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Materials: daybooks, big sticky notes, markers, white board, dry erase
markers, articles found by students.
Homework from previous day: During class the day before, students had
the opportunity to find and print an about Dominican Republic history or
culture during the time period of the novel. These articles had to be
approved by the teacher before they were printed in order to ensure
relevance, appropriateness, and lack of repetition between articles. Their
homework was to read the article, highlighting important information, and
bring it to class today.
Writing Into the Day: What are you expecting in In the Time of the
Butterflies?
Group Activity:
Students divide into small groups of four people and discuss
information they found in their article.
They write information they feel is important on a big sticky
note.
Each group shares their findings with the class.
I tell students to take notes in their daybooks on
what other groups share.
ASSESSMENT
Ask your students to imagine they are one of the Mirabal sisters or their
husbands and write a short journal entry or letter from that persons point of
view. (NEAbigread.org).
One overarching written project will assess students understanding of
characters in the text by having them keep journal entries from a
characters point of view. Students have the opportunity to select one
character to focus on, or to write from multiple characters perspectives. At
the end of each section of the novel, students will turn in their journal
entries. The students will complete five total entries. After we complete the
novel, we will have writing workshop days to peer edit and revise journal
entries before they turn them in for a final grade.
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Commentary
1. Central Focus
a. Describe the central focus and purpose of the content you will teach in the learning segment.
Central focus- elements/themes from text and their application to students lives.
For example, we will focus on justice, courage, false power vs. real power, and their
relevance to the modern world outside of the text.
Purpose Give students opportunity to experience nontraditional novel
(broaden typical scope of world literature)
growing as writers
Help students gain deeper grasp of justice and other themes listed
previously and how they develop throughout the text
b. Provide the title, author (or, if a film, the director), and a short description (about a paragraph
in length) of salient features of the text(s) that a reviewer of your evidence, who is unfamiliar
with the text(s), needs to know in order to understand your instruction. If there is more than one
text, indicate the lesson(s) where each text will be the focus.
The Time of the Butterflies is a historical novel by Julia Alvarez. It is based on the story of the
Mirabel sisters who rebelled against the Trujillo dictatorship in the Dominican Republic. The text
is divided into chapters that are narrated by each of the four Mirabel sisters. There is also use of
Spanish terms occasionally throughout the novel. This novel deals with the themes of courage
and the value of justice in the midst of brutal political oppression.
Consider including the following in your description: genre, text structure, theme, plot, imagery, or
linguistic features, depending on the central focus of your learning segment.
c. Given the central focus, describe how the standards and learning objectives within your
learning segment address students abilities to use the textual references to construct meaning
from, interpret, or respond to complex text create a written product, interpreting or responding to
complex features of a text
The standards and learning objectives are all selected in response to/built around features in
the text.
d. Explain how your plans build on each other to help students make connections between
textual references, constructions of meaning from, interpretations of, and responses to a text to
deepen their learning of English Language Arts.
My plans begin with a historical background to give students a basis for approaching this text
they are removed from in both time and space. My plans also build on each other by addressing
themes and then addressing the strategies the author uses to communicate those themes. First
the themes themselves are examined and then how those themes are created. We specifically
look at narration and the authors choices of multiple narrators in order to communicate the
ideas within the text. By examining the authors choices, students gain a better understanding of
choices in their own writing.
a. Prior academic learning and prerequisite skills related to the central focusCite evidence of
what students know, what they can do, and what they are still learning to do.
Students will be familiar with the Holocaust from previous Social Studies classes.
Students should also have a solid understanding of the term narrator and
narration from previous English classes.
b. Personal, cultural, and community assets related to the central focusWhat do you know
about your students everyday experiences, cultural and language backgrounds and practices,
and interests?
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3. Supporting Students English Language Arts Learning
Respond to prompts 3ac below. To support your justifications, refer to the instructional materials and
lesson plans you have included as part of Planning Task 1. In addition, use principles from research
and/or theory to support your justifications.
a. Justify how your understanding of your students prior academic learning and personal,
cultural, and community assets (from prompts 2ab above) guided your choice or adaptation of
learning tasks and materials. Be explicit about the connections between the learning tasks and
students prior academic learning, their assets, and research/theory.
Students prior knowledge about genocide provides a good foundation for
learning the unfamiliar genocide addressed in this text.
Because students have a basic understanding of narration and narrator, I am
able to build off of that and go more in depth by examining the rhetorical purposes
behind the authors choices in those areas.
b. Describe and justify why your instructional strategies and planned supports are appropriate
for the whole class, individuals, and/or groups of students with specific learning needs. Consider
the variety of learners in your class who may require different strategies/support (e.g., students
with IEPs or 504 plans, English language learners, struggling readers, underperforming
students or those with gaps in academic knowledge, and/or gifted students).
Grades,
c. Describe common student errors or misunderstandings within your central focus and how you
will address them.
Multiple narrators could potentially be confusing to my students. I will address
this confusion by discussing this element of the text prior to beginning the novel. I will
point out to students that it is important to pay attention to the narrator specified at the
beginning of each chapter. As we read through the book, students will fill out character
charts in their daybooks. The chart for this text will have the four different narrators and
as they read they will write down information, quotes, characteristics, etc. about the
character that is narrating at the time. They will also include which chapters that
character is the narrator on that list.
a. Language Function. Using information about your students language assets and needs,
identify one language function essential for your students to construct meaning from, respond
to, or interpret text. Listed below are some sample language functions. You may choose one of
these or another more appropriate for your learning segment.
Analyze Argue Describe Evaluate Explain Interpret Justify Synthesize
b. Identify a key learning task from your plans that provides students with opportunities to
practice using the language function identified above. Identify the lesson in which the learning
task occurs. (Give lesson day/number.)
Analyze. While each lesson in the segment is geared toward this language function, one specific learning
task that will address it is when we read, analyze, and come to conclusions about the information in the
students articles during Lesson 1.
c. Additional Language Demands. Given the language function and learning task identified
above, describe the following associated language demands (written or oral) students need to
understand and/or use: Vocabulary Plus at least one of the following: Syntax, Discourse.
d. Language Supports. Refer to your lesson plans and instructional materials as needed in your
response to the prompt. Identify and describe the planned instructional supports (during and/or
prior to the learning task) to help students understand, develop, and use the identified language
demands (language function, vocabulary, discourse, or syntax).
5. Monitoring Student Learning
In response to the prompts below, refer to the assessments you will submit as part of the materials for
Planning Task 1.
a. Describe how your planned formal and informal assessments, including a written product, will
provide direct evidence of students abilities to construct meaning from, interpret, OR respond to
a complex text throughout the learning segment.
Each of my informal assessments help me gauge how well my students are
constructing meaning from, interpreting, or responding to a complex text in the way they
tie back to the overarching goals of understanding authors choices and the texts
themes, as well as the individual learning objectives for each lesson. .
One overarching written project will assess students understanding of characters
in the text by having them keep journal entries from a characters point of view. This
assessment reveals their grasp of why characters are making decisions and not just how
they are making decisions. This also reveals their understanding of narrative/point of
view.
b. Explain how the design or adaptation of your planned assessments allows students with
specific needs to demonstrate their learning. Consider the variety of learners in your class who
may require different strategies/support (e.g., students with IEPs or 504 plans, English language
learners, struggling readers, underperforming students or those with gaps in academic
knowledge, and/or gifted students).
These assessments allow me to gauge my honors students growth and
understanding with an emphasis on learning instead of grades. By focusing on lowstakes assessments, students feel less pressure about performing to make a certain
grade and, therefore, are more genuine. These assessments also allow students to go
deeper into their understandings of theme and explore them beyond a mere
comprehension level.