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Have you ever found yourself re-reading a sentence because you came across a word such as
"it" or "them" and could not tell which of two things it referred to?
You probably do not want your readers to puzzle over the same thing. This grammar tip
describes a common error in the use of pronouns to help you avoid this problem.
A pronoun (e.g., you, ours, she, this, whom, which, himself) takes the place of a noun or
another pronoun, often to avoid repetition. The noun, pronoun, or clause that a pronoun refers
to, called an antecedent, usually appears earlier in the sentence, although it can also appear
later.
A pronoun should refer to one specific antecedent. An ambiguous pronoun antecedent occurs
when a pronoun has two or more possible antecedents.
Examples
In the following example, does the pronoun it refer to the first study or to the second study?
Example
The second study was designed to enrol 2000 more participants than the first study. It tested
three dose levels of the study drug.
The corrections show how the sentence can be written more clearly. One way is to rearrange it
and delete the pronoun, as shown in the first correction. In the second correction, shortening
the sentence and deleting the pronoun produces the same result.
Correction
The second study, which tested three dose levels of the study drug, was designed to enrol
2000 more participants than the first study.
Correction
The second study, designed to enrol 2000 more participants than the first study, tested three
dose levels of the study drug.
In the next example, the pronoun them sets up an amusing possibility: McFarlane et al. either
presented their study results or presented the previous researchers!
The pronoun those is not ambiguous because it refers to only one antecedent (results).
Example
McFarlane et al. compared their study results with those of previous researchers and
presented them at the conference.
Correction
At the conference, McFarlane et al. presented their study results, which they had compared
with those of previous researchers.