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shirk not": domestic labor, sex work, and warfare in the poetry of
Natasha Trethewey
Author(s):Joan Wylie Hall
Source:The Mississippi Quarterly. 62.1-2 (Winter-Spring 2009): p265. From Literature Resource
Center.
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BORN IN GULFPORT, MISSISSIPPI, IN 1966, NATASHA TRETHEWEY HAS
published three major collections since 2000. Winner of the inaugural Cave Canem
Poetry Prize for the best first book by an African American poet, Domestic Work
(2000) arrived with cover art by Romare Bearden and cover blurbs by Toi Derricotte,
Yusef Komunyakaa, and Rita Dove. Reminiscent of Emerson's salute to the
newcomer Walt Whitman on the publication of his first book, Dove--a former US poet
laureate--introduces Trethewey in ringingly prophetic terms: "Here is a young poet
in full possession of her craft, ready to testify. To which I say: Can we get an
'Amen?' And: Let these voices be heard" (Domestic Work back cover). The men and
women who speak in Trethewey's first volume, and in the two that followed, come
from generations of the South's black working class. Honoring their lives, Domestic
Work, Bellocq's Ophelia (2002), and the Pulitzer Prize-winning Native Guard (2006)
place a high value on their humble labors. In these poems, even the most grueling
and tedious occupations can become powerful vehicles of insight and self-
expression. (2)
The poet takes her cue from W. E. B. Du Bois, whose The Souls of Black Folk
(1903) provides an epigraph for the "Domestic Work" sequence in her first collection:
"I shirk not. I long for work. I pant for a life full of striving" (11). Trethewey's early
poems are filled with as many sorts of laborers as Whitman's Leaves of Grass:
seamstresses, photographers, laundrywomen, maids, cashiers, beauticians,
elevator operators, boxers, machinists at a drapery factory, 1930s Hollywood
starlets, Mississippi dockworkers, and even an insurance collector for the Everlast
Interment Company. Derricotte says that Trethewey "puts women's work, and in
particular, black women's work, the hard unpretty background music of our survival,
in its proper perspective.... this is a revolutionary book that cuts right through to the
deepest places in the soul" (DW back cover). Women do strive mightily in Domestic
Work, but men also contribute their sweat and souls toTrethewey's labor force.
Much of the work splits along traditional gender lines: black women scrub white
women's floors, while black men "heave crates of bananas and spiders" on the
Gulfport docks ("At the Owl Club," DW 4).
In fact, Trethewey's second and third books exaggerate the division of labor,
focusing on prostitutes in Bellocq's Ophelia and on soldiers in the title segment of
Native Guard. While the nature of their work seems to underscore female and male
stereotypes, the laborers themselves are less conventional since Trethewey's early
twentieth-century sex workers and her Civil War soldiers are African American.
White prostitutes and white enlisted men of those eras became familiar and
sympathetic figures in the fiction of Ambrose Bierce, Bret Harte, Stephen Crane, and
Theodore Dreiser. Trethewey says she writes about racially marginalized people
"and the tensions inherent in public history and / or cultural memory versus private
memory and / or family history" because this is "the stuff that often gets little
attention or is left out of the historical record" ("Interchange" 580).
At a well-appointed brothel in New Orleans and a stone fort off Mississippi's Gulf
Coast, Trethewey's characters work with pride in professions that readers have
seldom viewed from the perspective of women and men of color. The light-skinned
Ophelia tells a friend back home: "I alone / have made this choice.... Now / my labor
is my own" ("January 1911," BO 15). She adds that she has earned enough money
at Countess P--'s house to buy her mother new teeth and a new well. Guarding a
Union prison on Ship Island, an African American soldier discovers a different sort of
reward for his industry: "a bond in labor / I had not known" ("January 1863," NG 26).
Ophelia and the guardsman acknowledge the hazards and humiliations of their
work, yet both feel liberated from earlier restraints: her days in Mississippi's cotton
fields and his life as an enslaved manservant in Louisiana. Their new occupations
may be as "unpretty," in Derricotte's word, as the labors of Domestic Work;
but Trethewey's characters rarely shrink from a task. Facing their work in all three
volumes, they face--and discover--themselves.
Trethewey told Callaloo editor Charles Henry Rowell that, in describing her
maternal grandmother's jobs--from housework and sewing to factory labor--in
several Domestic Work poems, she suggests the "idea of becoming, of constantly
making one's self, of striving to move to the next thing, as opposed to a kind of
stagnant being" (1024-25). The relationship she draws here between work and
"becoming" is so central to all three of her books that her comments bear quoting at
length. In Domestic Work, says Trethewey, her grandmother is
constantly thinking, she's constantly moving, recreating and
remaking herself, and learning the self also. Then I found that
becoming because of the ways in which work says something about who
we are, but also, who we might become, the things that we aspire
to. And I also thought of that title poem and then that section, as
inscribing this history into the American literary canon, and into
American cultural memory, into public memory. That was also the
gesture of the poet-in-process, of that kind of making and
becoming. (1025)
At least a generation older than Trethewey's mother, the clients in the poem "Naola
Beauty Academy, New Orleans, 1945" likewise view kinky, coiled, and wiry hair as
unattractive; the stylist-narrator praises the "girls" in her shop who "put a press on
your head / last two weeks. No naps" (DW 20). Ida, for example, has a "natural
touch" ("Don't burn nobody"); and Lee, a former seamstress with steady fingers,
"can fix some bad hair" (DW 20). Reviewing Domestic Work in Prairie Schooner,
Rafael Campo describes the hot comb as "a kind of instrument of torture, a device
fashioned by human hands made to serve a racist ideal of beauty, its blackness and
grease seemingly emblematic of what it was employed so painfully to 'correct'"
(182). (3) Yet Campo also remarks that the woman's "own genuine beauty" prevails
in "Hot Combs," as she "transcends the disgrace" of the instrument "in her so very
human suffering" (182).
The metamorphosis of her mother's hair does suggest the problematic nature of
work in Trethewey's poetry--especially work in an oppressive society; nevertheless,
"Hot Combs" is also one of Trethewey's most obvious depictions of the
transformative power of the work of the hands. (4) And, in this poem, the writer
struggles to turn painful material into beautiful lines; sweating along with her mother,
she retrieves a very personal past through an anonymous junk-store find. Domestic
work, says Trethewey, includes "the everyday work that we do as human beings to
live with or without people that we've lost, the work of memory and forgetting, and of
self-discovery--not simply the work of earning a living and managing our
households, but that larger, daily, domestic work that all of us do" ("Inscriptive"
1026-27). In poems like "Hot Combs," "Cameo," and "Early Evening, Frankfort,
Kentucky," Trethewey labors to recover her most painful loss: "My mother, who will
not reach / forty-one" ("Early Evening," DW 27). (5)
When the poet monthly digs her fingers into the hair of an older relative in the poem
"Give and Take," greasing the woman's scalp, plaiting her strands "for ease" (DW
50), she is again digging into her complex heritage. The woman is not named in the
poem, but Trethewey's interview with Jill Petty confirms that this is her Aunt Sugar,
whom she calls her storytelling "muse" (367). A former schoolteacher who moved to
Chicago and became a medical technician, Aunt Sugar returned to Gulfport to live
next door to Trethewey's grandmother. Even though the grandmother's working
career was much more humble, the two eiders are sometimes indistinguishable in
the Domestic Work poems. "There's just an old woman who is there,"
says Trethewey ("Interview" 366). But it is explicitly Aunt Sugar who guides the
youngNatasha in the leisurely work of fishing in "Flounder," a coming-of-age poem
framed by references to color. Sugar speaks at the start, warning the light-skinned
child to wear a hat in the hot sun: "You 'bout as white as your dad, / and you gone
stay like that" (DW 35). After instructing the girl in baiting the hook and holding the
pole, the aunt gets the first bite and struggles with a flounder: "you can tell/ 'cause
one of its sides is black. / The other side is white," she says (DW 35-36). In the final
lines, the mixed-race child watches the landed fish "flip-flop, / switch sides with every
jump" (DW 36)--a deathly thumping that anticipates the girl's desperate temptation to
pass as white in "White Lies," the poem that immediately follows.
The possibility for self-discovery is one of the most important features of the work
described in Trethewey's three volumes, and Domestic Work contains several other
first-person poems about the speaker's childhood experiences. In "Microscope," a
title that underscores vision,Trethewey explains that her lessons in sixth-grade
science included
Small discoveries,
When she puts one of her hairs, "straight and shiny," under the lens of the school's
microscope, she finds that
This poem is a good illustration of Trethewey's belief that "One of the most
important things about how you use objects in a poem is juxtaposition.... That's
where you get tension ... and where you can work on its various levels of meaning"
("Interview" 367). The "magnetic push and pull" that the sixth-grader observes in
science class anticipates all the other oppositions in the poem, climaxing in the
emphatic "measure, mismeasure." Reaching for the stars, an innocent child is
brought harshly down to earth when "Rays of Light" shatter into a rigid catalogue of
races that erases her and all others who don't fit the template. Through a cold lens,
her pretty hair is just another dead specimen.
The child's work of discovery is more hopeful in "Gathering," a
poem Trethewey dedicates to her Aunt Sugar. Together, they wade through tall wet
grass to pluck the "glistening" figs that have escaped a swarm of "[g]reen-black
beetles" (DW 48). The un-ripe figs they "save" are "hard as jewels"; but the aunt
"puts them to light / on the windowsill" and advises her niece "to wait, learn
patience." Watching the green fruits "turn gold, grow sweet," the girl "begin[s] to see"
that
our lives are like this--we take
We glisten, preserve
Whether they glisten with sweat from the factory line, water from the washtub, dew
from the cabbage patch, or pomade from the beauty parlor, many of the characters
in Domestic Work do shine with a glow more of ripe figs than of fool's gold
when Trethewey brings their work to light.
In contrast to the domestic work of the family and the community in Trethewey's first
volume, Bellocq's Ophelia relates the doubly unusual labors of the elegant woman
on the book cover: prostitution and photography modeling. The portrait was taken in
Mahogany Hall, one of Storyville's few "colored" brothels, by E. J. Bellocq, who was
known in New Orleans at the start of the twentieth century as a commercial maritime
photographer. (6) Coming upon his Storyville pictures in a graduate class on
"Materials for the Study of American Culture" at the University of
Massachusetts, Trethewey constructed the persona of Ophelia after she realized
that the sex-workers were of mixed race. (7) She explains that Ophelia "became, for
me, not only a means to discuss and grapple with my own experiences growing up
in the Deep South as a light-skinned and biracial woman, but she became her own
self as well--which is what I enjoyed so much about writing Bellocq's Ophelia"
("Inscriptive" 1027). Trethewey identifies her character in the opening poem,
"Bellocq's Ophelia," one of only four pieces in the volume not narrated by Ophelia.
Describing a "limp" nude posing on a wicker couch, an unnamed viewer of Bellocq's
work compares the photographer's model to the young woman who posed for
Millais's painting of Shakespeare's resigned and dying Ophelia, prone on a stream
of water. (8) Bellocq's Ophelia, however, has "a dare" in her face; and her lips are
"poised to open, to speak" (BO 3). This modern Ophelia strives to become more
than a spectacle for the male gaze; in Trethewey's book, she finds her voice and,
finally, a new vocation.
Ophelia tells her story twice: first, through the "external" documentation of letters
and, second, through the "internal" record of a diary ("Inscriptive"
1029). Trethewey distinguishes the two genres by using different poetic forms for
the letters and the diary entries. The fourteen poems in "Letters from Storyville,"
titled by date from December 1910 to March 1912, average a page in length. Their
free-verse stanzas vary widely in number of lines and line-length. The "Storyville
Diary" entries, each with a brief title, such as "Naming" and "Father," cover the same
period and are dated from October 1910 to March 1912. But these ten poems are
each a uniform fourteen lines, and the lines often approximate blank verse. Like
Rainer Maria Rilke's Sonnets to Orpheus, Edna St. Vincent Millay's Fatal Interview,
Robert Lowell's Notebook, John Berryman's Dream Songs, and Yusef
Komunyakaa's Talking Dirty to the Gods, "Storyville Diary" works loosely with the
sonnet sequence tradition. For Trethewey, the formal consistency of the diary
entries hints at Ophelia's "intact sense of self," a solid core that resists her tendency
to "become whatever it was she felt someone else wanted her to be" ("Inscriptive"
1029).
Ophelia's single "Letter Home," preceding the "Letters from Storyville" section,
describes the country girl's difficult quest for a better occupation than domestic work
and field labor. Writing in November 1910, presumably to her mother, Ophelia says
she is still jobless after four weeks of searching in New Orleans:
Able to pass for white, she hopes "not to do the work I once did, back-bending and
domestic" (BO 8). Ironically, she is soon installed in "a high-class house" by a
madam who narrates the poem "Countess P--'s Advice for New Girls" (BO 11).
Although Countess (as Ophelia calls her) boasts of the newcomer's ability to recite
poetry for the clientele, her chief employment is once again back-bending, and
hardly a "modest position."
All of Ophelia's letters after the early "Letter Home" are written to Constance Wright,
a sympathetic teacher who met her when Ophelia, "a girl past school age who
should be / attending a husband or some honest work, / c[a]me to learn, still, beside
children" ("January 1912," BO 31). Schoolwork temporarily releases Ophelia from
the sorts of physical labor portrayed in Trethewey's Domestic Work. In Constance's
classroom, Ophelia can
escape my other life of work:
Constance, who has traveled through Northern states, helps Ophelia to dream of a
life beyond the rural community. For months, Ophelia borrows the teacher's copy of
American Highways and Byways, a book she is delighted to rediscover in
Countess's library, along with a globe of the world that reminds her of Constance's
classroom globe. With details like these, Trethewey draws unexpected connections
between the classroom and the brothel: settings in which the "still" Ophelia actively
seeks new labors.
The similarity of the names "Countess" and "Constance" further links Ophelia's
female mentors and guides; and a few mildly erotic passages from the letters to her
"dearest friend" ("January 1911," BO 15) show that physical desire is not limited to
Storyville, nor even to heterosexual relationships. In "December 1911," for example,
Ophelia tells Constance she would like to photograph her turning from the
chalkboard, "returning my own gaze" as the shutter falls softly: "that little trapdoor
catching light, opening / and closing like the valves of the heart" (BO 30). She also
describes reveries of Constance that occupy her sessions with Bellocq. Posing for
his camera, she recalls "how I was a doll in your hands" when Constance brushed
and arranged Ophelia's hair, "marveling / that the comb--your fingers--could slip
through / as if sifting fine white flour" ("March 1911," BO 20). The rapt schoolgirl
"could lose myself / then, too, my face---each gesture--shifting / to mirror yours" (BO
20). Chiefly, however, Ophelia writes to Constance not to explore the passions of
female friendship but to describe her new "strange life" ("April 1911," BO 23) at
Mahogany Hall, where her work constantly surprises her. She describes one man
who does not immediately remove his clothes in her room, as most customers do,
but who simply repeats her question, "What do you want?" (BO 23). To her
confusion, he is curious--perhaps even sympathetic--about her own desires. Ophelia
realizes she has no answer; she can no longer say what she wants, unless it is
freedom from painful memories: "I could then be somebody else, born again, / free
in the white space of forgetting" (BO 24). Fragmented allusions to assaults by white
men in a country store and a tobacco barn back home indicate that Ophelia's
journey to New Orleans was at least in part a flight from sexual predators. (9)
The soldier must "haul burdens for the army no less heavy / than before," when he
was a slave ("December 1862," NG 25); yet he describes the "dawn pink as new
flesh: healing, unfettered" ("January 1863," NG 26). When supplies left unsecured
on the beach wash away in a storm, "We watched and learned. Like any shrewd
master, / we know now to tie down what we will keep" (27). The "Native Guard"
sequence marks the soldier's growing sense of becoming his own master. He writes
his words cross-wise over the pages of a journal from an "abandoned" Confederate
house, creating a personal account of African American labors in the Civil War that
counters the scarcity of public documentation. In her essay "On Whitman, Civil War
Memory, and My South," Trethewey observes that African Americans are missing
from most literature about the Civil War military, even Whitman's Specimen Days,
his "monument to the common soldier" (52). (11) She speculates that, for Whitman,
national reunion of the white majority was a more pressing cause than any
celebration of the war work of almost 200,000 African Americans. In omitting this
freedom struggle from the historical record, says Trethewey, writers have ignored
"many narratives which would give us a fuller, richer understanding of our American
experience" ("On Whitman" 52).
In creating such a narrative, Trethewey's soldier reveals the terrible extent of racial
injustice in America. The guardsman describes a fellow black soldier who takes off
his shirt for work, revealing "the scars, crosshatched / like the lines in this journal, on
his back" from his years as a slave ("January 1863," NG 26). Yet, Yankee officers
can be as cruel as Confederate masters, even though the Native Guards fight for the
Union. To their humiliation, the guardsmen are called supply units instead of
infantry, and the white Colonel says their physical labor is "nigger work" ("December
1862," NG 25). "White sailors in blue" fire upon the Native Guards "as if we were the
enemy" when the black men retreat to their ship after confronting Confederates at
Pascagoula, Mississippi--"an unfortunate incident," according to the Colonel ("April
1863," NG 28). Two months later, "colored troops" lie among the Union dead at Port
Hudson, Louisiana, after a long siege, but the Yankee General Banks "was heard to
say I have / no dead there, and left them, unclaimed" ("June 1863," NG 28).
Nevertheless, starving black men continue to arrive at Ship Island, "eager to enlist"
("June 1863," NG 29). When the Native Guards are renamed the Corps d'Afrique--
"words that take the native/from our claim"--the black soldiers feel even more like
"exiles / in their own homeland" ("1865," NG 29).
Like Ophelia, Trethewey's soldier is a letter writer; but his letters do not connect him
to friends or family. As one of his duties at the fort, he writes for the Confederate
prisoners: "Some neither read nor write, / are laid too low and have few words to
send / but those I give them" ("February 1863" NG 27). Despite the prisoners'
dependence on his skill, they remain "cautious" and "wary," fearing the very sight of
their jailors. Both racial groups are, at the same time, "rebel soldiers" and "would-be
masters"; the narrator recognizes that "We're all bondsmen here, each / to the other"
(27). As Nicholas Gilewicz observes, "The inversion of roles does not change the
fact of their lives at that moment--both are bound to external forces, to each other,
and to history." Perhaps that is why when prisoners die the soldier resists his
superiors' orders to notify families with only the basic facts: "I'm told / it's best to
spare most detail, but I know / there are things which must be accounted for"
("August 1864," NG 29). To emphasize the interrelatedness of black and white
Southerners, Trethewey links each of the guardsman's ten journal entries in the
manner of a corona sonnet sequence. Rather than follow the convention of
repeating the final line of one sonnet exactly in the first line of the next poem in the
series, Trethewey works variations. Thus, she connects two sonnets on the
Confederates' dictated letters by ending the first: "I suspect they fear / I'll listen, put
something else down in ink" ("February 1863," NG 27) and beginning the next: "I
listen, put down in ink what I know / they labor to say between silences / too big for
words: worry for beloveds--" ("March 1863," NG 27). The guardsman's empathy is
beyond anything the white captives can imagine.
Most of the poems in Native Guard extend the meaning of that phrase, just as
Domestic Work takes on multiple associations inTrethewey's first
book. Trethewey says that the presence of the black Union soldiers on Ship Island
made her begin to
think about myself and of Mississippi history and the idea of native. I saw a way to
explore the tension evident in being a native of a place that has denied the full
citizenship of many native sons and daughters. I see it as the native duty to ill] in the
gaps in the cultural memory and in the historical record of Mississippi's troubled
past.... I am a native daughter, and yet I am a kind of outsider. ("Inscriptive" 1032)
In "Elegy for the Native Guards," Trethewey describes her visit to Ship Island on an
excursion boat. The Daughters of the Confederacy had placed a plaque at the
entrance to the fort, listing the name of every Confederate soldier who had been
there: "no names carved for the Native Guards--/2nd Regiment, Union men, black
phalanx. / What is monument to their legacy?" (NG 44). In Native Guard, the poet
raises that monument. She told Sally Hicks the volume is "a kind of lyrical marker,"
as well as "an elegy" for the losses the Gulf Coast suffered, long before Hurricane
Katrina. (12) "Buried history" is her subject, whether she is describing her mother's
gravesite or the presence of black soldiers on Ship Island ("Reading").
Reaching deeper into the South's past with each of her three
books, Natasha Trethewey records the strivings of generations of African
Americans. (13) Rita Dove praises the "muscular luminosity" of her verse forms
("Introduction," DW xii), but Trethewey herself pays tribute to the stresses on
human muscles and minds. In the final poem of Bellocq's Ophelia, the title character
recalls a childhood trip to the sideshow, where she watched in wonder as a
contortionist performed. Reflecting on the physical demands of her own work in
Storyville, Ophelia now realizes that "the contortionist, too, must have ached / each
night in his tent" ("Vignette," BO 47). With all their aches and scars and
bruises, Trethewey's laborers confront their labors, as W. E. B. Du Bois faced his,
as Natasha Trethewey faces hers.
Works Cited
Banks, Ingrid. Hair Matters: Beauty, Power, and Black Women's Consciousness.
New York: New York UP, 2000.
Byrd, Ayana D., and Lori L. Tharps. Hair Story: Untangling the Roots of Black Hair in
America. New York: Macmillan, 2001.
Gilewicz, Nicholas. Review of Native Guard. Bookslut April 2006. 21 Dec. 2006.
www.bookslut.com.
--. "Lyrical Markers." Interview with Sally Hicks. Duke University News &
Communications 28 Feb. 2006. 21 Dec. 2006.
www.dukenews.duke.edu/2006/02/trethewey_tmad.html.
--"On Whitman, Civil War Memory, and My South." Virginia Quarterly Review 8.2
(2005): 50-65.
University of Mississippi
(1) I read an early form of this essay at the Society for the Study of Southern
Literature's conference on Labor, Literature, and the US South in Birmingham,
Alabama, on 1 April 2006. I am grateful to Program Chair Riche Richardson and her
committee for the chance to participate. Special thanks to the reader for Mississippi
Quarterly whose advice on the expanded version was unusually helpful.
(2) Trethewey's books are cited parenthetically below as DW, BO, and NG.
(3) Domestic Work was published a couple of years after the controversy over
Carolivia Herron's children's book Nappy Hair (1997). See contemporaneous studies
by Ingrid Banks and by Ayana D. Byrd and Lori L. Tharps.
(4) As Kevin Young remarks in his review of Domestic Work, hands are "a constant
theme" in these poems (205).
(5) Trethewey's mother, a social worker, was divorced from her father, the poet
Eric Trethewey. She was killed by Trethewey's stepfather in a domestic dispute
("Inscriptive" 1031 and "What Is Evidence," NG 11).
(6) See Bellocq for reproductions of fifty-two Mahogany Hall pictures of several
women.
(10) In the autobiographical poem "Miscegenation," from a later section of the Native
Guard volume, Trethewey says she was born "near Easter": "When I turned 33 my
father said, It's your Jesus year--you're the same/age he was when he died. It was
spring, the hills green in Mississippi" (NG 36). This poem is a ghazal, with couplets
and a refrain ("in Mississippi"), in the tradition of ancient Persian mystical poetry.
(11) In contrast, Trethewey cites Whitman's "great inclusiveness of blacks" in
poems like "Song of Myself' and "I Sing the Body Electric" ("On Whitman" 52).
(12) Several poems in the collection are markers and elegies for her mother,
including "Graveyard Blues" (NG 8), "After Your Death" (NG 13), "Myth" (NG 14),
"My Mother Dreams Another Country" (NG 37), and "Monument" (NG 43).
(13) In her essay "On Whitman," Trethewey discusses her own (and also
Whitman's) "love/hate relationship" with the South (51). A relevant poem in Native
Guard is "Pastoral," in which she pictures herself in blackface, posing for a
photograph with the Fugitive Poets. The sonnet ends: "My father's white, I tell them,
and rural. / You don't hate the South? they ask. You don't hate it?" (NG
35). Trethewey's note on the poem identifies the borrowing, "in slightly different
form," from Faulkner's Quentin Compson in Absalom, Absalom! (NG 49).
Source Citation
Hall, Joan Wylie. "'I shirk not': domestic labor, sex work, and warfare in the poetry of Natasha
Trethewey." The Mississippi Quarterly 62.1-2 (2009): 265+. Literature Resource Center. Web. 12
Apr. 2010.
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