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So what is an argument?
An argument contains one or more reason and a conclusion.
It is the attempt by a writer to persuade the reader, listener
or viewer of something. An explanation is not persuasive: it
merely states the facts.
Example: the weather is very cold today. Therefore you should put on a warm coat.
Activity: Which is the reason and which is the conclusion? How do you know this?
TIP! Always think what is this passage trying to convince me of? If you insert because before the
reason and therefore before the conclusion, you should be able to work out which is which
(because it is very cold today, therefore you should put on a warm coat). Remember that
conclusions dont always have to be a full sentence, they can just be part of a sentence which also
contains a reason!
Reasons are usually supported with evidence; you may either accept or reject the reason (and
conclusion!) based upon the evidence given.
Example: The weather is very cold today (Reason). It is -1 degrees outside. (Evidence).
Therefore you should put on a warm coat. (Conclusion).
How does the use of evidence or examples improve the quality of an argument, and make it more
persuasive? How might this help you with the writing of your EP?
quality, with 60% rating it as good or better. With this in mind, the British
Government should continue to close school sixth forms in favour of colleges.
3. A recent poll suggested that 55% of the population (based on a sample of more
than 10,000) supported the use of the death penalty for convicted murderers.
Previous votes in the Houses of Parliament have consistently opposed the use of
the detah penalty. Members of Parliament should represent the views of the
British people. The current views of the people are clearly not being represented
by our MPs so we should lobby MPs to ensure that there is a new vote on this
issue in the near future.
4. 62% of cartoon movies watched by young children on video or DVD contain
images of injuries caused by violence and nearly half of these are fatal injuries.
Children are easily frightened by these images and there is a relationship
between time spent watching television and sleep disturbances caused by
nightmares. This shows that watching television contributes to sleep problems in
young children.
Using counter-argument
It may be tempting to avoid dealing with counter-arguments in order to make your own
position look stronger. However, this only weakens your argument, because you have failed to
deal with the opposing side. You must always create a BALANCED argument that critically
assesses alternative views and demonstrates why the position you are taking is the stronger
one.
Your title needs to allow room for an argument, rather than an explanation. If
you choose the title what are the reasons for the popularity of football in the
UK, you will only be writing an explanation. If you modify that to, to what
extent is the celebrity status of footballers responsible for the popularity of
football in the UK, you will be able to construct an argument.
You need to construct an argument in your main discussion that assesses
evidence and tries to persuade the reader (examiner) that your view should be
accepted.
This requires you to support your reasons with evidence, and to supply a
variety of different reasons in support of your view.
You should also use counter-arguments, assess their strengths and
weaknesses, and then go onto demonstrate, with evidence and reasoning, why
they are weaker than your position.
Prep: read the article below and answer the questions on the next page. This is the
way that you should approach your reading for the EP.
Organic Food: Whats All the Fuss About?
Organic farmers use natural methods such as fertilising their land with animal droppings.
Conventional farmers employ a variety of methods, including the use of man-made fertiliers and
pesticides. We are constantly told that an organic approach to farming would be better for us and
better for the environment. Yet organic farming is an impractical system of food production,
primarily because it is incapable of feeding the world.
Organic farming is less efficient than conventional farming as it requires more land and more
energy to produce the same amount of food. For example, 122sq m of land is needed to produce
a tonne of organic vine tomatoes. The figure for conventionally-grown loose tomateaes is 19 sq m.
The same is true for meat farming. It takes 25% more energy to produce an organic chicken than a
conventionally produced chicken.
Another problem with organic farming is that we dont have the natural resources to run it on a
large scale, and wont have in the future. We know this because even 100 years ago we had to
resort to collecting bird droppings off exotic islands just to get enough natural fertiliser for British
farming. And even that wasnt enough, so farmers started using man-made fertilisers. So changing
to a purely organic approach would lead to a decrease in the amount of food produced in the
world.
The organic movement claims to be more environmentally friendly than conventional farming.
They argue that conventional farming uses man-made fertilisers which must be made using fossil
fuels and this accelerates global warming. What they say is just a myth as we could make
fertilisers using solar or wind energy.
It is often said that man-made chemicals cause health problems so we should restrict their use in
farming. But there is no solid evidence for this. In fact, in the US, since farmers began using
chemicals, cancer rates have dropped by 15% and life expectancy has gone up by around 10
years. Actually, its organic farming that threatens our health. Mother Nature isnt our friend.
Putting animal droppings on our food is clearly an unhealthy idea. Just look at the scare in 2006,
when organically grown spinach was infected with E.Coli bacteria.
All of this shows that organic farming is not better than conventional farming.
Questions:
1. What is the conclusion of this argument?
2. Identify two reasons given to support the conclusion.
3. Identify one counter-argument made in paragraphs 4-5. How effective is this counterargument and on what basis?
4. How well does the reasoning in paragraph 5 support the conclusion? Make two points of
evaluation.
5. Write your own argument (1 page) to support the argument that organic farming is better
than conventional farming (i.e. the opposite conclusion to that of the passage). You will
need to do some research for in order to construct your reasoning.
Please include a bibliography of websites/literature you used, and give a brief assessment
of why you felt each one to be credible and reliable.
Include the following in your argument (please write in the margin each element in the
bracket below to show your thinking)
Reasons (R)
Evidence/examples for each reason (Ev) (Ex)
Counter-argument (CA)
Rejection of counter-argument, including evidence to the contrary (RCA)
Conclusion (C)