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Not enough age gaps only

younger years.
Range of shots.

Include more memories w

an older range. Include th
in the extra 40 seconds to
make 5 minutes.

Pace & Content

4:23 minutes. Extra 40

seconds can be filled with
more memories.

Sound

No sound effects.
Single track played
throughout.
Minor key
Copyright track from
Cinematic Orchestra.

There are a variety of shots

(multiple close up) and use
of arrows indicates
continuity techniques. A
clear variation of action is
seen throughout the
animatic. However this is an
inconsistent amount of
detail for the pictures.
Slow paces assisted by the
music. Pace increases 1
minute in. Titles and credits
to enhance the feel of short
film.
Evokes sadness and is slow
tempo. Meant to be
instrumental but quiet
voices can be heard.

Increases pace.
Create an extra 40 second
of footage. Add colour to
make images for clear.

Needs to be an
interpretation of the song

Editing

Variation of transition.
Long takes - aerial shots
and shots of beach

Cross-dissolve transition
works nicely. Variety of
transition e.g. light
transition at the beginning
from dark title.

Remove fade to black.