AUTHONOMY: ONE WRITER’S EXPERIENCE

by Mary W. Walters

In theory, authonomy is a perfect way for writers to get their book manuscripts read by
editors at a major publishing house without the intercession of an agent.

After reading about what authonomy is intended to do and why, a writer might decide
that if her manuscript isn’t good enough to get the kind of positive reception from the
other writers on the site that it needs to rise through the ranks to the top five (aka the
Editor’s Desk)—where it will at least receive professional feedback from one of the
finest editors in the English-speaking world, and at best be snatched up for publication—
perhaps it isn’t as good as she’s been thinking that it is.

But is that a logical conclusion for her to draw when after several months on the site she
does not, in fact, reach the Editor’s Desk and realizes that she probably never will?

For the benefit of other writers who may be weighing the same questions that I
considered six months ago when I decided to post my novel, The Whole Clove Diet, on
authonomy, I here offer a summary of my experiences and observations so that others
may be better equipped than I was to assess the potential value to their writing careers of
participation in the site.

What authonomy is

authonomy (the “th” is pronounced as in “author”) is an on-line community of writers

that was established in 2008 by HarperCollins Publishers. Although the site is based in
the U.K., HarperCollins offices around the world participate in evaluating manuscripts,
and the site is open to writers, published or unpublished, living anywhere—as long as
their manuscripts are in English.

On authonomy, participants read excerpts from books by other writers on the site, and
they “shelve” or “back” the ones they find of merit. They are also encouraged to provide
the authors of the books they read with some feedback in the form of comments. Those
with the most backings (subject to an algorithm that recognizes users’ reviewing
experience on the site) rise to the top and when they reach the top five, they are read and
provided with an evaluation by a HarperCollins editor.

The authonomy site is still in beta format, but as of this writing it has more than 3,000
users–each with at least one and sometimes as many as three books posted on the site.
Some users are very active (a recent forum question was “How many people spend more
than five hours a day on authonomy?” and several people actually raised their virtual
hands, albeit a little sheepishly). Many writers spend at least an hour or two a day on
authonomy, reading, critiquing, commenting and sometimes contributing to the forum.
Other writers show up only occasionally, and still others have not been on the site in
months.

HarperCollins (HC) states that the purpose of authonomy is to “flush out the brightest,
freshest new literature around” and on the last day of each month, authonomites gather
around to see which five books will be whisked away for review by the HC editors.
Approximately one month after starring them for selection, HC editors deliver critiques
of the five top manuscripts to their respective authors. These evaluations ideally include
suggestions for revision and some indication as to whether HC might be interested in
seeing the manuscript again after the author has worked on it.

A word or two about the Golden Goose

The hope of almost all of those who officially join the site and post a book is that that HC
will recognize their work of fiction, non-fiction or (less frequently) poetry for the
masterpiece it is and want to publish it. Subsidiary hopes include that, as it is rising to the
top but before it actually reaches the top five, the manuscript will be discovered by an
agent, another publisher or even HC itself. This has, in fact, happened once or twice–
although it hasn’t happened very often. Nor, to my knowledge, have any books that have
actually reached the top five yet been selected for publication by HC.

Since getting an agent or a publisher is pretty much a crapshoot in this day and age no
matter how you go about it, a more significant problem than the dearth of publications
from the site is one that anyone can see who reads the HC editorial responses to books
that have reached the Editor’s Desk in the past. (This feedback is almost always posted
by the authors who’ve received it, although they are not required to make it public.) The
problem is that while some of the editorial feedback is constructive and helpful, even
insightful and brilliant, some is next to useless. The site administrators have said that HC
editors for each book in the top five each month are selected on the basis of its genre or
subgenre (young adult, for example, historical romance, or literary) and the location of
the writer—but clearly, some HC editors are better readers and feedback-writers than are
others.

I have read HC evaluations on authonomy that were little more than summaries of the
excerpt. Others have contained errors that could only have been made if the editor had
not read the submission very carefully, or had not consulted the “pitch” which is also a
required part of the submission. Several comments from HC editors have been marred by
typos and even grammatical errors, which seriously undermined their credibility.

After waiting months and months to obtain feedback from the powerhouse publishing
giant that is HarperCollins—which is one big dream of a lifetime for many—to receive a
less than professional evaluation on one’s excerpt is more than discouraging. The
recipients of such evaluations are upset when this happens, and so are the other
authonomy community members who have also read the excerpt. Contributors to forum
threads disgustedly point out the flaws in various HC reviews every month, sometimes
out of loyalty, but often also on the basis of solid evidence.

My authonomy history

I joined authonomy in February of 2009, posting my novel in its entirety (at the outset)
on the site. The Whole Clove Diet rose steadily albeit slowly toward the Editor’s Desk,
garnering many positive reviews along the way. In the first few weeks I learned from
comments left on the forum by site administrators and other users that by the time I
reached number 50, particularly if I also maintained some visibility on the forum, I could
feel fairly well assured that HC had seen my novel. If they had not by that point contacted
me by email, I could assume they were not interested in it.

By then I had begun to appreciate how hard it was to reach the Editor’s Desk/top five and
how small the advantages might actually be to getting there. I decided that if HC and
other publishers and agents were trawling the top 50 on a regular basis, I would set my
sights on reaching the top 45 or so.

In fact, I only made it to about 110 before I quit. Although I developed some rewarding
on-line friendships at authonomy in the four months or so that I was a regular participant,
and received some useful input that was helpful in the revision of my novel, and
discovered a few writers who I really think are going to make strong literary
contributions in the future, the experience of being on the site nearly drove me crazy—
several times. And so I removed my novel, although I am still a member of the
community and enjoy popping in from time to time to exchange comments on the forum
with my friends and colleagues (and fellow-sufferers) over there.

authonomy intention vs. authonomy reality

authonomy has been described as a “do-it-yourself slush pile” in which readers (mainly
other writers) do all the work for HarperCollins by finding the best books on the site and
pushing them toward the top. This is fine: times are changing and most writers are willing
to do a little work in order to attract professional attention to their manuscripts.

The only problem is that the way the authonomy system works does not contribute to
finding the “best” books, no matter how you define that term. It appeared to me that at
least 90% of the writers on the site have joined with one goal in mind, which is getting
themselves to the Editor’s Desk. (The others insist they are there only to receive feedback
from other writers that will help them improve their work.) This means that the primary
motivation for most people who will read and back other people’s manuscripts on
authonomy is not to find good books for HC to publish—but rather to find other people to
read and back their own books.

If a writer who joins the site decides to stick to the stated guidelines and her own ethical
principles, refusing to back other people’s books if she feels they are not very interesting
or well written (or worse, if she points out such major defects in her comments on those
books), the writers of those other books are not likely to be inclined to back her book in
return (are they? Remember that we are dealing with human beings here). The new writer
quickly learns that in order to get a backing on your book from someone else, you really
need to give that other writer a backing first.

As a result, on authonomy you can almost never trust a backing to mean that someone
likes your book, since almost everyone on the site backs almost everything. The books
that rise most quickly to the top are not those that are the best or the most fun to read, but
rather those whose authors spend most time on the site, networking with other people,
raving over everyone else’s books, backing everyone in sight, and thereby attracting
hundreds of backings in return. The more quickly the determined writers can read and
back an excerpt, the more they can read a day, and these speed demons may sometimes
be accused (and sometimes are) of skimming only a few paragraphs before passing
judgement. And the judgement is almost always favourable.

authonomy is not about excellence in writing. It is about becoming as popular as possible

as quickly as possible. As a result, and ironically, rather than a supportive writing
community authonomy can often seem to be a dog-eat-dog arena where you can’t trust a
soul. Those who aren’t showering you with false praise are slamming you for your
reviewing tactics.

Getting to the top 120 is the easy part. After that it gets much harder—mainly due to
those algorithms I mentioned earlier. Trying to get to the top five requires hours and
hours of commitment every day. On average, to get into the top fifty or so and not fall
back again within a reasonable period of time (four months, let us say), you have to start
by reading about three or four excerpts a day, commenting on them, and backing them. (I
read about two excerpts a day, three chapters each, almost every day. After three months,
I had not yet reached the top 100.) Those who have risen higher than I ever did have
reported that when you get into the top ten you have to read eight or ten excerpts every
day to get into the top five and stay there. At about 45 minutes per excerpt, this means
that for at least a month out of your life, and probably more, you are doing little else but
authonomy readings. If you happen to go away for a week, you start sliding backwards.
Before long, rather than looking for the best books, you reach a point where if you find a
book you think is terrible you are heartbroken because it means you are either going to
have to lie your head off or give up the possibility of getting a backing in return.

In the race for the top, honesty flies out the window.

Nasty, nasty

In order to be visible and attract readers on authonomy, most participants find it useful
not only to read and comment on other people’s excerpts but also to participate in the
forum. As is true of most writers’ websites, there are several very witty and
knowledgeable people there, and the forums can be great fun. (I found myself inclined to
read the books of those who impressed me on the forum—they didn’t need to plug their
actual books to me; their forum comments made it clear that I would be interested in what
they’d written. I was rarely disappointed by such hunches. By contrast, some people
never do anything on the forum beside promote their own books: the number and
character of some of the “shameless self-promotion” threads grew so nauseating that I put
several of these authors on a mental blacklist and never did read their excerpts.)

Unfortunately, the forums are not always fun. People can be nasty, small-minded,
offensive, arrogant, self-serving—even racist. If you begin to work very hard on getting
to or staying in the top five, you are likely to start attracting verbal abuse on the forum.
As Ambrose Bierce once said, “Success is the one unpardonable sin against our fellows.”
Some people have found the comments against them so demoralizing that they’ve left the
site even as the summit came within their sights.

There are also huge multi-participant battles—mainly at the end of the month when
tensions start to run high and those who don’t like the tactics of the writers who have
made it to the top five start trying to overthrow them. At other times, writers have what
has come to be known as “authonomy meltdowns” from all the stress of trying to get to
the top five and stay there: they go verbally ballistic.

While I was there, it seemed to me that most of the battles (and there were several)
concerned how the authonomy site itself either works or does not work. Almost always
you can find at least one active thread discussing the mechanics of authonomy and how
the operation of the site could be improved. One day one of the forum participants started
a “backing” thread that encouraged authonomites to back as many books as possible by
people who were also on the thread within a specified period of time. The instigator did
this as a protest against “the system,” but many others on the site clearly leapt at the
chance to get ahead of others without having to do all the work of reading excerpts. Still
others protested loudly about the lack of ethics of those participating in the backing
thread (I was, of course, one of those. Taking the ethical high ground, and voicing my
opinion when doing so can only be compared to shooting myself in the head? That’s me
every time). Mayhem ensued.

Feedback from other writers

You will get some good feedback about your writing from several people on the site. I
made hard copies of all the comments I received, and several of them were very useful
when I did my final revisions. However you will also receive many comments that are
utter drivel. (You can see examples of good comments and totally useless ones by
reading any excerpt on the site, and then reading the comments under it.) In general,
many of the compliments are hollow and meaningless, posted only to attract a return
read. Some people come up with the equivalent of a boilerplate response and post it with
small variations on every excerpt they “review.” Others tailor their remarks more
carefully, but still lean heavily toward the positive to ensure their own survival. (Some on
the forum insist that they really did love reading almost every book on the entire site and
would buy them all in an instant if they had the chance. I think those people are
dishonest. Either that or they have no standards and are careless with their money.)

It is certain, at least to me, that those who insist on being honest with their evaluations
ultimately pay a heavy price. There are of course many writers on the site who appreciate
constructive criticism, but there are many others who do not. The latter group will call
down those who have criticized them–usually on the forum rather than privately–and will
even occasionally attempt to organize counterattacks and boycotts. (authonomy can be
instructive to those who wonder how well meaning human beings ever get involved in
wars.)

Once I realized how the authonomy system works, I stopped taking any of the
compliments and rave reviews I received seriously, although they were nice to get. I also
ignored comments from people who clearly had no idea what I was doing with my fiction
(many are reading outside their genres and don’t understand or like what they have to
read in order to move ahead. Threads that pose such incisive questions as “Why do
writers have to use big words?” and “Conflict… or not?” often make for illuminating and
amusing reading.) In short, the people who say they are on authonomy for the great
writing advice they get from other writers, and insist they aren’t interested in getting to
the Editor’s Desk at all, are for the most part in the wrong place as far as I can see.

How to survive on authonomy – for a while, at least

1. Set your sights for the top 25 or 50, not the top five. A few writers who have made
the top five have said that they were approached by agents once they reached that stage,
but if I were a canny agent visiting the site, I’d be scanning the top 50, trawling for the
best books on a regular basis—not leaving it until the writers of the best books were on
the Editors’ Desk and likely to be scooped up by someone else. Once you reach your
initial goal, you can always decide to continue if you want to, but my best guess is that
you reach maximum benefit from the site when you reach the top 45. (If you can hang in
there that long.)
2. Read enough of others’ manuscripts before you make a call on them that you’ll still
respect yourself in the morning, even if others aren’t playing by those rules. I felt it was
only fair to other writers to try to read at least three chapters of their books, or the
equivalent. Despite my initial determination to back only books I felt were publishable,
ultimately I did find that in order to survive, I had to play the game and back almost
everything that was not truly awful. My standard for myself became that I had to be able
to find at least one thing in the excerpt on which I could genuinely comment positively; if
the writing was so bad that I could not do that, I would not back the book or comment on
it. Instead I’d pretend I’d never seen it. (Please note that I admit to having high standards:
I have been referred to often as a literary snob.) Sometimes in addition to the positives,
my comments included suggestions for a change the author might want to make to
improve the first three chapters, always keeping in mind that I was reading only the first
few chapters, and that the book could get much worse or much better after the section I
had read.
3. When you really do like an excerpt, say so clearly — or the author won’t be able to
tell your kudos from the garden variety he or she receives every day from everyone.
When I loved a piece of writing, I really raved about it in my comments—being very
specific about the strong points and saying, for example, that the book was sure to find its
way into print (I never said that if I didn’t mean it). I also created a thread of my own
where I listed my favourite books, which was fun.
4. Say “thank you” when someone backs you or leaves a comment.
5. Forget the “friends” option and ignore invitations to become friends with others
unless you have a very good reason to accept. This has nothing to do with politics or
human kindness, but only practicalities. On authonomy, you get emails from the site
administrators if you get a comment on your book, but not if someone backs you. You
have to watch your “news feed” for that information. You also see your friends’ activities
in your news feed (“Writer X backed Book Y,” “Writer A commented on Book B,”
“Writer F revised his book”). If you add too many friends, you will get so many notices
in your news feed that you may miss a notice that someone has backed you. You don’t
want to miss your backers, because they deserve a thank you message and you may in
fact want to consider backing them. So adding friends can cause problems. There is no
real advantage to “friending” someone anyway, as you can send everyone messages
whether they are friends or not.
6. Remember that all messages on authonomy are public.
7. Make a list in a notebook somewhere of who has backed you, and who you have
backed or decided not to back. By the time you get to 50 or 100 reads, it gets really really
difficult to try to remember whose excerpts you’ve read and whose you haven’t. A lot of
people on the forums say, “How I wish I had started keeping track at the beginning!” By
the time you start forgetting who you’ve read and who you haven’t, it is almost
impossible to go back and make a list. I recommend keeping track from the outset. (And
if someone changes a title of a book you’ve already read, which happens surprisingly
often, make a note of that as well.)
8. When people I didn’t know from the forums sent me a message suggesting we trade
reads, I usually ignored them. Some people send out such notices in spam-like quantities.
I therefore don’t recommend sending such messages to others. Like the shameless plugs
on the forums, requests for reads can rapidly grow tedious and irritating and turn people
away from you rather than attracting them.
9. Don’t post the whole book. I posted my entire manuscript when I first went on. Then
a few people on the site warned me that some agents and publishers avoid books that are
posted in their entirety on-line, believing (erroneously) that this contravenes copyright or
(even more erroneously) that everyone in the universe will read it on authonomy and no
one will need to buy it. So I took down most of my novel. However, I made a big mistake
when I did this. First I took down all but the first three chapters, and then I added back a
few chapters. While I was doing that, my word count fell below 10,000 and when it did, I
lost my position on all the shelves and watchlists I’d been on. That set me back a couple
of weeks at least. So after you’ve posted your manuscript don’t ever let it drop below
10,000 words again unless you are sure you want to lose your ratings.

Not an entire waste of time

authonomy has its benefits. It is a good way of keeping your manuscript “out there,”
building an audience for your book, and getting to know a few more writers. You will get
to know some of the authonomy regulars, several of whom are characters as diverting and
eccentric as those you’ll meet in their (or anyone’s) fiction. (These include: a writer who
appears to deliver intelligent pronouncements from a horizontal position on a couch—he
maintains he’s dead, and as under-appreciated as Chatterton, after whose post-mortem
portrait he has modeled his own avatar; a man with a blue face who expounds literary
theories and criticizes others’ approaches to writing while maintaining that he never reads
a book; at least two divas who’ve been on the site forever and pop by with witty or snarly
comments from time to time; a hot young lawyer who is swooned after by most of the
female writers on the site; and several young women who keep taking more and more
clothes off their avatars in an apparent attempt to attract more readers. There are lots of
warm and welcoming people on the site who will go out of their way to make you feel at
home, and there are several insular cliques. Strangers conjoin on authonomy in
unexpected ways: I watched with amusement one evening as a thread involving three
apparently quite drunk authonomites devolved into highly graphic cybersex;
unfortunately the posts weren’t well-enough written to have made my voyeurism the least
bit titillating. Also unfortunately, but not unexpectedly, after about noon the next day I
was no longer able to send a link to the thread so that a few of my non-authonomite
friends could have a laugh, because it had been taken down. There are also a surprising
number of wiccans on the site; be forewarned: you do not want to mess with wiccans. :) )

While you are on authonomy, you may indeed be discovered by an agent or a film
company. There is always the possibility that the authonomy system will actually work in
your favour–that you will reach the Editor’s Desk and, despite the odds against you even
at that point, be offered a contract by HarperCollins. All of those things are possible, if
unlikely.

In the meantime, if you are in it for an evaluation as one of the top five, eat your
Wheaties, give up either your day job or your family and social life, and prepare for a
long, disorienting haul from which it may take you several months to recover.

First published on my blog, The Militant Writer @ http://maryww.wordpress.com

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