Back in 1967 I started my primary school education in a city known as Prague

, in The Czech Republic. During this infant stage of my formal education I

started to learn three language i.e. Chinese, English as well as Czech
language. Other than language I had to learn the subjects like mathematics,
Science, Geography, History and Physical Education as well as Musics and
Arts.
The building in which I studied was an old brick building with 3 storey. In
each class we had as many as 40 student. We had an oval where we played
soccer and sometimes cricket.
The uniform I worn at that time was shirt and short trousers which were
white in colour. My favourite teacher was my mathematics teacher as he was
very strict and put a lot of effort into improving my ability in maths. I
attribute my success in maths at secondary level to the good founding
provided by him. I was taught abacus by him and it is very practical until
today.
During the school days, I enjoyed swimming and cross-country races. I even
completed in national school titles.
Strengths

Weaknesses
Some errors in grammar and tense. Eg. learn three
Grammatical errors do not obscure meaning eg. I started
language , with 3 storey. 40 student, the uniform I
to learn three language
worn
Tenses are used correctly most of the time
The range of linking words is limited
Vocabulary is used correctly
Some correct use of grammar and vocabulary in longer
complex sentences eg. I attribute my success in maths at
secondary level to the good founding provided by him.
The building in which I studied was an old building with 3
storey.
Ideas are sequenced effectively using paragraphing.
Some linking words are used eg. and, as well as, other
than, during.
Main ideas are expressed clearly with some supporting
information provided. Eg. My favourite teacher was my
mathematics teacher as he was very strict and put a lot of
effort into improving my ability in maths.
Overall assessment:
Good ( Upper intermediate ADFELPS level 7)