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2015 the volume of remaining water in the reservoirs that supply the population of So Paulo
city was at 5.7% of its capacity (Sabesp, 2015).
2- Data Collection (Re-located)
A lot of the data contained in this performance needs assessment was collected from
different sources, as well as observations of peoples behaviors concerning water saving. A great
deal of information was extracted from the water supply company website, Sabesp. Data was
also collected from the AAR3s employees and conversations with the director, inhabitants and
the workers/housekeepers of the gated community. Below are the questions used to reveal where
the information was taken from and how they were asked.
Some guiding questions/questionnaires were also used to gather more information. The
director of AAR3 and dwellers were part of data collection:
1- Are workers receiving information about how they should perform given this
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using to do so?
6- Are tools given to them to do their work?
7- Do performers have other responsibilities besides these ones? Is it extra work to
perform the tasks that have to be done? Do workers need to stay overtime in order
to accomplish the tasks?
8- Do they have the knowledge and/or skills to accomplish the task?
9- Do they receive feedback at the worksite? How is the feedback communicated?
10- What is their reaction when they are corrected?
Other ways of gathering information and identifying the gap:
Articles and websites- The data was extracted from articles and websites are available in the
references. All the information was double-checked and confirmed by people who live in Brazil
and who experience this water problem daily.
Facebook- Online group conversations and forums that discuss the current water situation in
Brazil are being observed. There are posts discussing peoples behavior regarding water
consumption and what is being noticed in their neighborhoods. People were also contacted on
Facebook and asked about the issue. Employees, house owners and the administration of AAR3
were all contacted.
Observation- On a last visit to Brazil on December 16, 2014, peoples behavior and actions were
observed for 15 days. Annotations regarding housekeepers routines and the governments plan of
action and possible solutions Sabesp was trying to implement to reduce water consumption were
made.
On Appendix 1it is possible to verify important data taken from Sabesp website (Sabesp,
2010) concerning the amount of water used for each task or problem not solved.
3- Restate the request
This intervention was requested by Antnio Carlos Lavrador, the director of Associao
Alphaville Residencial 3 (AAR3), a gated community in the greater So Paulo area, with the aim
of sensitizing workers about the water crisis in the region. According to Antnio Carlos
Lavrador, the initial request is to target the employees who work full-time inside the AAR3
community. This measure will help the community in implementing new habits, playing its part
in coping with the crisis and avoiding a chaotic situation.
4- Business Need
The business need underlying this request is to comply with regulations. The So Paulo
government has stipulated that every household needs to reduce its monthly water consumption
by 20% to solve the problematic situation in the city. If people do not save the aforementioned
20%, a new tax of up to 50% will be levied. By having to pay the fee, it means that the water
supply is close to ending, households are not complying with the regulation imposed by the
government and thus the water crisis is intensifying. In order to achieve this objective, the
director of AAR3 is requesting immediate interventions to help performers save water.
5- The Problem
Housekeepers in the AAR3 gated community are clearly not saving water. It is a serious
problem that is getting worse every day and if nothing is done a very tumultuous situation may
develop. With the government augmenting pressure and threatening water bill fines, the director
of AAR3 decided to investigate the habits inside the community and take some measures in order
to cope with the problem and assist employees. It was noticed that people were maintaining old
habits and were not saving or re-using water.
arrives at work she needs to wash the dishes from the previous night. She turns on the faucet and
leaves the water running while she is washing the dishes. Twice a week she washes clothes,
using approximately 135 litres* of water each time. Maria washes the backyard and driveway
every week using more than 400 litres* of water and no instructions are given to her about the
way she should perform the task. When she washes the backyard she does not turn off the water
and it is on continuously for roughly 30 minutes. She is not able to visualize the amount of water
she is using for all the tasks. She waters all the plants and garden every other day, and in order to
clean the bathrooms she flushes the toilet, even if they are clean, and uses a lot of water to wash
the floors. She does not assess the situation before performing her work. If there is a suspicion of
leaks she does not take any measures to rectify the situation because she thinks its not her
problem. When she brushes her teeth at lunch time she also leaves the water running for around 5
minutes, using 12 litres* of water. Before going home, she takes a 15-minute shower and does
not turn off the water to soap her hair and she uses 135 litres* of water.
Maria is not aware of any sustainable practices, such as reusing water or capturing water
from the rain. Her employer is too busy to assist her and give feedback regarding water usage.
She leaves Maria notes with some instructions but this proves difficult since she cannot read very
well (illiteracy is common among the lower economic classes in Brazil). Her excuse is that she
does not have time to learn and she exhibits some resistance to change. Maria thinks this water
situation is transitory, so there is no need to change her habits or the house tasks and, quite
frankly, taking her social and economic situation into consideration, water usage is probably not
high on her priorities. When she arrives home she does the same thing and wastes a lot of water,
setting this less-than-ideal example for her kids. Considering the severe situation the city is in,
Maria and many people like her need an urgent intervention as to not exacerbate the problem at
work and in her own home.
Desired Performance
Maria is a 37-year-old married woman, mother of two children, who works full-time as a
housekeeper in order to help her husband with living expenses. Maria lives on the outskirts of
So Paulo and is responsible for all the housework in her home as well. She has a long and busy
week. She takes the bus at around 6 a.m. and arrives at work at 8 a.m. She is responsible for all
the main chores at her work and her employer, Lidia, is out most part of the day but twice a week
she is able to give feedback on Marias work and give her support, if necessary. When she arrives
at work she needs to wash the dinner dishes from the day before. She turns on the faucet to fill a
little cup with water, turns off the faucet and soaps all the dishes first, using water wisely. Maria
washes clothes only once a week to save water. Every time she does, she captures the water of
the machine cycle, about 135 litres* and re-uses it to wash the backyard and driveway every 15
days. Her employer, Lidia, bought large receptacles to capture water from the washing machine,
and from the gutters outside the house when it rains. To avoid using water all the time, Maria
sweeps the floors instead of washing them. As a result, she saves more than 300 litres of water
per week. With the captured rain water, she waters the plants and the garden. This water is also
used to flush the toilets, saving more than 60 litres of water daily. If she suspects there are
leakages she tells her employer, who subsequently calls someone to fix them immediately.
Maria is very involved in her work. Her employer stays with her at least once a week to give
her feedback and see how she is doing. Because she cannot read, her employer has put reminders
in a picture format so she remembers how to capture and save water. When she brushes her teeth
at lunchtime, she uses a cup to avoid leaving the water running. Before going home, she takes a
7-minute shower and turns the water off while she washes her hair, using only 45 litres* of water.
Maria knows that the city is going through difficult times because of the water shortages and she
is implementing sustainable practices in order to help with the problem. She is researching new
solutions and exchanging information with other housekeepers in the area using Facebook,
participating at communities of practice and during events promoted by AAR3 that bring the
community together. When she arrives home, she uses the same strategies to use water more
conscientiously setting a good example for her children. If there is no water, there is no life and
her kids and other Brazilians will suffer greatly if nothing is done. Because she is now aware of
the water shortage problem, she is naturally worried about the future of her kids without water,
so she is being proactive in ensuring that her children will be living in a country with water.
*Based on the document Uso Racional da gua (2010)
7- Performance Gap
In current tasks, performers:
backyards, garage, among others) to be performed without giving any further thought
Use water to wash sidewalk, driveways and rooms in the house, without thinking about
alternatives to reduce water consumption, such as mopping or the use of captured water
Magnitude: There is a very big gap between what is currently being done and the ideal situation.
Water wasting is happening in more than 70% of the houses in the community and it needs to be
addressed properly.
Value: Right now, the community is not complying with the new regulation which states that
everyone should consume 20% less water. If they do not save, they will face a 20% to 50%
increase on their water bill, therefore, the dwellers and AA3# will lose money, and still not
achieve the main objective saving water.
Urgency: It is a very serious issue to be addressed immediately; taking into consideration the
reservoirs have water until May only according to Sabesp. If people do not have access to clean,
potable water, the situation may become untenable.
8- Tasks in Ideal Performance
Unless stated otherwise, tasks need to be performed with 90% accuracy
End Result: Housekeepers in AAR3 will save water effectively when performing daily
tasks* without major difficulties (90% independently)
*daily tasks in this context are all activities that imply the use of water, such as washing clothes
and dishes, cleaning bathrooms, cleaning driveways, cleaning back and front yard, taking
showers, brushing teeth and washing cars.
If performers (behavior)
-Distinguish procedures
available to opt for the best
one given the situation
- Evaluate their advantages
and disadvantages
-Locate tools to be used
before starting tasks that need
water to be performed
-Install/Uninstall tools to be
used
-Assess current situation
before using water
9 -Performers
Demographics
The performers are housekeepers that work directly in the houses inside the gated
communities employed by the owners of the houses. They are responsible for carrying out all the
activities such as cleaning, washing, watering plants, etc. in the household from 8 a.m. to 5
p.m.
These housekeepers are from classes C, D and E, living in the outskirts of So Paulo. In
Brazil there are five social classes that are also sub-divided. In So Paulo 37% of the people
belong to classes A (A1, A2) and B (B1, B2) classes, 63.1% belong to classes C (C1, C2), D and
E (Abep, 2010). Overall, people from classes A and B are literate, and had the chance to finish
university. People from class C are literate and functionally-illiterate, and about 30% of them had
finished secondary school. Around 10% had the opportunity to go to university. The remaining
did not have the chance to finish the primary school. The population from classes D and E are
illiterate or functionally-illiterate and did not have the chance to finish their studies. The currency
used in Brazil is the real (R$). The minimum wage for workers is R$ 788/month (approximately
$285 CDN) and housekeepers make between R$ 905 to R$1,300 ($320 to $500 CDN)/month.
Approximately 70% of these workers and housekeepers are women. They are between 26 and 50
years old. The other 30% are men between the ages of 30 and 55. These employees belong to a
less privileged class in the Brazilian society who did not complete their primary or secondary
studies with around 38% of them being illiterate or functional illiterate1, having the ability to
only write their names and read a few words. They work full-time, from Monday to Friday and
sometimes part-time on Saturdays.
Personas
Newly arrived performer- Carina is a 30 year-old woman who has just started her
work at the AAR3 as a cleaning lady and she is very excited to start this new journey. She is
illiterate because she did not have the chance to go to school when she was younger. She can
write her name and recognizes some words but she is not embarrassed to admit it to her
1 Functional illiteracy happens when an individual has reading and writing abilities
in the basic level (Wikepedia)
employer. She is a very hard-working employee who appreciates the opportunity given to her.
She is aware of the water problem and is trying to help her employer to save water. Whenever
instructions are given she pays attention and asks a lot of questions if the message is not clear.
She draws some of the instructions given, in order to have a reference when she needs to
remember what was said. She asks other employees what they are doing concerning water and
asks friends to find solutions on the Internet and read to her. She tries to do her best to save and
re-use water and when she has any difficulties she doesnt hesitate to ask her employer.
Comfortable with my job performer- Mario is a 45-year-old housekeeper who has
been working for a family for the past three years. He is already used to the house routine and
knows the procedures. He is trying to get used to the new reality concerning the water problem.
Sometimes, as he starts working, he remembers to save water just at the end of the task. He is
still getting used to the new procedures. He is literate but he does not access the materials
provided because he thinks it will take too much time. When he does change something, Mario is
not sure if the procedure is correct, because she does not receive feedback. He thinks its
important to change but he just simply forgets. He does not have the habit of asking questions to
the employer, but he wants to change. He is not a proactive worker and does not share practices
with neighbors because he is more passive but he is willing to implement new routines to help
his community.
Ice Age performer- Rita has been working in the gated community for the past 13
years. She is a 40-year-old housekeeper whose routine tasks are habitual. She is illiterate and she
does not make an effort to help and simply ignores everything that is said to her concerning
water-saving procedures. She tells her employer that changing is very difficult for her because
she is old. She usually ignores it when she is corrected and performs accordingly when the
employer is there, but once he/she is gone she goes back to her old routine. She thinks that
because her salary wont change there is no need for her to change. She is not willing to help the
community or implement new techniques. She believes the situation will end soon so there is no
need to change her habits because she will just go back to the old ones. She just wants to finish
her tasks and go home. She is not willing to spend more time at work to help the community.
10- Context
The context in which this campaign is happening is inside the homes in AAR3 where
there are full-time housekeepers working, and also inside the areas in AAR3 where employees
sometimes use water. It is important to consider that this campaign will allow for transfer to
employees homes, and when this happens, the community will benefit as well as So Paulo and
future generations of Brazilians.
Background Information (re-located)
To better understand the context in which this program takes place, it is important to
explain the culture in the country and some terms that will be used throughout this performance
needs assessment.
Cultural Information
In order to understand the reason for this project, it is important to understand the
Brazilian culture. In Brazil, due to the warm weather all year-round, it is common to have the
maid clean the house on a daily basis. It is a very common practice to wash the floors, backyards
and driveways. There are drains in all bathrooms and kitchens in homes as a means for people to
wash the floors. It is also common to see people washing the streets, watering the gardens, and
washing cars, all habits that use a significant amount of water. During the winter, water takes a
long time to heat in Brazil. People open the faucets and wait for the water to get warm,
meanwhile all the water is running through the drains and litres are wasted every time water
needs to be used for hygiene, such as showers and brushing teeth.
Gated Communities and Employees
The people who live in gated communities belong to the A and B classes. They have
chosen to live in these communities because of, among other things, the high crime rate in So
Paulo. Inside these gated communities, there is security personnel, parks for children, beautiful
gardens and gym facilities. These communities are closed off by gates, with security personnel
present and visitors need to be announced and allowed to enter by residents of the community.
All employees and service providers are registered to guarantee the safety of the inhabitants. In
Barueri, a suburb of So Paulo where the AAR3 is located, there are more than 40 gated
communities, including apartment buildings and houses. The vast majority of the people living in
the AAR3 have housekeepers working full time, from 40 to 60 hours a week. They are
responsible for managing, cleaning and organizing the house, as well as washing clothes, dishes,
and sometimes even cooking. The housekeepers are the ones using and managing the water all
day long. The AAR3 also employs workers who deal directly with water on a daily basis, such as
gardeners, maintenance personnel and cleaning ladies.
Associao Alphaville Residencial 3 (AAR3)
AAR3 is one of the gated communities in Barueri, So Paulo. On the chart below is a
description of the people who are part of this specific community:
AAR 3
Housekeepers in
Literacy
900*
Inhabitants
employees who
deal with water
AAR3
4000
15
624 (full-time)
14
housekeepers
213* (part-time)
are enrolled in
the
alphabetizatio
n
course
*Not
all
*They work twice
offered
at
houses
are
or three times a
AAR3
inhabited,
week, equal to or
some are for
less than 20 hours
sale/ rent.
a week)
Information given in an e-mail interview with Ricardo Azevedo, responsible for the
Administration Department
11- Probable causes of problem
To understand where the problems must be happening with performers, the Gilbert model is
being used to verify issues on the individual and environmental levels.
Environmen
t
Information
- Lack of timely
feedback from
employers
-Lack of clear
expectations: employees
do not know exactly
what they should do
- There is no one to share
the information with
and/or exchange
experiences
-No guidance during the
day and no follow-up
Resources
Incentives
-Lack of simple
materials/job aids
-Lack of tools for more
complex activities (like
vessels to collect water
from rain, or pipe
adjustment/modification
s to capture from
washing machine)
-Inadequate tools for
illiterate people
-Poor incentives
towards changing
procedures
-Lack of recognition
on accomplished tasks:
e.g.
compliments/guidance
.
Individual
Knowledge / Skills
Capacity
Motives
-Low confidence
because of feeling of
not being able to
perform adequately
-Some are illiterate or
function illiterate and
feel incompetent/
intimidated due to lack
of skills
-No time to
accomplish these
extra tasks
-Rush through
activities to leave on
time to go home
-May think salary is
low to change habits
and changing habits
will make work more
demanding for same
compensation
-Lonely job
-Does not take
correction as a
constructive criticism
- Mentality of Too
old to change
Most D and E class people did not attend school or did not have the chance to finish
elementary or secondary school which causes:
feel overwhelmed
The performers may not have the knowledge to conduct some of the tasks
The performers do not fully understand the tasks
The performers do not receive feedback on their work, therefore they cannot judge if they
performers
Clear commands were not given and it is assumed all performers are aware of the current
situation
AAR3 havent offered some alternatives leading to more independency from the city
water supply, such as offering water-capture alternatives that could also be internally re-
-They are not making materials available in different formats for the different performers that
exist within the system (literate/illiterate)
Government/Sabesp
-
Neglects transferring information to the public and minimizes the gravity of the situation
Waited until the last minute to state the seriousness of the situation
Does not provide material and resources to those who are less literate and with less or no
government is not encouraging people towards changing their water usage habits at home
A lack of clear information to make the situation more transparent is causing the
population to believe that the problem is transitory, so nobody is actually taking it
seriously (according to articles posted on Folha de So Paulo and portal R7)
(I do have references to back up- The mayor said there wouldnt be rationing, which
leads us to think the problem was under control. Sabesp knew there were problems a
while ago. (http://www1.folha.uol.com.br/poder/2014/09/1524542-nao-ha-risco-deracionamento-de-agua-em-2015-diz-alckmin.shtml and http://noticias.r7.com/saopaulo/mp-nao-descarta-investigacao-criminal-de-crise-da-agua-em-sao-paulo-09102014)
13- Constraints
Product Constraints
Considering that the targeted performers have different levels of literacy, it is important to
produce materials able to reach all the different classes within the interventions. Simple materials
with a lot of pictures and sound, such as videos and pictures, would be more suitable for reaching
a wider audience. AAR3 is allowing us to feel free when choosing the best medium to convey the
interventions.
Project Constraints
AAR3 wishes that the interventions be implemented by March 20, due to the severity of
the situation and pressure by the government and the water supply company Sabesp.
Housekeepers will recognize there is a problem that needs to be addressed after being
sensitized about the current water situation and its potential long-term effects.
Given the sense of community, housekeepers will participate more actively in solving the
water problem
Given well informed and motivated housekeepers, new strategies for saving and re-using
criterion or standard
Given well informed and motivated housekeepers, every household saves 20% of the
Performance Objectives
Job One
Housekeepers in AAR3 will save water effectively when performing daily tasks without major
difficulties* (90% independently)
*without major difficulties means that the performers can easily act independently, requiring
some help at times.
o Given the awareness raised, housekeepers always identify the reasons why it is
imperative to urgently save water in the coming months while performing their daily
tasks
o Given the support provided by AAR3, housekeepers will be assisted by employers and
supported in their task transitions while performing the new tasks and at feedback time
o Given better communication tools, housekeepers will report leaks and irregularities
regarding water waste in a timely fashion
o Given the knowledge acquired about the new daily tasks performers need to change in
their routine, such as washing clothes/dishes, cleaning floors, bathrooms and yards,
housekeepers will install and uninstall proper tools which will enable them to spend less
time on procedures that use water as a resource
o Given the integration of the new tasks into their routine, housekeepers will reduce
consumption of water the second month after the intervention starts, increasing this rate
as tasks become more integrated into their routine
o Provided with the right tools and resources, performers will apply effective measures in
their daily routines to use less water based on the tasks to be performed
o Given the sharing/exchanging of information with others, housekeepers participate more
actively in the community, listening to each other and giving opinions
o Given the collaboration with other workers, performers successfully implement new
techniques for saving water in their working environment
o Given all the support provided, housekeepers are integrated into the community and play
their part in the solution to the water problem while performing their daily tasks
15- Summative Evaluation Instruments
Engagement
To verify if performers are engaged, observations should be carried out by completing the
chart below and checking the appropriate answer
Questions
Are performers accessing
YES
( )
NO
( )
COMMENTS
Individual Performance
This form could be completed by employers (dwellers) and AAR3 staff when observing
daily tasks being conducted by the performers.
Questions
Are performers using tools
YES
)
NO
( )
COMMENTS
Specify tools
tools properly?
Are performers becoming
Self-efficacy/motivation
strategies?
Can they use tools provided
Specify
independently?
Specify
Organizational performance
Questions
Are materials that are needed
YES
( )
NO
( )
COMMENTS
Appendix I
Problem
Dripping faucet
2-millimeter trickle of water coming from
faucet
A hole in the pipe
Toilet flushing
Washing machine
Water hosing for 15 minutes
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components are
somehow linked to
the competencies
and to the learning
objectives.
The assignment
reflects exemplary
high relevance to the
competencies being
developed and to the
learning objectives.
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guideline
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course with
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analysis and
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references.
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reflects a somewhat
deep analysis with
appropriate use of
relevant references.
The assignment
reflects a personal
position based on a
deep and thorough
analysis supported
by various relevant
and timely
references.
The assignment
reflects some
aspects of the
competencies, the
learning objectives
and the readings.
Most elements of
the competencies,
the learning
objectives and
recommended
readings have been
dealt within the
assignment.
The assignment
incorporates treatment
of elements beyond
the expectations of the
competencies, the
learning objectives
and recommended
references of the
course.
The assignment
shows some
precision in the use
of current concepts,
terms and
principles.
The assignment
reflects correct and
clear use of terms,
concepts and
principles.
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correct, precise, and
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concepts and
principles.
Evidence of
structural and
internal consistency
across the
assignment.
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organized.
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assignment
directly address
the competencies
and the learning
objectives.
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is supported by a
rich analysis of
relevant and high
quality
references.
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competencies and
the learning
objectives have
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within the
assignment.
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principles are
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include APA
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assignment are
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