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Short Story
The Fruitcake
Special
by Frank Brennan
Table of Contents
The Writer
Synopsis
Elements
Activities
Beyond The Text
Assessment
Answer Key
Glossary
Panel of Writers
The Writer
Frank Brennan hails from the North West of England and is a graduate of the University of
Wales. He was an actor and writer in a theatre group for schools and has taught English and
Drama in secondary schools both in the UK and in Singapore. He has experienced editing
books of short stories and plays. He has published original short stories and plays and written
literature guide books for secondary students. Currently, he is working on a new collection of
short stories. His interests include music, especially jazz and roots music, and history.
Now I know
more about the
writer.
Synopsis
The story is about a young lady, Anna, who works as a chemist in Amos Cosmetics
factory in New Jersey. She tries different concoctions to create the best perfume. One day, she
accidentally discovers a perfume that can charm men and make them fall in love with her. In
addition to using the usual mix of flowers and things, she decides to throw in a piece of
fruitcake into the mixture. The mixture produces a perfume which smells pleasant. Anna dabs a
little of the perfume on the back of her hands and keeps the rest in her handbag. She does not
think too much of it as she knows that she has to make perfumes in a proper way. However, she
later discovers Mr. Amos, her boss, is suddenly attracted to her. He even invites her for dinner
and she accepts it.
That night, she uses her usual perfume called Intrigue for her dinner date. Mr. Amos
behaves strangely when he comes to pick her up at her home. Instead of the friendly and flirty
tone in the office, he seems uninterested. He tries to end the dinner quickly and tells her that it
is a reward for her hard work at the factory. Anna is puzzled at the change in his reaction. She
thinks it has something to do with the perfume she is wearing. She excuses herself to go to the
restroom and applies a generous dab of the new perfume she has concocted. The perfume has
the same effects on a waiter, who also declares his love for her. Upon returning to her table, she
discovers Mr. Amos is once again besotted by her. Anna realises now that the perfume is
responsible for his strange behaviour. When she returns to the table, she finds Mr. Amos with
Sabina, a beautiful and young model. All of a sudden, Mr. Amos declares his love for Anna and
the waiter too starts singing to her. Soon, a fight starts between Sabina, Mr. Amos, the waiter.
Several waiters try to calm things down. Anna decides to leave the restaurant immediately and
returns home.
The next day, she takes leave and investigates the fruitcake. Her conversation with Aunt
Mimi reveals that Aunt Mimi actually buys the fruitcake from a strange old lady who uses a
secret ingredient. Unfortunately, it is impossible to find the old woman as she has passed away
recently. Two days later, Anna returns to work. She meets Sabina with Mr. Amos in his office and
Sabina insults her. In anger, Anna splashes the perfume on Sabina. She then resigns from the
company and finds a new job in the factory that produces Intrigue. Sometime later, Armstrong,
the pizza boy who now owns the company, confesses his love for Anna.
Elements
Setting
Anna works as a chemist designing new perfumes here. When she makes a new perfume with
a little piece of fruitcake as part of the ingredients, she attracts her rich and handsome boss,
David Amos, who has little regard for ordinary people.
Home
French restaurant
It is an expensive place for food and drinks. David Amos brought her here for their dinner date.
Both David and the waiter try to win Annas love and fight over her.
Aunt Mimi lives in a nice little apartment on the other side of town. She wants to help Anna find
a suitable husband.
Themes
David Amos has only been attracted to pretty young models in the past. However, after Anna
wears the special perfume, he becomes physically attracted to Anna and thinks that he loves
her. So does the waiter at the French restaurant who smells her perfume. Anna does not
believe it because she knows that David Amos does not like plain girls like her.
In contrast, Armstrong who has fallen in love with Anna when he was only a pizza delivery man,
withholds his declaration of love until he feels that he is worthy of her love. He only dares to
proclaim his love for Anna after he has become successful owner of a pizza company. Anna
realizes that he truly loves her and would be a suitable life partner for herself.
Integrity/self-respect
Anna rejects both David Amos and the waiter as they are not genuinely concerned about her.
She has integrity and has pride in her own worth. She resigned from her career at Amos
Cosmetics because she did not like the way her employer, David Amos, belittled her ,
particularly in front of his snooty girlfriend, Sabina.
Anna faces wrong suitors, fights and job resignation before finding her true love.
The special ingredient in the fruitcake that was mixed in the perfume did not bring happy
consequences for Anna because she attracted the wrong type of men who were shallow and
foolish. True love does not need supernatural aid.
Anna was under pressure from her mother and aunt to get married because they were afraid
that she was too old (27 years) to find a suitable life partner.
Values
Can you suggest some moral values after reading the story?
Here are some moral values:
Appreciate ourselves for who we are and not depend on the supernatural.
I like
funny
stories!
Lighthearted/ humorous - he smiled until I thought his face would break into two
use of clichs (overused expressions) e.g. Im crazy about you; You are so beautiful
simple vocabulary; short dialogues; lots of exclamation marks (!); unfinished sentences
(); use of italics (darling) to show emphasis and unexpected surprise
American boss
Simile
The story has several interesting and funny similes e.g. he looked like a dog who had just
found a bone; mouths wide open like a couple of fish, etc.
Stereotypes
e.g. pretty young models; rich and handsome employer;
Slapstick comedy
e.g. ridiculous behavior of singing waiter; silly fights
Imagery
The fruitcake ingredient makes the sophisticated perfume smell like a glorious mix of all natural,
delicious, inviting and warm smells (like fresh bread and flowers and sunshine all mixed
together).
ACTIVITY SS1
40 minutes
Materials
Materials
Worksheet SS1
Worksheet SS1
Steps
Steps
Notes
Bring pictures of
a fruitcake or
even a real
fruitcake to
arouse students
interest.
This activity is
also suitable for
groups
WORKSHEET SS1
Title of Story:
The
Fruitcake
Special
4. If you could change the title of the story, what would it be? Why?
ACTIVITY SS2
Whats In A Word
Aim
Aim
To make predictions about the plot based on the words found in
the text.
80 minutes
Materials
Materials
Worksheet SS2
Worksheet SS2
Steps
Steps
Notes
Prepare the 12
word clouds for
each group.
Allow for
students
creativity.
WORKSHEET SS2
9
Whats In A Word
Below are some words taken from the short story.
perfume
chemist
fruitcake
aunt
aunt
pizza
factory
boss
apartment
market
old lady
waiter
1.
secret
2.
3.
Now read the story and see if your predictions are right!
ACTIVITY SS3
10
Setting
Aim
Aim
To analyse the setting of the story.
40 minutes
Materials
Materials
Worksheet SS3
Worksheet SS3
Steps
Steps
Notes
Teacher can pre
teach the four
elements in the
worksheet.
WORKSHEET SS3
11
Setting
Discuss the following elements based on the story you have read. Complete the spaces
provided with details from the story.
TIME
PLACE
The
Fruitcake
Special
ENVIRONMENT
MOOD
ACTIVITY SS4
12
This Is My Story
Aim
Aim
To make predictions on the plot based on the pictures found in
the text.
80 minutes
Materials
Materials
Worksheet SS4
Worksheet SS4
Steps
Steps
Notes
Call good
readers to take
turns to read the
story.
WORKSHEET SS4
13
This Is My Story
The pictures below are taken from the short story. What do you think the story is about? Are
your predictions correct?
ACTIVITY SS5
14
Story Plot
Aim
Aim
To analyse the development of the plot in the short story.
80 minutes
Materials
Materials
Worksheet SS5
Worksheet SS5
Steps
Steps
Notes
Teacher can also
provide an A3
blown up version
and get students
to paste on wall
for viewing and
reporting.
WORKSHEET SS5
15
Story Plot
Resolution
THE FRUITCAKE SPECIAL
ACTIVITY SS6
16
Six-event
Sequence
Aim
Aim
To sequence the plot of the story.
40 minutes
Materials
Materials
Worksheet SS6
Worksheet SS6
Steps
Steps
Notes
Teacher can
provide jumbled
up events for
weaker students.
WORKSHEET SS6
17
Six-event
Sequence
Complete the sequence of the story in the boxes below. Pay attention to the six most
important events.
ACTIVITY SS7
18
Timeline
Aim
Aim
To analyse the development of the story.
40 minutes
Materials
Materials
Worksheet SS7
Worksheet SS7
Steps
Steps
Notes
Ask students to
note page
refences for
each event.
WORKSHEET SS7
19
Timeline
Sequence the events on the left. Write the correct sequence in the timeline on the right.
The first one has been done for you.
Anna
Annaworks
worksininthe
thefactory
factorythat
thatproduces
producesIntrigue.
Intrigue.
Two
days
later,
Anna
resumes
work
at
the
Two days later, Anna resumes work at thefactory.
factory.
Anna
Annathrows
throwsaapiece
pieceofoffruitcake
fruitcakeinto
intothe
theperfume
perfume
mixture
mixtureshe
sheisispreparing.
preparing.
Mr.
Mr.Amos
Amosinvites
invitesAnna
Annafor
fordinner.
dinner.
Anna
Annaleaves
leavesthe
therestaurant.
restaurant.
AAfight
fightstarts
startsbetween
betweenSabina,
Sabina,Mr.
Mr.Amos
Amosand
andthe
the
waiter.
waiter.
Mr.
Mr.Amos
Amosisisattracted
attractedtotoher
herthe
thefirst
firsttime
timeshe
shedabs
dabs
the
theperfume
perfumeon
onthe
theback
backofofher
herhand.
hand.
AtAtthe
therestaurant,
restaurant,Anna
Annaexcuses
excusesherself
herselftotothe
the
restroom.
restroom.
The
Thewaiter
waitercalls
callsAnna
Annavia
viaaatelephone.
telephone.
Amstrong,
Amstrong,the
thepizza
pizzaboy
boydeclares
declareshis
hislove
lovefor
forAnna.
Anna.
Anna
Annapays
paysaavisit
visittotoAunt
AuntMimis.
Mimis.
Mr.
Mr.Amos
Amosconfesses
confesseshis
hislove
lovefor
forAnna.
Anna.
Sabina
Sabinasits
sitsnext
nexttotoMr.
Mr.Amos
Amosininthe
therestaurant.
restaurant.
Anna
is
summoned
to
the
office
by
Mr.
Anna is summoned to the office by Mr.Amos.
Amos.
ACTIVITY SS8
20
40 minutes
Materials
Materials
Worksheet SS8
Worksheet SS8
Steps
Steps
Notes
Allow freedom
for the
paragraphs to be
chosen.
WORKSHEET SS8
21
Quote
Quote
Implies
Implies
Quote
Implies
Quote
Implies
ACTIVITY SS9
22
Character
Factsheet
Aim
Aim
To analyse characters in the story.
40 minutes
Materials
Materials
Worksheet SS9
Worksheet SS9
Steps
Steps
Notes
Some other
character traits that
might be added to
the list depending on
students
suggestions.
WORKSHEET SS9
23
Character
Factsheet
The following is a character sheet of the major and minor characters. Tick (/) the
appropriate trait for each character.
Traits
Anna
Mr David
Amos
Sabina
ambitious
beautiful
busy body
caring
charming
condescending
cowardly
creative
determined
handsome
haughty
impulsive
jealous
love-struck
manipulative
over-enthusiastic
pathetic
protective
proud
savvy
shallow
traditional
unkind
violent
Aunt
Mimi
Annas
mother
Waiter
Armstrong
mmmm
ACTIVITY SS10
24
Character Map
Aim
Aim
To analyse characters
40 minutes
Materials
Materials
Worksheet SS10
Worksheet SS10
Steps
Steps
Notes
Teacher can assist
by giving the first
example for each
element first.
ACTIVITY SS10
25
Character Map
Description
Feelings
Anna
Behaviour
Personality Traits
ACTIVITY SS11
26
Language Arts
Scramble
Aim
Aim
To identify key literary elements in a short story
40 minutes
Materials
Materials
Worksheet SS11
Worksheet SS11
Steps
Steps
Notes
WORKSHEET SS11
27
Language Arts
Scramble
Unscramble the following words and give examples from the text where relevant.
1)
ieimls
2)
hteoampr
3)
eoisarncnipoitf
4)
polt
5)
heetm
6)
lmosby
7)
ryino
8)
rpraagpah
9)
flicocnt
10) isnaotntag
11) asitotrgopn
12) nartraor
ACTIVITY SS12
Who Am I?
28
Aim
Aim
To select the most suitable meaning for each literary element
in a short story
20 minutes
Materials
Materials
Worksheet SS12
Worksheet SS12
Steps
Steps
Notes
This activity requires
the answer key to be
photocopied for
each pair or to be
displayed on PPT .
It is similar to
Worksheet S12
WORKSHEET SS12
Who Am I?
29
Can you guess the meaning of these literary elements in short stories?
Match the description in the first column to the correct literary element in the second
column. Write the correct number in the third column.
1)
2)
3)
4)
5)
6)
7)
8)
9)
DESCRIPTION
the hero or good person in the story
story told in first person and is a true story
something that stands for something else
story told from the "I" point of view
set of actions bringing the story to an end
the author's attitude toward the subject of his/her
writing
the opposing force(s) between the protagonist and
antagonist
where a story takes place
plot in the story that builds to the climax
10) the high point of the story when the conflict is resolved
11)
12)
13)
14)
15)
16)
17)
18)
19)
20)
ELEMENTS
theme
plot
exposition
rising action
conflict
NUMBER
climax
falling action
resolution
flat character
rounded
character
protagonist
antagonist
tone
setting
autobiography
first person
third person
point of view
symbolism
short story
ACTIVITY SS13
Meeting New
Vocabulary
30
Aim
Aim
To find meaning of new vocabulary.
20 minutes
Materials
Materials
Worksheet SS13
Worksheet SS13
Steps
Steps
Notes
Students can
present their
work orally too.
WORKSHEET SS13
Meeting New
Vocabulary
31
In the space provided below, explain the meaning of any three new words you find in the
story.
WORD
DRAWING
1_____________________________________________________
2_____________________________________________________
Definition from dictionary:
1_____________________________________________________________
2_____________________________________________________________
Based on the dictionary's meaning, use each word in a sentence:
1_____________________________________________________________
2_____________________________________________________________
THE FRUITCAKE SPECIAL
ACTIVITY SS14
Tell Me The
Themes!
32
Aim
Aim
To identify two themes and give evidence from the story to
support the answer.
80 minutes
Materials
Materials
Worksheet SS14
Worksheet SS14
Steps
Steps
Notes
Groups can
present their
work using
powerpoint
slides and
suitable visuals.
Sources
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WORKSHEET SS14
Tell Me The
Themes!
33
Suggest two themes you have learnt from The Fruitcake Special. Give evidence from
the story to support your answer. You can use the graphic organiser to complete your
task.
Themes
ACTIVITY SS15
Moral Value
Search
34
Aim
Aim
To identify two moral values and give evidence from the story to
support the answer.
20 minutes
Materials
Materials
Worksheet SS15
Worksheet SS15
Steps
Steps
Notes
Groups can
present their
work using
powerpoint
slides and
suitable visuals.
WORKSHEET SS15
Moral Value
Search
35
In the space provided below, suggest two moral values you have learnt from The
Fruitcake Special. Give evidence from the story to support your answer.
Moral
Value
Moral
Value
Evidence
THE
FRUITCAKE
SPECIAL
Evidence
ACTIVITY SS16
Annas Values!
36
Aim
Aim
To analyse changes in character development.
40 minutes
Materials
Materials
Worksheet SS16
Worksheet SS16
Steps
Steps
Notes
Groups can
present their
work using
powerpoint
slides and
suitable visuals.
WORKSHEET SS16
Annas Values!
37
In the space provided below, briefly explain how and why Annas values changed over
time in the story The Fruitcake Special. Support your answer with evidence from the
story. You can draw more bubbles if the space is not enough.
Annas
Values
ACTIVITY SS17
My Views About
Anna
38
Aim
Aim
To give a personal response on the main character and the
reasons why.
40 minutes
Materials
Materials
Worksheet SS17
Worksheet SS17
Steps
Steps
Notes
Groups can
present their
work using
powerpoint
slides and
suitable visuals.
WORKSHEET SS17
My Views About
Anna
39
In the space provided below, explain why you like Anna in the story The Fruitcake
Special and give reasons for your answer.
ACTIVITY SS18
A To Z Quiz
40
Aim
Aim
To summarise the short story.
20 minutes
Materials
Materials
Blackboard
Blackboard
Steps
Steps
Notes
The words must be
content words from the
short story.
This activity is best done
after the text has been
understood and serves
as a wrap-up activity.
ACTIVITY SS19
Aim
Aim
To encourage creativity in students.
40 minutes
Materials
Materials
Worksheet SS19
Worksheet SS19
Steps
Steps
Notes
Allow for student
creativity.
WORKSHEET SS19
Below are the ingredients for baking a fruitcake. Think of a special ingredient that has
been added attracted men to Anna.
The secret
ingredient
1/8 teaspoon
baking soda
ACTIVITY SS20
Story Frame
Summary
43
Aim
Aim
To encourage creativity in students.
80 minutes
Materials
Materials
Worksheet SS20
Worksheet SS20
Steps
Steps
Notes
Group work.
Allow for student
creativity.
WORKSHEET SS20
Story Frame
Summary
44
After this,
Next,
Then,
ACTIVITY SS21
Careers For
Women
Aim
Aim
To research on careers and present information.
45
80 minutes
Materials
Materials
Worksheet SS21
Worksheet SS21
Steps
Steps
Notes
Instead of a forum,
students can
debate on the topic
This house
believes that the
womans place is
in the home or
other suitable
topics.
WORKSHEET SS21
Careers For
Women
Task:
46
1. In groups, select one type of career suitable for women and research on the
following aspects:
- importance
- qualifications
- job specifications
- challenges
- prospects
- other interesting facts
2. Display your information on large posters or present your work using
powerpoint slides and suitable visuals.
3. Suggested follow-up activities:
(i)
Forum on Career Opportunities for Women. Note: The forum could
either be a simulation with students acting as different professionals
(ii)
ASSESSMENT SS1
Have I
Understood?
Practice
Practice11
Read the extract below and answer the questions that follow.
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I had never heard my boss speak to me like that before. Or to anybody else, come to
think about it. David Amos is a dark, handsome English guy who would never dream of saying
nice things to ordinary looking girls like me. He preferred to be with pretty young models who
liked his appearance and his money. When he did speak to the chemists he was usually
complaining about something. Was he playing some kind of joke today?
Suddenly he came over right next to me. He spoke in a quiet voice close to my ear.
You know Anna, Ive never really noticed it before I cant think why you really are a
beautiful woman!
Mr. Amos. I . I tried to answer but I didnt know what to say.
No, its true, Anna, he said. I must see you outside this dull factory. Will you have dinner
with me tonight?
Well, I I was still too surprised to speak properly.
Thats great! Ill pick you up at your place tonight at eight. See you then, he said.
He was gone before I could say anything.
1.
2.
3.
4.
What do you think this extract shows us about David Amoss character? Give a reason
for your answer.
___________________________________________________________________
Practice
Practice22
Read the extract below and answer the questions that follow.
Aunt Mimi. I like my Aunt Mimi, but she simply cant mind her own business. She has
wanted me to find a husband for ages. She didnt like the thought of me being single and
having a career. She thought it wasnt natural for a twenty-seven-year-old woman like me not
to be married. Aunt Mimi thought that the least she could do for me was to find me a husband.
I was used to this by now, but it was still embarrassing.
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1.
but she simply cant mind her own business. What does this phrase tell us about
Aunt Mimi?
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
2.
3.
4.
What do you think is the right age to get married? Give a reason for your answer.
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
Practice
Practice33
Read the extract below and answer the questions that follow.
I went to the front door. It was Armstrong, the pizza delivery man. He was holding up a
pizza box which had Armstrongs Peachy Pizzas in big letters on the front.
Armstrong now owned the pizza company.
He explained that hed fallen in love with me when he first delivered pizza to us; but he
wanted to be a success before asking me out. He said I deserved no less. Then he gave me
some flowers. I never really noticed before, but Armstrong is quite good looking: a bit short
maybe, a little thin on the top but nobodys perfect.
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1.
2.
3.
4.
State the most important quality that you look in your life partner? Give a reason for your
answer.
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
ASSESSMENT SS2
Brochure
Aim
Materials
Steps
50
ASSESSMENT SS3
Debate
Aim
Time
: 40 minutes
Materials
: none
Steps
51
ASSESSMENT SS4
Picture Stories
Aim
: Picture Stories
Time
: 2-3 weeks
Materials
Steps
52
ASSESSMENT SS5
Bulletin
Aim
Time
: 1-2 weeks
Materials
Steps
53
ASSESSMENT SS6
The Story
Continues
Aim
Time
: 1-2 weeks
Materials
Steps
54
Glossary
cosmetics
embarrassment
Intrigue
lobster
momma
O Sole Mio
Romeo
makeup
shame, distress, humiliation
fascinate
a type of shellfish with large claws
mother
My Sun my one and only
a male lover, usually very romantic
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SHORT STORY
Panel of
Writers
Ira Bhattacharyya (Panel Head)
Rahmah Hj Sayuti
Adrian Robert
Xavier Manickam
Rashid Hj. Abdul Jalil
So Suez Pink
7. Pushparani Subramaniam (BTP)
8. Y.M.Tunku Ireneza Marina Tunku Mazlan
(Coordinator)
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