Escolar Documentos
Profissional Documentos
Cultura Documentos
Supplements
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The Task
Tasks involve reporting the data in a visual item or a collection of data such as a table.
The task is to write a report:
Note: Finish task one during the first 20 minutes of your writing test and then move on to task 2. Do not swap!
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A. Line graphs
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B. Charts
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Germany
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Maldives
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1st Qtr
2nd Qtr
3rd Qtr
Peru
4th Qtr
4. Pie chart
C. Tables
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E. Maps
1.
Comparison map
2. Development map
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Every report is read four times by an examiner and each time, it will be marked on one of the following criteria:
Have you summarised the information appropriately by selecting and properly reporting the main
features?
2. Have you made comparisons properly and sufficiently?
3. Have you provided overviews of the main trends/comparisons/stages?
4. Have you written a clear overview or summary for the report?
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Words
a. Range and flexibility
b. Level
c. Precision
d. Style
e. Collocation
2. Vocabulary mistakes
a. Spelling
b. Word choice
c. Word formation
Note: when evaluating mistakes, the effect each has on the reader and the intelligibility of your report is taken into
account.
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Coherence and
Cohesion
Lexical Resource
uses an adequate
range of vocabulary
for the task
attempts to use less
common vocabulary
but
with
some
inaccuracy
makes some errors in
spelling and/or word
formation, but they do
not
impede
communication
covers
all
requirements of the
task sufficiently
presents,
highlights
and illustrates key
features/ bullet points
clearly
and
appropriately
sequences
information and ideas
logically
manages all aspects
of cohesion well
uses
paragraphing
sufficiently
and
appropriately
covers
the
requirements of the
task
(Academic) presents a
clear overview of main
trends, differences or
stages
(General
Training)
presents
a
clear
purpose, with the tone
consistent
and
appropriate
clearly presents and
highlights
key
features/bullet points
but could be more
fully extended
addresses
the
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requirements of the
task
(Academic) presents
an overview with
information
appropriately selected
(General
Training)
presents a purpose
that is generally clear;
there
may
be
inconsistencies in tone
presents
and
adequately highlights
key features/ bullet
points but details may
be
irrelevant,
inappropriate
or
inaccurate
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logically
organises
information and ideas;
there
is
clear
progression
throughout
uses a range of
cohesive
devices
appropriately
although there may
be some under-/overuse
arranges information
and ideas coherently
and there is a clear
overall progression
uses cohesive devices
effectively,
but
cohesion
within
and/or
between
sentences may be
faulty or mechanical
may not always use
referencing clearly or
appropriately
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uses a variety of
complex structures
produces
frequent
error-free sentences
has good control of
grammar
and
punctuation but may
make a few errors
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presents information
with
some
organisation but there
may be a lack of
overall progression
makes
inadequate,
inaccurate or over-use
of cohesive devices
may be repetitive
because of lack of
referencing
and
substitution
uses a limited range of
vocabulary, but this is
minimally
adequate
for the task
may make noticeable
errors
in
spelling
and/or
word
formation that may
cause some difficulty
for the reader
presents information
and ideas but these
are
not
arranged
coherently and there is
no clear progression in
the response
uses
some
basic
cohesive devices but
these
may
be
inaccurate
or
repetitive
uses
only
basic
vocabulary which may
be used repetitively or
which
may
be
inappropriate for the
task
has limited control of
word
formation
and/or spelling; errors
may cause strain for
the reader
attempts
sentence
forms but errors in
grammar
and
punctuation
predominate
and
distort the meaning
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Line Graphs
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Trend
Position
Verbs
Nouns
double
treble/triple
boom
surge
soar
rocket [to/by]
plummet [to/by]
plunge [to/by]
dive [to/by]
deteriorate
slump [to/by]
a plunge
a rise [of]
an increase [of]
a growth [of]
an upward trend
a doubling in + n.
a trebling in + n.
a boom
a surge
a fall [of]
a decline [of]
a decrease [of]
a drop [of]
a reduction
a slump
no change
stood at/was
reached a high/peak of
reached a low of
peaked [at]
reached
Constant
Change
a fluctuation
fluctuated [around]
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Degree
Extensive change
Average change
Small change
Adjective
Adverb
dramatic
dramatically
huge
n/a
enormous
enormously
tremendous
tremendously
substantial
substantially
considerable
considerably
significant
significantly
remarkable
remarkably
noticeable
noticeably
marked
markedly
moderate
moderately
slight
slightly
small
n/a
minimal
minimally
Speed
Quick change
Slow change
Unexpected change
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Adjective
Adverb
rapid
rapidly
quick
quickly
sharp
sharply
swift
swiftly
steep
steeply
steady
steadily
gradual
gradually
slow
slowly
sudden
suddenly
unexpected
unexpectedly
abrupt
abruptly
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1. Past:
Simple past (to report actions happening after each other)
2. Present:
a) If the task represents changes or actions which happen regularly (such as a process or
a chart displaying general average values):
Simple present (for graphs, charts and tables)
Simple present and present perfect (for processes and cycles)
b) If the trend starts in the past, reaches now and has a break point at the present time:
Present perfect for the trend that begins in the past
1983
1993
2003
2013
2023
It stood at 20 in 1983 and doubled over the next 10 years to level off at 40, after which it remained
constant until 2003. Since then, there has been a considerable increase and it now stands at 50.
However, there will probably be a rapid fall in the last 10 years and it is expected to reach 30.
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c) If the trend start in the past, passes now into the future and has a breakpoint sometime
in the future
Present perfect for the trend that begins in the past
Future structures (look at number 3 below) to report the value it will reach in
the first future breakpoint
Example:
1990
2000
2010
2020
2030
In 1985 it stood at 20 and doubled over the next 10 years to level off at 40 and remained constant
until 2005. Since then, it has experienced a considerable increase and is expected to reach 50 in
2020 (or: and predictions show that it will reach 50 in 2020). However, there will be a rapid fall in
the last 10 years and it will reach 30.
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3. Future:
Will future and other academic structures for predicting the future
Generally, use will future for future events. Structures like should, be likely to, seem
likely to/that and the following can also be used:
Structure set 1:
Predictions
Expectations
Anticipations
Forecasts
Estimates
Evaluations
Calculations
show
reveal
indicate
Structure set 2:
It is
predicted
expected
anticipated
forecast
estimated
evaluated
calculated
Structure set 3:
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predicted
expected
anticipated
forecast
estimated
evaluated
calculated
to drop dramatically.
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Notice how the verbs in the following paragraphs have been changed from past forms into
future forms:
In 1999, the proportion of people using the Internet in the USA was about 20%.
The figures for Canada and Mexico were lower, at about 10% and 5%
respectively. In 2005, Internet usage in both the USA and Canada rose to
around 70% of the population, while the figure for Mexico reached just over
25%.
In 2015, the proportion of people using the Internet in the USA is expected to
be about 20%. The figures for Canada and Mexico are likely to be lower, at
about 10% and 5% respectively. In 2025, it is predicted that Internet usage in
both the USA and Canada will rise to around 70% of the population, while the
figure for Mexico should reach just over 25%.
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1. First event:
At/In the beginning,
At first,
In the first year,
In the first month,
In 1999,
In January,
In the first year, 1999,
In the first year (1999),
2. Middle events:
and
but
However, Nevertheless,
Then,
Next,
After this/that,
Following this/that,
Afterwards,
This is followed by + <n/n.p>
following which
after which
which is followed by + <n/n.p>
untilafter which
untilfollowing which
untilwhen
before + <sentence or n.p.>
during/over the nextyears
years later,
3. Final event:
Finally,
Ultimately,
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1. x y
2. x
3. Proportional changes
4. Rounding
For Trends:
relatively
rather
almost
For Values:
Roughly
Almost
About
Approximately
Around
Just about
Well/just below
Well/just above
A little/slightly more than
A little/slightly less than
5. Referencing
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Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below gives information about Dubai gold sales in 2002.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
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Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below gives information about the number of cases of diarrhea in Mashhad between
1983 and 1992.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
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Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below gives information about the number of parcels delivered by two major mail
services companies from 1920 to 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
25000
20000
FedEx
15000
TNT
10000
5000
1920
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1940
1950
1960
1970
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1990
2000
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Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart below gives information about the number of books rented in a British local library in
2009.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons
where relevant.
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Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020
according to United Nations statistics.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
millions
2.5
2
Births
1.5
Deaths
1
0.5
0
1970
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2000
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Comparison Bar
Charts
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A. Introducing Differences
a significant difference between a and b.
Generally, there is
a wide disparity
in + n.
B. Comparative Structures
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A is
A is [under/over]
A produces/consumes/
A is
A is [almost/roughly /]
A is larger/smaller
[just]+[under/over]
[approximately]
by a narrow margin.
by x.
x larger/smaller than B.
twice
two/three times
as large/great/high as B.
more/less + uncountable n.
than B.
more/fewer + countable n.
considerably/substantially
marginally/slightly
greater/higher/smaller than B.
As large/high as B.
C. Superlative Structures
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produces
consumes
the largest/highest/smallest/lowest
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proportion of + n.
quantity of + n.
amount of + uncountable n.
number of + countable n.
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Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular
countries for UK residents to visit.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
Answer by E. Tahasoni:
The first diagram compares changes in the number of British tourists who travelled abroad with that of
foreign visitors to the United Kingdom over the last 20 years of the previous century. According to the
graph, the former initially stood at more than 12 million and grew six-fold at the end of the survey. In
comparison, the latter number was slightly less than that of the British tourists at the beginning of this
period and experienced similar yet less intensive trends, reaching approximately half as high by the end of
the century.
The bar chart reveals the top 5 countries visited by the British in the last year of the above survey. It can be
observed that while France and Spain absorbed the largest numbers of British tourists with about 11 and 9
million visits respectively, Turkey was the least popular among the five, visited by only about 30% as many
British as France.
Overall, tourism from and to the United Kingdom boomed in the 1980s and 90s. Moreover, most of the trips
made by the British abroad were to 5 countries only.
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(178 words)
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Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the
proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
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Pie Charts
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The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
(Cambridge IELTS 4, page 54)
Heating rooms,
heating water
52%
Ovens, kettles,
washing machines
18%
Fill the gaps below using words from the following list.
appliances
remaining
account
proportion
for
largest
household
and water.
Three kitchen ______, namely ovens, kettles and washing machines, ______
______ 17.5% of
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Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The charts below give information about world spending and population.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where
relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
World Spending
World Population
Other
5%
Food 24%
Other 40%
Americas
14%
Clothing
6%
Transport
18%
Europe
14%
Asia
57%
Housing
12%
Africa
10%
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Tables
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Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to
United Nations statistics.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where
relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
Indicators
Canada
Japan
Peru
Angola
11100
15760
160
130
76
78
51
47
3326
2846
1927
1749
99
99
68
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Process and
Cycle Diagrams
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Process:
Cycle:
A. Tenses:
Generally, the present simple tense is used to report actions which regularly happen in a process.
Sometimes, the present perfect may also be used to signify the completion of a stage
Natural events
For events which happen autonomously in nature, such as rain, formation of clouds or erosion o
f mountains, generally use the active form unless you need to shift focus from the subject to the
object of the stage.
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When you need to report the means or tool used to perform a stage, avoid using "by":
For tools: It is done using/through the use of a...
For methods: It is done through/via...
is used to <inf.>
The role of is to <inf.>
The prevents/stops/protects/avoids from <+ing/n>
The allows to <inf.>
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B. Middle stages:
Next,
Then
After this/that,
Following this/that,
Afterwards,
In the following stage,
In the stage after/following this,
In the stage that follows,
Over the course of/During the next/following/second/third stage,
This is followed by +<n./n.p.>
When/After/Once <stage A>, <stage B>
<stage A>. When/Once this stage is complete, <stage B>
<stage A> before <stage B as n./n.p. or clause>
Before <stage B>, <stage A>
<stage A> after/following which <stage B>
<stage A> which is followed by <stage B as n./n.p.>
C. Last stage:
Finally,
Ultimately,
Eventually,
The last/final stage is when
The process ends when
The process ends with
<stage A> before finally <stage B as n./n.p.>
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Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows the process of using water to produce electricity.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where
relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
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Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows the life cycle of the honey bee.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where
relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
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Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows the process of producing construction broicks.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where
relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
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Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows the process of producing construction broicks.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where
relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
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Maps
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Residential area: an area that has lots of houses and some schools.
Industrial area: an area that has lots of factories
Commercial area: an area that has lots of stores
Hospital: a health facility where patients receive treatment
Zoo: a place where people can go and see many kinds of animals
Post office: a place where you can send mail (letters and packages)
Fire station: a station housing fire apparatus and firemen
Airport: an airfield equipped with control tower and hangers as well as accommodations for passengers and
cargo
Park: a recreational area where people can play football and have picnics
Skyscraper: very tall buildings
Warehouse: a building where things are kept until they are sold.
Parking lot: an area where people can park cars
Museum: a place that displays things of scientific or historical or artistic value
Supermarket: a large store that sells mostly food but sometimes other items such as clothes and furniture.
Factory: an industrial plant, a production facility,
Woodland: an area with lots of trees
River: a large natural stream of water (larger than a creek)
Street: the place where cars drive
Intersection: the point where several streets meet.
Remove: remove something concrete, as by lifting, pushing, taking off, etc.
Develop: to make
Change: modify
Construct: to build
Demolish: to destroy a building or other structure completely
Replace: to take the place of or substitute for somebody or something
Expand: to become or make something become larger
Recreation: an activity that is exciting, stimulating or relaxing. For example, bike riding and playing football are
recreational activities.
Proximity: closeness
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The map below is of the town of Garlsdon and shows two possible sites for a new supermarket.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons
where relevant.
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Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the
nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where
relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
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Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where
relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
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The Task
Task 2 involves writing an essay on the given topic. You have to
answer the question(s) asked clearly and completely;
give reasons for your answer;
include relevant examples
o from your knowledge
o from your experience
spend about 40 minutes on the task
write at least 250 words 265-270 words
Note: Finish task 2 during the second part of your writing test after you have finished writing task 1. Do not
swap!
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A. Opinion-led:
Some people believe that television programmes are of no real value for children.
How far do you agree or disagree?
B. Argument-led:
Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are
taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
E4. Mixed:
Universities should provide students with the skills they will require in order to succeed at their future jobs.
How far do you agree or disagree with the above opinion?
What are some of the job skills that employers look for in new employees?
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Every report is read four times by an examiner and each time, it will be marked on one of the following criteria:
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Words
a. Range and flexibility
b. Level
c. Precision
d. Style
e. Collocation
2. Vocabulary mistakes
a. Spelling
b. Word choice
c. Word formation
Note: when evaluating mistakes, the effect each has on the reader and the intelligibility of your report is taken into
account.
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Coherence and
Cohesion
Lexical Resource
sequences
information and ideas
logically
manages all aspects
of cohesion well
uses paragraphing
sufficiently and
appropriately
logically organises
information and
ideas; there is clear
progression
throughout
uses a range of
cohesive devices
appropriately
although there may
be some under-/overuse
presents a clear
central topic within
each paragraph
arranges information
and ideas coherently
and there is a clear
overall progression
uses cohesive devices
effectively, but
cohesion within
and/or between
sentences may be
faulty or mechanical
may not always use
referencing clearly or
appropriately
uses paragraphing,
but not always
logically
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uses a variety of
complex structures
produces frequent
error-free sentences
has good control of
grammar and
punctuation but may
make a few errors
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0
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uses
only
basic
vocabulary which may
be used repetitively or
which
may
be
inappropriate for the
task
has limited control of
word formation and/or
spelling; errors may
cause strain for the
reader
attempts
sentence
forms but errors in
grammar
and
punctuation
predominate
and
distort the meaning
uses an extremely
limited
range
of
vocabulary; essentially
no control of word
formation
and/or
spelling
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Sample IELTS
Writing Task 2
Topics
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WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people think newspaper is the most effective way to obtain the latest information because it
has more influence than other forms of media.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Write at least 250 words.
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WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
In some countries, it is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age.
Is this a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Write at least 250 words.
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Some people argue that it is not wise for an industry to replace its experienced but old workers with
new and young yet inexperienced individuals.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Answer by E. Tahasoni:
In the past people often worked in their businesses until they died or were no longer able to
continue, whereas today most industries have set a definite retirement age for their employees. I
personally disagree that replacing elderly staff with young recruits would be unwise.
(45 words)
First and foremost, a large majority of workers lose their strength as they become older. This is
mainly because the human body has limits and working for a long time, say, 30 or 35 years, can
affect it negatively. For example, young industrial workers tend to work for five to six hours
before they take breaks while older ones usually need to rest every one or two hours. This means
that productivity levels would certainly decline.
(76 words)
Furthermore, new employment opportunities for young people are very limited. Most companies do
not offer more than a few new jobs every year and try not to increase their staff members
dramatically to keep expenses low. Consequently, they should definitely lay off some of the older
personnel to make room for youths, especially those around 20 to 30 years old who are about to
form families and support them.
(69 words)
Finally, although some people might argue that the experience and skills of old workers would be
lost when they retire, they should remember that this experience is mostly with old or outdated
equipment and technologies. As a result, it is less likely that their employers will need their
abilities in the long run and younger workers can be trained to work with modern machines such
as computers and lasers.
(69 words)
In conclusion, I believe companies need to force their elderly workforce to retire and employ
younger workers to replace them.
(20 words)
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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects.
Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Write at least 250 words.
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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Developing countries require international organizations help. Some people prefer financial aid while
others think practical aid and advice are better.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Write at least 250 words.
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Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects.
Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Answer by E. Tahasoni:
The world today has become quite dynamic and news stories develop almost every minute. Some
people think reviewing the news need to become a high school subject while another group
disagrees.
(31 words)
Reviewing global news could have a number of benefits for students. Firstly, this would definitely
improve their general knowledge in areas like geography, since the news come from around the
world and often include lots of details about different locations, their customs and manners.
Therefore, they would possibly gain a better understanding of the world and its features. Secondly,
studying the news can develop the students ability to analyse sophisticated situations because when
they follow a story, say, about a political rift between two countries, they could observe how it
develops or escalates, how the parties involved act and what consequences are.
(102 words)
Nevertheless, there are some arguments against teaching international news at high schools. Most
importantly, the violence portrayed in many of todays news stories could affect students conduct.
For instance, almost every newspaper and news website these days is filled with images and stories
of the Syrian civil war, which are likely to make youngsters feel insecure or make unreasonable
judgements about any Arab friends they might have. Furthermore, reading and analysing the news
would probably be a time consuming activity which could lead to less time remaining for more
important subjects and activities like sciences, math or physical education.
(99 words)
In conclusion, I personally believe it is wise for secondary school students to study global news at
school, but it would be wise if stories are chosen and adapted for the class by a group of
educational experts and psychologists to avoid the negative effects discussed above.
(47 words)
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Some people support modern developments in agriculture such as factory farming and creation of
new types of fruits and vegetables. However, other people oppose this view.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Answer by E. Tahasoni:
Recently, there have been extensive developments and improvements in various aspects of agriculture,
including genetically modifying plants to create new types or factory farming. While a group of
people think these developments are reasonable, others reject them.
(37 words)
One advantage of modern farming improvements is that they can provide more food for the growing
populations, especially in the developing world, since many new types of plants can produce heavier
fruits or more seeds. For instance, I recently read that Iranian scientists had created a new kind
of wheat plant that yielded over two times as much wheat as ordinary types. Furthermore, new
methods like factory farming would certainly make many demanding agricultural tasks like milking
cows and feeding various farm animals easier since they rely on automatic machines for doing such
farm duties.
(95 words)
Nevertheless, some people argue that changing the genetic structure of plants is highly likely to be
dangerous, as it would be almost impossible for scientists to fully predict the results of such a
change. For instance, a new plant that is supposed to be more productive might become poisonous
for humans or animals. Also, many animal rights activists think factory farming and similar modern
agricultural methods are cruel to animals because they are usually kept in closed buildings, fed by
machines and sometimes even killed in painful ways using automatic slaughtering systems.
(92 words)
Personally, I think modern farming and agricultural methods are inevitable and necessary to meet
the urgent need for more food worldwide. Therefore, governments should invest in agricultural
research and development to increase farm yields and develop farming sufficiently to match the
needs of todays world.
(45 words)
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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic
accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road
safety.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Answer by E. Tahasoni:
Road accidents claim the lives of large numbers of drivers and pedestrians every year and have
turned into a matter of distress in many countries, including my own. It has been argued that
drivers who ignore the law should be fined severely to reduce the number of accidents, whereas
some believe in other solutions.
(54 words)
One could hardly cast doubt on the effectiveness of penalties and fines in the reduction of
accidents. One reason is that many crashes are due to drivers driving carelessly and ignoring laws
like speed limits, threatening the lives of other, law-abiding citizens. If such drivers are
incarcerated or heavily fined, it is highly likely that they and others will observe driving regulations
more closely and fewer accidents would occur. Furthermore, the government could use the fines it
collects from noncompliant drivers to provide better transport facilities such as standard roads or
offer rewards to those who drive properly.
(98 words)
However, there are various other means of decreasing the number of traffic accidents. First of
all, driving license candidates could be required to sit courses aiming at educating them on the
virtues of heeding the law while on the road. As a result, they are more likely to realise why
driving carefully could benefit both themselves and the people around them. Moreover, new cars
could be built in such a way that they restrict the drivers ability to commit traffic offences
like illegal speeding or turns. For instance, the cars computer could decrease its maximum speed in
residential areas or near intersections. (102 words)
In conclusion, I personally think that both fines and other actions like educational schemes and
smart automobiles can have strong impacts on reducing driving accidents and need to be
implemented.
(30 words)
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WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
After graduating from high school, some young people decide to start working right away instead of
going to university.
What are the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Write at least 250 words.
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WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas
outside big cities.
Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Write at least 250 words.
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WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Housing and accommodation has become a major problem in many countries around the world.
What are some of the main factors that have contributed to this problem?
What can be done to help reduce the number of homeless people?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Write at least 250 words.
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Answer by E. Tahasoni:
Today, many cities around the world face an increasing amount of garbage produced by citizens.
This essay aims to investigate the causes of this and also put forward a number of solutions.
(18
words)
There are many reasons why so much rubbish is produced. One important factor is the
consumerist lifestyle of many people today which has led to them buying and consuming more
products such as food, clothes and home appliances. As a result, more packaging is thrown away
everyday which creates a lot of rubbish. Furthermore, many families do not separate reusable
garbage like cans or glass jars from the rest since they are too tired or busy. The main reason
for this is that a majority of parents have to work long hours out of home to make enough
money for their families.
(102 words)
Governments can do various things to decrease the amount of garbage. Firstly, they can legislate
laws to limit the garbage produced by households to a certain level, say, a kilogram every day. As a
result, people would definitely try to buy only the things which they need to avoid throwing away
too much. This is likely to be very effective although it might not be so popular, especially in
large cities. Also, governments could invest in building recycling plants so that more garbage is
reused to produce new products. For example, they could use plastic bottles to make new plastic
balls or computer parts.
(104 words)
In conclusion, the reasons behind the rise in waste production include consumerism and people not
recycling, and possible solutions are laws to restrict household garbage as well as building recycling
centres.
(31 words)
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WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
While mobile phones have many advantages, a number of problems have also resulted from them or
the ways in which they are used.
What are some of these problems?
What solutions can you suggest for solving these problems?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Write at least 250 words.
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Brainstorming:
Causes:
- Fast technological progress youngsters know more about everyday stuff than the
elderly they dont think they should learn from older people less respect
- The problems that old people have experience in solving are different from todays
issues old people no longer act as respectable problem solvers less respect
Effects:
- Less respect Young people may think old people are jobless parasites young
people think pensions are not justified
- Less respect Experience shared by the elderly will not be appreciated many
problems will no longer be easily solved through that experience
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Answer by E. Tahasoni:
In many modern communities, young people no longer appreciate old age as a symbol of reverence.
This essay will try to identify the factors contributing to this and also explain some of the
issues it is likely to create in modern communities.
(42 words)
One could think of various reasons why the youth of today do not respect the elderly much. First
and foremost, the rapid pace of technological progress in todays world has led to youngsters
knowing more about commonly used technologies such as email or internet television. Consequently,
they seldom feel the need to learn from the elderly whose knowledge and experience might seem
rather outdated so their respect for them would decline. Moreover, many youngsters do not view
old people as respectable and experienced problem solvers because the problems they face now tend
to be quite different from those experienced by the older generation.
(103 words)
The social problems this new attitude is likely to create cannot be ignored. Most importantly,
youths might start to question the justifiability of high pensions for old people because they would
think there is no reason for supporting those who stay at home watching the news rather than
work like younger people have to. In addition, the younger generation is likely to find issues like
effective and successful child rearing very difficult to handle since many may start to neglect the
advice and experience shared by the elderly.
(88 words)
To conclude, I think disrespect towards the elderly has been caused by advances in technology as
well as changes in social problems, and in turn could lead to reductions in pensions and challenges
for the youth.
(36 words)
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WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Universities should provide students with the skills they will require in order to succeed at their future
jobs.
How far do you agree or disagree with the above opinion?
What are some of the job skills that employers look for in new employees?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Write at least 250 words.
There are various abilities that new employees today are required to have. Firstly, they need
to have good communicative skills like letter writing so that they can communicate their
ideas while understanding what their colleagues or clients think. Secondly, employees should
be able to manage their time efficiently because they have to finish various tasks before
their respective deadlines. Finally, many companies seek workers who can use computers
effectively to handle office and business tasks. For instance, almost all modern construction
companies require new engineers to know how to design buildings or manage projects using
software like AutoCAD or Microsoft Project.
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Hand-Outs
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Comma (,)
Commas are used in longer sentences to separate information into readable units. They also often
separate clauses in a sentence and sometimes come before a coordinator (e.g. and, but, etc.)
-
A single comma ensures correct reading of a sentence which starts with a long introductory
element:
Following efforts by pioneering scientists in the field of ecology, it has now been generally
accepted that the world is gradually becoming warmer.
A single comma is used after many starting linkers like however, moreover, basically and
such:
In contrast, water levels in Africa and Australia declined to reach an all-time low.
Pairs of commas help in the middle of a sentence to set off any string of words which is either a
parenthesis, or in contrast, to whatever went before:
A student, whether at school or university, needs to receive guidance and instructions on how to
use resources effectively and efficiently.
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Giving an opinion
Use the following ideas to formulate sentences which represent your personal view on
a given subject. Please note that this is only a small portion of the possible structures,
as you may find a great deal more in vocabulary/grammar books written for the IELTS
as well as in sample essays and other authentic IELTS resources.
Agreeing/disagreeing with a view
With/without a background statement:
Agreeing:
I, like many others, think
My view, like many other people, is that
Disagreeing:
Whereas/While/Although/Even though some might believe that, I personally think
Whereas/While/Although/Even though some might believe that, I personally think
otherwise/disagree.
Despite many peoples view that, I tend to think
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Consequences
results
impacts
effects
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Discussing Causes
Cause 3
Cause 2
Cause 1
Issue
Approach A:
Presentation: Cause 1 Issue
Extension: Cause 1 Cause 2 Cause 3
Approach B:
Presentation: Cause 3 Issue
Extension: Cause 3 Cause 2 Cause 1
Note: = consequence linker
= cause linker
Example:
Hole in the ozone layer more heat less water fewer natural resources
Moreover, scientists have discovered that there is a hole in the ozone layer, as a result of which
there is increasing heat in the world. This means that we are losing huge quantities of water, especially
in oceans and lakes.
OR
Moreover, we are losing huge quantities of water, especially in oceans and lakes, because there is
increasing heat in the world. The reason for this is that scientists have discovered that there is a hole in
the ozone layer.
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Discussing Effects
Approach A (Short):
Issue
Effect 1
Effect 2
Approach B (long):
Issue
Effect 1
Effect 2
Effect 3
= cause linker
Example:
Overpopulation more demand for food food shortages widespread hunger
Overpopulation can lead to widespread hunger in many parts of the world, particularly in countries like
India and China which have very large populations. This is because when there are more people in an
area, the demand for food is highly likely to rise as a result of which there may not be enough food
available for everyone.
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Discussing Solutions
Development
Include:
Mechanism
Advantages over other solutions
Any possible disadvantages
although
-------- disadvantage (sentence) --------.
even though
Approach B:
Despite
In spite of
despite
in spite of
Advantage
Effective
Efficient
Disadvantage
resources
Time-efficient
Popular
Easy to implement
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Might not be very time-efficient
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Subordinators
Transitions
and
furthermore
moreover
besides
also
in addition
Subordinators
Transitions
that is
in other words
in fact
actually
namely
To Give an Example
Coordinators
Subordinators
Transitions
for example
for instance
to illustrate
To Show a Choice
Coordinators
Subordinators
Transitions
Coordinators
Subordinators
Transitions
But
while
in contrast
whereas
on the contrary
though
or
nor
To Show a Difference
instead
however
still
otherwise
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Subordinators
Transitions
yet
although
nevertheless
though
admittedly
even though
even so
nonetheless
To Show a Similarity
Coordinators
Subordinators
Transitions
just as
similarly
as
likewise
in the same way
Subordinators
for
because
Transitions
since
as
now that
as long as
Subordinators
Transitions
so
so + adjective + that
as a result
consequently
as a consequence
therefore
thus
hence
accordingly
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Subordinators
Transitions
before
previously
after
subsequently
when
finally
whenever
afterward
while
meanwhile
as soon as
until
after that
as
next
since
since then
then,
once
at first,
Coordinators
Subordinators
Transitions
or
if
To Show a Condition
even if
unless
when
whenever
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Sublist 2
achieve acquire administrate affect appropriate aspect assist category chapter commission
community complex compute conclude conduct consequent construct consume credit
culture design distinct element equate evaluate feature final focus impact injure institute
invest item journal maintain normal obtain participate perceive positive potential
previous primary purchase range region regulate relevant reside resource restrict secure
seek select site strategy survey text tradition transfer
Sublist 3
alternative circumstance comment compensate component consent considerable constant
constrain contribute convene coordinate core corporate correspond criteria deduce
demonstrate document dominate emphasis ensure exclude framework fund illustrate
immigrate imply initial instance interact justify layer link locate maximize minor negate
outcome partner philosophy physical proportion publish react register rely remove scheme
sequence sex shift specify sufficient task technique technology valid volume
Sublist 4
access adequate annual apparent approximate attitude attribute civil code commit
communicate concentrate confer contrast cycle debate despite dimension domestic emerge
error ethnic goal grant hence hypothesis implement implicate impose integrate internal
investigate job label mechanism obvious occupy option output overall parallel parameter
phase predict principal prior professional project promote regime resolve retain series
statistic status stress subsequent sum summary undertake
Sublist 5
academy adjust alter amend aware capacity challenge clause compound conflict consult
contact decline discrete draft enable energy enforce entity equivalent evolve expand
expose external facilitate fundamental generate generation image liberal license logic
margin medical mental modify monitor network notion objective orient perspective precise
prime psychology pursue ratio reject revenue stable style substitute sustain symbol
target transit trend version welfare whereas
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Sublist 6
abstract accurate acknowledge aggregate allocate assign attach author bond brief capable
cite cooperate discriminate display diverse domain edit enhance estate exceed expert
explicit federal fee flexible furthermore gender ignorant incentive incidence incorporate
index inhibit initiate input instruct intelligence interval lecture migrate minimum ministry
motive neutral nevertheless overseas precede presume rational recover reveal scope
subsidy tape trace transform transport underlie utilize
Sublist 7
adapt adult advocate aid channel chemical classic comprehensive comprise confirm
contrary convert couple decade definite deny differentiate dispose dynamic eliminate
empirical equip extract file finite foundation globe grade guarantee hierarchy identical
ideology infer innovate insert intervene isolate media mode paradigm phenomenon priority
prohibit publication quote release reverse simulate sole somewhat submit successor
survive thesis topic transmit ultimate unique visible voluntary
Sublist 8
abandon accompany accumulate ambiguous append appreciate arbitrary automate bias chart
clarify commodity complement conform contemporary contradict crucial currency denote
detect deviate displace drama eventual exhibit exploit fluctuate guideline highlight implicit
induce inevitable infrastructure inspect intense manipulate minimize nuclear offset
paragraph plus practitioner predominant prospect radical random reinforce restore revise
schedule tense terminate theme thereby uniform vehicle via virtual visual widespread
Sublist 9
accommodate analogy anticipate assure attain behalf bulk cease coherent coincide
commence compatible concurrent confine controversy converse device devote diminish
distort duration erode ethic format founded inherent insight integral intermediate manual
mature mediate medium military minimal mutual norm overlap passive portion
preliminary protocol qualitative refine relax restrain revolution rigid route scenario sphere
subordinate supplement suspend team temporary trigger unify violate vision
Sublist 10
adjacent albeit assemble collapse colleague compile conceive convince depress encounter
enormous forthcoming incline integrity intrinsic invoke levy likewise nonetheless
notwithstanding odd ongoing panel persist pose reluctance so-called straightforward
undergo whereby
References:
Coxhead, A. (2000). A new academic word list. TESOL Quarterly, 34(2): 213238.
http://www.victoria.ac.nz/lals/resources/academicwordlist/information.aspx
Kinsella (2003). The academic word list: A list of 570 high-incidence and high-u
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Hand-outs from
IELTS Graduation
(Macmillan)
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Suggested Answers:
1. a large number of
2. many people believe, often
3. would probably
4. certain, is highly likely to be
5. certain, the majority of accidents involve
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Exercise 2:
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.
9.
10.
voters
entrepreneurs
consumers
individuals
the unemployed
everyone (or similar)
manufacturers
politicians/national leaders
workers
celebrities
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