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IN WRITING PARAGRAPHS
A Case of The Second Grade Students of SMU Negeri 8 Semarang
in The Academic Year of 2004/2005
FINAL PROJECT
Submitted in Partial Fulfilment of the Requirements
For the Degree of Sarjana Pendidikan in English
by
Lenny Agustina Indrawati
2201401030
ENGLISH DEPARTMENT
LANGUAGE AND ARTS FACULTY
SEMARANG STATE UNIVERSITY
2006
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.. I never learn anything talking. I only learn things when I ask questions
(Lou Holtz).
.. The most important thing in communication is to hear what isn t being
said. (Peter F. Drucker)
.. Nothing but heart can change the heart. (Carroll O Connor)
.. The best of all things is to learn. Money can be lost or stolen, health and
strength may fail, but what you have committed to your mind is yours
forever. (Louis L Amour)
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To my beloved family: father, mother,
sister, and brothers.
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ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS
First, I would like to express my deepest thank to God for giving me
opportunity to finish this final project. I worked hard to make my dream come
true, but this cannot be real without His great blessing.
Then, I would like to say thank to Drs. Januarius Mujiyanto, M. Hum. and
Drs. H. Suprapto, M. Hum., as my advisers who gave me continuous guidance as
well as encouragement, and great patience in leading me to finish this report.
My thanks also go to all lecturers of the English Department of UNNES
who have taught, motivated, and guided me since the first day of my study at
UNNES.
Furthermore, I would like to thank all my friends of C and D classes of
2001, especially for Sumire, Tri-M, Wiwid, and Umi who have helped me for
about 4 years.
I realize that this final project is still far from being perfect. I have a grea
t
expectation that this final project will be beneficial and useful for both teach
ers
and students of English.
Semarang, February 2006
The writer
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ABSTRACT
The objective of this final project is to describe types of difficulties faced
by the second grade students of SMU Negeri 8 Semarang in the academic year of
2004/2005 when they write paragraphs.
Before doing the field project, I tried to find out the meaning of writing
and paragraph. I also looked at the curriculum about kinds of paragraphs taught
in
Senior High School grade 2. Based on that information I prepared an instrument
which was appropriate. Here, the students have to produce their own sentences.
They could write their ideas on the form of paragraphs. It would show their real
difficulty in writing.
When the data had been collected, I then analyzed each sentences. I found
many errors and classified those errors into grammatical and semantic errors.
On grammatical errors, I divided it into 5 kinds of errors. Those were
errors in noun, verb, adjective, pronoun, and article. While on semantic errors
I
tried to analyze the meaning of students sentences. These errors could be divided
into sentence errors and inter-sentence errors. Besides grammatical and semantic
errors, I also found the other errors which could not be classified into one of
those
errors.
In my opinion, the students errors in sentences occurred because they
only transferred rules from their mother tongue, and they did not really underst
and
their target language. So, to minimize those errors, it is suggested that Englis
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teachers give clear explanation. They also have to give a lot of practices to us
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those rules in writing sentences and paragraphs.
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TABLE OF CONTENTS
ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS v
ABSTRACT vi
TABLE OF CONTENTS .. vii
CHAPTER
I. INTRODUCTION 1
1.1 General Background ... 1
1.2 Reasons for Choosing the Topic . 3
1.3 Statements of the Problem ... 4
1.4 Objectives of the Study 4
1.5 Significance of the Study . 4
1.6 Outline of the Study ..... 5
II REVIEW OF RELATED LITERATURE ... . 6
2.1 Writing .. 6
2.2 Paragraphs for the Second Grade of Senior High School . 7
2.3 Error Analysis ... 9
2.4 Mistake and Error . 10
2.4.1 Interlingual Errors . 11
2.4.2 Intralingual Errors . 13
2.4.2.1 Overgeneralization . 13
2.4.2.2 Ignorance of Rule Restriction 14
2.4.2.3 Incomplete Application of Rules ... 14
2.4.2.4 False Concept Hypothesized .. 14
2.5 Theoretical Framework . 14
III METHOD OF INVESTIGATION 16
3.1 Population and Sample . 16
3.2 Choice of the Population .. 17
3.3 Technique of Sampling . 17
3.4 Instrument for Collecting Data . 18
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3.5 Preparation of the Test ......................................... 19
3.6 Data Collection ... . 19
3.7 Method of Data Analysis ... .. 19
IV DATA ANALYSIS ... 21
4.1 Grammatical Errors .. ..... 21
4.1.1 Noun .. 21
4.1.2 Verb ...23
4.1.3 Adjective ... 24
4.1.4 Pronoun . 25
4.1.5 Article ... 26
4.2 Semantic Errors . 27
4.2.1 Sentence Errors . 27
4.2.2 Intersentence Errors .. 30
4.3 Other Errors .. 31
V CONCLUSIONS AND SUGGESTIONS . 50
5.1 Conclusions ... 50
5.2 Suggestions ... 51
BIBLIOGRAPHY .52
APPENDIX 53
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CHAPTER I
INTRODUCTION
1.1 Background of the Study
As social being people need a means of communication to express feeling,
thoughts and desires, which is called language. This language must be understood
by the members of the group. Each group has its own characteristics of language,
such as accent and stress.
Some experts try to define what the meaning of language is. Hornby in the
Oxford Advanced Learner s Dictionary of Current English (1989:699) states that
language is a system of sounds, words, patterns, etc. used by human to
communicate thoughts and feelings. In tone with it, Wardhaugh in Brown (1987:
4) says that language is a system of arbitrary vocal symbols used for human
communication. Furthermore, Brown in Webster s Third New International
Dictionary of English Language (1987:4) says that language is a systematic
means of communicating ideas or feelings by the use of conventionalized signs,
sounds, gestures, or marks having understood meaning. From those three
definitions of language, I can say that language is a system of arbitrary vocal
symbols to communicate thoughts, ideas, or feelings by the use of
conventionalized signs, sounds, gestures, or marks having understood meaning.
There are two forms of language, spoken and written form. The spoken
form comes first. It can exist freely without writing, whereas the written form
has
never been known to exist without speech. We start learning how to use spoken
language since we were still a kid. At that time, we just listened to other pers
ons
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speech and tried to imitate them. By doing it everyday it becomes easier to
communicate using the spoken language. On the contrary, written language is
more difficult to be learned. In writing, we need to pay attention to a lot of t
hings.
Some of those things are vocabulary, grammar and the arrangement of sentences
we make.
Since we use language as a means of communication, we need to find the
right words to send a message. Some words cannot be used in any context. For
example, the word add in I can add my knowledge. is not appropriate. Though
add means put something together with something else so as to increase the size,
number, amount, etc. (Hornby, 1989:13), but it doesn t mean that the word can be
used in that sentence. It is better to use enrich in the sentence.
The way we choose the right words is not enough to send a message to
other people. We also need the right structure of words. It is known as Grammar.
By looking at its definition we will get the figure of what grammar is and how i
t
works.
According to Hornby in Oxford advanced Learner s Dictionary
(1989:542), grammar is defined as rules for forming words and combining them
into sentences. While Harman in Ulfa (2000:4) says that grammar is the study of
words and their function. Moreover, Robert in Aswadi (2002:11) states that
grammar is an analytical and analogical study of sentences. Still in Aswadi,
Robert says that grammar is the total set of signals by which a given language
expresses its meaning or the total structure of a language. So I can say that
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grammar is an analytical and analogical study for forming words and combining
them into sentences to express its meaning or the total structure of a language.
Verb as part of tenses in grammar is important. It contains some
information. It tells an event and the time it happens, whether it happened in t
he
past, at present or in the future. Willis (1981:6) says that a verb gives an ind
ication
of the time of occurrence of the action or state of being. For example, we canno
t
say now I continued my study in SMA . By looking at its adverb of time, we
know that the process of study in SMA is still happening. So, it is more
appropriate to say now I continue my study in SMA .
When we use the right verbs, it doesn t mean that the sentences we write
will be good sentences. The verbs should be combined in a good order with other
words in the sentences. For example, it is better to write the benefit of doing i
t is
to make my body healthy rather than the benefit of doing it is make health my
body.
So, we can see that the way we find the right words to send messages are
not an easy job. Some students who have been learning English as a second
language for years still make errors. To analyze those errors, I decided to do a
research in the second year students of SMU N 8 Semarang. Here, the students
ability to produce good sentences is tested.
1.2 Reasons for Choosing the Topic
The reasons for choosing the topic can be illustrated as follows:
1. Learning language is a difficult activity because each language has its own
system that is different from that in the students native language. The
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differences in the system of the language can bring about learning
problems for the foreign language learners. So, the teacher is expected to
pay attention to the difficulties which may be encountered by the students.
2. By analyzing the students learning problems, it is hoped that everyone
will pay more attention and try to solve this writing problem, so it can be
prevented.
1.3 Statements of the Problem
In this paper, I intend to solve the following problems:
1. What kinds of error do the students make in writing paragraphs?
a. What grammatical errors do they make?
b. What semantic errors do they make?
2. Why do they make such errors?
1.4 Objectives of the Study
The objectives of the study are:
1. To describe the grammatical errors made by students in writing
paragraphs.
2. To describe semantic errors made by students in writing paragraphs.
3. To provide reasons for the occurrence of such errors.
1.5 Significance of the Study
The result of the study will hopefully be useful both for teachers and
students:
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1. It gives information about the student s difficulty in writing paragraphs.
2. The students will realize that there are a lot of difficulties, so they will
pay
more attention to some difficult parts of the English lesson.
1.6 Outline of the Study
The outline of the report is:
Chapter I : The Introduction involves background of the study, reason for
choosing the topic, statement of the problem, objectives of the
study, significance of the study, and the outline of the study.
Chapter II : The Review of Related Literature involves theoretical
background of the study, previous research from some journals,
and the last is theoretical framework.
Chapter III : The Method of Research involves the object of the study, role
of the researcher, types of data, Procedures of collecting data,
procedures of analysing the data, and trianggulation.
Chapter IV : The Result of Analysis involves the general findings, results,
and discussion.
Chapter V : Conclusion and Some Suggestions.
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CHAPTER II
REVIEW OF RELATED LITERATURE
This chapter will give the definition and the explanation of each parts of
the title. Those parts are writing, paragraphs for second grade of senior high
school, error and mistake, and error analysis.
2.1 Writing
It is difficult to find the definition of writing. Some experts usually define
it by looking at its characteristics. One of writing characteristics is its rela
tion to
speaking. Tidyman (1959:257) says that writing is closely related to speaking, n
ot
only in such items as content, organization of ideas, and vocabulary, but also i
n
the use of pauses and the modulation of the voice to show the devision and the
relationship of ideas.
The other characteristic is said by Nilson (1984:134). He says that writing
is not something which is natural to humans. It is the most complex skill to be
developed. In tone with it Finochiaro (1974:86) states that writing skill needs
some practices done step by step. It means that to really able to write is not a
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easy job, it takes time. The practices will be worthless if they do not have a
motivation to write, as Tidyman (1959:66) says that the important thing in writi
ng
is attitude-willingness to write.
The purpose of writing is to give some information to other people by
write it down. That is why writing is so important in the society. Nilson
(1984:134) says that writing is a skill which has been developed in civilized
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society to pass on knowledge or messages. Furthermore he (1996:134) says that
writing as one of the language skills has given an important contribution to
human.
From those characteristics of writing I conclude that writing is the most
complex skill to show the relationship of ideas which needs the willingness to
write and some practices done step by step to pass on knowledge or messages. So,
writing is one way to speak what is on our mind. It involves more than just
producing words and sentences. To produce a piece of writing, we should be able
to write a connected series of words and sentences which are grammatically and
logically linked. If we choose the right words and in our sentences then the kin
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of purpose we have in our mind will suit the intended readers.
2.2 Paragraphs for the Second Grade of Senior High School
According to Hornby (1989:895), paragraph is distinct section of a written
or printed text, usually consisting of several sentences dealing with a single t
heme
and starting on a new line. In tone with it, Tidyman (1987:10) says that a
paragraph is a group of sentences that develop a point on an idea. Further he
explains that the important feature of paragraph is that it has unity when all o
f its
sentences are related to the main point. So, a paragraph is a group of sentences
dealing with a single theme that develop the main point on an idea.
The form of paragraph can be written into 12 kinds of genre. Those genres
are recount, report, discussion, explanation, analytical exposition, hortatory
exposition, news item, anecdote, narrative, procedure, description, and review.
Each of them has different social function and characteristics.
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As second grade students of senior high school they have to be able to
write 10 kinds of genres. They have learned narrative, descriptive, anecdote,
recount, review, and procedure in junior high school. Then in grade one of senio
r
high school they learned narrative, procedure, recount, report, and news item.
And in second grade they will learn narrative, descriptive, anecdote, analytical
exposition, and hortatory exposition.
First genre for second grade students of senior high school is narrative. It
is used to amuse, entertain and to deal with actual or vicarious experience in
different ways. Narrative text starts with orientation. Here, the writer sets th
e
scene and introduces the participants. Then there will be complication in which
a
crisis arises. After that resolution comes. It shows how to solve the crisis.
The second genre is descriptive. This kind of text is used to describe a
particular person, place or thing. Before describing parts, qualities and
characteristics of something the writer should identify phenomenon to be
described. Descriptive text usually uses simple present tense.
The third genre to be learned by second grade students is anecdote.
Different from descriptive and narrative, the function of anecdote is to share w
ith
others an account of an unusual or amusing incident. It starts with signals the
retelling of an unusual incident or we call it abstract. Then orientation comes.
Here the writer sets the scene. After that is crisis. It provides details of the
unusual
incident. Then, there will be reaction to crisis. And the last part of anecdote
is
coda. It is reflection on or evaluation of the incident.
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The next genre is analytical exposition. It is used to persuade the reader or
listener that something is the case. It starts with thesis which introduces topi
c and
indicates the writer s position. It also outlines the main arguments to be present
ed.
Then, arguments come. It restates main argument outlined before. The writer can
develop and support each point or argument. And the text ends with reiteration.
Here the writer restates his position.
The last genre is almost the same with analytical exposition, we call it
hortatory exposition. It is used to persuade the reader that something should or
should not be the case. The generic structure of hortatory exposition starts wit
h
announcement of issue of concern. Then there must be reasons for concern which
leading to recommendation. In the end of the text the writer will give statement
of
what ought or ought not to happen.
2.3 Error analysis
According to James (1998:7) error analysis is a methodology for dealing
with data rather than a theory of acquisition. The data can be taken by conducti
ng
a test with the students as the respondents. Further he (1998:1) says that the
process of determining the incidence, nature, causes, and consequences of
unsuccessful language learning. While Brown (1980:166) states that error analysi
s
is the fact that learner do make errors and that these errors can be observed,
analyzed, and classified to reveal something of the system operating within the
learners. The purpose is to show some problems faced by the students. It is a ke
y
to understand the process of foreign language acquisition.
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From those explanations I conclude that error analysis is a methodology
for dealing with data which can be observed, analyzed and classified to reveal o
r
determine the incidence, nature, causes and consequences of unsuccessful
language learning within the learners.
2.4 Mistake and Error
Mistake and Error are two different words with different meaning. They
come within learning process. To learn something we need more than
understanding the concept of what we have learned. If we cannot get the main or
important point, we will never know how to use it, then we make mistakes and
even errors.
A mistake refers to a performance error that is either random on a slip of
the tongue, in that it is failure to utilize a known system correctly (Brown,
1980:165). Along this line, Huber (1983:134) says that when committing
mistakes, the speaker is normally capable of recognizing and correcting them.
When students make mistakes, they can correct them by themselves. But
when students make errors they cannot correct it. The teacher has to explain the
causes to make them understand. It is related to their interlanguage.
Errors are typically produced by people who do not yet fully command
some institutionalized language systems (Conder, 1971:79). In tone with it,
Norrish (1983:7) says that error is systematic deviation, when a learner has not
learnt something and consistently get it wrong. Moreover Brown (1980:165)
believed that the term error refers to noticeable deviation from the adult gramm
ar
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of a native speaker, which reflects the interlanguage communication of the
learners. Usually learners do not recognize and cannot correct it.
From those explanations I conclude that error is systematic and noticeable
deviation caused by lack of knowledge, ignorance of appropriate rule and do not
yet fully command some institutionalized language systems reflecting the
interlanguage competence of the learner, interference of the learners mother
tongue and the general characteristics of the rule learning. Another conclusion
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can draw is that if the students are unable to improve the mistakes they make ar
e
called errors, whereas if they are able to improve the mistakes are called mista
kes.
There are some reasons for this condition. Brown (1980:156) states that
errors are caused by lack of knowledge about the target language. While Richards
(1974:174) says that the source of errors in studying a language might be derive
d
from the interference of the learners mother tongue and the general
characteristics of the rule learning. Furthermore, Corder (1970:62) says that er
rors
are caused by ignorance of appropriate rule on structure in foreign language.
Essentially these are problems of knowledge, either of knowledge about some
elements of the language, or of knowledge how to use some language features.
In general, the sources of error are:
2.4.1 Interlingual Errors
According to Brown (1980:173) the beginning stages of learning a second
language are characterized by a good deal of interlingual transfer from the nati
ve
language.
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Richard (1974:35) says that interlingual errors are errors due to transfering
rules from the mother tongue. Therefore, interlingual errors are errors which ar
e
caused by interference from native language to the target language they learn. S
o,
before someone really master the concept of their target language they will alwa
ys
use the concept of their native language. When it happens all the time and they
do
not realize it, it can be called interlingual errors.
According to Brown (1987:156), there are hierarchy of difficulty. It will
explain some reasons why interlingual errors appear. It is divided into 5 levels
.
Level 0-Transfer
There is no difference or contrast present between the two languages. The
learner can simply transfer a sound, structure, or lexical item from the native
language to the target language.
Level 1-Coalescence
Here, two items in the native language become coalesced into essentially
one item in the target language. For example, in Indonesia we have kami and kita