
Additionally, as illustrated in this text, a focus in the 1990s seemed to be as much on new
ways of transmitting documents as on methods of document creation.
Lastly, a 2005 PSI text helps to illustrate perhaps the greatest decadal leap as far
as business document creation technology and types of documents created (Schroeder).
Word processing templates, e-mail, and voice recognition received substantial attention
as ways to encode messages. Information regarding memos and letters was still present;
in fact, instruction on the creation of business letters was broken down into six types,
including such respective concentrations as positive, routine, and persuasive. Also,
information regarding the composition of e-mails, particularly e-mail etiquette, is
covered. Other forms of written communications such as meeting minutes, new releases,
and itineraries, were also described. The examination of six 2003-2005 business
communication textbooks also supported these written communication topics as being the
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most important for business professionals. In addition, in a significant change from the
1990s, the composition of business reports made up a substantial amount of topical
coverage. Interestingly enough, research is also covered in the form of written sources
from which to collect information.
From this comparison, it should rightly be assumed that the large expansion of
information available on the types of documents created and method in the 2000s reflects
todays need for excellent written communication methods and skills. Moreover, input
technologies and their relation to document creation has become a great force to endeavor
to master through awareness and ensuing skills development. For example, the evolution
of input has progressed from its long history of manual typewriters through to electronic
typewriters and then to word processors and microcomputer programs such as Microsoft
Word. An impact upon business communication training in the future lies not only with
keyboard input, but with speech and writing recognition, which arguably may hold the
potential to eliminate typing altogether in the future.
In fact, this leap from keyboarding to voice recognition is at the forefront of
written communication technology and seems to represent a large portion of literature on
document instigation. Erthal, Roane, and Larsh (2003) have recognized this possible
trend and describe its possible benefits: these input devices increase productivity,
improve communication and computer skills, and reduce the risks of repetitive stress
injuries (p. 125). In addition, voice recognition is readily available to all business
professionals; in the current market, there are at least four widely used voice recognition
packages available (Szul & Bouder, 2003). More immediately applicable to productivity,
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Barksdale (2002) stated that a trained business professional could achieve 110-160 words
per minute with a 95% correctness rate.
However, despite the theoretically espoused benefits of voice recognition
software, it is not known how much business professionals actually use this technology
on the job. While there are various voice recognition software packages available with
different features, there also seems to be some disagreement on the preparation required
to use voice recognition. Fodor (2003) asserted that use of software requires little to no
preparation, while Savel (2002) has given examples of the need for training professionals
in the operation of such software and hardware, including the aspect of adjustment to
unique and individualized speech rhythms.
In support of Savel, it has been reported by one independent speech recognition
training firm that trainers have educated over 7,000 business educators in total
representing every U.S. state (Speaking Solutions, 2004). However, even with such
training to maximize productivity, it may be ideal to mix document creation methods.
One source describes an accuracy rate with the software of 80% to 90% and the use of an
administrative assistant to catch the remaining errors. Successful implementations use
transcriptionists to proof reports. When paired with transcription, voice recognition
improves the turnaround time for dictated reports (Parker, 2004, p. 41).
It is important to note, however, that some do not think voice recognition will
completely replace keyboarding in the near future and indicate these skills should be
complementary in nature (Bartholome, 1991; Jennings, 2001; Wiggs, 1993). As implied
by the aforementioned use of transcriptionists, there also seems to be a marginal base still
present for dictation methods, especially in medical and legal firms (Kennedy &
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Littenberg, 2004; Ricutti, 2003; Schuerenberg, 2003). In sum, a review of literature
includes strong topical coverage of voice recognition in particular as the newest office
technology. However, coverage also suggests the continued use of keyboarding,
dictation, and administrative assistants as resources. These utilization choices represent
the strong need for professionals to be comfortable and therefore productive with the
creation of written communication. The major skills involved with this creation,
especially in light of described creation methods, come together to comprise one of the
most necessary overall business skills sets. In fact, employers, employees, and business
faculty deem written business communication skills one of the very most important to
firm performance.
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study in which communication skills ranked on top of all other skills, including specific
technical skills for the job. This information has been backed by numerous studies in
regard to employers desire for excellent communication skills on the part of employees
(Gardner & Liu, 1997; Rubin & Morreale, 2000; Scheetz, 1996; Tanyel, Mitchell, &
McAlum, 1999).
More specifically geared to a particular function, Johnson and Johnson (1995)
found that in the field of accounting (often a target of business communication
researchers), the mention of good communication skills increased 750% over two
decades in job ads for the profession. Also, in a study of accountants, including CPAs,
written communication skills ranked second in professional skills business educators
should develop in future accountants. This ranking was only behind the allencompassing analytical/critical thinking skills, but above oral communication skills.
Also behind written communication skills were teamwork, decision-making, leadership,
even professional demeanor, and interestingly enough, computing technology
(Burnett, 2003). This finding complements those of Nellermoe, Weirich, and Reinstein
(1999), who established that accounting professionals overwhelmingly agreed to the new
writing component of the CPA exam and advocated the use of information technology
templates to assist with the composition of documents.
It is clear that employers seek out excellent written communication skills, a need
that concurs with employees views. More generally suited across all business functions,
Storms (1983) found that 97% of surveyed business professionals stated that writing was
important; more specifically, 88% said that it was important for advancement (p. 15).
Also, a survey of managers also indicated that the need for written composition skills
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dominated other skills, including oral skills. The finding was that memos, reports, letters,
and proposals were the most important types of overall communication (Alexander,
1992). In a deeper focus on future employee performance and employer preference, one
study indicated that 89.1% of employers expressly asked for solid written communication
skills on the part of employees as a factor for success (Connolly, Hoggat, & Honl, 1999).
More recently, employers placed written (and oral) communication skills at the top in
regard to importance, and computer literacy second; creation skills that greatly
complement each other (Moody, Stewart, & Bolt-Lee, 2002).
In addition, a National Commission on Writing study showed that three-fourths of
corporate human resource directors reported that two-thirds of salaried employees held
responsibility for substantive writing (National Commission, 2004). The future of this
situation has the potential to reach even more serious levels as the Commission also
pointed out the widely-recognized trend that service industries are expected to increase in
the next few years. The Commission found that at least 80% of all employees in service
organizations held intensive writing responsibility.
Likewise, future employees, those in direct transition from business programs to
employment as business professionals, solidify the importance of written
communications across the phases of the career cycle. Communication skills were shown
to be more important to job applicants in the job search than any other innate or earned
quality, including GPA and obtained degree (Curtis, Winsor, & Stephens, 1989). These
future professionals no doubt inferred the importance of communication skills from being
the first skills employers examine and base a hiring decision uponwriting skill in the
form of an employment cover letter, and oral skills in the job interview. It has been
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shown that 86% of employers hold poorly written application materials against a job
candidate (National Commission, 2004, p. 10). Further, employers seeking MBA
graduates have been shown to value oral and written communication skills as the major
factors in the final hiring decision (Dowd & Liedtka, 1994).
The need for excellent communication skills on the part of business graduates is
expressed not only by employers and employees, but by professionals in academia as
well. Business school department chairs have stood firm on written communication
skills. Wardrope (2002) showed that business school leaders (i.e., department chairs and
program directors) perceive writing skills to be more important to business
communication courses than oral communication, communication technology skills,
interpersonal communication, group communication, listening, and inter-cultural
communication. Plutsky (1996) also received a similar response from business faculty as
to the potential business communication needs of graduates.
Even more specifically, business communication professionals themselves were
asked in 1999 by Wardrope and Bayless to rank 30 competencies based on importance
for the workplace. Of those 30, the top 5 all came from the realm of written
communication. Professionals identified these five to be writing mechanics, memo
writing, persuasive writing, positive message writing, and report writing.
Thus, business professionals who represent employers and employees, as well as
business educators, are unanimous in their regard for the necessity of written
communication competency. As shown, written skills have received premium attention
by these groups due to the fast-paced business environment of rising competition,
correspondence, and technology (Van der Colff, 2004). The combination of technology
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through which to produce written communications and the need for solid written
communication skills merge to demand productive document creation. Much of this
productivity lies within the realm of proper preparation of professionals to achieve
streamlined document creation in the workplace.
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which professionals may train for creating productive written business communication:
the secondary level, postsecondary business education programs, postsecondary
traditional business studies, and corporate training.
The initial contact a future business professional has with document creation may
come in secondary programs. However, this is not always the case; it is in fact becoming
a rarity. An example of this situation lies with keyboarding, once a staple of secondary
programs and currently necessary for most business professionals. Computers maintain a
formidable presence in millions of offices today, yet keyboarding training, the most basic
skill involved with almost anything done in a timely manner on the computer, has a slim
backing in education.
Many studies have shown that good keyboarding skills boost productivity on the
job (Schueler, 1989; Wentling, 1990; Zhao, 1996). However, Jennings (2001) found that
at the middle school level, which consensus generally recommends is the optimum level
to offer such training, four states required keyboarding training and eight states indicated
the curriculum choice was made by independent districts. In sum, keyboarding was not
required by a majority of states at neither the middle nor high school levels. In addition,
34.3% of all responding states that did offer keyboarding revealed that it did not even
count as a core curriculum elective that would be sufficient for graduation (Jennings,
2001, p. 47). This situation is almost bipolar to a 1961 study that cited 91% of schools
offered typing as a full one-year course (United Business Education Association, 1961).
In perhaps more far-reaching implications, a study of secondary business teachers
by Hosler, Jacobson, and James (2003) found that courses most recently added to the
curriculum were personal finance, web page design, and business law. The courses most
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often dropped by institutions all related to office productivity: speedwriting, business
procedures, and keyboarding. Thus, this overall choice regarding secondary business
education curricula may serve to ultimately impact workplace written communication
productivity.
However, a comprehensive examination of written communication productivity
training must encompass both secondary and postsecondary training. As a fundamental
discipline in which information creation and processing as well as overall communication
skills are developed, postsecondary business education programs have long attempted to
enhance written communication skills. Communication skills development,
accomplished under the umbrella of business education, transfers to tasks on the job in
regard to computer hardware and software, written and oral communication, and various
business subject-specific training. But, this area also is not without concern. Regarding
issues in business education that have recently come to light, one main concern seems
particularly troublesome: business education programs in colleges and universities with
low enrollment and falling teacher numbers.
Business education has suffered a declining role in [our] educational institutions
that is distressing and artfully ignored (Lundgren, 1999, p. 55). This less than covert
statement is indeed distressing, but seems to have irrefutable truth. In a linear regression
analysis revealed by Lundgren, NABTE (National Association for Business Teacher
Education) will simply cease to exist in 15 years. In 1980, NABTE schools numbered
300; in the year 2000, 140; a drop of more than half. Indeed, a 1997-1998 NABTE
survey found undergraduate enrollments are about 40 percent of what they were 10
years ago (Okula, 1999, p. 8). If teachers at the secondary level are not equipped to
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enhance future professionals training, it seems very unlikely that enrollment will
increase and the problem of inferior business writing skills will ultimately be alleviated.
In fact, it is no overstatement that the postsecondary level seems to be greatly
responsible for the decline in secondary business education programs. College and
university-level programs could be partly responsible for the fall in secondary business
programs due to the lack of formally trained secondary business teachers that earn
degrees to teach in secondary programs. Further, Okula (1999) voiced other problems
such as shrinking business education doctoral programs as well as decreasing numbers of
doctoral candidates, which historically have produced many member of business
communication faculty.
Many of the business communication faculty members fill positions within
postsecondary core business programs. Thus, besides secondary and specialized
postsecondary business education programs, there continues to be the often-cited
business communication core courses in postsecondary traditional business programs
that are aimed to develop the majority of professionals written communication skills.
Unlike the more specialized business education programs, this training is geared to
influence most business majors, from the study of accounting to management. It is
specialized for those who will imminently be business professionals in the workplace.
In fact, the AACSB (Association for the Advancement of Collegiate Schools of
Business), the major accrediting agency of postsecondary business programs worldwide,
maintains that communication training and development are factors to be integrated with
student outcomes (AACSB, 2004; AACSB, 2006). However, as voiced by such agencies
as the Association for Business Communication, the focus on business communication
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could be much more prominent and specific (ABC, 2002). Despite the expected role of
communication training in accredited programs via the newly adopted (2003) and revised
(2004 and 2006) assurance of learning standards (which are focused on learning
outcomes), stipulations for communication skills development therein seem to remain
vague. This vagueness no doubt may stem from the AACSBs effort to base
accreditation decisions based upon the ultimate mission statement of respective
institutions business programs.
Indeed, the new standards only state that: normally, the curriculum
management process will result in an undergraduate degree program that includes
learning experiences in such general knowledge and skill areas as: communication
abilities, ethical understanding and reasoning abilities, analytic skills, use of information
technology (AACSB, 2004, p. 15). This stipulation is so vague, in fact, that Hoggatt
(2003) found schools are satisfying AACSB accreditation with courses such as speech
and entry-level English. Hoggatt indicated that only 214 of 570 AACSB-accredited
institutions expressly required a communication course expressly geared for business
correspondence in their core.
Incidentally, the undergraduate business program ranked as the top in the country
in 2006 and for the past several years in a row by U.S. News and World Report is one of
the few to require two communication courses. This particular program required a course
in team communication (which seems to emphasize oral, interpersonal skills, based upon
information from the course description) and one written requirement. This written
requirement offers a choice from a battery of courses entitled writing about courses,
according to the undergraduate course catalog. Even more telling, the catalog specifies
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the writing courses in this way: besides practicing writing skills, "writing about" courses
will provide an opportunity to explore a liberal arts subject area (University of
Pennsylvania, 2004).
This isolated example implies a potentially greater masked problemstudents
may get little written training in regard to the business situations they may find
themselves involved with in the near future. Further, there is no requirement for
communication training in M.B.A. or other graduate business programs (AACSB, 2004;
AACSB, 2006). Although Bogert and Butt (1996) showed a presence of graduate
business communication courses, it is unclear how many programs require such courses.
This lack of training is further confirmed by studies that ascertained level of degree
achieved had no bearing on written communication competencies of managers (Ariss &
Timmins, 1989; Jackson, 1990; and McEwen, 1998).
With such a possible absence of detailed training specifically in regard to written
business communication (as opposed to other forms of communication), future business
professionals are sometimes ill-prepared to compose a simple form of business writing,
such as a business letter or report. Even further, written communication is possibly even
more neglected, as oral skills often take priority. This is despite the noted importance of
written communication skills by employers, employees, and business faculty.
As an aside, professionals in other specialized areas such as engineering have
lamented the fact that missed training in technical writing and such a basic skill as
keyboarding has undermined their productivity (Ryker, 1999; Vest, Long, & Anderson,
1996). This cross-functional information seems directly relevant to the overall
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preparation of professionals to create written communications and the productivity
involved with this creation.
In light of this situation, it is not surprising that Tallinghast (1994) reported that
84% of companies with at least 100 employees and over 90% of those with over 1,000
employees offered internal corporate communication training. Formal institutional
business programs are failing to properly prepare professionals for written
communication, which eventually must become evident to both employees and
employers. These poor communication skills are addressed by corporate trainers in the
development of fundamental methods of business writing. Middle managers receive
training in the creation of productive communicationsthe most often of any employed
group (McEwen, 1997). Also, Moore and Mulcahy found in 1991 that more than a half
of all business graduates have received formal training on the job regarding
communication technology. More recently, it has been shown that 40% of large
corporations provided writing training in 2004 for salaried employees, who, most
likely, are college graduates (National Commission, 2004, p. 17). This finding links with
recent evidence that graduates of even the most prestigious universities are disappointed
with the writing skills they obtained in college (Bartlett, 2003).
It is clear that corporate training is a major key to written communication
development as a method to close the communication skills gap, and it is this realm in
particular that holds the most consequence for the current study. The specific
development of written communication skills has the potential to directly boost
productivity in several waysthrough the creation of quality written communications
and saved costs associated with input factors. Thus, preparation enhances productivity
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through streamlined methods of document creation, effective document types, minimized
direct costs, and saved opportunity costs.
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Written Communication Productivity Overview
Despite the call some time ago by Hyslop (1981) for the specific boost of
efficiency in regard to written communication in a world where work hours dont seem to
expand, but daily information does, there have been very few studies on such a topic.
Perhaps the major reason for this lack of research lies with the very difficult nature of the
construct of productivity, for which there seems to be no universal term. One longstanding attempt to establish a relationship simply asked presidents of the 100 largest
U.S. corporations in the mid-1950s about their perceptions regarding a communication
and productivity linkage. At that time, 96% believed there was a strong link (Lull, Frank,
& Pierson, 1955). Although more recent studies in which the general relationship
between communication and productivity has been voiced as strong (Downs, Clampitt, &
Pfeiffer, 1988), some have more mixed results, especially when taking into account more
personal communication against corporate-wide messages (Clampitt, 1983; Clampitt &
Downs, 1993).
One undeniable fact is that the seemingly never-ending debate whether
communication and office technology has boosted productivity still continues. No
communication medium illustrates this disagreement better than e-mail. Although some
professionals have voiced their opinions as a whole that office computerization has
helped to increase productivity, especially e-mail (Swartz, 2003), other sources have
concentrated on the prospect that infoglut and time wasted due to confusion and
disgruntlement impacts professionals negatively (Jackson, Dawson, & Wilson, 2003). In
a related, but very broad-based sense of the problem, Roach (1991) cited in a study
involving office professionals that office/information workers actually saw a decrease of
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6.6% and more blue collar production workers saw an increase in productivity by
16.9% from the mid-1970s to the mid-1980s. It has also been explicitly stated that
American companies received single-digit percentage increases in productivity in
exchange for the trillions they spent on technology in the 1980s (McCune, 1994, p. 55).
A more optimistic but perhaps ulterior motivated view is held by Microsofts
founder. Gates (2001) stated that, in the decade ahead, I can predict that we will
provide over twice the productivity improvement that we provided in the 90s ( 16).
However, this statement was in the context of acknowledged computer crashes, ongoing
technical problems, and the difficulty of businesspersons using software programs in the
beginning of the 2000s.
However holistically seen by experts, business professionals have assisted with
some measures that give an indication that effective and efficient communication is
linked with boosted productivity. On a more micro scale, Stitt (1988) found that many
respondents indicated that a computer has greatly enhanced their productivity. But, these
professionals also stated that even greater office productivity could come in the form of
increased employee motivation and more advanced office equipment (p. 77). This
was especially evident in the service sector of the study, as these persons may conduct a
greater percentage of external communication.
Indeed, recent research has suggested that solid business communication does
improve overall productivity and performance over the long-run, especially when it
comes to written communications (Roth, 1993; Zhao & Alexander, 2004). On a more
independent scale, Penley, Alexander, Jernigan, and Henwood (1991) found that better
communication skills deem employees high-performing managers over lower-
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performing professionals. This coincides with the more obvious linkage of
communication ability as a whole to favorable business professionals job evaluations
and career advancement (Bednar, 1982; Sypher & Sypher, 1983). On an organizational
scale, a study by Mascolini (1988), revealed that 49 companies listed on the NYSE that
have won at least two communication awards (from the International Association of
Business Communicators) showed that productive communication does correspond to
overall firm performance. In fact, 67% (33 of 49) of these award-winning companies
beat their competitors in overall performance in three respective industries.
In sum, despite studies claiming falling office productivity, the real truth may be
hidden in the difficult nature of the construct when it comes to office productivity.
Written communication productivity may be falling due to simple things such as bad
measurement of inputs and outputs, learning lags, and mismanagement of technology
(Brynjolfsson, 1993).
Thus, to obtain a better sense of productivity in written business communications,
it is perhaps helpful to break the construct down into its major four parts. Although there
are differing methods of the determination of what constitutes productivity, the
aforementioned definition by Tellier (1978) includes the components of quantity, quality,
timeliness, and cost. These four factors duly relate to inputs measured against outputs
and also integrate with the research questions of the study. Thus, these four productivity
measures relate to prior research and serve as a basis by which to frame obtained
information from the current study.
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Productivity measure: Quantity of written communication. According to the
United States Census Bureau in 2001, of the majority (54.2%) of workers who use
computers, 67.2% of employees on the job used word processing packages and desktop
publishing; also 72.2% used e-mail or the Internet. Also, there are an estimated
71,782,000 computers currently being used at work to create differing forms of written
communication (cited in Snyder, 2001). Indeed, the sheer quantity of specific types of
communications created by business professionals gives some idea of the impact business
writing has on the workplace. In fact, Boles (1997) reported a study of several
conglomerates that revealed the average Fortune 1000 employee sends and receives about
178 messages per day; no doubt a large amount of those are written messages.
More specifically suited to written communication, Jennings and Vice (1999)
found that executives in multi-national corporations (MNCs) wrote 2 to 5 messages a
day; however, with e-mail added in, the figure rose to 50 and 100 a week. For these
executives, the typical length of a document was one to two pages. More specifically, to
determine just what types of written documents are being created, Storms (1983) cited
that the most often written type by far was the memo. In fact, Storms revealed that 37%
of professionals indicated they use this form often; 34% indicated very often. Other
messages composed on a regular basis and ranked by frequency respectively included the
business letter, short reports (less than five pages), instructions, external proposals,
internal proposals, and guidelines. Perhaps surprisingly, as Storms (1983) surveyed
business professionals with a business degree, there was no statistical significance found
between undergraduate major and type of communication most created.
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This order of type of communication created by frequency was confirmed a year
later. Brinkley (1984) surveyed professionals, some of whom had completed an
undergraduate course of some type in business communication, and found the same
resultsmemos were the most frequently written, then letters, then reports. This trend
was also very recently confirmed (National Commission, 2004). Incidentally, Alexander
(1992) and Wiggs (1992) also upheld the memo as the most frequently composed
document. Finally, after a decade of technological advancement in the realm of written
communications, Wiggs (1992) performed a similar study, including new, but certainly
not fully developed, forms of communication such as e-mail. Few respondents at that
time indicated that e-mail was a type of document regularly created, but a large
percentage foresaw greatly increased use of e-mail in the future. Indeed, the National
Commission on Writing in 2004 found that 95% of responding employees indicated that
e-mail was used at least frequently on the job.
Overall, quantity of written communications created, a measure of input and
output in regard to productivity, is also tied to time. The positive relationship between
effort and quantity produced involves depleted time. The tie of quantity and time as
components of productivity is further solidified by the tie between timeliness and cost.
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the job is very substantial; however, various sources cite differing total percentages of
time engaged in this activity.
Storms (1983) found that managers spend slightly more than one full day per
week solely on written communicationsthe mean percentage of time allocated for total
writing at work was 25%. Anderson (1985) determined that most college-degreed
professionals spend at least 20% of their overall on-the-job time writing. Indeed, persons
employed for more than three years write significantly more. There seems to be a very
direct relationship between responsibility, career advancement, and writing. However,
large amounts of writing are a part of many employees working day, and not just for
executives and middle management. A large amount of writing has been shown to be
representative of line supervisors as well. Front-line managers in manufacturing were
surveyed by Mabrito (1997), who found that the average supervisor spent between 8 and
14 hours per week writing, the equivalent of approximately one-fourth of every week.
This particular sample of front-line supervisors spent most of the time writing short
reports and step-by-step instructions.
As for the newest form of written communication, e-mail, Swartz (2003) reported
that workers in the United States with e-mail capability spend a very substantial amount
of time per day dealing with this form of written message. In fact, there are 50 million
workers who spend some time each working day on navigation through e-mail. In fact,
in a study by the Forbes and Gartner Groups (cited in Martin, 2004) it was discovered
that 82% of top executives, including CEOs, check e-mail before work and only 6%
allow an assistant to do that particular task for them.
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With the quantity and time consumed per day on written messages overall, the
method of correspondence has a great impact on time, and therefore profit margin. The
quantity and type of written communication created directly relates to productivity;
however, the method utilized for creation perhaps even more greatly has a bearing on the
productivity involved with message creation. Moreover, overall time consumed with
writing can be reduced with the most productive mix of written communication creation
types and methods used to create those types.
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keying documents from longhand. There was also a presence of shorthand (27%),
machine transcription (48%), and a strong showing of assistants who key the rough drafts
composed by their manager (89%). In a linkage with office automation and method,
incidentally, the same study reported that 78% of administrative assistants used a
typewriter; only 6% used a modem in 1988 to complete communications for the
professional.
Even as late as 1991, Andera found that professionals, most of whom held
degrees, still used and also preferred to create written communications by using the
handwritten technique. Coming in second was dictation to machine in use (22%) and
expressed preference for use, even if that method of creation was unavailable (29%). The
next used method was to personally type the communication (19%); although at that
point, professionals preferred dictation to secretary (18%). The least preferred method
was to personally type the communication. Wiggs (1992) also discovered the wide usage
of handwritten communications, particularly among older managers.
This strong result for handwritten messages is despite a study by Bennett, Durand,
and Betty (1990) which showed that managers saw communications composed with word
processing capabilities as more clear and professional than handwritten documents.
However, these studies did not clarify to whom the communication was targeted. If the
personal assistant was the recipient of the handwritten communication, that may put a
different slant on some of the methods chosen for document instigation.
One method of creation of interest in particular at this point in time is dictation.
In the past, Storms (1983) found dictation in some form was used by more experienced
degree-holders on the job47% used dictation. However, in 1992, Alexander (1992)
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found that dictation was very rarely used, if at all. Going further on the subject, Condon,
Hoggatt, Missling, and Weston (1988) compared three types of transcription to determine
which is faster and most accurate. In the most likely normal office situation, dictation
was shown to be faster than handwriting. According to the study, machine dictation had
a speed advantage, but shorthand dictation had an accuracy advantage. Despite the
implications for boosted productivity, it remained unclear which method, however, was
utilized more.
However, today, shorthand in particular has fallen out of favor. Even
professionals administrative assistants scarcely use shorthand. The Management Centre
Europe (MCE) (2001) reported that a poll of administrative assistants by the combined
organizations of European Management Assistants and the American Management
Association determined that less than half of these office professionals use shorthand on a
regular basis.
Despite the past methods used to create the different types of communication,
administrative assistants seem to be greatly used as a resource to finalize documents.
Also, there is a strong showing that technical writers in industry choose their own desk
PCs most often when writing (Porter, 1989); Wiggs (1992) also confirmed this trend.
As shown, literature suggested trends such as the demise of the once-strong
dictation and rise of the personal PC, signs of how much technology is relevant to
productivity. The two factors of type and method are intertwined with and impact the
two productivity measures of timeliness and cost. Thus, opportunity cost represents the
crux of productivity in this regard. Time spent on written documents constitutes an
opportunity cost of sacrificing the time that could be spent on another managerial task.
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The time saved by creating the most efficient types of communications in the most
efficient manner in the promotion of message clarity saves money through time.
Money is also saved with efficient type and method of creation on the part of the
decoder of the message. Any cost involved with confusion due to unclearness of a
message or cost involved with further unnecessary correspondence regarding the original
message can be alleviated with efficient communication. Lastly, the premise of saved
time and cost also greatly relates to the fourth and final micro-measure of written
communication productivity: quality.
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In one of the more effusive statements from literature about the situation, Bates
(1984) asserted:
Even as the general education level has increased, technical organizations have
allowed their written communications to deteriorate. Reasons for the
deterioration include: 1. prizing quantity over quality in communication, 2. the
low value placed on language skills by technicians, 3. dependency on others to
correct writing, 4. social disregard for old rules of grammar and writing, and 5.
the pace of activity today, which excuses poor writing. (p. 89 [abstract])
These concerns for the quality of managerial written communication have been
confirmed by many studies, most of which inculcated some form of curricular focus.
Also, one of the more specific studies was an independent evaluation of actual written
messages from professionals. Goodin and Swerdlow (1987) found troublesome
mistakes in at least 25% in the writing of business professionals on the job. Also, in
another study, peers were used to evaluate writing. In the eyes of more senior CPAs, new
hires scored miserably on such aspects as word usage, style, and grammar (Nelson,
Moncada, & Smith, 1996). Also, after considerable experience in the evaluation of
professionals writing, Hyslop (1981) advocated compelling students to plan the message,
to reach for clarity in writing, and, after core skills have been developed, to impose time
restrictions for business writing exercises to encourage improved productivity.
In a great expansion of the problem involving these evaluations, this information
is coupled with the fact that employers have repeatedly ranked good communication
skills as the number one priority on the job. Unfortunately, unless educators potentially
alleviate this problem, quality may be a concern for future professionals. In fact, recent
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National Assessment of Educational Progress (NAEP) writing exam results have
indicated that that the next wave of professionals will need vast development in writing
skills, as many children are not near the proficient level (NAEP, 2002).
However, the news isnt all bad. The National Commission on Writing (2004),
which calls writing the neglected R, found that most employees meet writing
requirements for their firms, but also acknowledged that the Business Roundtable
corporations surveyed get their pick of the best graduates from the finest colleges and
universities (p. 13). Jennings and Vice (1999) found that executives in MNCs wrote
quite well in an analysis of routine documents such as memos and letters. However,
some problems were still ascertained in tone, an abundance of clichs, and punctuation
problems (comma usage was a specific focus). Linking with other measures of
productivity, executives involved in this study stressed timeliness in documents, stating
that late documents were grounds for dismissal on the job.
Due to the imperative decision-making nature based upon the quality of
managerial written communications, it is no surprise that Krapels and Davis (2000) cited
greater in-house communication training for those professionals with college degrees or
some college credit. To its credit, it was confirmed that corporate-sponsored
communications training and seminars improved turnaround time for written
communication and encouraged more productive correspondence (Yedidia et al., 2003).
Corporate training also improved communication effectiveness overall (Tavernier, 1980;
Tubbs & Widgery, 1978). Realizing the linking situation regarding quality and
preparation for productivity, literature is not without professionals own opinions of how
to better prepare future employees for more productive written communications.
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Professionals Perceptions of Preparation
As corporate training seems to be paying off, it is essential for material learned to
reach future employees at a much earlier time than in such sessions. This is confirmed by
the need to retrain MBAs to the point of a septuplet increase in training hours (from 41 to
241) in the last decade and possibly even more at the current time (Eberhardt, McGee, &
Moser, 1997; Linder & Smith, 1992). To get specifics of suggestions for communication
training based upon workplace experience, Hynes and Bhatia (1996) surveyed
professionals with a graduate degree in business. Most were managers, but the sample
also included programmers, accountants, and financial officers. Of those who had a
managerial communications course, one of the course topics selected in written
communications that was seen to help the most was writing letters and memos.
Written communication topics that graduates most wanted to see become included
in the curriculum were writing manuals, policies, or procedures; that need was indicated
by almost half of the respondents. Another factor relevant to written communication
preparation was the call for a greater concentration on research reports, as well as word
processing and computer graphics. Also, documents such as thank you notes and letters
of congratulations were deemed difficult to compose due to lack of solid goal (Jennings
& Vice, 1999).
Getting more into style elements, such as writing mechanics, Plutsky (1996)
determined more focused aspects in regard to writing that professionals think should be
included in business communication curricula and training. These six topics in order of
preference are English usage, style, research, letters and memos, and word usage. Topics
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that should be excluded, according to the practicing professionals, include the dictation
method of creation.
As a last and essential point, Seshardi and Theye (2000) determined that
practicing professionals judge the aspects of written communications very differently
than do business faculty. In a study to obtain faculty and professionals opinions of
written business documents, both groups emphasized organization and clarity. However,
professionals were more concerned with substance and relevant content; this was in
variance to faculty, who focused on style aspects of spelling, mechanics, appearance, and
purpose.
This perhaps illuminates the focal point of the studys attempt to ascertain
business professionals own perceptions regarding the creation of productive written
communications in light of millennial technology. Although writing mechanics and
similar measures accumulate to determine the productivity measure of quality, this is not
exclusively the focus of the study. Rather, information in regard to all four measures of
productivity as conceived in the minds of professionals constitutes relevant information.
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further investigate the realm of written communications on job. Literature seems to
support a need for greater information on the topics of written communication and
productivity. A greater focus on specificity of the kinds of documents created, the
manner in which they are created, and the productivity involved with document creation
has the potential to hold significant implications for business communication curricula.
The linkage and impact of productivity input variables represented in the Review
of Theoretical Literature (technology and preparation) upon the majority of relevant
output variables represented in the Review of Research Literature (quantity, quality,
timeliness, and cost) may reveal functional information regarding written communication
productivity. Indeed, an examination of specific skills necessary for efficient document
creation on the job could potentially be helpful for businesspersons in a variety of job
categories and titles. Business professionals perceptions are essential as viewed in the
scope of quantity, quality, timeliness, and cost (measures of productivity), as these
measures relate to types of communications created, methods of communication creation,
the frequency involved with creation, as well as professionals perceptions for improved
preparation and productivity.
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CHAPTER 3
RESEARCH QUESTIONS AND RATIONALE
The purpose and problem of the study directly stem from the justification of the
study as well as relevant theoretical and research literature. Again, the purpose of the
study was to contribute to a greater understanding of factors affecting written business
communication creation and the possible impact upon written communication
productivity. Specifically, the study sought to identify factors affecting written business
communication creation and professionals perceptions of productivity.
The statement of the problem is as follows: what methods for written business
communication creation are most frequently being used by business professionals, and
what are professionals perceptions regarding productivity in creating these
communications? Further, specific research questions and rationale for their inclusion
that supplement the purpose and problem are subsequently listed.
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technologies for a variety of personal or organizational reasons. Also, it could be the
simple case that professionals have tried certain technologies and discounted them to turn
to other methods of message creation due to factors such as usability, speed, and cost.
Indeed, much information seems to be publicized as to what technologies are available;
however, little information is publicized as to how often these new technologies are being
used in the professional office. This information is the linkage between research
questions #1 (available resources) and #2 (type, method, and frequency of resource use).
Regarding the other end of the resource question, namely the availability of
human resources, primarily in the form of administrative assistants, it has been seen
through such studies in the late 1980s, such as Kirby and Oliver (1988), that there may
have been substantial use of administrative assistants. This was implied through the
finding that handwriting by managers was widely used with the finalizing of documents
done by assistants. However, recent information seems to be scant on the accessibility of
human assistance for the facilitation of routine business messages in the workplace of
today. There is also the consideration that perhaps there could be diminished use and
availability of administrative assistants due to a greater availability and use of direct PCrelated input technologies.
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informal/formal tone, internal/external scope, time constraints, resources, organizational
precedent, and habit. These factors are directly related to productivity as professionals
make these choices based upon a decision set geared to accomplish some prioritized task.
Assuming that there are few organizational stipulations regarding type, the method used
for this creation may overlap (i.e., match) with the decision for type chosen. Also, an
idea of the frequency of method used for each type of communication augments and
serves to further substantiate the type/method connection.
Some years ago, Wiggs (1992) found that professionals used a variety of input
methods. Indeed, that study served as a basis for the current studys investigation
regarding the type, method, and frequency linkages of written communication creation.
However, since then, from 1994 to 2000, information technology was responsible for at
least a 30% increase in gross domestic product (GDP) and over $2 trillion was spent in
the 1990s on microcomputers and software (Information Technology Industry Council,
n.d.). Recent IT expenditures of this magnitude surely have impacted the business office
environment and document creation in various ways. A recent study of practices may be
helpful to see how the large increase in computerization has changed the input methods
of business professionals in the last decade.
Current patterns to creation may exist in practice that need to be investigated
further, potentially in business communication literature, and possibly subsequently
considered in the scope of current business communication curricula. The capitalization
upon type/method linkages in skills development may increase communication
productivity for current and future business professionals.
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Research Question #2b: Is there a relationship between type of written business
communication created and frequency of method used?
Rationale and Support: As business professionals have surely experimented to
choose the best frequency of method and communication type combination through
practical experience, it is important to gain information on these relationships.
Presumably, frequency of method used, tied to a certain type of communication, implies
the view that productivity is maximized with that combination for that set of
professionals; if not, these professionals would run little chance of performing in that
way.
Of perhaps even greater concern, dependent upon the creation methods shown to
be used the most by professionals, implications are held for curricula and skills
development to concentrate on these forms of document creation. Thus, skills
development in this area would hopefully result in enhanced speed and quality in regard
to a greater percentage of overall written communication. In short, frequency is key to
the determination and identification of the skill development area. Logic determines that
methods most frequently used to create documents should receive the most curricular and
developmental attention.
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method/frequency used for creation, in order to complete the overall notion of
productivity. Productive communications should produce proof of conveying a message
successfully; characteristics such as speed and timeliness will be useless if readability is
sacrificed.
As evidenced in the previous chapter, there is a strong presence of literature
regarding both faculty and business professionals low opinion of written communication
skills and quality of documents overall. However, little research has been conducted in
this area to determine any specific quality/type tendencies that may be further explored.
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capitalization of the first word of a sentence or punctuation after a sentence. Yet trainees
create formal written documents with an appropriate usage of solid writing standards.
The same trainees responsible for many poor quality e-mails create formal assignments
and projects of high quality. What makes this situation even more interesting is not only
the fact that both documents created with such differing quality were composed by the
very same trainees, but that both documents were being submitted to a supervisor or
ranking stakeholder. Further investigation is warranted to see if this trend indeed holds
any credibility in the true environment of todays business professional.
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Ultimately, this information may be balanced in the scope of what suggestions
professionals have for creating quality written documents. Again, as with many of the
aforementioned research questions, the key involves whether professionals perceptions
regarding what skills are essential to produce quality documents can be potentially
adapted toward skills development. It may also be advantageous to highlight any
possible relationships between the perceptions of business professionals and demographic
data such as age category, position within organization, institution of graduation, etc., to
reveal trends for further investigation.
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For example, Andera (1991) showed that age had an impact on document creation
methods, which implies an impact on productivity. Likewise, in the scope of educational
background, several researchers have revealed correlations between educational level and
frequency of written communication (Andera, 1991; Brinkley, 1984). Storms (1983) also
included a measure of writing quantity that business baccalaureate graduates create by
undergraduate major. Specialized information such as this could possibly assist in the
determination of group preparation needs based upon such characteristics.
As previously discussed, technology has progressed at such a rapid pace and
methods of document creation have changed so much that possible trends in regard to
productivity should be investigated in light of 21st-century office technology and recently
trained businesspersons. As subjects for the study received graduate training in business
in roughly the same time span (1994-2004), this sample selection may assist with
identification of these trends. Overall, information concerning statistically significant
differences of practicing professionals based upon demographic data and background
may shed further light on written communication productivity linkages suitable for
further study and potentially useful information for professionals preparation.
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CHAPTER 4
RESEARCH PROCEDURES
Introduction
The problem of this study was: what methods for written business communication
creation are most frequently being used by business professionals, and what are
professionals perceptions regarding productivity in creating these communications?
Thus, the following chapter subsections detail the Research Design, Subjects,
Instrumentation, Data Collection Procedures, and Treatment of the Data utilized within
the effort to investigate this problem.
Research Design
As the study attempted to obtain the current perceptions of business professionals
toward factors involved with business document creation and productivity, the research
design employed to elicit these views from professionals was descriptive. Best and Kahn
(1998) indicated the overall reason for the choice of a descriptive design:
Although many experimental studies of human behavior can be appropriately
carried out both in the laboratory and in the field, the prevailing research method
of the behavioral sciences is descriptive. Under the conditions that naturally
occur in the home, the classroom, the recreational center, the office, or the
factory, human behavior can be systematically examined and analyzed. (p. 114)
More specifically, the method utilized survey questionnaire development and
facilitation to assist with the acquisition of data and subsequent data treatment. The
survey method gathers data from a relatively large number of cases at a particular time.
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It is not concerned with characteristics of individuals It is concerned with the statistics
that result when data are abstracted from a number of cases (Best & Kahn, 1998, p.
115).
Subjects
The population for the study consisted of 1994-2004 graduates of three AACSBaccredited Master of Business Administration programs. Thus, the population for the
study was delineated by a characteristic that implied responsibility for duties in a
managerial workplace capacity, including the creation of various written messages and
documents. The sampling frame consisted of M.B.A. alumni names and addresses from
the respective offices of alumni affairs and relations in each of the three postgraduate
institutions. The population was composed of graduates from three institutions of
varying sizes and geographic areas, although the institutions used for the sampling frame
were all public universities. In regard to geographic location, one institution represented
the Midwest and two institutions represented the southeastern United States. Further, one
institution represented the 2005 Carnegie Classification of (Prof+A&S/HGC,
CompDoc/MedVet, HV, FT4/S/HTI, L4/R), one institution represented the classification
of (Prof+A&S/SGC, Postbac-Comp, HU, FT4/S/HTI, M4/R), and the third institution
represented the Carnegie Classification of (Bal/SGC, Postbac-Prof/Bus; VHU,
FT4/S/HTI, M4/R).
The accessible population represented professionals dispersed nationally in the
workforce and who held a variety of occupational titles and positions in business. The
population was restricted to include only domestic addresses of business professionals.
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Also, those addresses that were deemed incomplete were deleted from the sampling
frame. Thus, the complete initial sampling frame included 1,860 names; but after
restriction to valid domestic addresses, yielded a total population of 1,430 accessible
subjects from which the sample was taken. This number was further restricted to 1,330
valid subjects after 100 were randomly identified as pilot study subjects.
To gain information appropriate to support external validity and any
generalization of findings, several guidelines were consulted. In regard to minimum
returned sample size, Krejcie and Morgan (1970) advocated a returned, usable sample of
approximately 271 for a population of 922. Also, in a much more recent study by
Bartlett, Kotrlik, and Higgins (2001), a very comparable returned sample of 290 was
indicated for the studys population size with reference to categorical data emphasis and
an acceptable margin of error at 5%. These estimates also meet more general guidelines
provided by Tuckman (1999) that in survey research, responses from at least 10-20% of
the population is required to achieve some semblance of external validity. Thus, because
of an anticipated low response rate due to various factors, the entire accessible population
at the size of 1,330 was chosen to receive the survey instrument. Also, follow-up
procedures were geared to elicit returned surveys from those who were confirmed to
receive the survey through a valid mail address.
Instrumentation
Upon a search for a survey instrument to provide a basis for survey development,
Wiggs (1992) similar study provided a strong comparable questionnaire, especially with
relation to the studys second and fourth research questions. Therefore, with express
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permission of the author (Appendix A), parts 1 and 2 of the instrument specifically
mirrored Wiggs (1992) questionnaire, sometimes verbatim, and with updated choices in
Section 2 to reflect current business message creation methods of the mid-2000s.
However, a review of the most relevant theoretical and research literature yielded
very limited information to assist with survey development in the areas of business
professionals perceptions of preparation to create written business communications and
perceptions of productivity in that scope. Therefore, to gain information for the areas of
preparation and productivity in particular, an extensive review of literature was
conducted and expanded to include such diverse fields as management, human resources,
and engineering. In addition, an extensive search was also performed to identify any
standardized instrument that would aid with survey instrument development. However,
no instrument elicited information comparable with the studys purpose, problem, or
research questions in these areas.
Thus, initial instrumentation development was aided by a Table of Specifications
devised by the author, and geared to assist with appropriate percentagesof topic inclusion
and format. With the assistance from Wiggs (1992) questionnaire and a review of
survey formatting methods, a survey questionnaire prototype (Appendix B4) was
developed with sections that attempted to link with each research question through
support of the overall research problem. The survey sought to obtain individual
demographic information from each subject, as well as subjects perceptions of written
business creation factors, preparation for these tasks, and perceptions regarding
productivity.
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The questionnaire included four sections, labeled 1, 2, 3, and 4. These sections
corresponded to the divisions in the nature of information elicited from subjects. Section
1 (General Information about the Professional) sought demographic data from
respondents via questions containing categorical data. This part of the overall
questionnaire used nominal data to classify subjects according to demographic
information. The instrument included categorical choices in the form of lists, with
options for open-ended responses for those situations not represented by a category.
Section 2 (Business Message/Document Creation Methods and Quality) of the
instrument sought to obtain specific details from subjects concerning document creation
methods, types of documents created, and frequency of creation by type. These variables
were offered in groupings in pivot table style with headings according to overall types of
written communication created and method of creation. In the instrument prototype that
was sent to the 100 pilot study members, the body of the table included a four-point
Likert-style setup based upon frequencies that corresponded with type and method. The
four points in the perceived frequency scale corresponded to never, seldom,
occasionally, and often. However, upon analysis of suggestions from the pilot study,
these four categories were ultimately changed to three (never, sometimes, and
always) in the finalized instrument which reached the greater population.
As the title suggested, Section 2 (Business Message/Document Creation Methods
and Quality) of the survey also addressed another particular construct involved with
written communication productivityquality. In this part of Section 2, select-response
questions were used to obtain perceptions of professionals regarding factors of quality
involving written documents in the scope of external and internal communications.
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The focus of Section 3 (Business Message/Document Creation Preparation
Factors) was that of the formal and informal preparation of business professionals to
create business messages. A series of statements guided respondents to use a five-point
Likert-scale (strongly disagree to strongly agree) to indicate beliefs and perceptions
on those topics. Select-response questions were also utilized in this section.
Additionally, ordinal-type rankings required professionals to choose which preparations
were more effective on a relative basis.
Lastly, Section 4 (Business Message/Document Productivity Factors) dealt with
professionals perceptions of their own personal preparation and training for handling
written communications as well as their perceptions regarding written document
productivity. The style and layout in this section directly mirrored the previous section
(Section 3), but elicited information centered on professionals perceptions of their own
productivity in the creation of business messages on the job.
Instrument revisions based on results of the utilization of a pilot study of business
professionals and panel of experts from academia centered on question wording and
phrasing throughout the instrument, particularly the Likert-based statements in sections 3
and 4. Many improvements were made to the instrument in these areas as a result of the
22-member panel of expert review, many of whom wrote extremely in-depth
explanations of how to improve the instrument, especially in regard to the wording of
questions and statements in the pursuit of reducing bias.
The pilot study members, composed of business professionals in the workforce,
centered mainly on clearness of writing, avoiding confusion, and relevance of material.
Indeed, as shown in Appendix C5, which contains a summary of the pilot review results
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and reviewers comments for improvement of the instrument, 90.6% (29 of 32) stated the
instruments instructions were clear; also, 87.5% stated the questions were clear.
However, many suggestions were given at the end of the evaluation regarding overall
difficulty of completing the instrument. Most (78.2%) thought completing the instrument
was easy, but of the nearly 19% who deemed the difficulty level as moderate, many
open-ended comments were provided to aid in the formulation of the final instrument
draft.
Additional improvements stemmed from suggestions from pilot study respondents
to include N/A choices for the instrument section regarding professionals preparation
to create business messages (Section 3). Additionally, suggestions made for Section 2
from respondents in the pilot study were integrated to reflect the various types of current
workplace business message creation technology available to respondents.
Upon the conclusion of construction of the prototype instrument, at that point, to
ensure compliance with the Committee for Research Involving Human Subjects, the
completed prototype was submitted to the Southern Illinois University Carbondale
Human Subjects Committee on October 28, 2004. Permission to use the survey
instrument was thus subsequently granted on November 11, 2004.
Validity
Content validity of the instrument was checked by comparison to a formulated
table of specifications, which itemized and weighed information chosen to include in the
survey, and to what degree of coverage. However, to specifically reduce the threat of
instrumentation bias to internal validity and improve non-statistical validity of the
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instrument, the task of a review of the formulated survey questionnaire was given to a
panel of experts. Thirty nationwide representatives from academia recognized for
specific research interests in the field of business communications were contacted via email (Appendix B1) using membership information from the Association for Business
Communications and Delta Pi Epsilon.
Moreover, 25 of these experts indicated their willingness to serve on a panel to
assist the researcher with an in-depth instrument review for validity and reliability, and
22 responded with completed instrument reviews. The materials sent to the panel of
expert members included some background information from the study (justification for
the study, statement of problem, and statement of purpose), a letter of instruction,
instrument review form, and the draft instrument (Appendix B2-B4). The 22 faculty
members nationwide who shared their suggestions for improvement of the survey
instrument are listed in Appendix B5. These faculty members reviewed the instrument to
establish face validity, content validity, and writing clarity. Upon suggestions by
reviewers, the questionnaire instrument was revised and rechecked for face and content
validity.
After the panel of experts review and the instrument approval by the SIUC
Human Subjects Committee, the revised survey was pilot tested with 100 subjects chosen
at random from the population. The sample of MBAs was chosen via utilization of the
RAND Corporations function in Microsoft Excel, which generated random numbers
matched with sequential numbers that were assigned to all subjects. Before the mailing
was administered to this pilot study sample, a pre-postcard (Appendix C1) was sent to
subjects chosen for the pilot study to increase awareness of the study and to potentially
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boost the chance of an adequate return rate of materials. After a period of a week and a
half after the postcard was mailed, again, in a similar fashion to the way in which panel
of experts members suggestions were solicited, members of the identified pilot study
received a letter of instruction, an instrument review form (slightly abbreviated from the
more in-depth panel of expert review form), and the pilot instrument (Appendix C2-C4).
The pilot test resulted in 32% (32 of 100) returned surveys, which were thus
coded and analyzed by statistical procedures geared for comparison purposes.
Categorically summed results of returned pilot study instrument review forms are in
Appendix C5 as well as transcribed open-ended comments. After final revisions were
made as a result of suggestions by the respondents of the pilot study (and earlier by the
panel of experts), data collection procedures began as a finalized survey instrument was
formulated and sent to population subjects six months after information was gained
through the panel of experts and within three months of improvement via the pilot study.
Comparison for nonresponse bias. To illuminate any possible threat to validity through
determination of the prospect for nonresponse bias, ten random items, representing
appropriate sections of the instrument, were analyzed according to two groups of
subjectsthose 30 of 372 valid responses who were the first to return the instrument
against the last 30 who retuned the instrument. The last 30 who returned the instrument
did so approximately two weeks after a follow-up was completed. The time-span
between those 30 who responded first and the 30 who responded last was six weeks.
Using the RAND function in Microsoft Excel, a list of random numbers was
generated through which 10 (20%) of appropriate instrument questions, with some
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control for variability of instrument section represented, were chosen to be analyzed.
Through comparing these two groups of subjects on the 10 random items using the
Mann-Whitney U test, which is used to compare ordinal data from two independent
samples, it was discovered that no statistically significant difference was apparent on any
of the items. While this comparison is perhaps not as stri ngent as the procedure of
gathering data from non respondents who didnt respond to anything after two mailings,
hopefully some suggestion of accuracy was reached in this analysis. The greater result of
this analysis is provided in the following table (Table 1).
Table 1
Analysis of Potential Nonresponse Bias
Random Instrument
Question
Mann-Whitney U
Sig.
(2-tailed)
29.
416.00
.557
26.
382.50
.289
17.
385.00
.318
40.
415.00
.584
10.
417.00
.597
12.
390.00
.332
39.
446.50
.946
46.
378.00
.225
20.
392.50
.371
39.
363.00
.177
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Reliability
As measures were taken to establish validity of the instrument, to boost reliability,
some inherent redundancy was built into the survey. Particularly in sections 3 and 4,
some questions or statements in the survey were rephrased and recurred to help determine
the reliability of respondent information. Further, in the sections of the survey (3 and 4)
that contained a battery of questions specific to one construct and held the feasibility to
measure for inter-item correlation, Cronbachs coefficient alpha was calculated and was
shown to be supportive of reliability. Reliability coefficient statistics were run on the
instrument from responses from pilot study respondents and before the instrument was
administered to the population.
Section 3 (Business Message/Document Creation Preparation Factors) showed a
raw alpha coefficient of 0.648 and Section 4 (Business Message/Document Productivity
Factors) showed a coefficient of 0.632. These measures are near 0.7, which has been
widely seen as an acceptable measure of correlation (Nunnally, 1978).
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2. November 2004 February 2005 Approval was gained through three
university internal review boards and MBA alumni names and addresses were secured
from all three AACSB-accredited business programs for use as the study population. All
accompanying documents to this process are included in Appendix F.
3. January 10, 2005 A nationwide prospective panel of experts in academia
were contacted via e-mail to solicit assistance with the prototype instrument review
(Appendix B1).
4. January 20, 2005 Materials were sent to the panel of experts; two and a half
weeks were requested as time to complete the instrument and/or instrument review form.
By February 12, 2005, 22 panel members had returned the necessary material (Appendix
B3-B4).
5. April 6, 2005 A pre-postcard was sent to the 100 randomly chosen MBA
graduates for the pilot study to inform them of the study and request their assistance in
completion and review of the instrument (Appendix C1).
6. April 22, 2005 Materials for the instrument review were sent to the pilot
study subjects, including three different versions of a cover letter, delineated to the pilot
members by each of three universities pilot members attended in graduate school; two
and a half weeks were requested as time to complete and return the instrument review
documents (Appendix C2-C4). By May 10, 2005, the final count (32%) had been
reached of pilot study members who responded with completed instruments and
instrument review forms; next, subsequent data analysis commenced. The complete
summary of the pilot study evaluation is included in Appendix C5.
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7. July 15, 2005 The same pre-postcard used for the pilot study was sent to all
1,330 subjects in the population (Appendix C1). The purpose of the card was two-fold;
one function was to increase the return rate through familiarization; another function was
to determine invalid addresses of members of the population prior to the greater
instrument mailing.
8. August 2, 2005 After much effort by the researcher and much trauma
endured by the researchers household, finalized survey instruments and accompanying
cover letters were duplicated, hand-signed, and stuffed into stamped envelopeswith
SIUC departmental letterhead to be sent to the 1,330 subjects in the population. The
cover letter explained the overall instructions of the enclosed survey and the rights of
survey participants in compliance with the Committee for Research Involving Human
Subjects. The cover letter also provided some linkage between the business
professionals expertise and their selection to complete the survey. Materials sent to the
population are included in Appendix D1 and D2.
During the mailing timeframe, invalid addresses from the mailing of the prepostcard were updated to reflect supplied forwarding addresses. Two and a half weeks
were requested as a deadline by which to return the completed instrument. By August
12, 2005, 348 (33.6%) completed instruments had been returned. Whenever possible,
returned mail from invalid and out-of-date addresses that contained forwarding addresses
were used to attempt to reach subjects; thus, the final accessible population count was
1,035 MBAs who were confirmed to have received the instrument.
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9. August 15, 2005 A follow-up postcard was sent to allnonrespondents i n the
population (Appendix D3). By two weeks (September 1, 2005), 53 additional completed
surveys had been obtained.
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university-sponsored letterhead and envelopes, printed envelopes instead of labels, the
instrument on colored paper for increased attention, and the opportunity indicated for
subjects to receive the greater results of the study.
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Table 2
Statistical Analyses by Research Question and Questionnaire Item
Research Question
Question 1 What resources do business
Questionnaire
Item
Items 6 and 7
Statistical Analysis
Descriptive statistics
presented in table form
of business messages/documents?
Question 2a What methods and frequency of Item 8
those methods do business professionals
Descriptive statistics
presented in table form
Item 8
Descriptive statistics
presented in table form
and chi-square ( 2)
tests
Items 9 through 14
Descriptive statistics
presented in table form
and open-ended
comment transcription
Mann-Whitney U
Items 15 through
32
Descriptive statistics
presented in table form
and open-ended
comment transcription
Items 15 through
30 and 1
Chi-square ( 2)
(Table 2 continues)
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(Table 2 continued)
Research Question
Question 4b Is there a relationship among
perceptions of business professionals
Questionnaire
Item
Statistical Analysis
Items 15 through
30 and 2
Chi-square ( 2)
Items 15 through
30 and 3
Chi-square ( 2)
Items 15 through
30 and 4
Chi-square ( 2)
Items 15 through
30 and 5
Chi-square ( 2)
Items 15 through
30 and sampling
frame data
Chi-square ( 2)
(Table 2 continues)
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(Table 2 continued)
Research Question
Question 5 What are perceptions of business
professionals regarding their productivity in
Questionnaire
Item
Statistical Analysis
Items 33 through
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Descriptive statistics
presented in table form
and open-ended
comment transcription
Items 33 through
48 and 1
Chi-square ( 2)
Items 33 through
48 and 2
Chi-square ( 2)
Items 33 through
48 and 3
Chi-square ( 2)
Items 33 through
48 and 4
Chi-square ( 2)
Items 33 through
48 and 5
Chi-square ( 2)
Items 33 through
48 and sampling
frame data
Chi-square ( 2)
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CHAPTER 5
RESULTS AND DISCUSSION
Presentation of Findings
This study attempted to investigate five research questions in an effort to provide
information toward the more general problem, stated as: what methods for written
business communication creation are most frequently being used by business
professionals, and what are professionals perceptions regarding productivity in creating
these communications? In order to form data provided by respondents into conclusions
and recommendations for further research, findings were summarized and analyzed.
Related findings are consequently presented in two groupings: (a) descriptive data on
respondents and (b) findings by specific research question, with an additional
commentary on the integration of findings with literature.
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7%
Yes
93%
No
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Table 3
Respondents by Gender
Gender
Female
Male
(Not responding)
Total
n
170
201
1
372
%
45.7
54.0
0.3
100.0
Table 4
Respondents by Age
Age Range
Below 25
25-34
35-44
45-55
56 and above
(Not responding)
Total
n
7
170
127
55
12
1
372
%
1.9
45.7
34.1
14.8
3.2
0.3
100.0
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predominant (accounting, business administration, marketing, management, finance,
computer-related study, and economics: n=257 or 69.1%), but many had what could be
classified as a non-business major (n=96 or 25.8%). Of non-business majors, engineering
was the most declared (n=30 or 8.1%) and medical/sciences was ranked next by
frequency (n=12 or 3.2%). Also of interest is the fact that 43 (11.6%) of responding
MBAs had more than one undergraduate major.
Table 5
Respondents by Undergraduate Major(s)
First Undergraduate Major
n
%
100
26.9
36
9.7
34
9.1
34
9.1
30
8.1
28
7.5
22
5.9
Major
Accounting
Business Administration
Marketing
Management
Engineering
Finance
Othera
MIS/Information
Systems/Computer
14
3.8
Science
Medical/Sciences
12
3.2
Economics
11
3.0
Communications/Public
10
2.7
Relations/Advertising
Political Science/Law
7
1.9
Psychology/Sociology
6
1.6
Liberal Arts
6
1.6
Education
3
0.8
(Not responding)
19
5.1
a
Responses classified as Other are shown in Appendix E1.
0.5
3
3
0.8
0.8
0.3
0
3
1
1
N/A
0.0
0.8
0.3
0.3
N/A
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subsequently shows the predominance of respondents employed in manufacturing firms,
Table 6, below, shows that only 25 (6.7%) were first-line supervisors. In sum, while the
job titles/positions claimed by respondents ranged from CEO to Sole Proprietor-Antique
Dealer, as indicated in open-ended fashion by one respondent, most classify themselves
as being in some type of managerial position.
Table 6
Respondents by Current Position within Organization
Position within Organization
Professional staff
144
38.7
Middle management
107
28.8
Senior management
64
17.2
First-line supervisory
25
6.7
Sales representative
12
3.2
Professor/Teacher
11
3.0
1.6
(Not responding)
0.8
372
100.0
Total
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education (teachers/professors) also constituted a noteworthy amount of respondent
organizations.
Table 7
Respondents by Organizational Classification
Organizational Classification
Manufacturing
86
23.2
63
17.0
55
14.8
Education
52
14.0
Government agency
40
10.7
Othera
26
7.0
18
4.9
2.4
Entrepreneurial
2.4
Pharmaceuticals
2.2
Wholesale trade
1.4
(Not responding)
0.3
372
100.0
Total
a
Table 8, along with some supplemental 2005 enrollment/size-related data released by the
respective universities from which the population was contacted. Interestingly enough,
despite the differing sample sizes of MBAs by university in the population, the actual
number of surveys returned from each university varied little. The university with the
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least amount of MBA graduates had the largest instrument return rate and vice versa.
Thus, each of the three institutions was represented almost evenly.
Table 8
Respondents by Graduate Study Institution
Total
Respondents
Accessible
N
Return
Rate %
Fall 2005
University
Enrollment
CompDoc/MedVet
126
402
31.3
21,441
Postbac-Comp
139
289
48.1
10,247
Postbac-Prof/Bus
136
343
39.7
6,484
Total
401
1034
N/A
N/A
Carnegie Classification of
University Where MBA
Program is Housed
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on the survey instrument to business professionals attempted to gain information in both
of these areas. It was indicated to professionals to choose the level of technology and
degree of administrative assistance available to them to create messages.
Of all potential message creation technology presented in Table 9, the largest
percentage (96.8% or 360) of the 371 business professionals who responded to question
#6 on the instrument indicated access to e-mail. Interestingly, that figure for e-mail
access is 7% higher than computer with word processing software, which ranks second
among available technology. Much other accessible technology as indicated by
professionals is included; namely, almost three-fourths have laptops (67.7%), half have
access to scanners (50.3%), and a quarter have access to PDAs (25.5%).
The typewriter seems to still have a somewhat strong presence in business offices
and environments, as almost a quarter of professionals claim to have access to it.
However, one machine, like the typewriter, that used to have a much larger usage in
business offices only now has 9 professionals of 371 that claim accessthe dictation
unit.
Other options such as the more recent Blackberry message creation system and
cell phones with web/text capability had negligible availability. Also, 12 (3.2%)
respondents have (or know if they have) that particular technology available for use.
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Table 9
Availability of Technology for Creating Business Messages/Documents
What technology for composing business messages/documents do you have access to in
your work area (or on a business trip)?
Technology
E-mail
Computer with word processing software
Laptop/tablet PC
Scanner
PDA (personal digital assistant)
Typewriter
Computer with voice recognition softwarea
Dictation unit
Blackberry
Cell phone w/web access for messages
(Not responding)
Total
360
333
252
187
95
88
12
9
5
1
1
N/A
96.8
89.5
67.7
50.3
25.5
23.7
3.2
2.4
1.3
0.3
0.3
N/A
assistance, in the form of administrative assistants, is shown in Table 10. Roughly half
(180 or 48.4%) of all respondents indicated that they share administrative assistant(s)
with other professionals; also 145 (39.0%) have no administrative assistance available at
all. Only 38 (10.2%) of business professionals indicated an available full-time assistant
and 11 (3.0%) indicated a part-time assistant who works solely for the professional.
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Table 10
Availability of Administrative Support in Message Creation
What level of administrative support is available to assist with your business
message/document preparation?
Administrative Support Level
38
10.2
11
3.0
180
48.4
145
39.0
Othera
1.1
(Not responding)
0.3
N/A
N/A
Total
a
differing types of business messages and frequency of creation of these types, it was
deemed useful to investigate this question before focusing on the types and frequency of
methods used by professionals on the job to create business messages. The following
research question concentrates on those aspects and contains three related parts, with
findings presented in Tables 11-15.
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Type, Method, and Frequency of Business Message/Document Creation
In an effort to investigate research question #2a, each table of data compilation
concentrates on a business message/document type (e-mail message, memo, letter, report,
and form, respectively) and consistently indicates the method and frequency associated
with that particular type of business message throughout the tables. Thus, in all tables
related to this research question and therefore organized by message type, method is on
the y-axis and frequency of use is on the x-axis.
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Table 11
E-Mail Messages Created by Method and Frequency
Frequency of Use
Method
Always
Sometimes
Never
Not
Responding
Totals
357
(96.0%)
11
(3.0%)
1
(0.2%)
3
(0.8%)
372
(100.0%)
17
(4.6%)
32
(8.6%)
290
(77.9%)
33
(8.9%)
372
(100.0%)
Dictate to voice
recognition and complete
myself
3
(0.8%)
5
(1.3%)
332
(89.3%)
32
(8.6%)
372
(100.0%)
Dictate to voice
recognition and assistant
completes
0
(0.0%)
4
(1.1%)
335
(90.0%)
33
(8.9%)
372
(100.0%)
Dictate directly to
assistant
or dictation unit
2
(0.5%)
21
(5.7%)
318
(85.5%)
31
(8.3%)
372
(100.0%)
1
(0.3%)
22
(5.9%)
317
(85.2%)
32
(8.6%)
372
(100.0%)
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sometimes handwrite memos for assistant to complete and 31 (8.3%) stated they
sometimes dictate directly to assistant or machine.
Table 12
Memos Created by Method and Frequency
Frequency of Use
Always
Sometimes
Never
Not
Responding
Totals
289
(77.7%)
66
(17.7%)
11
(3.0%)
6
(1.6%)
372
(100.0%)
18
(4.8%)
79
(21.2%)
239
(64.3%)
36
(9.7%)
372
(100.0%)
1
(0.3%)
10
(2.7%)
330
(88.7%)
31
(8.3%)
372
(100.0%)
0
(0.0%)
5
(1.3%)
335
(90.1%)
32
(8.6%)
372
(100.0%)
3
(0.8%)
31
(8.3%)
307
(82.6%)
31
(8.3%)
372
(100.0%)
4
(1.1%)
69
(18.5%)
269
(72.3%)
30
(8.1%)
372
(100.0%)
Method
84
and 34 (9.1%) sometimes dictate directly to assistant or dictation unit in composing
letters.
Table 13
Letters Created by Method and Frequency
Frequency of Use
Always
Sometimes
Never
Not
Responding
Totals
249
(67.0%)
102
(27.4%)
18
(4.8%)
3
(0.8%)
372
(100.0%)
19
(5.1%)
103
(27.7%)
215
(57.8%)
35
(9.4%)
372
(100.0%)
1
(0.3%)
6
(1.6%)
334
(89.8%)
31
(8.3%)
372
(100.0%)
0
(0.0%)
3
(0.8%)
337
(90.6%)
32
(8.6%)
372
(100.0%)
1
(0.3%)
34
(9.1%)
306
(82.3%)
31
(8.3%)
372
(100.0%)
5
(1.3%)
85
(22.9%)
253
(68.0%)
29
(7.8%)
372
(100.0%)
Method
The frequency of method used in the creation of forms (Table 14) seems to be the
most unique of the types of messages examined. A lesser number of professionals
complete them solely on their own than any other type (197; 53.0%). Therefore, a
number sometimes key a draft for assistant to complete (102; 27.4%), handwrite for
assistant to complete (88; 23.7%), or dictate directly to assistant or dictation unit (28;
7.5%). Hardly anyone (4; 1.1%) uses voice recognition, even sometimes.
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Table 14
Forms Created by Method and Frequency
Frequency of Use
Always
Sometimes
Never
Not
Responding
Totals
197
(53.0%)
145
(39.0%)
21
(5.6%)
9
(2.4%)
372
(100.0%)
18
(4.9%)
102
(27.4%)
217
(58.3%)
35
(9.4%)
372
(100.0%)
1
(0.3%)
4
(1.1%)
335
(90.0%)
32
(8.6%)
372
(100.0%)
0
(0.0%)
4
(1.1%)
337
(90.6%)
31
(8.3%)
372
(100.0%)
1
(0.3%)
28
(7.5%)
312
(83.9%)
31
(8.3%)
372
(100.0%)
5
(1.3%)
88
(23.7%)
251
(67.5%)
28
(7.5%)
372
(100.0%)
Method
The composition of reports (Table 15) again seems to differ from the composition
of e-mails, memos, and letters, and is more similar to the composition of forms. Many
(62.1%) professionals always key reports themselves with no assistance, but other
methods are at least represented by the claim that professionals sometimes use them,
such as keying a draft for assistant to complete (102; 27.4%), handwriting for assistant to
complete (84; 22.6%), and dictating directly to assistant or dictation unit (23; 6.2%).
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Table 15
Reports Created by Method and Frequency
Frequency of Use
Always
Sometimes
Never
Not
Responding
Totals
231
(62.1%)
122
(32.8%)
15
(4.0%)
4
(1.1%)
372
(100.0%)
17
(4.6%)
102
(27.4%)
218
(58.6%)
35
(9.4%)
372
(100.0%)
1
(0.3%)
4
(1.1%)
336
(90.3%)
31
(8.3%)
372
(100.0%)
0
(0.0%)
6
(1.6%)
335
(90.1%)
31
(8.3%)
372
(100.0%)
1
(0.3%)
23
(6.2%)
316
(84.9%)
32
(8.6%)
372
(100.0%)
3
(0.8%)
84
(22.6%)
255
(68.5%)
30
(8.1%)
372
(100.0%)
Method
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(2b), as described below. All comparisons of frequency of method used according to
type stems from question #8 on the survey instrument (Appendix D2).
Many rather one-sided results of either never or always using a particular
method, regardless of the type of message being written, reduces the usability of a
CROSSTABS analysis of creation method by type. The lack of variance in responses
prevented a valid CROSSTAB analysisthis is due to the lack of observations in some
cells of the relevant contingency tables. All comparisons held a statistically significant
difference and high Cramers value often due to the overwhelming use of one particular
method across types. Therefore, information on each method of creation by type is
described in terms of cell percentages in the following sections of narrative by count
rather than by p-values from chi-square analyses.
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Use of key draft for assistant to edit and complete method. In moving from the
first method, in which most professionals always use that method regardless of type
being composed, to the second proposed method, key a draft for assistant to edit and
complete, there is a difference in usage. With this latter method, most professionals
never use it at allin fact, in all type combinations who never use this method, the
range is from 54.5% (for letter-form combination) to 70.1% (e-mail/memo). However,
this percentage is one in which there is somewhat of a margin left for differing frequency
of usage according to type. In that margin lie several type/frequency of method use
combinations in the percentage range of 14.6 to 22.4% of responses. These describe
those who never key draft for assistant to edit and complete e-mails while
simultaneously choosing sometimes to this method when creating memos, letters,
forms, and reports. Also, there was some evidence of those who sometimes use this
method to create both memos and letters (23.7%), memos and reports (15.3%), memos
and forms (16.2%) and reports and forms (22.7%).
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use this method to create both types of messages in a myriad of memo, letter, forms, and
report type combinations.
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adequate. Only 17 of 367 responding to this question indicated quality was poor, and
only one person indicated it as very poor.
Table 16
Perceptions of Writing Quality of Internal Business Messages
Overall, how would you rate the writing quality of internal written communication that
your colleagues routinely create? Consider keying accuracy, punctuation, grammar,
organization, and writing style.
Quality
Excellent
40
10.8
Good
196
52.7
Adequate
113
30.4
Poor
17
4.5
Very poor
0.3
(Not responding)
1.3
372
100.0
Total
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Table 17
Perceptions of Information Quality of Internal Business Messages
Overall, how would you rate the information quality of internal written
communication that your colleagues routinely create? Consider relevance and
completeness of information, accuracy, conciseness, and clarity.
Quality
Excellent
48
12.9
Good
222
59.7
Adequate
80
21.5
Poor
16
4.3
Very poor
0.0
(Not responding)
1.6
372
100.0
Total
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Table 18
Quality of Internal Messages by Type
Which internal message type seems to be of the poorest quality overall?
Type
E-mail Messages
270
72.6
Memos
32
8.6
Internal Reports
25
6.7
Forms
23
6.2
Other
1.3
(Not responding)
17
4.6
Total
372
100.0
considered in external messages, with even more positive perceptions expressed on the
part of respondents toward overall quality. Table 19 contains all details of how business
professionals see the writing quality in external business messages. Only 3 of 368
respondents to this inquiry indicated writing quality of external messages to be poor
and none indicated very poor.
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Table 19
Perceptions of Writing Quality of External Business Messages
Overall, how would you rate the writing quality of external written communication you
have seen that your colleagues or employees of other firms routinely create? Consider
keying accuracy, punctuation, grammar, organization, and writing style.
Quality
Excellent
70
18.8
Good
204
54.8
Adequate
91
24.5
Poor
0.8
Very poor
0.0
(Not responding)
1.1
372
100.0
Total
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Table 20
Perceptions of Information Quality of External Business Messages
Overall, how would you rate the information quality of external written communication
you have seen that your colleagues or employees of other firms routinely create?
Consider relevance and completeness of information, accuracy, conciseness, and clarity.
Quality
Excellent
69
18.5
Good
215
57.8
Adequate
81
21.9
Poor
0.5
Very poor
0.0
(Not responding)
1.3
372
100.0
Total
Also, in regard to the business message of worst quality, this time in the realm
of external messages, e-mail again was the answer of choice at 276 or 74.2%. In
addition, 47 or 12.7% chose letters and the largest of the rest of the consequential
percentage was taken by external reports at n=23 (6.2%). This information is shown in
Table 21.
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Table 21
Quality of External Messages by Type
Which external message type seems to be of the poorest quality overall?
Type
E-mail Messages
276
74.2
Letters
47
12.7
External Reports
23
6.2
Othera
1.3
(Not responding)
21
5.6
Total
372
100.0
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and letters) on writing qualitymeaning keying accuracy, punctuation, grammar,
organization, and writing style; as well as information qualitynamely, relevance and
completeness of information, accuracy, conciseness, and clarity.
A Mann-Whitney U test was performed for writing quality and revealed the
difference was statistically significant. Internal versus external writing quality were
deemed different as the asymptotic p-value was .000 (p<.05). Also external messages
had a lower ranking (with a scale of 1=excellent and 5=very poor) than internal
messages, which indicates better quality.
Likewise, with internal messages versus external messages regarding
professionals perceptions of information quality, there is a similar result. Also, again,
the Mann-Whitney U test revealed the difference was statistically significant as
asymptotic was .029 (p<.05). The external message again had a lower ranking (again
with a scale of 1=excellent and 5=very poor).
The preceding investigation of business professionals perceptions of the quality
of business messages lends itself to a greater examination of the preparation professionals
obtained to create what they seem to perceive as high quality communications. A look at
professionals preparation, on both a formal and informal basis, links with quality
perceptions in moving toward an overall view on productivity in business writing.
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one of the strongest links to productivity, an underlying influence of the aforementioned
characteristics of method and frequency chosen, and especially quality of message, is
necessary. Preparation, i.e., formal or informal training in the composition of business
messages, is surmised to have a great influence on productivity in the overall creation of
business communications. Therefore, research question #4 deals with professionals
perceptions of their preparation to create workplace communications, from middle school
through graduate school, as well as on-the-job training and learning on their own.
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However, overall, opinions were split on the question of if respondents wished
they had taken more undergraduate writing courses. Regarding the undergraduate
business communication class in particular, the largest part of respondents (159; 42.7%)
indicated that they create business messages/documents the same way they were taught in
that particular class. Relatedly, in question #30, which deals with whether respondents
would have liked to had better training at either the undergraduate or graduate levels in
choosing the right words in stressful situations, most agreed.
In the question (#19) that focused on graduate school training for message
creation, there was roughly 10% more respondents than not who indicated training in the
MBA program did not sufficiently cover how to write for business. However, the
greatest percentage (139 or 37.4% agree) indicated they still create their business
messages the same as they did in MBA program (question #20).
In sum, questions #21 and 23-24 gathered perceptions on workplace/in-house
preparation and training for business message creation. Most respondents indicated that
they did not receive sufficient workplace training regarding the creation of business
messages.
Nevertheless, 353 (94.9%) business professionals cited they were confident about
the business messages they create (#29), 245 (65.7%) stated they had sufficient formal
training in formatting business messages/documents (#27), and most stated they do not
need further training in punctuation or grammar (#25) or style, tone, or organization
(#26). Also, many (184; 49.5%) indicated they didnt have to work very hard to adjust to
writing in a fast-paced environment (#22); however, most (271; 72.8%) professionals
thought training for e-mail message composition and etiquette is necessary (#28).
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Table 22
Business Message/Document Creation Preparation Factors
Preparation Statement
Strongly
Agree
Agree
Neutral
Disagree
Strongly
Disagree
N/A
No
Response
39
10.5%
136
36.6%
58
15.6%
112
30.1%
21
5.6%
4
1.1%
2
0.5%
57
15.3%
201
54.0%
59
15.9%
44
11.8%
5
1.3%
3
0.8%
3
0.8%
38
10.2%
96
25.8%
105
28.2%
113
30.4%
13
3.5%
3
0.8%
4
1.1%
10
2.7%
83
22.3%
91
24.5%
159
42.7%
17
4.6%
8
2.2%
4
1.1%
20
5.4%
105
28.2%
74
19.9%
137
36.8%
27
7.3%
6
1.6%
3
0.8%
5
1.3%
41
11.0%
124
33.3%
139
37.4%
12
3.2%
47
12.6%
4
1.1%
7
1.9%
49
13.2%
33
8.9%
153
41.1%
71
19.1%
54
14.5%
5
1.3%
19
5.1%
94
25.3%
62
16.7%
133
35.8%
51
13.7%
11
3.0%
2
0.5%
(Table 22 continues)
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(Table 22 continued)
Preparation Statement
Strongly
Agree
Agree
Neutral
Disagree
Strongly
Disagree
N/A
No
Response
9
2.4%
97
26.1%
67
18.0%
113
30.4%
46
12.4%
36
9.7%
4
1.1%
2
0.5%
25
6.7%
59
15.9%
157
42.2%
77
20.7%
49
13.2%
3
0.8%
9
2.4%
60
16.1%
40
10.8%
183
49.2%
75
20.2%
2
0.5%
3
0.8%
8
2.2%
89
23.9%
52
14.0%
158
42.5%
61
16.4%
1
0.3%
3
0.8%
46
12.4%
199
53.3%
44
11.8%
71
19.1%
8
2.2%
0
0.0%
4
1.1%
7
1.9%
54
14.5%
36
9.7%
188
50.5%
83
22.3%
1
0.3%
3
0.8%
135
36.3%
218
58.6%
12
3.2%
4
1.1%
1
0.3%
0
0.0%
2
0.5%
50
13.4%
171
46.0%
72
19.4%
68
18.3%
6
1.6%
1
0.3%
4
1.1%
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Specifically regarding the essential input skill for the creation of most written
business messages, keyboarding, Table 23 shows that the majority (263 or 70.7%) gained
training in high school. Perhaps a telling statistic is that roughly one-third of respondents
cited they learned at least some keyboarding skills on their own.
Table 23
Venue of Keyboarding Preparation
Where did you learn to keyboard/type?
Training Venue
263
70.7
Learned on my own
148
39.8
65
17.5
64
17.2
35
9.4
2.4
1.6
Othera
0.8
(Not responding)
0.5
N/A
N/A
Total
a
messages, the undergraduate business communication course received the top vote as the
most effective business message preparation of all by respondents (n=144; 38.7%).
Interestingly, the second-place choice was learned on my own.
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Table 24
Most Effective Business Message Preparation
What training BEST prepared you to create business messages?
Training
144
38.7
Learned on my own
64
17.2
39
10.5
33
8.9
26
7.0
Other preparationa
15
4.0
12
3.2
Undergraduate English/composition
10
2.7
1.1
(Not responding)
25
6.7
Total
372
100.0
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Research Question #4 a-f: Is there a relationship among perceptions of business
professionals regarding their preparation for creating written communication and: (a)
gender, (b) undergraduate major, (c) age, (d) position within organization, (e)
organizational type, and (f) graduate institution attended?
In an attempt to answer research question #4 - parts a-f, the following table (Table
25) is condensed from the full chi-square analyses tables contained in Appendix E3a,
which contain all CROSSTABS performed on the variables of gender, undergraduate
major, age, position within organization, organizational type, and graduate institution
attended against perceptions of business professionals regarding their preparation for
creating written business communications. These perceptions are summarized by
statements which respondents categorized by a five-point Likert scale ranging from
strongly agree to strongly disagree. (Also in Appendix E3a are the full contingency
tables from each relationship result that held statistical significance.)
Therefore, Table 25 contains only those statements that contain statistical
significance per respondent data by category at the 0.05 alpha level and also maintain
validity by upholding the assumptions of the chi-square test by meeting or exceeding
necessary cell counts. To that end, respondent data were sometimes collapsed into usable
categories and Likert data were collapsed to preserve distinct differences (neutral was
extracted in all cases). The table includes measures of the strength of the relationship
between variables, which is Cramers V for most in the study, due to most with degrees
of freedom over one; however, those with one degree of freedom (2X2 tables) demand
the Phi measure (Morgan, Griego, & Gloeckner, 2001).
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Table 25
Preparation Perceptions and Respondent Data CROSSTABS Analyses
Pearson
2
df
Sig.
(2-tail)
Cramers
V
Fishers/Phi
6.672
.010
---
.013 / -.160
4.139
.042
---
.054 / -.118
10.576
.001
---
5.966
.015
---
3.850
.050
---
6.521
.038
.156
---
10.206
.006
.188
---
6.626
.036
.165
---
6.875
.032
.195
---
9.524
.009
.202
---
.012
.233
---
.001 / -.180
.019 / -.136
.067 / -.128
12.776
Note. Comprehensive CROSSTABS tables from which this data were taken are included in Appendix E3a.
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As seen in the preceding table, the CROSSTABS analysis for relationships
between perceptions of preparation for creating written business messages and gender
revealed the most statistically significance relationships of any other characteristic
examined, including age, organizational type, and others.
Although the five-point Likert scale had to be collapsed down to two points
(strongly agree/agree; strongly disagree/disagree), several differences existed when
considering gender. Upon study of the corresponding contingency tables included in full
in Appendix E3, several findings are evident. Speaking in generalities, males differed
from females in the wish that they had taken more undergraduate and graduate courses in
written communication. Similarly, from #22, males differ from females in that they
indicated they had to work hard to be able to create the most appropriate business
messages in their new work environment.
Many more males than females indicated in #25 that they need more training in
writing skills such as punctuation and grammar and in #27 in their general view that they
had not had sufficient formal training on how to correctly format business documents.
Moving from gender differences in views to those between undergraduate majors,
question #18 indicates difference. In collapsed categories for business undergraduate
majors versus non-business majors (with the extraction of n=10 who had a double-major
in both categories), more observed business majors than expected agreed that they
continue to create their business messages in the same way they were taught at the
undergraduate level.
Differences in the age categories of below 35, 35-44, and 45+ exist when
evaluating respondents undergraduate and MBA communication training. Many MBAs
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aged below 35 differ from other MBAs in their agreement that their graduate program
had sufficient training on how to write for business (question #19) and also that they still
create messages the same way that they did in undergraduate work.
In viewing positions of employee in the firm, mid-level and first-line management
claim to not have been provided sufficient training in keyboarding speed and accuracy,
which differs from senior managers on #24. Also, those in senior-level positions differ
greatly from those in professional staff positions as seniors do not create their messages
the same as they did in either their undergraduate course nor their MBA course (#18 and
#20). Information in this area that also became apparent is that employees in the
manufacturing and agriculture, mining, and construction firms differ from those in other
organizational types in that they do not create messages as they did at the undergraduate
level.
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Research Question #5: What are perceptions of business professionals regarding
their productivity in creating written communication?
The questions that make up Table 26 collectively focus on professionals
perceptions of their productivity in creating written business messages through the
aforementioned measures of productivity (quantity, quality, timeliness, and cost).
Indeed, all productivity measurements in this battery of questions (from Section 4 of the
instrument) overlap to some extent. For example, questions that focus on timeliness also
have an opportunity cost implication as well as quantity and quality implications.
However, if the effort is made to group the questions in some form by productivity
measure, it could be made as: quantity (#33-34, 40), quality (#35, 41), timeliness (#38,
44-45, 48), and input methods with respect to time and cost (#36, 39, 46-47). Moreover,
questions relate to overall productivity perceptions. Lastly, questions #49 and 50, shown
in Tables 27 and 28, deal with the specific aspects of skills development for increasing
productivity.
In the questions with the focus on quantity, 231 or 62.1% of respondents did not
feel overwhelmed with the amount of written communication undertaken on a typical
day, (#33). Likewise, a number of professionals (237; 63.7%) thought an organizational
policy of limiting personal e-mails at work would not boost their productivity (#34).
These two perceptions are despite the fact that 142 (38.2%) strongly agree and 122
(32.8%) agree that they send more than 10 e-mails per day (#40), (which may provide a
sampling of the quantity of communications per day via perhaps the most popular type of
business message).
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With respect to quality, almost every respondent (360; 96.7%) indicated that they
put forth effort to create error-free print documents (#35) as well as error-free e-mails
(358; 96.2%) (#41). However, it is interesting to note that only one respondent indicated
no effort was put forth on print documents, while that number increases to seven for emails.
On questions of timeliness (linked to cost through opportunity cost), most
respondents (45.1% as opposed to 18.9%) feel that they would not be more productive if
they had sent messages in a more timely fashion (#38). Also, most (248; 66.7%) disagree
with the statement that they sometimes feel unproductive at work due to slowness in
creating written business messages (#48). However, most respondents (55.1%) feel they
take a lot of time to format written business messages or documents as opposed to 21.5%
who feel they dont take much time (#44). In addition, 250 or 67.2% claim to not have
much difficulty putting ideas into written words (#45).
Moving from time in formatting and writing to input methods to save time and
thus boost productivity, a large amount 332 (or 89.2%) agree that they use Microsoft
Word to create almost all types of written documents (#36). However, the margin was
closer on if respondents believe they could be more productive if they had another input
method other than keying. Most didnt think they could be more productive (164; 44.1%)
but some (110; 29.5%) did want another way besides keying (#39).
Finally, with input software in question, it was slightly agreeable to respondents
on whether learning more word processing software would increase their productivity
(agree-34.9%, disagree-30.6%) (#46). However, on whether voice recognition has
boosted productivity, the large number of those who responded as neutral, or with
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some form of disagree reflects the previous study finding from Table 9 that below 15
people even know of their access to voice recognition software.
Table 26
Business/Message Productivity Factors
Productivity Statement
Strongly
Agree
Agree
Neutral
Disagree
Strongly
Disagree
No
Response
15
4.0%
61
16.4%
62
16.7%
208
55.9%
23
6.2%
3
0.8%
9
2.4%
47
12.6%
76
20.4%
205
55.1%
32
8.6%
3
0.8%
172
46.2%
188
50.5%
10
2.7%
1
0.3%
0
0.0%
1
0.3%
170
45.7%
162
43.5%
14
3.8%
19
5.1%
4
1.1%
3
0.8%
7
1.9%
36
9.7%
31
8.3%
179
48.1%
118
31.7%
1
0.3%
8
2.2%
62
16.7%
133
35.8%
137
36.8%
31
8.3%
1
0.3%
12
3.2%
98
26.3%
97
26.1%
139
37.4%
25
6.7%
1
0.3%
142
38.2%
122
32.8%
16
4.3%
76
20.4%
15
4.0%
1
0.3%
(Table 26 continues)
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(Table 26 continued)
Strongly
Agree
Agree
Neutral
Disagree
Strongly
Disagree
No
Response
186
50.0%
172
46.2%
5
1.3%
7
1.9%
0
0.0%
2
0.5%
78
21.0%
188
50.5%
49
13.2%
54
14.5%
1
0.3%
2
0.5%
111
29.8%
209
56.2%
45
12.1%
4
1.1%
0
0.0%
3
0.8%
49
13.2%
156
41.9%
86
23.1%
78
21.0%
2
0.5%
1
0.3%
10
2.7%
47
12.6%
64
17.2%
205
55.1%
45
12.1%
1
0.3%
20
5.4%
130
34.9%
90
24.2%
114
30.6%
15
4.0%
3
0.8%
1
0.3%
13
3.5%
164
44.1%
81
21.8%
109
29.3%
4
1.1%
9
2.4%
63
16.9%
51
13.7%
192
51.6%
56
15.1%
1
0.3%
Productivity Statement
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workplace communication skill professionals consider personal weakness that is the most
difficult for them to overcome. The next weakest is keyboarding speed, as 74 of 346
claimed that skill in need of the most development. The seemingly comfortable handle
by professionals revealed here on choice of creation method directly concurs with the
previous finding that most respondents simply key their documents using Microsoft
Word and send the messages themselves.
Table 27
Perceptions of Communication Skills Weakness
Which workplace written communication skill do you consider a weakness that is the
MOST DIFFICULT for you to overcome?
Skills
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32.5
Keyboarding speed
74
19.9
61
16.4
37
9.9
Othera
25
6.7
19
5.1
2.4
(Not responding)
26
7.0
Total
372
100.0
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Supplementing information on the skills professionals see as a weakness is in
Table 28, which reveals that when given one choice for the skill or resource they would
most like to have to increase productivity, the availability of input technology ranked
first. The second choice was writing skills, which was the top-ranked skills weakness in
the previous table (Table 28). The availability of administrative assistance ranked fifth
(17.2%). This finding complements the prior finding that most professionals from this
particular sample simply do their own work in executing business communications.
Table 28
Skills Development to Increase Productivity
Which workplace written communication inputs would you like to implement to increase
your productivity?
Inputs
130
34.9
102
27.4
97
26.1
73
19.6
64
17.2
Othera
12
3.2
None/N/A
11
3.0
(Not responding)
20
5.4
N/A
N/A
Total
a
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Like in professionals perceptions of their preparation to create business messages
on the job, perceptions of productivity are also analyzed by respondent demographic data
to reveal any relationships. This analysis is the subject of research question #5a-f.
Research Question #5 a-f: Is there a relationship among perceptions of business
professionals regarding their productivity in creating written communication and: (a)
gender, (b) undergraduate major, (c) age, (d) position within organization, (e)
organizational type, and (f) graduate institution attended?
Table 29 shows statistically significant relationships through the comparison to
alpha and strengths of relationship through Phi or Cramers V. Six of the sixteen
statements revealed statistically significant differences between subjects represented by
categorical variables. (Again, Table 29 has been condensed from the full chi-square
analyses tables contained in Appendix E3b; also the appendix includes the full
contingency tables from each statistically significant relationship result.)
Statement #39 on whether professionals believed they could be more productive if
they had another way to create messages other than keying, many more observed males
agreed while there were more females who disagreed than expected. Also, persons who
work in finance, insurance, and real estate also agreed, which is very different from those
who work in government agencies.
In respect to other time-saving procedures, this time reflected by #37, MBAs
younger than 35 have administrative assistants help with document creation as opposed to
other age groups. This also holds true for senior-level managers. Also involved is the
micro scale of quantity of written communication, namely, number of e-mails sent daily.
Those whose firm is in the category of manufacturing, agriculture, mining, and
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construction especially indicated that they send more than 10 e-mails per day while those
in government agencies and education/services tend to have lower observed counts than
expected on that item.
E-mail also caused differences where type of organization is concerned as those in
education and services firms believe they would be more productive with a policy;
however, those in government agencies and those in finance, insurance, and real estate
had lower counts than expected (#34).
In other questions about productivity, younger workers (below 35) are shown
through statistical significance to be different than workers in the 35-44 category in that
they do not seem to feel overwhelmed with all of the written communication they must
do per day. Also, lastly, in a determination of differences between graduates by
university, many more of those who graduated from the smallest school with an MBA
feel overwhelmed on the job with written communication than those from the largest,
doctoral university. Also, many more than expected from the largest school feel a
personal e-mail policy at work would not boost their productivity, which is a large
difference from the middle-sized schools graduates opinions.
As a last comment on differences in perceived productivity, it is interesting to
note that no differences in the comparisons between business undergraduate majors
versus non-majors exists.
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Table 29
Productivity Perceptions and Respondent Data CROSSTABS Analyses
Pearson
2
df
Sig.
(2-tail)
Cramers
V
Fishers/Phi
.004
---
.004 / -.174
8.220
8.903
.012
.171
---
5.843
.054
.131
---
.013
.168
---
8.684
11.258
.024
.207
---
18.235
.001
.273
---
13.655
.008
.208
---
6.956
.031
.151
---
7.364
.025
.176
---
Note. Comprehensive CROSSTABS tables from which this data were taken are included in Appendix E3c.
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Integration of Findings with Literature
Although literature seems to be lacking at the present time on the research
questions investigated in this chapter, some previously investigated information was
augmented. Findings from this sample suggest that professionals create documents very
differently from 1992, when Wiggs collected data on the frequency of methods used to
create various types of messages. Professionals now seem to create messages without
much administrative assistance and do most of it through their desktop PCs. The use of
dictation, both to machine and assistant, has been greatly reduced since 1992. However,
there are still some similarities as many professionals still prefer to write messages in
long-hand for administrative assistants to complete. It is also important to note that
despite a large amount of information in literature today on the benefits of new creation
technology, such as voice recognition, very few professionals claim to even sometimes
use such technology. In fact, qualitative data in the form of open-ended comments reveal
frustration and abandonment in using such technology.
However, word processing and desktop publishing advances better illustrate the
propensity to really assist professionals on the job today. The new advances in office
technology, mostly through the PC, seems a determining factor as to the methods that
have changed in professionals document creation methods and even types of created
messages. In 1992, the very first e-mails were being sent, while findings herein indicate
professionals send many more than 10 per day, and one professional commented in the
open-ended section of the instrument that 100 e-mails per day are sent.
This linkage with the level of quantity of business message is another area on
which the study concentrated. Even though information in the literature indicates a large
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level of messages that are composed and sent daily, and professionals in this study tend to
confirm this heavy volume, professionals do not indicate they are overwhelmed with
written communication. In fact, in the productivity measurements of time and quantity,
professionals indicate they are comfortable at work with the amount of time (and
therefore opportunity cost) they take to create messages. This finding tends to agree with
the comfort level professionals have with the other measure of productivityquality.
One large difference in the findings of this study compared with others has to do
with the level of quality that business professionals perceive in written business
messages. Despite much literature describing the state of written communications as
poor, professionals in this study were complimentary of the communications that they
create and also of the communications seen on a daily basis from other firms. However,
this is a descriptive-oriented perception, not investigated experimentally, and the tenuous
nature is reflected in open-ended statements compiled in Appendix E2, of which many
are questionable in quality through a perhaps more objective analysis.
Also, in linking with productivity perceptions, training and preparation at the
postsecondary level for creating business messages was seen as effective overall, despite
the body of literature referenced in Chapter 2 that illustrates a tendency for lacking in
writing training at the postsecondary level, picked up to some extent by increasingly
prevalent on-the-job training. This latter indication in itself highlights another variance
in the study from literature, as this sample indicated little sufficient firm-sponsored
training in business communication creation.
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CHAPTER 6
SUMMARY, CONCLUSIONS AND RECOMMENDATIONS
Summary of Research
In summarizingthe study, in the light of both implication and establishment
through prior research of a problem with the high quantity and cost, but low quality, of
business communications in the workplace of the current time, an investigation of several
aspects regarding business professionals preparation and productivity regarding written
communication creation was undertaken. Measures of productivity were largely
investigated through a literature review in which the goal was to attain some grasp of the
relationship some constructs had in composing the overall notion of productivity in
written business communication creation. These conceptsquantity, quality, timeliness,
and costwere examined in the scope of resources representative of the last 20 years in
office technology.
Changes in message creation technology and patterns of use since some literature
was published led to the exposure of a need for a new study of message creation practices
and a linkage to how well prepared business professionals perceived themselves to be in
creating productive communications. Indeed, from this examination of the literature
grew the overall purpose, which led to the more specific problem of the study, and thus
each research question.
The purpose of the study was to contribute to a greater understanding of factors
affecting written business communication creation and the possible impact upon written
communication productivity. Specifically, the study sought to identify factors affecting
written business communication creation and professionals perceptions of productivity.
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Therefore, the research problem that stems from this stated purpose is: what methods for
written business communication creation are most frequently being used by business
professionals, and what are professionals perceptions regarding productivity in creating
these communications?
Specific research questions, underlying the problem and subsequently discussed,
were examined using data gathered from a population of business professionals with
advanced degrees in business. This population was chosen in the hope of obtaining data
from those responsible for creating a valid amount of written business communications
on the job as well as those with formal training. Training earned was deemed a factor in
the hope of the illumination of introspective preparation and training opinions, which
contain possible implications for business communication educators.
Thus, approximately 1,034 business professionals received a survey
questionnaire, which underwent scrutiny from an academician panel of experts with their
major field in business communication as well as a pilot study of business professionals.
The 401 business professionals (38.7%) who responded to the larger instrument
administration provided information on the following questions, which deal with
quantity, quality, timeliness, and cost, in relation to productivity in the creation of written
business communications.
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Results and Conclusions by Research Question
Research Question #1: What resources do business professionals have available
for the creation of business messages/documents?
As previously discussed, the question of resource availabilityis a precurso r to
methods of creation, and therefore productivity, in creating business messages on the job.
Findings suggest that although some of the newest technology for business message
creation has been shown to at least be available to some professionals, it seems to not be
available in large numbers. While almost 97% of business professionals claim access to
e-mail, the number drops to around 25% of professionals who have a PDA and only 3.2%
claim access to voice recognition software. This is further illustrated in the findings of
the next research question regarding frequency of method used to create business
communications, as are the findings of how much administrative help is available.
Perhaps a much more surprising finding is the high percentage of business
professionals with little to no human resource assistance in the creation of business
messages. Indeed, nearly 50% share an assistant who helps with business message
creation, and 39% have no assistance at all. This finding again greatly influences the
findings of research question #2 in that human resources are rarely used in any way in the
business message creation process. Creation methods that involve any editing by
assistants are therefore infeasible to many businesspersons.
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Research Question #2a: What methods and frequency of those methods do
business professionals utilize to create differing types of written business
communications?
Businesspersons overwhelmingly choose to always key and complete e-mail
messages themselves, with no assistance; however, the few professionals (10%) who
have access to administrative assistants do seem to utilize that help some to edit and
complete e-mail messages. This may reflect a desire to have greater administrative help
that would influence creation methods.
Nevertheless, available administrative assistants see less of e-mails from their
superior than any other internal/external types of business messages (memos, letters,
forms, or reports). This indicates the private nature of e-mail and also a possible reason
for the inferior quality in respect to other messages.
In moving to other message types and linked methods, the number of
professionals who always create messages with no assistance decreases with each
respective type of message, with the exception of reports. However, despite the
prevalence of PCs shown by the findings, the fact that some businesspersons, even those
with this technology, sometimes tire of using it. It may also imply that professionals may
fatigue in typing and prefer to use another method, especially when they have an
administrative assistant to edit and complete the message.
In sum, conclusions to this research question suggest thatmost professionals write
the many types of messages on a daily basis from start to finish with no assistance.
However, the nonexistent use of voice recognition, the current subject of much
concentration in business education and business communication literature at the present
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time, and scarce use of dictation to machine or assistant may reflect the lack of resources
and/or unwillingness to delegate message creation duties.
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Research Question #3a: What are business professionals perceptions regarding
quality of external and internal written communications overall and by type?
Contrary to most published research on the state of quality of writing in business
communication, professionals overwhelmingly saw messages as adequate, good, and
excellent regarding both writing and validity of information. Further, consistently
across message types, professionals indicate good/excellent on quality as opposed to
just adequate consistently by a 3:1 ratio.
It is possible that this finding is the result of self-reported data and a potential bias
for subjects to wish to project a favorable image of their colleagues at work; however, on
the half of the quality-related questions that involve external communications, subjects
were also asked to rate communications they have seen from employees of other firms.
This comparison between rating the message quality of professionals internal messages
(through direct peers on the job) and external messages (through the message quality
from employees at other firms) is the subject of the next research questions results. This
information, however, sometimes seems to conflict with the inordinate attention given to
suspect quality in business writing by professionals in open-ended comments volunteered
at the conclusion of the survey instrument.
The finding that e-mails are of the worst quality, no matter what the scope of
communication, integrates with the finding that nearly all professionals key and complete
these messages themselves. This may indicate a much more informal tone; i.e., if it is
not on paper, perceptions may be that it doesnt have to hold to the same standard for
some reason as memos and letters.
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Research Question #3b: Do business professionals perceptions regarding quality
of written communications differ by scope (internal versus external)?
Research question #3b was examined through a comparison on the two quality
fronts posed to subjects on the instrumentthose of quality in writing (keying accuracy,
punctuation, grammar, organization, and writing style) and in information (relevance and
completeness of information, accuracy, conciseness, and clarity). The better quality of
external messages than internal on both measures, highlighted by Mann-Whitney U tests,
could be attributable to a variety of possible causes. Possible underlying factors could be
over-familiarity with the audience in internal messages and therefore a laxity in taking
time to proofread. Professionals may know their internal colleagues know they know
better in regard to writing mechanics and therefore dont take greater time to edit.
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This, coupled with the fact that amid the various choices provided on what
training best prepared business leaders to create messages, the undergraduate business
communication course was top and professionals claim to still create messages in the way
they were taught in that course, it bodes well for the standard undergraduate business
communication curricula. This is also supported by the finding that businesspersons did
not have to work hard to adjust to creating fast- paced business communications in the
workplace.
However, while the sample seemed confident in their overall preparation for
writing business communications and especially their undergraduate business
communication course, the two other areas perhaps in which curricula could be evaluated
are at the graduate level and workplace training. Most professionals saw their MBA
programs as not sufficient in preparing them to write for business, and placed the MBA
course as fourth overall in training that best prepared them to create messages.
A large percentage of professionals expressed the wish through both ordinal and
qualitative data that their MBA program had covered more aspects of choosing the right
words in stressful situations, which could be integrated more into the graduate curricula
not necessarily in one specific course, but in the MBA core, through a variety of writingintensive projects. Also, the relative dissatisfaction with in-house training, or lack
thereof, can be addressed by business organizations through small training sessions or at
least some written communication guidelines, especially regarding e-mail abuse.
In conclusion, it is important to state that despite business professionals
tremendous confidence in their overall training, an analysis by the researcher of optional,
open-ended comments submitted in long-hand form through the instrument provided
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some troubling information. In an analysis of all open-ended comments, many had some
error in simple spelling, punctuation, or grammar. This is troubling indeed for trainers of
business leaders in message creation skills at all levels. These subject comments are
transcribed verbatim in Appendix E2 for review. This review highlights the perceived
need for greater training at the graduate level and in the work organization.
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Also, regarding another demographic difference, age, young professionals (below
age below 35) believe that their undergraduate business communication course and MBA
program sufficiently prepared them to create written business messages whereas
professionals over 34 were not as positive. As the population consisted of MBA
graduates from the last 10 years, the difference between these age groups on this opinion
cannot be due per se to younger workers in recent programs with perhaps more of a
focus on written communication assignments or courses. Speculation as to this result
then lies in older workers perhaps having higher positions and therefore more difficult
writing responsibilities that manifests itself in some dissatisfaction in training.
In moving from possible demographic stems for differences in opinions on
training and preparation, it is realized that characteristics/categories of subjects based
upon choice also played a role. Although the studys population consisted entirely of
MBAs, the distinguishing feature of having business undergraduate majors and nonbusiness majors in the same sample produced a not entirely surprising difference of nonbusiness majors who no longer create messages as was taught in their undergraduate
program. This result is probably attributable to the fact that business majors had more
training in business message creation, especially in light of the fact that most MBAs
thought their graduate program was not sufficient on providing such training. However,
this area also produced a difference in those working in differing organizational types
because those in manufacturing, agriculture, mining, and construction firms differed from
others also in more revealing they do not create messages as taught in their undergraduate
course/program.
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As described in the previous chapter, differences in opinion based upon subjects
categorical characteristics not only exist in more holistic opinions concerning programwide development of writing skills but also in more specific skills such as inputting
information into messages. Concerning differences of opinion on preparation, first-line
and mid-level managers express more dissatisfaction on the primary input method of
keyboarding development by their organization than senior managers. This is an
interesting result in that perhaps senior managers write more and have more of an
opportunity for self-development of keyboarding skills, which may covertly influence
their view on this question, but then senior managers may have more administrative
assistance available, which may lessen their exposure to keyboarding.
It is also interesting to note that more senior managers, in differing from
professional staff, claim to not create their business messages the same way they did in
either their undergraduate or graduate business communication training. Although some
in senior managerial positions are also more senior in age, which may reflect on moving
through undergraduate communication curricula at a time that didnt reflect todays
advances in message creation technology, it is important to take note that they did move
through the MBA communication training in recent years, as the population were 19942004 MBA graduates.
Perceptions of training and preparation by all analyzed characteristics by category
seem consistent with perceptions on productivity, also analyzed by the same categorical
identifications of subjects. These differences are analyzed in research question #5b, after
a general description in #5 (below) of descriptive data regarding productivity perceptions.
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Research Question #5: What are perceptions of business professionals regarding
their productivity in creating written communication?
Business professionals overall confidence in the quality of business messages
and their overall preparation to compose such messages is again reflected in perceptions
of written communication productivity. Professionals conveyed their ongoing
willingness to receive writing skills/content creation skills through ranking that as top
when asked what skill is a weakness most difficult for them to overcome, but also
maintained their faith and effort in regard to their writing in all facets, including
mechanics, organization, and inputting skill.
Reflecting this pride is that 80% stated even if theyre in a rush, they will write
the message themselves instead of allowing an administrative support person to compose
it; however, this may be due to the lack of accessible administrative support. These
results, whether objective or subjective, indicate businesspersons perceptions from this
sample contradict much of the research literature on the state of overwhelming stress due
to the large quantity and small quality of written business communication.
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trends emerge. First of all, regarding the productivity measure of quantity of business
message, it may be surprising that those in education and services firms differ from the
manufacturing and construction-oriented fields in that they dont send as many e-mails
it might be thought that those directly in assisting various persons would send more
messages instead of the concentration on making products. Perhaps this links with the
findings that those in education and services differ from other groups in the
acknowledgementthat they might be more productive with an organizational policy to
limit personal communications at work.
Moreover, the findings that younger MBAs differ from the other age groups in
having administrative assistants help more with message creation as well as expressing a
comfortable level of quantity in communications at work (i.e., not feeling overwhelmed)
is a cause for speculation at this point. Perhaps younger MBAs are more confident due to
not having a larger amount of writing responsibility as older MBAs. Addingsome
interest to this result is the fact that relationships exposed in position-level results
somewhat mimic the findings for young MBAs in usage of administrative help, but do
not show any difference from other groups in their perceptions of being overwhelmed at
work with communicationthis difference centers on those in senior managerial
positions, who are no doubt of an older age.
Lastly, concerning the two main differences which come to light in that those
who earned an MBA through the largest, doctoral university, feel less overwhelmed on
the job with written communication and exude more confidence in timely
communication, the initial speculation as to factors underlying these results is that the
MBA curricula of the schools differ in some way to produce these differing productivity
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perceptions. However, the number of other extraneous variables seems to make this
hypothesis improbable and therefore needing further investigation.
As the MBA program is quite short in duration as opposed to other training, such
as bachelors degree work, there are many other opportunities for outside influences,
especially since many MBA graduates probably earned a four-year degree at another
institution besides the respective graduate choice. Indeed, also contributing to the
enigmatic nature of determining possible reasons for such results is the fact that no
differences were found in business undergraduate majors versus non-business majors in
any aspect of productivity perceptions on the job. Perhaps an investigation into further
differences in confidence in productivity, such as age, may be helpful, as, in findings
herein, age seems to be a delineating characteristic in that younger employees are more
confident in their ability to be productive in creating written communications.
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program. However, many also commented that many communications are not proofread
adequately and that they see a diminishing quality of writing as new graduates continue
to enter the workforce. However, quality was seen as a factor at all levels as one
respondent even commented on the lack of proofreading performed by the supervisory
level and several respondents commented on the lack of use and even misuse of
SpellCheck. The implication was given that some professionals simply use SpellCheck,
which obviously misses some problems, and do not proof to any other degree.
A result of the established importance and quality perceptions was the expressed
view that much workplace miscommunication and unproductivity is attributable to emails; therefore, e-mail etiquette, timing, and especially technical quality (such as
grammar and punctuation) are factors professionals commented on that demand strong
training coverage in todays curricula. Some indication was also given that writing in
general was deteriorating in quality due to the popularity of e-mail. Also, a few
respondents commented on the large amount of e-mails damaging their productivity
overallespecially through the overuse of cc and bcc.
In regard to input methods, also represented was interest by those who had not
used as well as disdain by those who had, in a few cases, for voice recognition software.
A comment was made that voice recognition was simply not viable in cubes, in a
reference to the workplace layout. In relation to several likecomments of infeasibility of
voice recognition linked with the articulated difficult task to find qualified administrative
assistance, the importance of solid keyboarding skills were specifically mentioned by
many professionals.
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Other miscellaneous comments included the wish that ways of formatting
documents such as internal memos should be discussed at work (by the firm) as well as
how to write for best customer satisfaction. Also addressed by respondents was the wish
that how to write for multicultural business audiences should be covered in some training
venue and so should writing to avoid legal pitfalls. Respondents also voiced opinions on
many other facets of written business communications. The transcription of all
respondent comments is included in Appendix E2.
General Conclusions
In conclusion, the study defined findings and conclusions via research questions
which concern the productivity measures of quantity, quality, timeliness, and cost of
written business messages as well as professionals preparation for and productivity in
the creation of messages in an initial sense; however, much more exploration is seen as
necessary to gain insightful information into the more distinct but tentative relationships
highlighted through this process.
Professonals perceptions regarding quantity, quality, timeliness, and cost seem to
reflect relative solidarity. Professionals use a somewhat limited amount of message
creation methods to create all types of communications, are confident in message quality,
time to completion, and cost/opportunity cost implications involved in message creation.
There is also some supplementary qualitative evidence that suggests while holding these
views, businesspersons are very cautious of the maintenance of quality of messages and
the influence of this quality through the maintenance of reasonable quantities of messages
created and sent.
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However, while again favorable overall, professionals seem to reflect a greater
variance in views regarding the specific aspects of their informal and formal preparation
to create messages as well as in productivity in creating these messages. These
differences in views, coupled with the diverse demographics of businesspersons, hold
several implications for further research.
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suggestion stems from the seemingly inordinate amount of professionals who have no
assistance at all or who share an assistant.
2. As the inquiry into written business message quality consistently revealed e-mails as
holding the worst encoding of all other types, to prevent possible misunderstandings
as well as increased lost time and increased opportunity cost, business professionals
should concentrate on writing involving this type of communication as possibly
needing development. The reasons for this quality concern may be due to a number
of factors (again, for further research) involving familiarity with recipients, difficulty
in proofreading due to rarely seeing the message in hard copy form, or other reasons.
However, professionals should at least be aware of this finding and give e-mail
encoding increased attention. This recommendation also links with others from the
studys research questions involving professionals preparation and training on a
number of items, including e-mail training.
3. More specific recommendations as a result of the expressed opinions of business
professionals regarding their training and preparation for creating business messages
are the continuation or inclusion of e-mail etiquette training and the possible
implementation of more keyboarding training at the secondary level, as many
professionals learned to key on their own. Holistic recommendations for practice
consist of improving (or implementing more) written business communication
training at the graduate level and also possibly increasing message training (including
methods of inputting) in-house or in organizations where professionals are
employed. This latter recommendation could be accomplished through a variety of
ways, including short seminars.
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4. The preceding recommendations for practice highlight areas for skills development
and directly link with recommendations based upon professionals perceptions
expressed in regard to message creation productivity. The need for greater
keyboarding speed (as cited as professionals biggest weakness regarding creation)
and wish for greater knowledge of software features link with training as these areas
especially lend themselves for greater coverage through organizational training or
training on any level. In addition, as many professionals were very confident with
their productivity in business writing, many indicated they do take a lot of time to
format business messages; perhaps the recommendations for practice herein regarding
inputting training could help reduce this time.
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preparation perceptions, etc., may illuminate further trends regarding business
professionals and various characteristics involving written business communications.
3. It is recommended that a similar study be conducted with a different sampling frame
of persons deemed responsible for business writing in the workplace; not necessarily
those with MBAs or advanced business degrees. A similar study conducted with
recipients of bachelors or associates degrees in business or some other method of
identifying appropriate subjects would be beneficial to supplement research in this
area.
4. In addition to suggestion #3, and in keeping in mind possible curriculum development
in business communication, another possibility lies in the investigation of line
managers or entry-level managers as the sampling frame, if such an accessible
population could be established.
5. Similar data to this study could be collected and examined against the size of
organizations in which subjects are employed, as size often dictates available
resourcesboth technological and human. Findings herein suggest the sample for
this study had an overall curious characteristic of having relatively little
administrative help despite subjects advanced educational level and often advanced
managerial positions. While this situation was perhaps more revealing about methods
and types of messages business professionals create, the correlation of a samples
productivity perceptions with greater access to writing resources may be more
revealing in some fashion.
6. Also, a similar study sometime in the next few years that reflects updated
advancements in input and creation technology may prove to be helpful. For
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example, while few herein indicated use of voice recognition input technology,
substantial interest in this form was noted. Perhaps in the future, voice recognition
and other input forms will be widely used and thus may be investigated.
7. There are opportunities for further investigation of the underlying causes for the rather
one-sided frequency of methods used. Research should be conducted on the reasons
as to why business professionals do not use voice recognition and other methods
besides the predominant choice of keying and completing messages themselves with
Microsoft Word. Research could be done to illuminate why professionals sometimes
use assistants and sometimes not, and why machine dictation is no longer used. Also,
on this point, while having some idea via open-ended write-in of organizational type
for those who checked services, it would be interesting to see if medical and legal
firms use more machine and assistant dictation than respondents who work in other
organizational types.
8. In moving from resources to quantity of communication, as this study did not
concentrate on the quantity of each type of message regularly created in the
workplace, but rather method and frequency of those methods, an overall
investigation of the number of e-mails, memos, letters, reports, etc. would prove to be
helpful in the determination of business message types on which to concentrate on in
curricula to reflect current practices in the workplace. Skills development according
to message type could be linked with such an investigation.
9. Taking into account message quality as well as quantity, in light of the findings that
business professionals sampled in this study have great pride and confidence in their
ability to produce good quality business writing but the review of collected qualitative
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data reveals many errors in professionals longhand writing, it would be ideal to
conduct a more objective study. This study should focus on non self-reported data in
ascertaining the state of business professionals ability to compose quality messages.
10. Lastly, a study to determine why e-mails are written at such an inferior quality
relative to other communications and an effort to determine the most effective ways in
which this problem can be focused on by training may eventually save business
professionals time and money through reduced confusion. Also, a study further
examining the motivation to construct external messages that are superior in quality to
internal communications may serve some purposean investigation of the confidence
level in creating communications may come into play in such a study.
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Date: 12-Jul-2004 22:43:37 -0500
From: <roach@siu.edu>
To: "lhwiggs" <lhwiggs@semo.edu>
Subject: RE: Your SIUC Dissertation
Joy,
You have my permission to use my materials. Good luck in your study.
>===== Original Message From roach@siu.edu =====
>Dear Dr. Wiggs:
>
>I hope your summer is going very well. I do hate to bother you out of the "blue" like
>this, Dr. Wiggs, but I have a question for you. I got your e-mail address from Dr.
>Marcia Anderson and I hope you dont mind my use of it to contact you. My name is
>Joy Roach, and as a doctoral candidate at SIU, (studying under Marcia Anderson, as
>you did), I came upon your dissertation and thought it would be a wonderful study to
>use as the basis for mine.
>
>Congratulations on such an interesting dissertation. In fact, I would like to ask your
>permission to use part of your survey instrument (especially the way you have the
>demographic part set up and your Likert investigation by document type) and even to
>perhaps use the same first two research questions that you did. If you would indeed
>give your permission, I would be greatly indebted to you.
>
>My plan is to investigate the types of written communications being created, the
>methods of creation, and the frequency of creation by type--just as you did, but in the
>light of new technology. It would be interesting to see the changes in the last 12 years.
>Also, my last few research questions incorporate some of the productivity aspect of
>document creation (perceptions of preparation for creating documents, perceived
>document quality, etc.) So, with your permission, my study would parallel yours at the
>beginning (the first two research questions), then would spin off in a slightly different
>direction from your subsequent questions. Of course, I am still in the initial stages of
>formulating my research plan.
>
>Thank you so much for your time and trouble, Dr. Wiggs. I really appreciate it. I hope
>to hear from you soon.
>
>Joy Roach
>Workforce Education and Development
>Southern Illinois University Carbondale
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APPENDIX B
B2:
B3:
B4:
Draft Instrument
B5:
160
B1:
161
B2:
162
B3:
No
If no, please cite the relevant section(s)/question(s) and any suggestions for
improvement:
No
If no, please cite the relevant section(s)/question(s) and any suggestions for
improvement:
163
3. Is each question worded in the best manner possible to get unbiased
and appropriate information from subjects?
Yes
No
If no, please give the question number(s) and suggestions for improvement:
No
No
No
If no, please cite the section(s) and any suggestions for improvement:
164
7. Are grammar, punctuation, and style elements accurate and
appropriate?
Yes
No
Yes
No
No
165
B4:
Draft Instrument
A.
B.
Gender: (
) Female
) Male
2.
3.
What classification best describes the type of organization for which you work?
(Check one)
( ) Agriculture, mining, construction
( ) Education
( ) Entrepreneurial
( ) Financial, insurance, real estate
( ) Government agency
( ) Manufacturing
( ) Retail trade (including restaurants)
( ) Services (including hospitals and hotels)
( ) Wholesale trade
( ) Other (please list) ______________________________________________
4.
What methods do you have access to in your work area for composing documents?
(Check ALL that apply)
(
(
(
(
(
(
(
(
6.
What administrative support is available to assist with your business document preparation?
(Please check ONLY ONE)
( ) Full-time administrative assistant who works for me
( ) Share administrative assistant(s) with other professionals
( ) Very limited administrative assistance available
( ) No administrative assistance available
( ) Other (please identify)__________________________________________________
7. Using the scale below, please circle the responses appropriate for how much time you take to complete writing
tasks according to method and type. For example, if you often key and send yourself to complete e-mail
messages, circle the 4 in the set of numbers in the top left of the table.
4
3
2
1
=
=
=
=
Often
Sometimes
Seldom
Never
E-MAIL
MESSAGES
LETTERS
REPORTS
FORMS
OTHER
(explain)
___________
Key and send myself with no assistance
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
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4 3 2 1
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4 3 2 1
___ Excellent
___ Good
___ Adequate
___ Poor
___Very poor
9. Overall, how would you rate the writing quality of internal written
communications thatyour colleagues create in regard to information
quality? Consider conciseness, clarity, and completeness of
information.
___ Excellent
___ Good
___ Adequate
___ Poor
___Very poor
10.
Comments:
___________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________
13.
11. Overall, how would you rate the writing quality of external written
communications (including letters, external reports, etc.) that your
colleagues create in regard to the amount of typographical/grammatical
errors, writing style, and syntax.
___ Excellent
___ Good
___ Adequate
___ Poor
___Very poor
12. Overall, how would you rate the writing quality of external written
communications that your colleagues create in regard to information
quality? Consider conciseness, clarity, and completeness of information.
___ Excellent
___ Good
___ Adequate
___ Poor
___Very poor
Comments:
___________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________
14. English courses in high school best prepared me for the type of business
documents I create at work.
15. I frequently put into practice what I learned in my college English courses
regarding written business communication.
16. I had training at the undergraduate level that sufficiently covered how to write
for business.
17. I now do not create my documents in the same manner that I created
assignments in my college business communications (or other business)
class(es).
18. I had training in my MBA program that sufficiently covered how to write for
business.
19. I now do not create my documents in the same manner that I created
assignments in my MBA program.
20. Company-sponsored training/orientations have sufficiently addressed written
communication issues at work.
21. It took me a while to adjust when I joined this firm in regard to being able to
create the most appropriate business documents in a fast-paced
environment.
22. My organization has sponsored sufficient training specifically geared to
develop the methods I use to create written communications at work.
23. My organization has sponsored training specifically to develop my
keyboarding speed and accuracy.
24. I need more training in regard to writing skills such as style, scope, and
grammar.
25. Training in software usage (Microsoft Word, Excel, etc.) would be/is
invaluable to me as a business professional.
26. I had sufficient formal training overall on how to format such documents as
memos, letters, and reports or work.
27. Business communication training in e-mail message
composition and etiquette is unnecessary.
28. I feel confident about my ability to create documents at work that are
understood.
29. Sometimes I wish my undergraduate and MBA curricula had covered more
aspects of choosing the right words in stressful situations.
Agree
Neutral
Disagree
Strongly
Disagree
For the following two questions, please mark the most appropriate slot.
30. Where did you learn to keyboard?
(Please check ALL that apply.)
(
(
(
(
(
(
(
)
)
)
)
)
)
)
Comments:
___________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________
E.
Agree
Neutral
Disagree
Strongly
Disagree
For the following two questions, please mark the appropriate box(es).
48. What workplace written communication below is a weakness and is the MOST DIFFICULT
for you to overcome?
(Please check ONLY ONE)
( ) Keyboarding speed
( ) Choosing the appropriate document format
( ) Writing skills/content creation
( ) Choosing the appropriate method of creation (dictation, key myself, etc.)
( ) Choosing the appropriate type of communication (letter, memo, etc.)
( ) Other business (please identify) ________________________________________
49. What aspect of workplace written communication output would you change to increase your
productivity?
(Check ALL that apply)
( ) Keyboarding speed
( ) Input technology available
( ) Administrative assistance available
( ) Greater writing skills/content creation training
( ) Document creation method training through increased software competency
( ) Other business (please identify) ________________________________________
THE SURVEY IS NOW COMPLETE! THANK YOU FOR YOUR TIME AND ASSISTANCE. IT IS GREATLY
APPRECIATED.
If you would like the studys overall results sent to you upon completion of the study, please provide your e-mail address in the following space:
________________________________
Please be assured that your address will be kept completely confidential and destroyed upon one-time use. It will neither be sold nor shared
with any outside party and will only be used to provide survey results to you.
Please mail all materials to:
Business Professionals Study
Department of WED
275 Clocktower Dr.
Southern Illinois University Carbondale
Carbondale, IL 62901-4605
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B5:
Table B5
Panel of Expert Members
Dr. Marsha Bayless
Department of General Business
College of Business
Stephen F. Austin State University
(Table B5 continues)
173
(Table B5 continued)
Panel of Expert Members (Continued)
Dr. Donna H. Redmann
School of Human Resource Education
& Workforce Development
College of Agriculture
Louisiana State University
Dr. Marcel M. Robles
Department of Management, Marketing, &
Administrative Communication
College of Business & Technology
Eastern Kentucky University
Dr. Lila Waldman
Department of Business Education &
Office Information Systems
College of Business
Bloomsburg University
Dr. Kelly Wilkinson
Department of administrative Systems &
Business Education
College of Business
Indiana State University
Dr. Dawn Woodland
Department of Technology Support &
Training
Eberly College of Business
Indiana University of Pennsylvania
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APPENDIX C
MATERIALS FOR PILOT STUDY INSTRUMENT ADMINISTRATION AND
REVIEW
C1:
C2a:
C2b:
C2c:
C3:
C4:
Pilot Instrument
C5:
175
C1:
176
C2a:
177
C2b:
178
C2c:
179
C3:
Yes
No
If yes, please cite the section(s) or question(s) and any suggestions for
improvement:
Section # _____ or Question # _____
Section # _____ or Question # _____
Yes
No
If yes, please cite the question(s) and any suggestions for improvement:
Question # _____
Question # _____
Question # _____
Question # _____
3. How long did it take to complete the questionnaire?
Yes
Is it too long?
No
4. After reading the cover letter that came with the questionnaire, would you be
persuaded to respond?
Yes
No
Perhaps
180
5. Please rate the overall difficulty in completing the questionnaire:
Extremely Difficult
Difficult
Moderate
Easy
Extremely Easy
6. Additional comments/suggestions:
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
181
C4:
Pilot Instrument
Female
Male
35-44
45-55
56 and above
First-line supervisory
Professional staff
Other (please identify)________________________________
5. What classification best describes the type of organization for which you work?
(Please check one.)
Agriculture, mining, construction
Manufacturing
Education
Retail trade (including restaurants)
Entrepreneurial
Services (including hospitals, hotels)
Financial, insurance, real estate
Wholesale trade
Government agency
Other (please identify)_______________________________
page 1
Internal Communication Communication to persons WITHIN the firm (includes e-mails, forms, internal reports, and memos)
8. Overall, how would you rate the writing quality of
internal written communication that your colleagues
routinely create? Consider keying accuracy, punctuation,
grammar, organization, and writing style.
Excellent
Good
Adequate
Poor
Very poor
10.
Excellent
Good
Adequate
Poor
Very poor
External Communication Communication to persons OUTSIDE the firm (includes e-mails, external reports, and letters)
11. Overall, how would you rate the writing quality of
external written communication you have seen that your
colleagues or employees of other firms routinely create?
Consider keying accuracy, punctuation, grammar,
organization, and writing style.
Excellent
Good
Adequate
Poor
Very poor
13.
14.
Excellent
Good
Adequate
Poor
Very poor
=
=
=
=
Regularly
Sometimes
Seldom
Never
E-MAIL
MESSAGES
MEMOS
LETTERS
REPORTS
FORMS
OTHER (identify)
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
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4 3 2 1
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4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
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4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
4 3 2 1
___________
page 2
Agree
Neutral
Disagree
Strongly
Disagree
page 3
Agree
Neutral
Disagree
Strongly
Disagree
Please provide comments you have regarding the aspects of workplace written communication addressed in this survey:
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
The survey is now complete. Thank you. Your time and assistance are greatly appreciated.
If you would like the overall results sent to you upon completion of the study, please provide your e-mail address in the following space:
______________________________________________________
Please be assured that your e-mail address will not be linked with any of your responses on this survey. Your address will be kept completely confidential
and destroyed upon one-time use. It will neither be sold nor shared with any outside party and will only be used to provide survey results to you.
Thank you. Please send to: Study of Business Professionals, 219 Pulliam Hall, SIUC, Carbondale, IL 62901-4605
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C5:
Results:
Yes
3
(9.4%)
Yes
No
No
29
(90.6%)
If yes, please cite the section(s) or question(s) and any suggestions for
improvement:
Pilot Subject
22
Question
Needing
Improvement
14
22
28
24
26
14
14
Comment:
Results:
Yes
3
(9.4%)
Yes
No
28
(87.5%)
If yes, please cite the question(s) and any suggestions for improvement:
Pilot Subject
22
22
Question
Needing
Improvement
14
6, 14
Comment:
No
187
Yes
Is it too long?
No
Results:
Yes
3
(9.4%)
No
28
(87.5%)
4. After reading the cover letter that came with the questionnaire, would you be
persuaded to respond?
Yes
No
Perhaps
Results:
Yes
18
(56.3%)
No
2
(6.3%)
Perhaps
12
(37.5%)
23
24
26
Comment:
Looks good.
None
188
5. Please rate the overall difficulty in completing the questionnaire:
Extremely Difficult
Difficult
Moderate
Easy
Results:
Extremely Difficult
Difficult
Moderate
Easy
Extremely Easy
0
1
6
19
6
0.0%
3.1%
18.8%
59.4%
18.8%
6. Additional comments/suggestions:
Pilot Subject
2
7
9
13
20
26
Comment:
Maybe a bit too long, but overall pretty well done.
Questions 33-48 should have had a N/A column.
Thanks for the pen!
Repetitive questions!
Some questions dont apply to my business so please add
non-applicable. Thanks.
Shorten.
Extremely Easy
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APPENDIX D
BUSINESS PROFESSIONALS WRITTEN MESSAGE CREATION PRACTICES
AND PRODUCTIVITY PERCEPTIONS
INSTRUMENTATION AND POPULATION CORRESPONDENCE
D1a:
D1b:
D1c:
D2:
D3:
Follow-Up Postcard
190
D1a:
August 2, 2005
191
D1b:
August 2, 2005
192
D1c:
August 2, 2005
193
D2:
Final Instrument
Are you currently working in a position that requires you to create business messages or documents?
Yes
If yes, please answer the following questions.
No
If no, please stop here and return this form in the enclosed envelope.
Female
Male
35-44
45-55
56 and above
page 1
8.
Using the scale below, please circle the responses appropriate for the frequency in which you create the following
messages/documents using a variety of input methods. For example, if you always key and complete
myself with no assistance when composing e-mail messages, circle the 3 in the first set of numbers.
3
2
1
= Always
= Sometimes
= Never
E-MAIL
MESSAGES
MEMOS
LETTERS
REPORTS
FORMS
3 2 1
3 2
3 2 1
3 2 1
3 2 1
3 2 1
3 2
3 2 1
3 2 1
3 2 1
3 2 1
3 2
3 2 1
3 2 1
3 2 1
3 2 1
3 2
3 2 1
3 2 1
3 2 1
3 2 1
3 2 1
3 2 1
3 2
3 2 1
3 2 1
3 2 1
3 2 1
3 2
3 2 1
Internal Communication Communication to persons WITHIN the firm (includes e-mails, forms, internal reports, and memos)
9. Overall, how would you rate the writing quality of
internal written communication that your colleagues
routinely create? Consider keying accuracy, punctuation,
grammar, organization, and writing style.
Excellent
Good
Adequate
Poor
Very poor
11.
Excellent
Good
Adequate
Poor
Very poor
External Communication Communication to persons OUTSIDE the firm (includes e-mails, external reports, and letters)
12. Overall, how would you rate the writing quality of
external written communication you have seen that your
colleagues or employees of other firms routinely create?
Consider keying accuracy, punctuation, grammar,
organization, and writing style.
Excellent
Good
Adequate
Poor
Very poor
14.
Excellent
Good
Adequate
Poor
Very poor
page 2
Agree
Neutral
Disagree
Strongly
Disagree
N/A
page 3
Agree
Neutral
Disagree
Strongly
Disagree
Please provide comments you have regarding the aspects of workplace written communication addressed in this survey
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
The survey is now complete. Thank you. Your time and assistance are greatly appreciated.
If you would like the overall results sent to you upon completion of the study, please provide your e-mail address in the following space:
______________________________________________________
Please be assured that your e-mail address will not be linked with any of your responses on this survey. Your address will be kept completely confidential
and destroyed upon one-time use. It will neither be sold nor shared with any outside party and will only be used to provide survey results to you.
Thank you. Please send to: Study of Business Professionals, c/o J Roach, 1503 Beckett Dr, Murray, KY 42071-3201
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D3:
Follow-Up Postcard
199
APPENDIX E
SUBJECT COMMENTS AND CROSSTABS TABLES
E1:
E2:
RESPONDENT COMMENTS
E3a:
E3b:
E3c:
E3d:
200
APPENDIX E1
SUMMARY OF RESPONSES CLASSIFIED AS OTHERS BY QUESTION AND
SUBJECT
Table E1
Responses Categorized as Others by Table Reference
Responses from Table 4 Respondents by Undergraduate Major(s)
SubjectNumber
Response
48
497
348
876
1207
361
264
1001
470
83
413
418
568
708
780
894
847
471
440
409
802
1057
General studies
University studies
Agribusiness
Administration of justice
Criminal justice
Music business
Home Economics
Fashion merchandising
WED-Healthcare MGT
Health care administration
Health care management
Hospitality management
Cinema & photography
Automotive technology
Aeronautics
Aviation management
Naval architecture
Workforce ed
Radio/Television
Japanese
Russian
International studies
From Table 7 - Respondents by Organizational Classification
48
920
1202
716
54
Nonprofit medical
501-C-3
NFP - evaluate/train the disabled for workforce
Oil & gas exploration & production
Natural gas transportation
(Table E1 continues)
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(Table E1 continued)
From Table 7 - Respondents by Organizational Classification (cont.)
Subject Number
Response
272
240
847
55
495
367
1098
1199
435
897
666
908
475
1159
1085
1207
661
616
219
1119
47
202
(Table E1 continued)
From Table 20 - Quality of External Messages by Type
Subject Number Response
966
264
479
1219
343
250
539
326
916
770
108
367
306
250
1088
394
780
1281
919
380
530
132
759
1247
735
1191
861
693
Preprinted forms/bills
Invoicing errors
Web pages
Support messages - private case notes
Ads mailed to customers that the customers don't
understand
From Table 24 Venue of Keyboarding Preparation
Military
Still hunt and peck
Mother taught me too [sic].
From Table 25 - Most Effective Message Preparation
Other undergrad course(s)
Business courses
Tech writing
Tech writing class & ENG 101/102
English - tech writing
Writing workshop, Dr. Bob Darrell
Literature
Public speaking
Journalism
Other communication class
Biology lab coursework
Engineering
Center for English as a second language SIU
Carbondale
Other preparation
US Navy
Service in US Military
Military
Ed.D. studies
Law school
Law school writing courses
Legal writing JD
MsEd Health Education
(Table E1 continues)
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(Table E1 continued)
From Table 25 - Most Effective Message Preparation (cont.)
Subject Number Response
1199
894
296
1205
388
951
Hands-on experience
1219
Keyboarding accuracy
Formatting
Formatting a document (creating tables, etc.)
Use of software
Updates/changes in computer programs
What level of knowledge to write on depending on
what dept. I'm sending to
Grammer [sic]/Punctuation
When to e-mail to provide a "trail" of documentation
& when to have face to face conversation
Choosing the correct (or most effective) words
Word choice as it pertains to tone
Best wording
Managing multiple communications
Informal memos
Providing constructive critcism [sic] in writing
Clearly communicating complex topics/issues
Time it takes to obtain necessary info before I can
compose document.
Producing a quality error free document with limited
time.
Time to devote to top-notch comms.
Having uninterrupted time to communicate
Time to do it
(Table E1 continues)
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(Table E1 continued)
From Table 27 - Perception of Top Communication Skills Weakness
(cont.)
Subject Number Response
111
1124
1219
275
1100
1155
849
1263
418
55
1219
780
661
1100
388
440
511
Keyboarding accuracy
Voice recognition
Voice recognition software
Less volume of received email to need to respond to
Longer deadlines
Better document templates
Boiler plate correspondence
Others knowing more about how to communicate
Overcoming language barriers
More assistance in administrative help
Finding dedicated admin assist
Competent employees
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Appendix E2
Respondent Comments
(Subject) Comment
(1076) I have struggled with proper grammar.
(1137) Most of my contacts have not taken any business communications courses and
could benefit from doing so. Many emails tend to be too informal when addressing
business issues with colleagues or clients, if I proofread a document for a co-worker I
typically make suggestions that make the message more clear, concise, & formal.
(920) I do not have voice recognition software. Two facts have greatly helped me: I
went to a top notch boarding school, and I majored in English for my B.A.
(419) Correct written communication is declining in the work place due to email.
(163) More grammar related courses on all educational levels.
(306) Five important components are proper spelling, grammar, sentence structure, style,
& format. Also people need to write to the audience.
(606) I do think that e-mail needs to be dealt with in courses; the best way to write them,
follow up, when to send, etc. It seems that interpretation of e-mail messages has caused a
lot of stress in my line of work.
(1100) Communication required between myself and other analysts/co-workers in Japan.
Trying to speak in a manner easiest for them is new to me.
(53) Voice recognition software is not used in my company.
(240) While I indicated that I had had sufficient training in writing skills & content, more
training would be beneficial. Any questions involving voice recognition software is not
applicable to my work environment.
(313) Writing skills should be focused on heavily in high school & undergraduate studies.
The quality of writing among new graduates is diminishing. They do not know how to
write simple policies, procedures, reports or even simple e-mail messages.
(86) Good luck!
(249) This is an area that many professionals are lacking. Communication is extremely
important in the business environment.
206
(916) Many individuals in professional roles do not have adequate writing skills.
(348) Sometimes the biggest difficulty is getting fellow employees to respond to my
communication that I have put in writing. Its too easy to ignore an email and I often have
to use the phone to chase people down.
(1045) My high school English grammar, spelling, and communication training was
outstanding; far better than any college courses. I also had outstanding training in typing
on a manual typewriter in high school. My background was a college piano major has
also contributed to my keyboard accuracy and speed. Most of my software skills as selftaught.
(1027) I send more than 100 e-mails a day.
(681) Of all of my friends & associates I do not know anyone that has access to an
admin assistant for writing not consulting firm partners not senior VPs. I have never
heard of anyone that is not handicaped using voice recognition software
furthermore it is not viable in cubes.
(743) Computers were not widely used when I was in high school or an undergraduate.
All computer skills I have had to learn on my own. Business letter writing was not
covered in any high school or undergraduate or graduate level course. I have had to
apply general writing skills to business type communications.
(841) Work place communication is not limited to e-mail and Microsoft Word
advanced skills in spreadsheets, slides (PowerPoint, etc.) is needed. I fine recent business
graduates lacking in these areas.
(708) One thing to consider for MBA curriculum is additional emphasis on
communication styles/etiquettes of various cultures.
(326) As technology ever increases, we as business professionals have to find creative
ways to eliminate the use of paper communications. As a result, I prefer communicating
via email and our business internal email/data communications system.
(530) I personally did not take college-level English courses. I learned my professional
writing skills on-the-job in the US Navy. Writing is a hobby for me.
(374) It is surprising how many people do not proof their work. Many do not use Spell
Check, let alone look for errors that Spell Check will not find.
(607) The cast majority of my written communication is through email. I am very careful
in proofreading the messages that I create. It amazes me how many emails I receive
throughout a typical day that have several spelling and grammatical errors. Good luck
with your study.
207
(663) Im not sure about some of these questions. I think the MBA is wonderful, but
written skills are important.
(927) Most employees send quick emails that often contain short, choppy, or incomplete
sentences.
(1219) I am a computer professional. Need a product to write manuals. Also need to
turn off lots of MS Word features. Also Outlook can be annoying. I document many
procedures, events in emails.
(95) I think workplace written communication needs to be given a higher ranking during
the MBA training. But I think I was fortunate to receive more training than most.
(948) I think that the most difficult part of business communication would be the ability
to answer questions when put on the spot or under pressure.
(1249) Emails are the most widely used form on communication today replacing the
telephone and its provides documentation.
(1258) When I was an undergrad only accounting majors were required to take Business
Communication. I always thought that was silly because all business majors should have
been exposed to that during undergrad.
(362) It is very important to write and create good writing skills in business
communications.
(199) Good luck! Interesting study. The use of voice recognition technology has not hit
our industry or at least not this region. Might include questions as far as form letters. We
use lots of can or form letters and modify.
(516) Good written communication skills are essential in ones daily operations.
(661) I strongly recommend a series of Speech Communication / Interpersonal Comm.
Classes manditory for all business students. Many undergrad curriculum in this prepared
me more for the business world than my prerequisite business classes I had to take. The
MBA has been useful in general knowledge and aspects of business development, but the
day-to-day tasks were better developed by my undergrad. education.
(367) email still the number one communication method used at my workplace. Then
comes internal website.
(319) I think more professionals should proofread their communications before sending
them. Spelling is a major challenge for many people.
(730) I havent used voice recognition software but I think it would be very beneficial to
my work, and it would save time.
208
(1260) I have observed that business communication is becoming less formal over time
and that information content and clarity has suffered accordingly.
(1166) Technically speaking any softwares or input technology does not matter to
improve my business. Probably 90% of communication would be verbal. Think of the
original meaning of message! This is only a one-way notice. You just send them. Thats
it. You have to listen!!!
(265) 1) Questions almost seem to be steering you toward a preselected answer. 2)
Bottom line: a) Business majors need more English/writing courses/training b) Email has
replaced memos & letters, both internally & externally. More training needed for this
fairly new business communication tool.
(270) Technical writing undergrad course was basis for formal training. I believe my
documents are well written & organized in most cases. I believe I could benefit from
more formal training as I spend a lot of time composing the docs.
(418) While I indicated that email is probably the lowest quality it is also the highest
volume of business communication. Memos & letters tend to be rare and are always
outdated when received. I have little use or interaction with paper communications in
such a fast paced environment. Electronic communication is the most efficient despite
the quality or tone issues that can arise.
(539) Good luck!
(66) One of the major problems with e-mail or word processing software is spellcheck. I
have seen several errors which contain correctly spelled words; however, the words do
not make any sense in the way they were used. Many employees do not proof the e-mail
since spellcheck found no errors.
(514) My associate degree in Office Systems & Specialties provided much more details
about composed business documents & communication than any business course at
COBA.
(380) English is my second language, it would have been appropriate to ask that
information. SIU-Carbondale used to be among the top ten universities with largest
international-students population. However, it looks like that important factor continues
to be overlooked.
(479) Software such as Word are great tools unavailable in the not so distant past.
However, blind usage of tools such as spellcheck & grammer check without proofreading
greatly attribute to many of todays failures in written communication. This is also
evidenced in regular media outlets such as magazines and papers.
209
(831) Easily 95% of our internal and external communication is in email format. I
believe that the proliferation of email in modern business is a curse and has significantly
reduced my overall effectiveness as manager. Most of my peers spend half their day in
electronic communication, even on laptops at meetings.
(740) I find that many persons suffer from (what I consider) very poor writing skills. I
am often embarrassed by what I read at work.
(394) A) You need a little more focus on small business and home-based operations that
make several of your questions moot. B) My business--communication consulting--is
based upon a high quality work product. C) Overall, e-mail is the poorest quality
communication product of any in my experience.
(1278) As the only individual on staff that is trained to complete many accounting
reports, much of the work has to be done by myself. Also, internal software the
inventory & OL is DOS-based therefore it is hard to train additional employees.
(388) Quality of written communication is typically poor with administrative assistants.
It is very difficult to find assistants that have the ability to write effective sentences, thus
I needlessly do more drafting of simple documents on my own.
(1088) 1) E-mail etiquette is, perhaps, the most overlooked necessity in large
corporations. 2) Every email Ive received from top-mgt. has had at least one typo or
major misspelling! 3) The use of cc: & bc: can be ridiculous. Top-level mgt. can get
involved in too many emails due to this. I feel the bcc: should be abolished! 4) Lack of
etiquette can lead to misunderstandings & resentment.
(616) Nothing prepares you for entering the workplace. Learning while doing and by
having examples provided showing the accepted formats and politically correct language,
as well as the correct people to provide information to is essential. Good luck!
(1292) Biggest mistakes in writing style, grammar, & content are usually seen in emails.
(605) As mentioned in one of the questions I wish I could articulate better in my
writing.
(440) Due to my proficiency with word processing software, as well as my above average
keyboarding speed, creating written communication is usually accomplished easily and
much quicker when done myselfespecially if it has to go out right away. Also, I
usually talk out what I need to say. While I am doing this, I am also typing it.
(1155) No comments except to say good luck w/your research. Can I get a copy of the
presentation?
210
(1198) #47 should have an NA option as people like myself may not have voice
recognition software. #8 if you answered 3 for the first item as in not having an
assistant then there should be instruction to not answer items that follow.
(998) The written documents I learned to create is business school (undergraduate &
graduate) bears little, if any, resemblance to the writing required in my experience in the
real world. I have yet to complete any research paper in my entire professional career.
The only element from business school writing to my real world experience is that
bsuiness school taught me how to think and explore. Nothing in my formal education
taught me to write memos, prepare PowerPoint presentations, email my boss,
subordinates or Directors or real world proposals. These skills I had to learn myself on
the job. School is valuable but in my experience it bears little resemblance to the real
world.
(67) E-mails in general have become the biggest limiting factor in my daily productivity.
Too many unnecessary e-mails are sent back & forth (internally) on a daily basis.
(1247) Organizations should use more wireless technology for easier access.
(26) I believe emails are often sent hurriedly and therefore have mistakes that reflect
upon a person.
(132) Business communication must be practical and critiqued at all levels to be effective
in the workplace. The equipment and software we have today is superb we just have to
make sure its use will improve overall productivity and not make more work than is
necessary.
(238) Comment typing class in high school was very important. Technical writing
classes in college would have been helpful I did not take the one which was available.
(303) In my current position, I basically only utilize e-mail so my answers are not very
helpful Im afraid. I believe that Murray State has a very strong MBA program!
(908) I went into my MBA program with strong written communication skills; therefore,
I did not seek additional training in that discipline. I believe that I had better basic
language education than some of my classmates. I was also much older than most of
them.
(1276) I had a great English teacher at a private high school, I was well prepared to
communicate properly and effectively.
(1163) Interface with database for communications is very important to my work
db/doc creation still a problem for me.
(509) Good luck with your research!
211
(661) What best prepared me for creating business messages was experience different
companies have different parameters you have to adapt depending on the corporate
culture and industry you may be working in.
(464) The understanding of what to say & what not to say and determining how to say it.
In my field (HR) I see a number of mgrs who need coaching in dealing with employees in
all aspects (disipline, layoff, promotion, reviews, etc.) Communication is critical in
keeping us out of court not just the message but how it is delivered can encourage
people to file or not.
(18) In my industry there is still a strong emphasis on verbal communication, both
internally and externally, which has a definite impact on the resources used to improve
written communications.
(189) In my work environment, we do not use dictation nor voice recognition software.
The later could be of great benefit because I am not as efficient with the keyboard.
(221) I believe a combination of middle and high school, undergraduate, and graduate
studies provided me superior training in written communication. Composition skills are
developed through learning spelling & spelling rules, grammer, phonics, styles, etc. I
believe my senior English in high school, though difficult, was most influential, in
developing my composition skills.
(1284) E-mail has become the communication tool of choice because of the ease of use.
There have not been any rules established.
(58) I am very interested in voice recognition software and I will urge my organization to
research this possibility.
(64) I dont see the relevance of the survey. If you had problems with written
communication, you probably did not get your MBA.
(409) Should add N/A for section 4. Good luck!
(770) I would hesitate to use voice recognition or dictation software. Since I usualloy
sort out my thoughts as I write & therefore have the ability to rearrange &/or change the
ideas I want to convey as they come to me.
(769) The hardest thing is trying to communicate highly technical info or complicated
financial info in a way that people without such backgrounds can fully understand the
message.
(1081) I wish we had a class at my organization on writing or addressing our customers
and all internal memos. A policy on emails and letters would be a start also a better
understanding or Microsoft Word would be a big help to me.
212
(111) Biggest problems w/written communication is memos, e-mails from others who
have poor English and grammar skills & reluctance to be willing to improve. Lots of
people in the organization never had to communicate before, but now with tools they
have they are forced to use them, but basic English skills are lacking including spelling.
(138) You should prepare a survey based on oral communication rather than written. I
feel oral communication is a necessiry in professionals today and many are lacking in
these skills.
213
APPENDIX E3a
CHI-SQUARE RESULT TABLES FOR PROFESSIONALS PERCEPTIONS OF
PREPARATION TO CREATE WRITTEN BUSINESS COMMUNICATIONS
214
Gender Comparison with Perceptions of Preparation to Create Written Communications
CROSSTABS Results
df=1
15. English/language courses in high school
sufficiently prepared me for the type of
business messages/documents I now create
at work.
16. I frequently apply business writing skills
learned in my undergraduate English
courses.
17. I wish I had taken more undergraduate
courses in written communication.
18. I no longer create my business
messages/documents in the same manner
that was taught in my undergraduate
business communication (or other business)
class(es).
19. I had training in my MBA program that
sufficiently covered how to write for
business.
20. I no longer create my business
messages/documents in the same manner
that was taught in my MBA program.
21. I had company-sponsored training
programs/orientations that sufficiently
addressed workplace written communication
issues.
22. When I joined this organization, I had to
work hard to be able to create the most
appropriate business messages in a fastpaced environment.
23. My organization has provided sufficient
training to enhance the input methods
(software, voice recognition, etc.) I use to
create written communication at work.
24. My organization has provided sufficient
training to develop my keyboarding/typing
speed and accuracy.
25. I need more training in regard to writing
skills such as punctuation and grammar.
26. I need more training in regard to writing
skills such as style and scope (i.e., tone,
organization, and flow).
27. I had sufficient formal training on how to
correctly format business documents such as
memos, letters, and reports.
28. Formal training in e-mail message
composition and etiquette is not necessary.
29. I feel confident about my ability to create
business messages/documents that are
understood.
30. Sometimes I wish my undergraduate or MBA
curricula had covered more aspects of
choosing the right words in stressful
situations.
Sig.
(2-tail)
Fishers
(2-tail)
Phi
.032
.858
.908
-.010
.309
.578
.641
.032
6.672
.010
.013
-.160
.008
.930
1.00
-.005
.739
.390
.405
-.051
.663
.416
.501
-.058
.973
.324
.370
.059
4.139
.042
.054
-.118
.938
.333
.376
-.060
.480
.489
.540
-.043
10.576
.001
.001
-.180
2.901
.089
.111
-.096
5.966
.015
.019
-.136
.567
.452
.479
.041
1.374
.241
.380
-.062
.000
.997
1.00
.000
Pearson
2
^^
Note. Symbol ^^ = tentative result as more than 20% of cells had a count of less than 5. Yates
Yates:
.471
215
Sig.
(2-tail)
Fishers
(2-tail)
Phi
.349
.555
.658
.036
.346
.557
.537
-.036
1.442
.230
.259
.080
3.850
.050
.067
-.128
1.076
.300
.359
-.066
.972
.324
.378
.076
2.243
.134
.180
.096
.386
.534
.546
-.039
.126
.723
.746
.023
.712
.399
.579
-.056
.215
.643
.728
.028
.688
.407
.442
.050
1.961
.161
.178
-.084
1.601
.206
.202
.075
1.823
.177
.214
-.077
.059
.808
.851
.015
Pearson
^^
Yates:
.572
^^
Yates:
.457
Note. Symbol ^^ = tentative result as more than 20% of cells had a count of less than 5. Yates
216
Sig.
(2-tail)
Cramers V
1.274
.529
.064
.426
.808
.037
1.212
.546
.068
6.521
.038
.156
10.206
.006
.188
2.970
.227
.123
.278
.870
.032
.031
.984
.010
1.175
.556
.067
1.650
.438
.080
.711
.701
.047
4.790
.091
.123
2.637
.268
.090
.096
.953
.017
1.826
.401
.072
3.038
.219
.102
Pearson
^^
217
Pearson
2
Sig.
(2-tail)
Cramers V
.017
.017
.079
.165
.068
.195
.007
.101
.134
.202
.026
.116
.125
.022
.110
.083
^^
218
Pearson
2
Sig.
(2-tail)
Cramers V
.068
.119
.093
.233
.181
.101
.091
.132
.129
.117
.069
.130
.091
.057
.151
.079
^^
219
Pearson
2
Sig.
(2-tail)
Cramers V
.077
.106
.133
.111
.068
.118
.053
.074
.017
.124
.020
.101
.071
.068
.037
.108
^^
220
APPENDIX E3b
SPSS CONTINGENCY TABLES FOR PROFESSIONALS PERCEPTIONS OF
PREPARATION TO CREATE WRITTEN BUSINESS COMMUNICATIONS
CROSSTABS ANALYSES
221
Contingency Figures for Significant Statements (Instrument #15-30) and Gender
(gender 1=female; 2=male)
Likert collapsed to (2=SA/A, 3=N, 4=D/SD)
#17, 22, 25, 27
#17
Crosstab
gender1
1
prep17
Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
53
60.7
14.6%
42
47.1
11.5%
70
57.1
19.2%
165
165.0
45.3%
81
73.3
22.3%
62
56.9
17.0%
56
68.9
15.4%
199
199.0
54.7%
Total
134
134.0
36.8%
104
104.0
28.6%
126
126.0
34.6%
364
364.0
100.0%
#22
Crosstab
gender1
1
prep22
Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
43
51.5
14.5%
93
84.5
31.4%
136
136.0
45.9%
2
69
60.5
23.3%
91
99.5
30.7%
160
160.0
54.1%
Total
112
112.0
37.8%
184
184.0
62.2%
296
296.0
100.0%
222
#25
Crosstab
gender1
1
prep25
Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
20
31.5
5.5%
16
18.3
4.4%
131
117.3
35.8%
167
167.0
45.6%
49
37.5
13.4%
24
21.7
6.6%
126
139.7
34.4%
199
199.0
54.4%
Total
69
69.0
18.9%
40
40.0
10.9%
257
257.0
70.2%
366
366.0
100.0%
Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
28
35.9
7.6%
14
20.0
3.8%
125
111.0
34.1%
167
167.0
45.5%
2
51
43.1
13.9%
30
24.0
8.2%
119
133.0
32.4%
200
200.0
54.5%
Total
79
79.0
21.5%
44
44.0
12.0%
244
244.0
66.5%
367
367.0
100.0%
223
Contingency Figures for Significant Statements (Instrument #15-30) and Age
Likert collapsed to (2=SA/A, 4=SD/D)
Age collapsed to (2: ages 0-34, 3: ages 35-44, 4: ages 45+)
#18 & 19
#18
Crosstab
2
prep18
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Total
37
46.3
13.8%
97
87.7
36.1%
134
134.0
49.8%
age3
3
35
31.1
13.0%
55
58.9
20.4%
90
90.0
33.5%
4
21
15.6
7.8%
24
29.4
8.9%
45
45.0
16.7%
Total
93
93.0
34.6%
176
176.0
65.4%
269
269.0
100.0%
2
prep19
Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
67
77.5
18.5%
31
35.0
8.6%
73
58.6
20.2%
171
171.0
47.2%
age3
3
60
56.2
16.6%
28
25.3
7.7%
36
42.5
9.9%
124
124.0
34.3%
4
37
30.4
10.2%
15
13.7
4.1%
15
23.0
4.1%
67
67.0
18.5%
Total
164
164.0
45.3%
74
74.0
20.4%
124
124.0
34.3%
362
362.0
100.0%
224
Contingency Figures for Significant Statements (Instrument #15-30) and Graduate
Institution
Likert collapsed to (2=SA/A, 4=SD/D)
Institution collapsed to (1=largest/doctoral, 2=middle/master, 3=smallest/master)
(No significance found)
#18, 20, 24
#18
Crosstab
1
prep18
Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
22
15.6
9.1%
23
29.4
9.5%
45
45.0
18.5%
position
2
34
32.8
14.0%
61
62.2
25.1%
95
95.0
39.1%
4
28
35.6
11.5%
75
67.4
30.9%
103
103.0
42.4%
Total
84
84.0
34.6%
159
159.0
65.4%
243
243.0
100.0%
20
Crosstab
1
prep20
Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
14
8.6
7.7%
22
27.4
12.2%
36
36.0
19.9%
position
2
12
17.6
6.6%
62
56.4
34.3%
74
74.0
40.9%
4
17
16.9
9.4%
54
54.1
29.8%
71
71.0
39.2%
Total
43
43.0
23.8%
138
138.0
76.2%
181
181.0
100.0%
225
24 (reverse coded)
Crosstab
position
2
93
89.7
39.7%
6
9.3
2.6%
99
99.0
42.3%
1
prep24
Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
26
30.8
11.1%
8
3.2
3.4%
34
34.0
14.5%
4
93
91.5
39.7%
8
9.5
3.4%
101
101.0
43.2%
Total
212
212.0
90.6%
22
22.0
9.4%
234
234.0
100.0%
4
prep18 2
Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
13
16.4
5.5%
34
30.6
14.5%
47
47.0
20.0%
5
10
11.2
4.3%
22
20.8
9.4%
32
32.0
13.6%
firmtype
6
31
22.3
13.2%
33
41.7
14.0%
64
64.0
27.2%
8
27
26.2
11.5%
48
48.8
20.4%
75
75.0
31.9%
9
1
5.9
.4%
16
11.1
6.8%
17
17.0
7.2%
Total
82
82.0
34.9%
153
153.0
65.1%
235
235.0
100.0%
226
Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Total
61
66.9
26.0%
124
118.1
52.8%
185
185.0
78.7%
24
18.1
10.2%
26
31.9
11.1%
50
50.0
21.3%
85
85.0
36.2%
150
150.0
63.8%
235
235.0
100.0%
227
APPENDIX E3c
CHI-SQUARE RESULT TABLES FOR PROFESSIONALS PERCEPTIONS OF
PRODUCTIVITY IN CREATING WRITTEN BUSINESS COMMUNICATIONS
228
Sig.
(2-tail)
Fishers
(2-tail)
Phi
2.986
.084
.087
-.099
1.065
.302
.372
-.060
.877
.349^^
1.00
-.049
.009
.926
1.00
.005
.053
.818
.871
.013
2.224
.136
.155
-.097
8.220
.004
.004
-.174
.020
.887
.903
.008
.888
.346
.458
-.049
3.410
.065
.075
.103
1.212
.271
.351
.061
.231
.631
.692
-.029
1.056
.304
.307
.059
1.705
.192
.226
-.078
.199
.656
.782
.031
.417
.518
.592
-.036
Pearson
2
Note. Symbol ^^ = tentative result as more than 20% of cells had a count of less than 5. Yates
Yates:
1.00
Yates:
.576
Yates:
.550
229
Pearson
Sig.
(2-tail)
Fishers
(2-tail)
.330
.566
.606
2.044
.153
.185
-.090
.287
.592
1.00
.030
Yates:
1.00
2.437
.119
.182
.089
Yates:
.195
2.672
.102
.131
.095
1.877
.171
.196
-.096
.335
.563
.630
.038
.932
.334
.427
.055
.009
.925
1.00
.005
3.558
.059
.075
.114
.772
.380
1.00
.052
.125
.724
.857
-.023
1.050
.305
.343
.063
.054
.816
.879
.015
.016
.899
1.000
.010
.287
.592
.720
.032
Phi
-.035
Yates:
1.00
Yates:
.875
Yates:
1.00
Note. Symbol ^^ = tentative result as more than 20% of cells had a count of less than 5. Yates continuity
correction is present for these items.
230
Sig.
(2-tail)
Cramers V
8.903
.012
.171
4.677
.096
.127
1.084
.582
.055
4.507
.105
.113
5.843
.054
.131
2.429
.297
.101
.510
.775
.043
2.101
.350
.077
.223
.895
.025
5.463
.065
.131
.956
.620
.054
3.112
.211
.105
.060
.970
.014
4.909
.086
.133
3.400
.183
.129
3.960
.138
.111
Pearson
2
Note. Symbol ^^ = tentative result as more than 20% of cells had a count of less than 5.
*p<.05
^^
^^
^^
^^
231
Sig.
(2-tail)
Cramers V
2.061
.357
.086
.317
.854
.035
1.391
.499
.065
3.592
.166
.106
8.684
.013
.168
3.923
.141
.134
.736
.692
.055
4.485
.106
.118
.703
.704
.046
5.545
.062
.137
.337
.845
.034
4.098
.129
.127
2.170
.338
.088
.108
.947
.020
2.997
.224
.127
1.200
.549
.064
Pearson
2
Note. Symbol ^^ = tentative result as more than 20% of cells had a count of less than 5.
*p<.05
^^
^^
^^
232
Sig.
(2-tail)
Cramers V
2.339
.674
.093
11.258
.024
.207
2.016
.733
.079
^^
.920
.922
.054
^^
5.867
.209
.139
3.356
.500
.127
18.235
.001
.273
13.655
.008
.208
1.230
.873
.062
^^
7.716
.103
.165
4.016
.404
.118
.900
.924
.060
5.798
.215
.147
5.761
.218
.154
2.280
.684
.113
5.867
.209
.143
Pearson
2
Note. Symbol ^^ = tentative result as more than 20% of cells had a count of less than 5.
*p<.05
^^
^^
233
Sig.
(2-tail)
Cramers V
6.956
.031
.151
1.668
.434
.075
1.870
.393
.072
.826
.662
.048
2.275
.321
.082
7.364
.025
.176
.212
.900
.028
.396
.820
.033
1.989
.370
.074
1.845
.398
.076
3.537
.171
.104
1.515
.469
.073
.022
.989
.009
.293
.864
.032
.376
.821
.043
.873
.646
.052
Pearson
2
Note. Symbol ^^ = tentative result as more than 20% of cells had a count of less than 5.
*p<.05
^^
^^
^^
^^
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APPENDIX E3d
SPSS CONTINGENCY TABLES FOR PROFESSIONALS PERCEPTIONS OF
PRODUCTIVITY IN CREATING WRITTEN BUSINESS COMMUNICATIONS
CROSSTABS ANALYSES
235
Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
38
49.6
13.9%
85
73.4
31.1%
123
123.0
45.1%
Total
110
110.0
40.3%
163
163.0
59.7%
273
273.0
100.0%
72
60.4
26.4%
78
89.6
28.6%
150
150.0
54.9%
Age
Age collapsed to (2: ages 0-34, 3: ages 35-44, 4: ages 45+)
Likert collapsed to (2=SA/A, 4=SD/D)
#33 & 37
#33
Crosstab
2
prod33
Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
26
37.3
8.5%
124
112.7
40.5%
150
150.0
49.0%
age3
3
36
27.6
11.8%
75
83.4
24.5%
111
111.0
36.3%
4
14
11.2
4.6%
31
33.8
10.1%
45
45.0
14.7%
Total
76
76.0
24.8%
230
230.0
75.2%
306
306.0
100.0%
236
#37
Crosstab
2
prod37
Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
27
19.9
8.0%
130
137.1
38.3%
157
157.0
46.3%
age3
3
12
15.2
3.5%
108
104.8
31.9%
120
120.0
35.4%
4
4
7.9
1.2%
58
54.1
17.1%
62
62.0
18.3%
Total
43
43.0
12.7%
296
296.0
87.3%
339
339.0
100.0%
Position
Likert collapsed to (2=SA/A, 4=SD/D)
Positon collapsed to (1=senior, 2=mid-level and first-line, 4=professional staff. Other
for position was extracted entirely.)
#37 only
#37
Crosstab
1
prod37
Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
14
7.3
4.5%
44
50.7
14.3%
58
58.0
18.8%
position
2
13
15.1
4.2%
106
103.9
34.4%
119
119.0
38.6%
4
12
16.6
3.9%
119
114.4
38.6%
131
131.0
42.5%
Total
39
39.0
12.7%
269
269.0
87.3%
308
308.0
100.0%
237
#33 & 38
#33
Crosstab
1
prod33
Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
18
26.2
5.9%
88
79.8
28.7%
106
106.0
34.5%
universi
2
24
24.0
7.8%
73
73.0
23.8%
97
97.0
31.6%
3
34
25.7
11.1%
70
78.3
22.8%
104
104.0
33.9%
Total
76
76.0
24.8%
231
231.0
75.2%
307
307.0
100.0%
#38
Crosstab
1
prod38
Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
16
24.1
6.7%
66
57.9
27.7%
82
82.0
34.5%
universi
2
28
20.9
11.8%
43
50.1
18.1%
71
71.0
29.8%
3
26
25.0
10.9%
59
60.0
24.8%
85
85.0
35.7%
Total
70
70.0
29.4%
168
168.0
70.6%
238
238.0
100.0%
238
Type of Organization
(Collapsed to 2=SA/A, 4=SD/D only)
Type collapsed to (4: Financial, insurance, & real estate, 5: government agency, 6:
Manufacturing, & agriculture, mining, construction, 8: Education & services, 9: Retail
trade & wholesale trade)
#34, 39, & 40
#34
Crosstab
4
prod34 2
Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
Count
Expected Count
% of Total
6
9.1
2.3%
42
38.9
15.9%
48
48.0
18.2%
5
2
6.8
.8%
34
29.2
12.9%
36
36.0
13.6%
firmtype
6
19
15.2
7.2%
61
64.8
23.1%
80
80.0
30.3%
8
22
15.9
8.3%
62
68.1
23.5%
84
84.0
31.8%
9
1
3.0
.4%
15
13.0
5.7%
16
16.0
6.1%
Total
50
50.0
18.9%
214
214.0
81.1%
264
264.0
100.0%
239
#39
Crosstab
prod39 2
Total
4
Count
32
Expected Count 20.5
% of Total
13.1%
Count
18
Expected Count 29.5
% of Total
7.4%
Count
50
Expected Count 50.0
% of Total
20.5%
5
6
12.7
2.5%
25
18.3
10.2%
31
31.0
12.7%
firmtype
6
30
29.5
12.3%
42
42.5
17.2%
72
72.0
29.5%
26
30.3
10.7%
48
43.7
19.7%
74
74.0
30.3%
6
7.0
2.5%
11
10.0
4.5%
17
17.0
7.0%
Total
100
100.0
41.0%
144
144.0
59.0%
244
244.0
100.0%
4
prod40 2
Total
Count
15
Expected Count 14.6
% of Total
4.7%
Count
45
Expected Count 45.4
% of Total
14.2%
Count
60
Expected Count 60.0
% of Total
19.0%
13
8.8
4.1%
23
27.2
7.3%
36
36.0
11.4%
firmtype
6
14
23.1
4.4%
81
71.9
25.6%
95
95.0
30.1%
8
25
25.3
7.9%
79
78.7
25.0%
104
104.0
32.9%
9
10
5.1
3.2%
11
15.9
3.5%
21
21.0
6.6%
Major
Collapsed to business majors versus non-business majors.
Likert collapsed to SD/D versus SA/A
-- 2X2 table.)
No significance
Total
77
77.0
24.4%
239
239.0
75.6%
316
316.0
100.0%
240
APPENDIX F
HUMAN SUBJECTS COMMITTEES APPROVALS
F1a:
F1b:
241
F1a: Written Permission to Contact Murray State University Alumni
242
F2b: Written Permission to Contact University of Tennessee at Martin Alumni
January 5, 2005
Joy Roach
Computer Science & Information Systems
112 Business Administration Bldg.
CAMPUS MAIL
IRB# EO54230-02
Title: Business Professionals Document Creation Methods and Productivity Perceptions
Dear Ms. Roach:
The project listed above has been reviewed by the Expedited Review Board and has been approved
allowing you to conduct your research for the following reasons: 1) presents no more than minimal risk to
the participants and 2) Research on individual or group characteristics or behavior (including, but not
limited to research on perceptions, cognition, motivation, identity, language, communication, cultural
beliefs or practices, and social behavior) or research employing survey, interview, oral history, focus group,
program evaluation, human factors evaluation, or quality assurance methodologies.
The responsibilities of the investigators are to abide by the regulations governing research involving human
participants, including those provisions specifying the means of obtaining informed consent. In all cases,
the standards of respect for persons, beneficence, and justice enumerated by the Ethical Principles and
Guidelines for the Protection of Human Subjects of Research (Belmont Report) apply to all research
involving human participants conducted at UT Martin. Please note that you are also committed to the other
Investigator Responsibilities as stated in the IRB Expedited Review Form packet.
All expedited approved research is subject to UTM-IRB review, at least once a year. Attached is the
Change/Termination Form that you will need to complete and submit if your project remains active and
UTM-IRB approval needs to be renewed for another year. Unless your research moves in a few direction
or participants have experienced adverse reactions, then renewal is not a major hurdle. You as Principal
Investigator are responsible for determining whether the changes will affect the current status of the
project. When you complete your research, file a Change/Termination Form (attached) and check the
termination box. This will allow the UT Martin IRB Compliance Section to close your project files. Please
remember that it is the responsibility of the Principal Investigator to keep the data that is collected in a
secure location for 3 years after the completion of the research project.
We wish you success in your research endeavors.
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VITA
Graduate School
Southern Illinois University Carbondale
Awards:
Best Paper Award, Academic Business World Conference, 2005, Nashville, TN
Dissertation Title:
Factors Affecting Written Business Communication Creation and Productivity
Perceptions
Publications:
Durden, K. A., & Roach, J. L. (2005). The Matrix: Reloaded for the information
systems classroom. The Journal of Learning in Higher Education, 1(1) , 67-70.
Roach, J., & Hogan, L. (2004). The specific focus in the new AACSB standards on
assurance of learning and the implications involved for business teacher
educators. NABTE Review, 31, 64-68.
Daniel, L., & Roach, J. (2001). Preparing students to do business in Russia. Business
Education Forum, 55(3), 44-45.