Asignacin N 2

Identificar al menos un ejemplo de cada uno de los

errores ms frecuentes:
1. Nominalizaciones innecesarias
Original. (39 palabras)
The best performances were obtained with Amano PS IM and
Novozym 435, with the biodiesel samples from the babassu
and jatropha oils exhibiting viscosity values in accordance
with those predicted by the technical standards of ASTM
D6751 (1.9-6.0 mm2/s).
Propuesta. (Se redujo a 19 palabras)
Best results were obtained to acting biodiesel samples and
jatropha exhibiting an viscosity to (1.9-6.0 mm2/s) according
ASTM D6751
2. Empleo de palabras inadecuadas (poco precisas o
vagas)
Original. (60 palabras)
The current increased global demand for liquid fuels in
addition to global warming, energy security, and political
development in the fields of agriculture and energy have
opened new areas of interest and opportunities for research in
both academia and industry because these points of concern
are responsible for renewed interest in biofuels (Abbaszaadeh
et al., 2012; Knothe et al., 2005).
Propuesta. (Se redujo a 26 palabras)
Due to global demand to fuel as other events, have opened
new areas of interest and opportunities for research in both
academia and industry. (Abbaszaadeh et al., 2012; Knothe et
al., 2005).

3. Empleo innecesario de jerga o acrnimos

Original. (36 palabras)
This work reports the use of commercially available
immobilized
lipase
preparations
(Novozym435
and
Lipozyme TL IM, both from Novozymes, and Lipase PS IM from
Amano) as catalysts in thetransesterification reaction of
different alkyl-chain triglycerides with ethanol.
Propuesta. (Se redujo a 27 palabras)
This work reports the use of commercially available
preparations to lipasa and Lipozyme TL IM as catalysts in the
substances reaction of different alkyl-chain triglycerides with
ethanol.
4. Palabrera (wordiness)
Original. (14 palabras)
The reactions were performed at 50 C for a maximum period
of 48 h.
Propuesta. (Se redujo a 9 palabras)
The reactions were performed at 50C for 48 h.
5. Uso de la voz pasiva
Original. (23 palabras)
The feasibility of using vegetable oils to yield biodiesel using
ethanol as an acyl acceptor was assessed using three
commercially immobilized lipase preparations.
Propuesta. (Se redujo a 27 palabras)
We used vegetable oils to yield biodiesel using ethanol as an
acyl acceptor was assessed using three commercially
immobilized lipase preparations.
6. Distancia entre sujeto y verbo principal

Original. (23 palabras)

The feasibility of using vegetable oils to yield biodiesel using
ethanol as an acyl acceptor was assessed using three
commercially immobilized lipase preparations.
Propuesta. (Se redujo a 10 palabras)
This research was assessed
immobilized lipase preparations

using

three

commercially

7. Incorrecta estructura de las oraciones.

Original. (31 palabras)
This comparative study using different catalysts and several
vegetable oil sources with varying fatty acid compositions is
particularly important for all tropical countries with a diversity
of native vegetable oil sources.
Propuesta. (Se redujo a 17 palabras)
This comparative study is important for all tropical countries
with a diversity of native vegetalbe oil sources.